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Posted: 7 years ago
awsome update

love it..

jodha meeting with jalal's parents..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm

sorry for late comments
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Posted: 7 years ago
awsome update

love it..

Jo is so happy after meeting with jalal's parents..

jalal's mom said right about girls..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm
sorry for late comments
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

awsome update

love it..

Jo is so happy after meeting with jalal's parents..

jalal's mom said right about girls..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm
sorry for late comments


Glad you like it dear
and she get love from
Jalal parents so she
is happy and it's
great to know you
agree with Jalal
Mom words dear
anyway thanks
for sweet comment dear
and I will try to
update soon dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Sid can see jodha is very happy because of Jalal's parents...
Jalal convo with his parents is good. .
They are supporting and encouraging him...
Once adamant Jalal now thinking ways to get love from his kitten... It's nice...
Is Mr shah relative to Jo..?suspense...So as there is something behind Jo's work with shah...
Waiting for the update Rashmi .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Nice update..

Sid can see jodha is very happy because of Jalal's parents...
Jalal convo with his parents is good. .
They are supporting and encouraging him...
Once adamant Jalal now thinking ways to get love from his kitten... It's nice...
Is Mr shah relative to Jo..?suspense...So as there is something behind Jo's work with shah...
Waiting for the update Rashmi .


glad you like the update
dear and don't worry
soon I will update than
you will know what secret
Mr Shah has and what is
going to happen next and
thanks for such a sweet
lovely comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh dear I am busy for preparing new year party arrangements in my home I will update tomorrow for sure till than read my second story Nafrat yaa mohabbat dear and yaa Happy new year .
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks same to you dear . And thanks for wishes.
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Posted: 7 years ago
guys I am in my village and spending my winter vacation with relatives I can't give update I am sorry for that hope you all understand.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 26
(after sometimes both of them Reach Mr Shah Office and Mr Shah PA escort them towards Mr Shah Cabin. They both goes there and enter inside Looking At Them Mr Shah smiled Than Spoke in Calm Voice).

Mr Shah said : good Morning to you Both I am glad Just by one message you Both are here thank for that.

(Jodha Always Respect elders So she hardly look in Elders eyes for her it's Like Disrespecting so she didn't saw But Jalal is Businessmen So he need to know what others are having in there mind and eyes are the only Mirror of other emotion So he always Look in Eye no matter he is Front Of elder or young Person that's why he notice the Guilt Pain in Mr Shah Eyes but he didn't knew why only Looking At Jodha. When they were handling Project of Mr Shah that time to he saw the same Look But he Always Let it Go thinking it's nothing but today he Doubt on Mr Shah Still Didn't said Anything).

Mr Shah Said : anyway come have a seat.

(After Sitting on chair).

Jodha said : Can I ask Something Sir.

(listening this Mr Shah Get scared).

Mr Shah Pov : did she Recognize Me no She Can't She was Child That time She can't Recognize Me.

(Assuring himself he Calmly Nodded his Head in Yes).

Jodha Said : why did you offer Me Partnership ...in your New Project as assistant ...I mean I don't have Much Experience Regarding Business ...Than why Me I mean you can find... Best Person who have enough experience... About this Than why me...

(Listening this Mr Shah get Relief that she Didn't recognize Me And Than Felt Proud Seeing How well Sid raise her That to Alone. But he Was Not the Only one to felt Proud on this Jalal to was Felling Proud Knowing How Simple Jodha is).

Jalal Pov : god I am so bless to fell in love with her but soon she fell in love with me as well than I will be m\ore Bless and happy.

(his thought's get broken By Mr Shah Voice).

Mr Shah Said : well it's My Company my Project...so it will Be decided By Me...whom I want to offer Partnership... isn't it and about you not having Much Experience... So when I come in Business world ...I to didn't had Any Experience But look Where... I am Now... and in my opinion you are... young Dedicated honest and A smart ...or should I say a ...Very fast Learner I am sure... When Young And Dedicated Person Like You Will ...Assist me in My Project than it will be best...And in Exchange You will Get Experience and Success As well...So shall we discuss About Our New Project ...as This Project I am going to Do With ...Mohammed Industry So... Mr Jalal are you ready to have a Discussion Regarding...My New Project.

Jalal Said : yes that's What I am here For Mr Shah.

Jalal Pov : hmm So My Kitten will Assist Mr Shah and He is Going to work with Me than it means I will get to work with her as well Superb Love you god For this.

(Than they all started Discussing About Project And In After Noon they get done With it).

Jalal Said : so now It's Done We should Take your Leave Mr Shah.

(Mr Shah Just Nodded His Head in Yes And Jodha Jalal Left from there and goes to there car sit inside and Jalal Started Driving When Jodha Get Call from Ajay She Pick his Call Quick).

Jodha Said : hey Ajay, How Are you .When you Will ,be back .I miss you.

(listening his Name from her Mouth Jalal Fist Get tighten on Steering Wheel He Always felt Jealous whenever Jodha Talk to Ajay but he Can't do anything. other than murdering Ajay in mind).

