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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Chapter 10

There is a new entry the lady will she have an important role or is it just for this chapter

it also seems like Vivan was pretty much jealous and this may spice things up

while I somehow feel Chakor will break the trust but I also liked the conversation she had with Suraj

again this chapter was so Awesome

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter 10

There is a new entry the lady will she have an important role or is it just for this chapter
it also seems like Vivan was pretty much jealous and this may spice things up
while I somehow feel Chakor will break the trust but I also liked the conversation she had with Suraj
again this chapter was so Awesome

Thank you so much dear!

Well yes the new lady will be there until almost last part

Let's hope all goes well

Thank you once gain for reading and liking it

See you

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Part 18 (Previous part : Part 17 )

"Miss. Rosella!" Queen started getting down the stairs "One of the groundskeepers told me that you went out of the palace without my permission! And that too with Pakhi!" getting one more step down "To go sledging! Is it true?"

"I was there too!" Suraj said even before anyone could answer "We were just having fun! That's it!"

"Suraj! I wasn't speaking to you!" Queen said in a strict tone as Miss. Girija followed her with a face that shown nothing.

And Queen came and stood at their level as she see Miss. Rosella to get an answer.

"Your Highness!" in a stressed tone "I'm so sorry. I"

"Enough!" Queen cut in. Seeing Pakhi "I know my children feel that I have been overprotective." Seeing Suraj, she continued "But their impertinence is inexcusable."

Folding her hands, Queen continued her words seeing Chakor "That's said! I want to add that my late husband was favorable for outdoor activities and physical activities!" facing Pakhi whose face has fallen hearing her father "And I haven't seen a real smile on my daughter's face in over a year."

Hearing her mother, the little girl's face light up.

Smiling at everyone, Queen said "Next time when you all decide to have fun, in the nature, I suggest you to ask my permission before quitting the palace. Is it clear?"

Shocked of the outcome, Miss. Rosella moved her head in a negative way and said "Of course, Your Majesty!"

Hearing a positive reply, Queen turned to go back but then stopped in her track "And the next time you go out!" facing her children and the tutor "I would be pleased if you give a thought to invite your Queen for one of your future toboggan expeditions!" making a face of being pround "There was a time when I was good at it!" she ended making everyone smile happily at her idea of joining them with open arms.

"Sure Mother!" Pakhi "Promise!"

"Yes, your Majesty!" the tutor said as the Queen nodded and left from there.

***

The night fall and Chakor did her work of taking notes over her laptop.

"I think I'm finally getting to know the real Prince. He is different from what he shows to the outer world." and she continued to type "However the coronation is almost here but I still don't know the real story" a pause "Why these much of hesitations to take the power. I have to figure out what is going on his head." and she ended that day with all the things she got to know over the royal family too.

***

Following the Prince, Chakor came to see him bring a horse from the stable in the earlier morning.

Pulling out her camera phone out, she clicked few pics as she saw him climb on it and getting out of the place.

Hearing a horse whining, she turned to her side to see another horse as her eyes got illuminated with an idea.

*******

Thank you so much buddies!

Hope you all liked the turn of events!

See you all tomorrow with a new ride!

Leave your valuable words and likes!

Sorry for not posting Zarir today!

Next part : Part 19

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Amazing update👏

I thought the queen will scold Chakor, but it was reverse😊😊

She seems a nice lady😃

So Chakor is back to her detective work😉

She will follow Suraj

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Wow..it was an amazing update sis..

Just loved the whole whole..

Queen is so sweet..she loved her children's a lot..

Is chakor going to follow suraj?

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Hero Suraj defended them before they got speak.

The queen's reaction was a big surprise to me. I'm happy that she values her children's happiness above everything else.

Will Chakor take a horse and follow Suraj? Can she ride a horse/

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
I thought the queen will scold Chakor, but it was reverse😊😊
She seems a nice lady😃
So Chakor is back to her detective work😉
She will follow Suraj
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you like this part

Heee Queen is a sweet person LOL

Finally she is back to her work Hahaha

See you soon

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Wow..it was an amazing update sis..
Just loved the whole whole..
Queen is so sweet..she loved her children's a lot..
Is chakor going to follow suraj?
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you dear

Glad you loved the whole show

Yup! She is one adorable mother

I think so! She is going going

Soon dear!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Maithu

loved it.. felt so great about the mother in Queen who wants to live the life with them. so adorable.

hmmm pakhi is so sweet.

arey Ms. Jasoosi,,, hmmm imagining sure she will follow her in that horse, eventually fall down and our dude will be there to nurse her... some sukor moments!!!! (please...)

keep going girl!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Hero Suraj defended them before they got speak.
The queen's reaction was a big surprise to me. I'm happy that she values her children's happiness above everything else.
Will Chakor take a horse and follow Suraj? Can she ride a horse/

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks dear for reading and liking it!

He is a gentleman u see;-)

Glad the Queen has a plus point LOL

Well I think that is what she is going to do! LOL

Keep on reading

See you