FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02)

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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Wonderful update.

I wonder why Suraj didn't show up.

It was great seeing Chakor being bold while asking questions.

Can't believe she sneaked into the palace.

Happy that Paakhi is in the story. Will she pretend to be Paakhi's tutor?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Suraj has not given the interview, waiting for his entry
Chakor sneaked inside the palace😉
The last part was a surprise, so Chakor will disguise as Pakhi's tutor.
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you find it interesting!

His entry in next part!

You might be right!

Let see what Chakor is going to do in next part!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Awesome update sis..
I thought suraj ll give an entry in tis update..poor me
Chakor entered into his palace secretly..
Will she act as a paakhi's tutor?
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thanks you sis!

I know you all waited for Suraj's entry, well it will happen in next part!

Reply to your question in next part too!

See you in few minutes dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Wonderful update.

I wonder why Suraj didn't show up.
It was great seeing Chakor being bold while asking questions.
Can't believe she sneaked into the palace.
Happy that Paakhi is in the story. Will she pretend to be Paakhi's tutor?

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you buddy!

The reason for him to be not present will be out soon!

Glad you liked the bold Chakor!

Me too happy to include Pakhi in one of the story!

You will get to see the next part soon! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Part 4 (Previous part: Part 3)

"Hmmm" shaking her head in all direction "Yeah! It'sss me!" she said.

"Well! Welcome Miss! The Queen's assistant is waiting for you! Shall we go?"

"Hmm Yeah!"

As the man turned to go towards his destination, she followed him until her hand made contact with her ID badge she was wearing around her neck.

"Thank you Mom!" she said under her breath, seeing through the tinny window while hiding it inside her pocket as she resumed to follow that man.

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"Miss. Girija!" the man called as they neared stairs where 2 ladies and one man were standing.

"Yes!" one lady in her well designed dress turned to face Chakor and that aged man.

"Princess's tutor is here!" he said presenting Chakor.

Miss. Girija nodded her head acknowledging, making him to continue his as she will take the charge of the new tutor.

"Do the works according to Queen's wish!" she said as she got down through stairs.

Nearing Chakor "Welcome Miss. Rosella Ben!" she said.

"Huh?" Chakor saw her as if she is speaking alien.

"You are Miss. Rosella Ben if I'm not wrong?"

"Hmm! Yes! Of course! It's me! Hmm Rosella!" she said getting her sense.

"Well! Did the agency told you about Princess's likes and dislike, the classes you need to take and all?"

"No!" and she wanted to give a punch to herself for putting herself in this condition.

"I knew it! That agency guys are really terrible. No worries!" indicating her to follow her "Miss. Rosella! I will tell you. Princess likes to be behaved correctly. She likes rats, she..." and she did a list of what all Chakor Oups Miss. Rosella should know about her student as they came in front of a big door.

"The Queen's study room!" Miss. Girija said as she pointed at the door "Do you to do reverence?" knock the door.

"Yes! Sure!" Miss Rosella replied shaking her head.

"Yes!" the voice came from inside.

Opening the door " Highness! Princess's tutor is here!" Miss. Girija said smiling at the girl who was on her wheelchair by the side of the young man.

Seeing the Queen to nod, she turned on her side to get Miss. Rosella to be in front of the royal family.

She came in front of them with her eyes only for Queen "Hello!" for which Miss. Girija wanted to slam her head somewhere as she signaled her to do reverence.

The young lady getting the message, put her right leg behind her left one and bent a little holding her dress edges as if giving a salutation to her audience for which the man and the girl smiled while Queen saw her with wide eyes.

"Miss.Rosella Ben!" Miss. Girija presented.

"Welcome!" Queen said.

"Princess. Pakhi!"

"Hello!"

"Highness or Princess! That's how you need to address me!" the girl said.

"Oh! Sure Princess!"

And Miss. Girija showed her hand towards the man standing there, which was followed by Miss. Rosella's eyes "Prince Suraj! Our Next Ki"

"You!" the Chakor in her came out when the man in front of her smiled at her.

"Yes! Me! The egoistic, unmannered thief!" he said showing his teeth as he smile while the audience around them saw them as if seeing ghosts.

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Thank you for reading!

COMMENT your views and hit the LIKE bouton if you enjoyed it!

See you all this evening/night with Zarir!

Next part: Part 5

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Maithu

Thats was so nice... read all in one breadth...

now releasing and you my smile is till on my face lingering...

Loved Chakor with her dad

Honestly I started laughing when I read Mr. Shieku Head Press Reporter, Amazing world🤣 and I started imagining our shiekhu. ok ok dont hit me...

Bingo when our dude entered in his style unammannered hahah and our jungli billi wow what an intro!!! The Prince Charming has indeed cast his charm albeit in a different style... I imagined Chakor showing her left index to him and dude!!! he he he too much I imagine...

Well How can Chakor go without doing her job na na she has to get into like the chor darwaza ... and she turns Ms. Rosella... cutie pie

Loved the way she did her reverence and what a meeting.

Wowowow waiting for the next update!!!

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Interesting update👏

Chakor is now Rosella😆

Loved the entire tutor part😆

Sukor's meeting was bang on, So Suraj was the same person you mentioned in second part😉

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Superb update sis..

Chakor changed into rosella..lol

Everyone in the palace is of much attitude even the lil one..

Then its proved tat one who took chakor taxi is our suraj..its right na sis..

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
Thats was so nice... read all in one breadth...

now releasing and you my smile is till on my face lingering...

Loved Chakor with her dad

Honestly I started laughing when I read Mr. Shieku Head Press Reporter, Amazing world🤣 and I started imagining our shiekhu. ok ok dont hit me...

Bingo when our dude entered in his style unammannered hahah and our jungli billi wow what an intro!!! The Prince Charming has indeed cast his charm albeit in a different style... I imagined Chakor showing her left index to him and dude!!! he he he too much I imagine...

Well How can Chakor go without doing her job na na she has to get into like the chor darwaza ... and she turns Ms. Rosella... cutie pie

Loved the way she did her reverence and what a meeting.

Wowowow waiting for the next update!!!

Hey Sumi!
Thank you so much dear!
Your comment also left a smile on my face! ;-)

Happy you like and loved the story until now!
Hope it continues!

I can imagine you laughing for Shieku because I was myself smiling when I thought of that name LOL

Oh dear, our Chakor is a well mannered girl, so no finger showing ;-)

Next update in few minutes!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Chakor is now Rosella😆
Loved the entire tutor part😆
Sukor's meeting was bang on, So Suraj was the same person you mentioned in second part😉
Waiting for next

Thanks buddy!
Happy you find it interesting!
Yup! Miss Rosella it is now!
Glad you love it!
Yes dear! It was Suraj in the 2nd part! Heee
Soon soon with the next update!

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