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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Part 8 

Another awesome chapter.

Varsha hai kon ? Kyun Sameer use bhul nhi sakta ? 
Their fight was cute yet weird because I only love to see Sameer with Naina only whether they were fighting or romancing.
Mujhe lagta hai Nisha ne sab sun Liya hai iss liye vo apni Mumma ke pass jaa Rahi hai...
Or Sameer Delhi nhi jayenga vo bhi Nisha Ko dundega... Akhir khash connection jo hai...

Continue soon.

Thank You Anmol for reading the parts.Thank you for the appreciation.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

Hey ya! 

Just finished reading the parts you've uploaded till now and I must say, they were FANTABULOUS! I LOVED YOUR STORY YAA!  YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER! Do update soon now COZ I WON'T BE ABLE TO WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

P.S. : Could you please send me a pm whenever you update coz I AM NOT THAT ACTIVE ON IF and it'd be difficult to find this lovely FF again so do consider my request!  

Thank you dear for such kind words.Thank you for all the appreciation.Glad that you loved this story.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Waiting for the next update eagerly.. hopefully jald hi aa raha hain :)

Your wish got fulfilled soon.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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                                                          NOTE -IMPORTANT PLEASE READ
   With the inclusion of new character -VARSHA MEHROTRA in Sameer's flashback ,many readers are angry,disappointed and absolutely not happy.I understand that emotion but let me as the writer assure you that Varsha is a strongly written character.She has a very important role to play in Sameer's past,present and future.
I just request you all to be patient enough with the development of character.Kati Patang has been a well thought off story.I just request you all to have belief in me and belief in the storyline.
Thank you all for the encouragement and love.

Love-
Minu.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hello My dear Forumwasis and dear besties.
Today is the birthday of CO-Creative of 'Kati-Patang".She is none other than my sister 'Sweetylina'.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
So this piece is dedicated to the pillar of my strength and life in whole.Dear Sis!Love You.โค๏ธ
Read on and Enjoy.Hope you like it.
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Part-9

Nisha leaned against the flushwork  of  Budden Memorial  Methodist Church as the words of Nirupama echoed in her ears... Naina  ka subah ka injection lag gaya na?'' ...  "mein hospital aa jaungi " ...

She felt cold though the bright rays of sun encompassed her petite frame  in its wide frame.Her  mother was  ill,sick and suffering..if she knew she was going to never return she would have given her mother a tight hug and would have rested her head on her shoulders and would have cried till the tears ran dry.

But she was not given a chance..rather was cheated and lied to.

"Arey! Nisha  beta! Tum yahan? Akele aayi ho?''  Nanaji  asked as he spotted  Nisha sitting on the steps to church with the kids cycle standing at far.

"Kya hua beta? Itni udas kyun ho?Mujhe nahin bataoge? ''Nanaji  asked caressing her soft curls and  placed a kiss on forehead.

"Aapko kyun bataun? " Nisha questioned  and sunk her head into knees.

"Kyunki  main Nisha ko aise udas nahin dekh sakta.'' Nanaji  said and Nisha looked up to him.

With tears in eyes that were threatening to fall down since long; she moved near him.Nanaji  opened his arms and she crashed into his arms breaking into loud sobs.

"Mumma  ko ..dard ho.. raha hai..'' Nisha  spoke in hiccups.

"Kisne  bataya  tumhe ?'' Nanaji asked surprised how Nisha came to know about her mother's truth.

"Sab ne mujhe..jhooth bola ...Mumma ..ko  bada wala..dard hai'' Nisha  spoke as she remembered Nirupama  and Rishav's  treachery.

"Aapko pata tha Mumma ke bare mein ?'' She asked Nanaji wiping tears.

"Nahin Beta.Mujhe kaise pata hoga? ''Nanaji lied through teeth.

"Mumma ko  wo bada wala ijexion se ..dar lagta hai.'' Nisha  said remembering how Naina  had flinched from taking injection last time when she had high fever.

"Ijexion nahi beta injection.Injection lagega tabhi to wapas tumhari paas aayegi.'' Nanaji tried cheering up the upset angel.

