my take after yesterday's episode

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Back again with new imagination 😆. starting from where it ends
Tanuja backs out but Rishi continued
Ri:Tanuja dekho duniya k bare mein mat socho inka toh kaam h baatein karna 1-2 din baat karenge phir sab bhul jaenge.Lekin ye humari Life h ise humein jeena h.M tumse aur tum mujhse pyar karti hun.Bas mujhe dekho baki sab bhul jao.plz wapis aa jao mere pass (he forwards his hand)Tham lo mera hath aur aa jao meri duniya m
Tanuja losts into him and start moving towards him.
Ri: aa jao mere pass
Tanuja is about to hold his hand but netra comes there and she holds his hand
Ri:Rishi tanya humara wait kar rahi h
Tanuja feels as third person in Rishi life and she shattered
Rishi jerks his hand and
Ri:Tanuja meri baat...
T(shouts):Bas karo Rishi mazak bna kar rakh diya h meri zindagi chalo jao mujhe Rishi Singh Bedi meri life m nhi chahiye
Rishi tries to explain but she does not listen anything.
Rishi gets angry and leaves from there.netra follows him and try to manipulate him
N:Dekh liya tumne Rishi jis tanuja se tum itna pyar karte ho us tanuja ne tumhare sath kya kiya
R: Shadi karoge mujhse
Netra shocked but said yes
Here mp comes to tanuja and said
Mp:Kya chahati ho tanuja kyu bhai ko itni takleef de rhi ho.Pyar karte h bhai tumse tumhare aage piche pagalon ki tarah ghumte rahte h aur tum ho ki zid pakad li h
Tanuja looks at him with tears and said
Ta:Tumhe kya lagta h Manpreet yeh sab aasan h mere liye bilkul Assan nhi dukh usse hota h par us dukh ka ahsaas mujhe bhi hota h jaan Nikalti h meri.Par tumhe meri takleef ka ahsaas kyu hoga m kya lagti hun tumhari tum bas Rishi ko hi dekhto ho
Mp:tanuja aisi baat nhi h.M bas itna chahta hun ki tum bhai k pass wapis aa jao
T:Tumhe kya lagta h Manpreet m wapis nhi jana chahti.Jab Rishi bolta h ki meri duniya m wapis aa jao mera mann karta h bhag kar uska hath tham lo par har bar netra aa jati h aur Rishi ko le jati Voh Rishi jo mera h
Mp: Rishi bhai tumhare hi h tanuja ek bar unki zindagi m wapis toh aao
T:Wapis aayi thi maut ko dokha dekar wapis aayi.bhut pyar karti hun m Usse.6 saal ki thi tabse par m mujse bardasht nhi hota m nhi dekh sakti usse netra k sath.7 saal pehle bhi usne mujhe chor kar netra ko chuna aur uske sath bed pe(mp shocked and Tanuja diverts her words) Plz Manpreet ek ahsaan kar do mujh par Rishi ko smjha do ki Voh apni beti aur biwi k sath khush rahe mere piche na aaye m hath jodti hun plz.
Mp:Meri baat toh suno tanuja...
But she leaves from there
Mp said to ak
Mp:Tum agr tanuja ki khushi chahate ho toh tanuja ko bta dena ki Rishi bhai ne netra se shadi nhi ki j aur tanya smiley ki beti h Rishi bhai aur netra ki nhi.Its a request Plz Abhishek
Next day
Rishi comes to hall and said he wants to marry tanuja
Biji mp Ahana are happy but he again said
Ri:Sorry tanuja se nhi netra se
(parallel scene)Here in ak house ak tells tanuja that Rishi and netra r not married
T:Itna gir gya Rishi ki bina shadi ek beti...
Ak:Mujhe nhi pta is baat m kitni sachhai h par Manpreet ne kaha ki tanya smiley ki beti h Rishi ki nhi
Super shocker for tanuja
Ak:vaise mujhe ye baat 2 din se hi pta h
Tanuja slaps him and said
T:Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho abhishek itna badi baat chupayi tumse mujse m tumhare saamne roti rhi ki Rishi se pyar karti ho yeh tak kahan ki m uske pass jana chahti par netra uski biwi h is baat ne ruka h phir bhi tumne nahi bataya tum dosti k layak nahi ho m jaa rahi hun
Ak:meri baat toh suno
But she ignores him and calls natz and she comes
T:I m sorry natahsa maine apse itni badi baat chupayi
n:Kya chupaye mumma
T:Mr handsome tumhare papa h ab hum unke sath uske ghar m hi rehnge
N:Yeah Mr handsome k ghar jaenge
Tanuja takes natz with her
Ak cries badly.
In bedi house
Ra:tune bhut acha decision liya h
Ahana mp biji rajji try to convince him but he does not listen anything.
natahsa comes there and said
Na: Papa m aa gayi
Rishi turns and is on the moon.He runs and grabs her in his arms and kisses her
Ri:Tumhen kya kahan phir kaho na
Na: Papa m aa gayi ab m yahi rahungi
Ri:Sach par aap akele aaye ho aur aapko kaise pta chala ki m papa hun
Tanuja comes and said maine bataya h
Rishi looka at her and told natz to go in tanya's room.She leaves
Ri:Tum yahan kyu aayi ho
T:Rishi i m sorry mujse bhut badi galti ho gayi m tumhare sath jeena chahti hun
Ri:Par m nhi m netra se shadi kar rha hun ab mujhe tumhari zarrort nhi
Ta:Rishi Plz aisa mat karo m mar jaungi
Ri:Tu mar jao i don't care anymore tumhara koi bharosa nhi abhi bol rahi h Rishi tumhari life m wapis aana h phir agle hi pal bologi ki nahi Rishi m toh abhishek se shadi karungi.M thak gya hun aur himmat nhi chain se jeene do mujhe aur chali jao meri zindagi se
Tanuja gets shattered and with heavy heart she said
T: Tum yahi chahte ho na ki m chali jao toh theek h chali jati hun aur itni dur chali jaungi tumse agr tum aawaj bhi doge toh mujh tak na pahunche mujhse jo bhi galti hui uske liye mujhe maaf kar dena m dua karungi ki tum khush raho.Bas meri ek request h kabhi natasha ko meri kami mat hone dena aur kuch galat mat bolna usse mere bare mein.Aur wada karo agale janam m tum mere hoge sirf mere.Netra khayal rakhna mere Rishi isse koi dukh nhi hona chahiye
