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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming


good night
sleep right
scary dreams

gud night to u too
Scary dreams😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramjanki

gud night to u too

Scary dreams😆😆


I'm serious 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Give me 1 hour
I'll be back
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I read your story in one go
Awesome story
Loved it
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramjanki

Give me 1 hour

I'll be back


take ur time dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 53





4 hours passed as maan observed geet while working on his laptop . She come in room in every 10 minute give him glare and left . Intentionally she keep things with force to gain his attention but all in vain . Acvording to her he hardly give her his precious attention .

One side geet whose spirit was getting lowerer & lowerer with passing seconds . Did he actually cared?
On the other hand maan unknowingly loving the feel of importance she is making him feel . Her undivided attention which he was enjoying unaware himself .


Maan checked time 9 minute since she left and definatly she is going to be here at any moment .
Ok
10 minutes

15minutes

18 minutes

20 damn minutes
Finally he closed his laptop wondering where she went? Why didn't she checked on him?

He come downstairs but found her nowhere .
Where she went? He wonder

Geet ? Maan called but found no responce


Maan finally call a maid and ask

M- where is geet?

Ma- sir maam is outside in garden

Outside?
M- ok u go .
Mpaan when come outside found her sitting on grass sulking & complaining to her babaji


G- dekha babaji aapne? Dekha?
I told him to take rest but NO!
Meei kyun sunege?
Subah s meri sautan k saath lge hue h!

M- sautan ? Who ? Maan wonder .
When she continued

G- unka vo laptop urghhh

Sometime i feel to throw it somewhere where none can find it .

Maan gluped his saliva . Look like he need to appoint a guard too for his laptop . As his wife seems not much happy with his innocent laptop .

M- look like i went far

So he come toward her & sit beside her

Geet stopped immidatly sensing his presence giving him an accusing glare she was about to move when maan held her hand stopping her

M- ruko geet

But she keep struggling

M- i know u are not angry . So STOP
It was her time to gluped her saliva snd look at him . He know ? How?

M- dekho suno
Sit here first
This time she obey him taking a seat beside him
M- i know u are not angry
She look at him but never asked how?
M- i know . Bcoz if u were then surely not peep in our room in every q0 minures to check me .

She was about to answer back but closed her mouth looking away .

Maan keep his fingure under her chin making her look at him

M- u want me to be at home . Here i am then what now?
G- itna kafi nhi h

This time she rply in a stern voice
G- i want u home to take rest and take care of urself .
Did i ever interfare in ur work maan ?

He nodded in no
G- then try to understand na i won't let u do play with ur health . Aap kaam toh tb karoge na jb thik hoge .

He keep silant

She cupped his face . Now shifting inside his embrace

G- aap samajhiye ki aap humare lie kitne impotant h . I want nothing but just take care of urself .

He has noting to say in this as the lanuage of love he hardly understand . But still nodded in ok making her skile to no extent .


M- geet vo i am going to throw a party that we postponed after 3 days . U have no need to worry adi will look after the arrangmemt .
And i'll not exaust myelf i promise

He said ecen before she oppose .
Maan get up and give his hand to geet which she accept happily . They both were moving inside when he say

M- i'm going to announce yash & meera wedding in this party .

Causing her to stop in his tracks first time reveling his plans himself in front of her .

She come toward him and hug him hard instead of sking questions
G- u are the best u know?

Surprising him again by asking nothing


M- tumhe kuch nhi puchna?

Geet frowned
G- question?
But why?
I know u are here to take care of us and will not do anything wrong .

He just smiled in responce the smile was a small one but still she noticed it and run behind him who was going inside .


...

Nxt face off?
Maan & pallavi?
Past coming in his life again ???

...

Nxt after ???
U all know

Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the pm! wonderful update! superbly written! Liked Geet;s care for Maan! nice that Maan went to look for her! Geet was so cute cribbing 2 her Babaji abt her sauten - Maan's laptop! Maan now worried abt his lappy! glad Maaneet talked! Maan knows she was faking her anger! she explained that she want him 2 take care of his health! Maan gng 2 announce Yash and Meera's wedding and Geet happy! great that Maan is sharing things with Geet! I am worried abt Yash's reaction! Meera yet to speak 2 Yash! Admire Geet's trust in Maan!
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aww love maan he care about everyone
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan enjoying intentions Geet giving him
MaAN going to announce yash meera marriage
And told adi will handle party work
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Posted: 7 years ago
wonderful update
maan enjoying getting attention from geet unknowingly
maan is very much surprise that geet is not asking anything but understanding him very well n shock him showing her trust on him which sooth him

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