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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

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I am speechless

THAT WAS OUTSTANDING

IT was dark, it was heart wrenching, it was everything!!!

For a second I thought maybe he died but the way you Portrayed Gauri's feelings, her memories, her only sanity I was almost crying. All the abuse she faced yet his memories kept her from dying.

Everything that was taking from her didn't matter because her soul, and her heart belonged to him.

And Om...😭😳 JUST WOW

How he tried his bets to find her, how he never stopped looking, how he was scared to touch her; knowing of the abuse and the trauma she must have faced.

You penned it down in the perfect pace, slowly everything unfolding

WOW

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priyadil

@priyadil

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

it was really nice OS ...

You made me cry...

Gauri went through lots of pain, torture but didn't reduce her trust on her Love...

I loved it...

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
👏
I am speechless
THAT WAS OUTSTANDING
IT was dark, it was heart wrenching, it was everything!!!
For a second I thought maybe he died but the way you Portrayed Gauri's feelings, her memories, her only sanity I was almost crying. All the abuse she faced yet his memories kept her from dying.
Everything that was taking from her didn't matter because her soul, and her heart belonged to him.

And Om...😭😳 JUST WOW
How he tried his bets to find her, how he never stopped looking, how he was scared to touch her; knowing of the abuse and the trauma she must have faced.
You penned it down in the perfect pace, slowly everything unfolding
WOW
❤️

Thank you so much

I so love reading your long wala comments 😃

This was very difficult for me to pen down...Glad you liked it😊

And I loved the way you got the very small details of the update :)

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priyadil
it was really nice OS ...
You made me cry...

Gauri went through lots of pain, torture but didn't reduce her trust on her Love...

I loved it...

Thank you so much

Gauri trusted him with her life

Glad you liked it 😊