"Wapas aayegi..wapas aajayegi...Kab aayegi? KAB  AAYEGI? ''Nisha s temper flew away as she was reminded of false promises.

"Shaant beta..Shaant.Tum choti bachi ho isliye tumhe nahin bataya hoga. ''Nanaji tried pacifying her .

"Sabko pata tha na..Mumma kahan hai..mujhe kyun ..leke nahin gaye? Main Mumma ko bilkul pareshan nahin karti.Main kitna royi lekin kisi ne bhi Mumma ke paas leke nahin gaya..Main kya itni shaitan hoon? ''Nisha asked and Nanaji didn't know what to answer.

Some times are just difficult.

"Nisha! Tum yahan ho kisiko pata hai ghar main? ''Nanaji asked  concerned.

"Nahin..''  Nisha replied and turned away her face.

"Yeh to galat hai beta.Tumhari Aunty aur Rishav to pareshan ho rahe honge.Chalo tumhe ghar chod deta hoon.'' Nanaji  said as he got up.

"Aap jao..Mujhe nahin jana ..Main yahin rahungi.Mumma aayegi to mujhe leke jayegi.'' Nisha  declared her final decision.

"Nahin beta aise yahan akele rehna safe nahin hai.Tumhari Mumma ne to boli hogi ki badon ki baat mante hein.Boli hai na?'' Nanaji definitely knew how to cajole and convince kids.

"Haan.. ''Nisha replied as she nodded in affirmation.

"To chalo..'' Nanaji  held her hand  and both descended down the church stairs.

"Kahin ye Moti Church to nahin chali gayi.Mujhe shaitan bolti hai aur khud  shaitani karti hai.'' Rishav  was hell lot angry on her for going missing  with no information.'

He cycled to the church and spotted Nanaji approaching from far with Nisha walking beside him holding the cycle.

"MOTIII..'' Rishav shouted aloud and ran throwing the cycle to road.He didn't care to pick it up even.

"Moti! Tu..'' Rishav could not speak anything more since he was overwhelmed with extreme joy of finally finding her after so many hours.He hugged her tight and planted a sloppy kiss on her cheek.

"Chod mujhe..'' Nisha wriggled out from the hug and pushed him.

"Maine kya kiya?Tu phir ro rahi thi? ''Rishav asked seeing her swollen red eyes.

"Haan ro rahi thi..Kyunki tu mujhse jhooth bola..Aunty ne bhi jhooth bola'' Nisha  said as Rishav looked in surprise.

"Tu pagal ho gayi hai..Main kyun tujhe jhooth bolunga? Gadha hun,aalsi hun lekin jhootha nahin.Aur Mummy tujhe kab jhooth boli? Mere Mummy ko aisa mat bolna.'' Rishav  could never stand false allegations and allegations against his parents and friends.

"Mumma  hos..pi..tal mein hai.Par Aunty ne boli ki wo badi jagah pe hai..book likh rahi hai.Mujhe pata hai wo jagah kitna bekar hai.Badbu aati hai.'' Nisha had a terrible experience of hospital and she never liked the idea of someone close to her to be in hospital.

"KYAA?Aunty wahan hai?Tujhe kisne bol diya?Wish kite wahan pahunch gaya kya?'' Rishav tried to fathom how his aunty reached hospital and how Nisha knew something which he didn't.Strange.

"Nahin..Aunty  phone pe baat kar rahi thi.Main sun li''. Nisha clarified.

"Oh!To Mumma ko pata tha.Wo humse chupayi yeh baat.Aaj to main unse baat nahin karunga.Tu bhi nahin karegi.Samjhi?'' Rishav was now angry on his mother for  telling them lies for so many days.

"Hmm...Tu mujhe dhoond raha tha? ''Nisha asked  as she saw Rishav profusely sweating.

"Haan...Mumma kitni ro rahi thi..''.Aise bina bataye koun ata hai? He asked wiping the sweat off his forehead.

"Koun ata hai?'' Nisha asked  surprised that Rishav knew answer to some question which she didn't know.

"Shaitan ata hai.'' Rishav  answered.