Ajay Said : Well I am Fine Angel and I will Be Back on Friday and I miss You to Angel but I call you to Ask that Are you going to Participate In Bike Race which is Going to Held On Saturday Night.

Jodha Said : yes I will Participate in that For Sure as You Know How Much I love that.

(Listening this Jalal get confused as What she is talking about But than he waited for her to cut the call so he can ask).

Ajay said : so Ready to Compete with Me Again Angel as this time I will Defeat you for sure you know.

Jodha Said : we will see.

Ajay Said : okay than bye Will Talk later take care.

Jodha Said : hmm You to take care Bye.

(Saying this she cut the call and started Looking out and after seeing her done With call Jalal ask her Calm voice).

Jalal Said : in which competition you are Participating in.

Jodha Said : bike Race.

(listening this Jalal get scared what if she get hurt he remember the first time he saw her doing race it was heart Attack for him he didn't knew the rider who is making aw by his Skill is his Kitten but after Knowing He Was Half dead that and Now Listening this His Situation Is Just like Three Year Four Month Back).
Jalal Said : you will Not Participate in that do you get it.

(Listening this She look At Jalal and get nervous when she saw he is looking at her sternly. But she compose herself)).

Jodha Said : but why I mean I already told you I like to do That in fact it's my Passion than why you are stopping me.

(the Thing he can't handle a Word No and Jodha Always Push his Button of Temper. He always Concern about her Well being But Like always She ignore his Concern. Which make him angry and Listening Her Words Jalal Stop the car With Jerk .And Turn towards Her Fully Grab her Hands In his And Spoke in Deadly yet calm Voice).

Jalal Said : You. Will. Not. Participate. In. that. than .It .Means. You. will. Not.

((he didn't mean to scare her but What to do this is the only way to Make her accept her Order He. But the thing he forget that Jodha is Not the girl To listen anyone She is As Stubborn like him Maybe she Always Get fail front of Him But She always get A way to get her Wish fulfill either it is About staying away from him or make him Fool twice).

(Listening Jalal Words Jodha Get scared but the thing she hate the Most is Getting order or Control By someone And Jalal is Doing that only so she take her hands out of his).

Jodha Said : Look I am not going to listen you I will Do as I wish to do you are no one To Stop me get that and Dare to order Me Next time.

(she open the car door and About to get out when Jalal. Grab her hands again and jerk her towards himself to which she landed on him Listening Her Words Jalal felt hurt but he Get it that he Is Dominating her ordering her. Which he don't want he get it that he need to explain why he don't want her to Participate Maybe she will understand As Stubborn or whatever She is Wise Person at The End For Sure. So he in Calm Voice).

Jalal said : you think I am no one in your Life Fine... You don't care about my Wish Great. ...You don't want to listen to Me Superb Kitten... But let Me clear One thing for you. ...After Mom Dad and My Friend If there is anyone... I want to be with it's you. you are everything... to Me my Love my Life Everything... And I am not ordering you or making Decision of your Life... I am just Asking you Not,... to Participate In Bike Race Because... I don't want you to get hurt... I will die if Something happen to you Kitten... you Are Reason I want to live now Kitten...

(listening his Words Jodha Felt guilty That She Always Misunderstand Him She Just Look At him Than).

Jodha Said : you should move on ... After such a long time I get Parents Love Because of you and ...I I Always Misunderstand you... I don't deserve you in My Life. You are the Person who change... From Bad to good... You are Not very Wise But you are doing your Best To be and... I I never ever try to know the Reason of your Action... neither I understand your Emotion 3 years Back... Neither now look How Much you are Change now... still I misunderstand you ... I don't deserve you ...you Should Move on I don't think I will Ever Be A good Partner for you...You Deserve Best and I am Not Best enough For you.

(Listening her Words Jalal understand. that Now days He is Ruling on Her mind. She started thinking About him. And that is good For him. But than Listening her Words he understood one more thing that she is Insecure as well So he Look at her cupped her face By Both of His Hand And in Loving Voice).

Jalal Said :. Is that Possible for you..., to live without your Bhai Bhabhi Kitten... No right and the reason, you can't live without them... because you love them isn't it... than how can I move on in my life... when I am in love with You madly and deeply Kitten... Remember kitten once you told me... That love can't happen for Force... it's happen on own Right... So it's same With me As well Kitten... I didn't force My heart to fell in love with you... this traitor Heart of mine get clean bold... by you by his his own Kitten and it's not in my hand ...to make him forget you or ...make him love someone else Kitten... So don't think you are not good enough... for me as For me or Should I Say for My Heart you are...Best for Me and you know I will be bless to have you in my life Kitten... Because you have everything which... I need in my Partner But I don't know... I can say the Same for you or Not Kitten... I mean I know I am such a jerk But...Trust me Kitten I love you... I love you and there is No limit of my Love for you kitten...

(Listening his Words Jodha get lost in him . She Felt some thing Nice in her heart .He confess his Feeling many time to her. But this is The First time She is Feeling out of the world .She don't know what change now .Why is She feeling like hearing His Love Confession Again and Again Now .She don't know why she didn't want to Be Away from him now. She don't know Why She can't take her Eyes, of From his Loving Warm Eyes. And Without thinking She in Soft yet Calm Voice).

