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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mijanur

There will be various twist.

By the way I am thinking about starting a new ff what do you think.

yeshhh anytime you want you may write. I'll read 😎 - the only thing that keeps me away from here may be if someone in family seriously ill, That has happened several times last year and my schedule changed in such a way I couldn't goof ol with anyone.
Let's see what is ahead this year - I'm a huge fan of this show. I mainly like the fandom and family we have for 7 years now after show has been off air - mainly it's Fb and instagram we hv active fans, however forum has creations of the show from beginning till now ... so I lobe this place.😆
There were lot of attempts to shut off the fandom ... that's just made us more determined to be more creative, So we are here.

It's very unexpected and a blessing that you've taken this much interest in writing creatively and sharing with us. It really is too good to believe 😆 I never expected. So I'm incredibly happy you write anything related to this show and Premeer.

I'll always say yes to it.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Oho the lady at the end is not DJ😲 arre I thought it was her. Hmm
Well no I'm not sure - but I figured DJ after making Heer and Meher act would be hanging around to check if they are doing their job as she asked as she is paying them for a job.

2ndly I do get that Preet and Prem are not interested in marrying anytime and Heer and Meher also not interested to marry anytime soon. Their concern is their brother.
What I meant was eventually after mak8ng the girls or the boys fall for each other - will DJ look for some more high society girls? As the title of story states - rented Love. It means a type of business deal DJ making isn't it. This is where I'm not clear.
Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: AASUS

yeshhh anytime you want you may write. I'll read 😎 - the only thing that keeps me away from here may be if someone in family seriously ill, That has happened several times last year and my schedule changed in such a way I couldn't goof ol with anyone.

Let's see what is ahead this year - I'm a huge fan of this show. I mainly like the fandom and family we have for 7 years now after show has been off air - mainly it's Fb and instagram we hv active fans, however forum has creations of the show from beginning till now ... so I lobe this place.😆
There were lot of attempts to shut off the fandom ... that's just made us more determined to be more creative, So we are here.

It's very unexpected and a blessing that you've taken this much interest in writing creatively and sharing with us. It really is too good to believe 😆 I never expected. So I'm incredibly happy you write anything related to this show and Premeer.

I'll always say yes to it.😃

Prem Heer are one of the best tv jodi I ever ser. Their chemistry was awesome.
Prem Heer fandom is one the most loyal fandom and this forum is a legend in if history.
I am very greatful the way all of you welcome me in this forum.
You all are also very generous in your comment on my work.
It really inspire me.
Next story will be based on parallel universe.
Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AASUS

Oho the lady at the end is not DJ😲 arre I thought it was her. Hmm

Well no I'm not sure - but I figured DJ after making Heer and Meher act would be hanging around to check if they are doing their job as she asked as she is paying them for a job.

2ndly I do get that Preet and Prem are not interested in marrying anytime and Heer and Meher also not interested to marry anytime soon. Their concern is their brother.
What I meant was eventually after mak8ng the girls or the boys fall for each other - will DJ look for some more high society girls? As the title of story states - rented Love. It means a type of business deal DJ making isn't it. This is where I'm not clear.

A high society girl will create problem for DJ.
If Heer, Meher married to brothers then Dj may have leverage on them, she will be able to get many benefits from them.
She may think she will be kingmaker

The real mystrey of rented love will be revealed in next chapter.
By the way please comment on my new ff payyar ka intehan.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Hmm..this is getting interesting.....but a cup of coffee with a tablespoon of sugar? I guess Prem likes it sweet 😆
Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

Hmm..this is getting interesting.....but a cup of coffee with a tablespoon of sugar? I guess Prem likes it sweet 😆

He loved sweet. Thanks for the comment.
Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Next chapter will be updated today.
Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Rented love

Chapter 5

Heer and Meher was sitting on their bed and thinking about what happened today. It was an eventful day for them.

Yes, they were able to rescue their infamous brother from the notorious gang of the locality. Nihal got signs of few punches and few brushes in his body but overall he remained physically well even after returning from kidnappers. However, he was little tired and he was sleeping on their bed.

"Didi aapko kya lagta hain humne sahi kiya?" Meher asked her sister.

"Mein nahi janti Meher. Normally hum aise kadam kabhi nahi uthate lekin humare pass aur koi chara bhi to nahi tha. Itne kam waqt pe hum itne sari rakam kaha se bandabast karte.

Aab soach ke koi faida bahi." Heer told her.

"Mein soach thi ho ki shayed aapki sharat hume akher mein bachale." Meher told her.

"Ha mein bhi yahi soach thi ho." Heer told her.

Flashback.

"Kaisi sharat bacche?"

Pahela sharat aap hume aise koi bho kadam le ne pe jabardasti nahi karegi jo hamari value ka khilaf hein." Heer told her.

