Sambhale sambhalta nahi ye dil, pt 10 on pg no 136 on 2/6 - Page 6

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Hi friends here with part one .
Part 1


Raman saw a beautiful guest house just beside the Resort and went to take room there . All stopped him saying they will arrange with him but he went saying , they are couple and need privacy .At first they all denied saying how can they leave him alone as they only brought him with them but Raman convinced everybody and went to the guesthouse to ask if any room is available there .

Soon Raman was in the resort ,he stood at the reception counter and was waiting for receptionist but non showed up for long . Till ten minutes non showed up ,Raman started leaving the place thinking what service they will provide ,if not even receptionist is in her place .He just had turned to leave when he heard a very sweet voice " yes sir ,how may I help you ".

Though Raman was irritated but he couldn't stop himself for looking back ,listeming to the sweet voice . He turned and saw a beautiful lady standing there . She was wearing a simple chocolate color chiffon saree ,while her hairs were carelessly tied in a loose braids from which the hairs strands were peeping out ,making her look more beautiful . Though she has not done any makeup ,even her chocolate eyes were also looking empty without Kohl but still she was looking more beautiful than any woman with full makeup .He was lost in her look when she asked again " sir how can I help you ".

R- I wanted a luxury room over here ,do you ..

I- yeah ,we have some empty rooms ,come I will show you .

Saying so she walked inside ,Raman couldn't help and followed her ,soon they were in a huge room . It was a neat and clean beautiful room ,not less than the room in the beach resort . He asked about the charges and got surprised to know that its almost half of the charge of beach resort . He took the room , gave his ID and went entered the room . He even wanted to call Romika and minky there but thought not to disturb them . He picked the intercom and dialed the reception number ,but there was no response for long time and after some time he heard the knock at door .He opened the door and found the same lady standing there ,she passed a bottle to him and asked " sir you were calling ".

R- yeah ,actually I needed water . thanks .but no one picked my call then how come you know ..

L- actually some guests were checking in ,so I couldn't respond .

R- oh , can you please send a ginger tea for me .

L- sure sir ,I will send nice tea to you but sorry we don't make ginger tea here .

R- ok send anything .

L- ok .

Saying so she went from there and after some times a boy showed up with his tea . Raman took it and the boy went . He settled in the couch and thought to inform Minky and Romika . She called them and talked to them having his tea ,then went for freshening. it was afternoon so he went to the resort to have his lunch with his friends . They asked about the guest house ,Raman told its a nice place , rather better than the resort but they don't have spa and swimming pool .They told that if he want they can change and accompany him in guest house , Raman know they don't want to leave him alone, but he want them to enjoy their time with their partners so he denied and told them to enjoy . After having lunch ,he returned back to his room and lays on his bed to have a afternoon nap .

But sleep was far from his eyes as today he was feeling the void of his life . Raman bhalla is only son of Mr om Prakash bhalla and santoshi bhalla . Mr bhalla was a govt employee having a huge property in his natives but now they live in Delhi ,leaving their property untouched .Raman always wanted to be a successful businessman , so after completing his studies ,he started a business with his friends romi and mihir ,and now their business is in very good position . Raman got married to a Punjabi girl two years back ,he was leading a happy life with his wife in between their normal fights between couples . After the successful marriage of a year ,the couple got the good news of expecting to be parents ,Raman not so happy with this as for him he is not ready to take responsibility of one more life ,because of this couple had a great fight and she went to live in her parents house till her delivery . Though Raman tried to stop her and went to bring her also but she was firm on her decision and didn't come back with him . After five months one day he got news that his wife fell from stairs and is in admitted in hospital. He went to meet her and got to know that both mother and baby died due to accident . From that day Raman engrossed himself fully in business,he don't talk much to anybody just have friendship with romika and minky . Toshiji many time tried to convince Raman for second marraige but he denied everytime.This is first time when he has gone out after whole eight month . He was not able to enjoy his married life fully so he wants to give enough time to his friends ,so that atleast they can be happy .