Jodha Said : what are you Doing With me ... I can't understand this... You are making me Crazy now... I don't know Why... I am feeling Nice Hearing ...how Much you care About me ... And Love Me... I don't know Why... I can't take My Eyes of From... you I don't know Why... I often started thinking about you... What is All this Happening With Me... I don't understanding it...How come it's getting difficult for me to understand My Own feelings.

(Shock would be an understatement for Jalal he never Thought Jodha Would say these things ever to him as usually when Girls Are confuse about there Feeling they ask there closed ones and for now he is Definitely not in Her closed ones List. Still he felt good To hear her words it's like he is Out of World Now).

Jodha said : answer me...Answer me... What and Why this is happening With... Me do I started Liking you...Is that how People felt when they fell in love with anyone ...Is That what you felt when you fell in love with me...tell me I want to know I never Love anyone... in my life either than ... My Bhabhi Bhai and friends...but I never felt confuse this Much about my Feelings... I always understand What I am feeling and why ...But With you I don't ... tell me Answer me Now...

(Saying this She stop and waited For Jalal To Answer her But he Didn't knew what to say But than seeing her Waiting For Him to answer he Shook his head a Little and Make her Sit comfortably on her Seat Tie seat belt around her And Started driving the Car and after few Minutes).

Jalal said : I Don't know what to Say Kitten I never thought you will ask these things to me.

Jodha said : But I did and Now I want Answer.

(Listening this Now Jalal is Confuse as what he should answer so he change the topic).

Jalal Said : So still you are going to Participate in Race Kitten.

Jodha said : it's not the Answer my Question Still No I am not going to participate as I don't want to get kidnapped By you.

(Listening his Words Jodha understood He Is Confuse and Don't want to talk about this So She to let it go).

Jalal Said : God Kitten I will Not Kidnapped you again as if I did that than Your Brother will kill me I a still remember his Warning you know.

Jodha Said : you better remember that Anyway where we are going.

Jalal Said it's Surprise Kitten.

Jodha Said : hmm okay.

(Than both of them get Silent Which is now Making Both of them Bore so Jalal On The Radio and the Song Started Playing).
Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi

Kya usse tadpana o zaalima, o zaalima
Jo tere ishq mein behka pehle se hi
Kya usse behkana o zaalima, o zaalima (x2)

Aankhen marhaba, baatein marhaba
Main sau martaba deewana hua
Mera na raha jab se dil mera
Tere husn ka nishana hua

Jiski har dhadkan tu ho aise
Dil ko kya dhadkana
O zaalima o zalima

Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usse tadpana o zaalima, o zalima

Saanson mein teri nazdeekiyon ka
Ittr tu ghol de.. ghol de
Main hi kyun ishq zahir karun
Tu bhi kabhi bol de.. bol de (x2)

Leke jaan hi jaayega meri
Kaatil har tera bahaana hua

Tujhse hi shuru tujhpe hi khatam
Mere pyaar ka fasaana hua

Tu shama hai toh yaad rakhna
Main bhi hoon parwana
O zaalima o zalima

Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usse tadpana o zaalima, o zaalima

Deedaar tera milne ke baad hi
Chhute meri angdaayi
Tu hi bata de kyu zaalima main keh layi

Kyun iss tarah se duniya jahaan mein
Karta hai meri ruswayi
Tera kasoor aur zalima main keh layi

Deedaar tera milne ke baad hi
Chhute meri angdaayi
Tu hi bata de kyu zaalima main keh layi
Tu hi bata de Kyu zaalima main keh layi

(Listening this Song Both of Them Look At each other).

Jalal Said : I wish you understand your Feeling Soon And I get your Love.

(listening this Jodha get shy so she Started Looking Outside unknown To Her She was Blushing And Jalal Saw That he Smiled. Here Both of Them Enjoying there Time Other Side In Mumbai One House A Lady is Lying on Bed and A Men Is Sitting in Front of her).


Men Said : I get them My Love ...they become young and Mature Now... I am so Sorry For What I did With you... I am So Sorry Love who... will believe that in front of Whole world... A Powerful Successful Businessmen... is Actually A Looser Who will Believe... That I am devil who snatch his Own Brother... Love who will Believe That for my greed... I will Destroy My Own Brother Life... But I promise Love I will make everything Fine... yes it's True I can't Give Jodha Sid There Parents Back ...But I will Do everything to Make up ...For My Mistake and that... is Promise of Aamir Shah ... I promise Please Get up Say... Something My Love ...Please forgive Me for Betraying ...you Please get up...

(But the Lady didn't said anything her eyes. were open She was Listening .everything But She Never Respond to Him or anyone).

Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Me first
Jodha trying to understand Jalal more and more
He has changed a lot in her love which she acknowledges
While Aamir Shah wants to compensate for his past deeds
Nice one, continue soon
Edited by Rahiramesh - 7 years ago

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