"Thick hein mani, tum aur tumhara middle class value." DJ replied.

"Doosri sharat, aap aapke dono bhatijo ko koi loksan nai pauchayenge." Heer told her.

"Dekhto aabhi se fikar korne lagi aapni premi ka." Dj teaasd her.

"Dekhiye jaha tak mein samjhi ki wo dono acche insan hein. Aur mein nahi chahti ki undono koi loksan ho. Aur meri aakhiri sharat hein ki Jab undono raaji ho jayenge shadi ke liye tab aap khud undono ko batadenge hamari saaccayi." Heer demanded.

Dj lost in thought for few seconds then she agreed to her demand.

"Accha sono kal hi tum dono fashion design house ke interview ke liye chole jao aur Meher tum aaj aapne behen ke saat coffee shop mein kam karoge." DJ told them.

"Lekin kyun?" A confused Meher asked her.

"Tum dono behen sawal bahut karte ho, jo kaha gaya wo karo." DJ told them irritation was clear in her voice.

"Accha ya baat batye pure hyderabad mein aap hum dono ko kyun chuni?" Meher asked Dj.

"Dekho tum jante ho 80% ladke ke liye uski maa ek ideal woman hein. Aur ladke aapne hone wali biwi mein aapni maa ki jo khubiya hein wo dhunte hein. Dekho Prem aur Preet ke liye unki maa ek ideal woman thi. Iss liye un dono ko aisi aurat ki talash hein jo beautiful to ho lekin unme desi masumiat ho,aur simple ho saathi saat. Aur tum dono to desi beauty ho thick jaisi meri parkhay ji the.

Aur meri dono bhatije aakal ko importance deti hein surat ke saat. Unke liye undono ka honewali biwi aisi hone chaiye jo unke saat intellectually taal milake chal sake. Mein to paheli bataya tha ki meri parkayji ek university ka lecturer thi. Iss liye unko aise aurat chaiye jiske saat wo intellectual conversation kar sakte he.

Tum dono ka academic record ke bare mein pata lagaya heinaur mujhe ye pata chali tumhara record bahut acchi thesaathi saat tum dono busniess, commerce, economics related graduate ho iss liye to aur bhi aachi hein. Tum dono bahut independent minded ho thick un dono ka maa Sipra ji ki tarah.

Dono bhai ek dusre se bahut close hein wo log kabhi aise ladki se date nahi karegi jo dono bhai ke dooriyan ki karan bane, dono bhai ko alag karne ki koshish karengi, jo ladki undono se date karengi usko ye baat yaad rakhna padega ki do bhai ek duse ki zindegi mein bahut ahem hein aur shadi ke baad bhi ye change nahi honge.

Dono bhai aisi koi ladki ko date nahi karega jo unki bhai ki girlfriend ko sahen nahi kar payengi.

Dono bhai ke pass char panch house hein lekin wo dono ek hi khayal hein shaddi ke baad bhi wo dono ek hi house ke niche rahega.

Aab dekho tum jante ho aajkaal ki bhut sari ladki aise sharat se mukar jayenge.

Lekin tum dono to behen ho, ek dusre ko acchi tara se janti ho, ek duse se payar karte ho tum dono dono bhai ko alag karne ki koshish bhi nahi karoge kyunki tum dono ko bhi sibling love ki pechan hein. Dono bhai tum dono behen se iss liye bina fikar date kar sakti hein.

Tum dono to behen ho aur iss liye tum dono koi bhi problem nahi honge jab wo tumhe kahenge shaddi ki baad tum dono ek hi ghar mein rahoge.

Mere dono bhatije bahut libeal aur tolerant hein wo kabhi aisi ladki ko pasnad nahi karega jo insan ke bitch cast,religion,ethnicity aur race ke wajase bhed bhaon karte hein.

Tum to jante ho Prem aur Preet dono hi mixed ethnicity aur cast ke hein.Aur mein pata lagya tum dono bhi mixed ethnicity ka ho. Tum dono bhi unke tara part punjabi aur part talegu people ho aur tum dono bahut tolerant ho socially.

In sab bato ko considers karne ke baad hi mein tum dono ko chuni." DJ smirked after saying that.

"Aap ka dimag bahut tej hein Mrs. Juneja. Bahut acche hoti agar aap yein aapki pariwar ki acchayi ke liye lagati." Heer remarked.

"Acchayi ka koi fixed definition nahi hota hain, lekin choro ye sab bataon ko, ek baat to tey hein agar meri do bhatijo ko dekhoge to tum dono ka hosh urr jayegi." Daljeet teased sisters.

"Kyun? " Meher asked her in a curious voice.

"Kynki bahut jyda hi handsome hein dono." Daljeet told them.