She leaves (BGM h alvida tujhe,tujhe jeena hai mere bina)
She thinks nothing left in her life so she decided to end her life.She is walking on road with all flashes of her life with Rishi Ahana and natahsa
Here in bedi house
Mp calps and said
Mp:Wah bhai wah bhut acha kiya apne
Ra: Manpreet ye kya tareeka h
Mp:Mom aap Plz beech m mat boliye m bhai se baat kar rha hun
Ri: Manpreet...
Mp:Nhi bhai aaj nhi aaj aap galt ho aaj apne us ladki ka dil dhukya h jisne aap k liye apni jaan tak Dedi
Ri:Kya matlab h tera chote
Mp:Tanuja koi aur nhi tanu h apki tanu
He tells everything which happened last night and also said netra is the reason behind Tanuja's rude behaviour
ah:Kya tum sach kah rahe hi Voh meri tanu di h
Mp:Ha Ahana ha Voh tanu hi h tum sahi thi
Ah:Mujhe meri di k pass jana h
Mp:Ha Ahana chalo koi aur jaye na jaye hum tanu k sath h
Bij:m bhi tumhare sath chalungi
Raji too said same thing
All leave from there and start searching tanuja
Rishi cries hard netra feels guilty and she tells the reason for their sepration.
Rishi's Life crashed and now he can imagine her pain he too feels guilty.
Here a car strikes tanuja and she shouts Rishi
Rishi feels that tanuja calls him and he leaves the house
someone takes tanuja to hospital
The doctor who is handling Tanuja's case is good friend of Ahana and she assumes tanuja as tanu. She informs Ahana
All four reached hospital.
Doc said we r treating her but it seems she does not want to live that's why she is not responding but she is only saying Rishi agr Rishi unke pass aa jata h toh sayad Voh bach jaye warna chances bhut kam h
Ahana calls Rishi and said
Ah:Rishi Plz meri di ki jaan bacha lo ek aakhri ahsaan kar do uske bad m di ke sath kahin dur chali jaungi Voh city hospital m h Plz
Rishi cuts the call and drives towards hospital.He reached there and asked about tanu
Ahana tells she is in ICU
Rishi goes there.He sits there and holds her hand and said
Ri:Meri zindagi se jane ko bula tha is duniya se nhi.Tum bhut buri ho tanu bhut buri har vaar mujhe chor kar chali jati ho par is bar nhi jaane dunga.Tumhe theek hona hoga mere liye natahsa Ahana k liye theek hona hoga.
But still no movement in her body.
Ri(continues):tum ziddi ho toh m bhi ziddi hun agr mujhe chor kar gayi na toh dekh lena mujse bura koi nahi hoga.tanu Plz uthho na Yar but no movement
Ri:Aakhri bar bol rha hun agar nhi uthi na toh m bhi apni jaan de dunga
The words strikes in tanuja's mind and she holds her hand tightly but due to heavy dose of medicines she is still unconscious
Rishi gets up and calls doctor
Doc comes and examines her and said
D:Its a miracle she is absolutely fine now kuch der m hosh aa jaega inhe.
Rishi cries in happiness and hugs mp and said chote aaj teri wajah se meri tanu mere sath h m kin sabdo m tujhe thanks bolo
Mp:Bas bhai aaj ka bad kabhi marna mat mujhe aur jyada kam bhi mat karwana
everybody laugh
Ah:Thanks toh mujhe bolna chahiye tumhari wajah se meri di aaj mere sath h
Ri:Nhi Ahana thanks mat bolo Voh meri jaan h
After 3-4 hours tanuja opens her eyes and finds Rishi right in front of her
Rishi comes there and hugs her she too hugs him back.

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Divya333 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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No words left to praise your imagination. Superb se super update... Loved it very much... Great ending
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Posted: 7 years ago
#3
Very nice I hope k Kasam k writters k paas bhi Aisa dimag hota or unhe ye pta hota k Kasam ka main concept kya hai
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😭😭 rola diya pagali.So emotional.Pata nhi hamare pagal cv ko ho kya gaya hai Why they can't think anything else than separation.Itne time se to separate hai ab to mila do
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divya333

No words left to praise your imagination. Superb se super update... Loved it very much... Great ending

danger word h na 😆 Jokes apart that really means a lot
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

😭😭rola diya pagali.So emotional.Pata nhi hamare pagal cv ko ho kya gaya hai Why they can't think anything else than separation.Itne time se to separate hai ab to mila do

😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mind blowing pari...teri imagination ki to daad deni paregi...👏
Divya333 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari454

danger word h na 😆 Jokes apart that really means a lot

What word u r talking about Pari😆?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divya333


What word u r talking about Pari😆?

😆 u know very well
pari454 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Mind blowing pari...teri imagination ki to daad deni paregi...👏

popat kar diya cvs ne

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