His eyes got teary recalling his past , though they were not lovey dove couple but he was having a nice life with his wife but now he is all alone ,moreover he don't even want to involve anyone else in his life . As he was not sleepy ,he got up and dialed the intercom for room service ,again the same lady showed up after long time . He saw her and spoke angrily" your service is too bad , I called about ten minutes ago and you are coming now .do you provide this type of service".

L- so sorry for your inconvenience, actually its a festive season so there is little shortage of staff ,you take my mobile number and call me directly , whenever you want some thing .

R- ok give .

The lady gave her number to him ,he asked her name and she replied "ishita ".

R- you work here .

I(smiling a bit )- no this guest house belongs to me only .

R- ohh . is drinking allowed here.

I- of course ,as people come here only to drink and enjoy .who will come here if I won't allow it .

R- can you send some beers for me .

I- humm.

She asked the brand and went out from there ,after sometimes a boy arrived with his order . He had some drinks and then slept for sometimes . In evening Romika and minky come to take Raman along to have fun in beach . They were also impressed seeing the place,Mihika and Rinky even teased Raman seeing ishita , saying ishita is too beautiful that's why Raman don't want them to disturb . Though Rsman don't like such jokes but they were like his little sisters so he didn't angry .

Soon all left for the beach and returned back at about 11.30 pm in night after having their dinner . Raman entered te guest house and find it was all silent ,only ishita was there sitting in the reception counter doing her work .They saw each other ,greeted other with a soft smile and then Raman went to his room . He changed up and went to bed ,he was trying to sleep when he listened loud noise and shouting .He got up and went to see the matter from his balcony ,only to know that some boys are partying and enjoying in the open roof ,after the corridor,they all were drinking and dancing . He again went to sleep but couldn't as they were making so much noise ,finally Raman too got up and went to balcony with his drink . He sat there and start watching them sipping his drink ,when he noticed ishita too there . He made a dirty face thinking she too is drinking with them but then noticed that she has went there to provide drink and ice to them. He made a disgusting face thinking ,how can a woman do this job .

He felt disgusted and was going to sleep again after completing his drink when he heard some shouting there and saw a boy holding ishita in his arms and trying to kiss her,she was trying to free herself while rest of the boys were hooting for him . That's when ishita gave a tight slap to him and in return he clutched her hairs and started forcing himself on her . Raman ran out to save ishita ,soon he reached there and tried to stop them . when one of the boy told " why you are poking your nose in our matter , just get lost from here and let us enjoy ".

Raman went near them, freed ishita from the boys hold and told her to leave from there . She wrapped her saree fully around her and ran from there while Raman punched the boy ,soon all of them tried to fight but non of them could fight as they all were heavily drunk . Soon they went to their room, Raman too returned back . In the way he searched for ishita but she was no where ,finally raman went to his room and slept .

Next morning he got up Lil late , completed his morning chores and called ishita for his morning tea ,soon she showed up with his tea . He made a dirty face on her sight while she kept the tea on table and invited him for breakfast as it was complementary with the package . She was going when he asked angrily " can't you keep some extra staff for all these , is money matters more than your dignity ."

Ishita looked at him ,her eyes were teary , she folded her hands in gratitude and spoke " thank you so much for your help sir .its not matter of money but its just that I don't have my helps at this time and as a owner I have to take care of all this ."

R- I don't wanted to poke my nose in someone's personal life but don't you have any man in your house .

I- no ,I m a widow .

That's all for now ,hope you like this . Enjoy reading and do comment.

PS - 160+ likes and nice comments for early update.
Edited by Divanru - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Updated new part ,enjoy reading
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intereating story
both ishra lost their spouses
ishu owns a guest house
raman z a businessman
sm boys tried to misbehave with ishita n raman saved her
he z angry with her way of working as he thinks she doesnt care abt her dignity but money
but feels like ishu has a very painful n bitter past
hope they become eachother's solace
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Continue soon
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