"Delhiye Daljeet ji itna bhi rang na charay. Ha mujhe yakeen hein dono dekhne mein accha hoga lekon itna nahi jitna aab bata rahe" Heer told her.

"Thick hein lagti hein tum dono ko aap ne akho se dekne ki baad hi yakeen hogi" Daljeet commented.

Flashback end

"Kya lagta hein aap ko didi kya Prem aur Preet ji wo do ladke ko tarah handsome hoga jisko him aaj evening mein coffee shop mein dekhi thi

"Meher asked her.

"Pata nahi, lekin un dono bhi ek dusre ki bhai the, aur dono bahut handsome lag raha tha especially un dono mein jo bada bhai tha unka to baat hi alag thi." Heer commented.

" Kya baat hein didi aisa paheli baar hua job koi ladka aapko pasand ayi, lekin chota bhai bhi kom nahi tha haye unka smile bhi kitna cute tha." Meher told her in a dreemy voice.

Suddenly Heer's phone rang

"Aab kyun phone kya aapne?" Heer asked Daljeet over the phone in little irritated voice.

" Meine to phone kiya tum dono ka meri do bhatijo ko dekne ko baad kya reaction hein ye puchne ke liye." Daljeet replied in clam voice.

"Matlab?" Heer again asked her.

Then Daljeet told Heer about facial description of Prem and Heer.

Heer was obviously very shocked after hearing that.

Daljeet was one the other hand was feeling very pleased after getting stunned reaction from Heer.

Therefore, she cut the phone.

"Didi kya kahi Mrs.Dalheet ne?" Meher asked her sister.

"Meher, jo do handsome ladke ko hum aaj coffee shop mein dekhi hein wo dono aur koi nahi Prem aur Preet ji hein." Heer infromed her sister.

" Kya bol rahe aap didi." Meher told her sister in a shocked voice.

Both sisters did not know what to do they were feeling genuinly attracted towards Juneja brothers in their first meeting. DJ rented them to love Juneja brothers. However, they were both feeling that, there were every possibility that, the rented love could transfrom into true love.

On the other side of Hyderabad.

Juneja brothers were lost in thoughts of two beautiful girls while sitting on dining table.

"Bhaiya kya hogya aapko lagta hein aakhir mein mera bhai ka dil kisi sundar ladki pe ayhi gayi." Preet teased his brother.

"Ha ha aur tuto dhod ke dhule hoye ho, meine dekha kis tara se tumhe achanak uss coffee shop ke sare item khane ki shakh jag utha tuj mein acchanak se, aur order dete waqt kis tara kho gaya tha tu aapne khayal ka dunya mein." Prem fired back to Preet.

"Thick hein bhai, aap gussa kyun karte ho, meine kab inkar kya mere feelings ke bare mein. Mein to bass aap ka ye haal dekkar thoda shocked ho." Preet told him.

"Kyun?" Prem asked his brother.

"Dekhiye bhaiya, mein aaj tak yahi soach tha ki iss duniya mein aise koi ladki nahi hein jo mera bhai ka dil mein halchal create kore. Lekin jahir se baat hein aapko wo ladki mil gaya.

Bhaiya aap ka pata hein jo do ladki ka hum baat kar rahe ho wo dono behen hein ek dusre ka. " Preet infromed him.

"Accha tujhe kaise pata hein?" Prem asked him

"Meine coffee shop ke owner se chup ke se jaan li, aur mein to undono ka naam bhi jan liya hein. Aapki wali ka naam hein Heer aur meri wali ka naam hein Meher." Preet replied to his brother.

"Heer, Meher kitna payara naam hein un dono beheno ka. " Prem told Preet in a dreamy voice.

"Wo to hein bhai, lagta hein hum dono bhai ko unn dono behano ki barre mein aur bhi jaankari hasil karna chaihe. " Preet remarked.

"Kyun na hum kal phir uss coffee shop mein chole, acche coffee milte hein uha. " Prem told Preet.

"Mein bhi yahi soach raha tha bhai, aur issi bahane hum dono phir se un dono behano ko dekh payenge." Preet told Prem.

Both brothers grinned at each other after that.

They did not know they would no longer had to go into coffee shop to see those two beautiful sisters.

Chapter End

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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Awesomeee too good love the update
Love the convo btw maan's sisters and juneja brothers.
Really enjoy reading it
Waiting for next part
Thanks for PM
Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Awesomeee too good love the update

Love the convo btw maan's sisters and juneja brothers.
Really enjoy reading it
Waiting for next part
Thanks for PM

Thanks for your comment. You are one of my regular commenter, thank you for that.
Please comment on my other story You are my destiny ch7 on page 16&
my new sci fi PH FF
prem Juneja in alternate universe.

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