"Tu mujhe shaitan bol raha hai na..Khud kya hai? ''Nisha ran behind Rishav to hit him  for calling her Shaitan'.

"Gadha hoon... ''Rishav spoke as he tried saving himself from Nisha's  playful beatings.

"Rishav aur Naina ab ghar jao.Tumhari Mummy pareshan ho rahi hogi.Aise bina bataye kabhi  idhar udhar mat jaana.''  Nanaji advised them as he entered his gate.

"To aap yahan rehte hein? Aap Uncle ke saath Delhi nahin gaye?'' Rishav asked  still bit angry with Sameer's non-helping' attitude.

"Haan hum yahin rehte hain.Bataya thaa na ki hum church ke paas rehte hein.Aur Sameer ko zaroori kaam hai na wahan,main uske saath jaake kya karunga? " Nanaji  said  and Rishav realized that Sameer was really in urgency to go to Delhi.

"Main idhar-udhar nahin aayi thi.Main yahan har Sunday aati hoon Mumma ke saath.Yeh jagah aur yeh raaste mujhe ache se pata hai.'' Nisha clarified and Nanaji looked a bit surprised about coming to churches religiously.

"Aaj to Sunday nahin hai.Kyun aayi thi yahan? Rona tha na..Field mein bhi ro sakti thi..Chal ghar..Aaj Mumma se achi mar padegi. ''Rishav  scolded her for her stupidity and pulled her hand to go to home.

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"Nisha!Mujhse naraz ho?'' Nirupama tried talking to Nisha for the umpteenth time.

"Haan wo naraz hai..Main bhi naraz hun''. Rishav  voiced and sat grumpily.

"Thik hai..Main akele Naina se milne hospital chali jaati hoon...Tum log baitho naraz hoke.'' Nirupama  tried the last trick in pocket to cheer up Naina.

"Aap hos..pi..tal jaa rahe ho..Mujhe bhi jana hai.'' Nisha  jumped from her seat and held Nirupama's hand.

"Hospital?Phir to ek shart par.'' Nirupama  said as she smiled seeing her plan working.

"Aap jo bologi karungi.Aaj to koi homework bhi nahin hai.'' Nisha  was ready to do anything ..literally anything.

"To phir dono haath muh dhoke khana kha lo,phir hum chalenge.Rishav !Promise karo wahan Aunty ko tang nahin karoge''. Nirupama  instructed and both nodded to the conditions laid before them.

"Aunty! Aap humara ghar ka lock khol do.Mujhe Mumma ka favourite dress pehenke jaana hai.Please. ''Nisha requested as she found that  particular red frock' missing from her bag.

"Mumma! Aap tayar ho jao.Main lock khol dunga.Mujhe pata hai.'' Rishav volunteered to help his mother.

"Acha mere shaitan sher.Yeh le..Wahan kuch shaitani mat karna.Nahin to thappad padegi.'' Nirupama said as she handed over the key of Naina's house.

At Naina's House

"Nisha! Jaldi kar..Aunty ke paas jaa rahi hai ya school ke function mein?'' Rishav was getting impatient with the late.

"Rishav! Tu meri wo pink hair clip kahin dekha hai? Yaad hai us din park mein lagake gayi thi.Aunty ko bhi nahin mila aur yahan bhi nahin hai.Kahan kho gaya?'' Nisha was upset on losing her clip ...perhaps forever.

"Tu ab clip dhoond rahi hai? Naya kharid lena.Chal jaldi''. Rishav  uttered and he remembered something important he had to do..something very important.

"Nisha! Wo Uncle ne bola tha ki tu agar mil jayegi to unhe phone karne ke liye.Main tumhari  landphone se phone kar dun?'' Rishav asked Nisha  and he searched his pocket for the card Sameer gave him.

"Haan haan kar de.Tu bhi na ..bhulakad hai''.Nisha said as she applied  her mother's lipstick and checked her beauty in the mirror.

"Hello Uncle! Main Rishav.Wo Nisha Church ke paas thi.Haan hai ab mere paas.

Haan yeh uski ghar ki number hai.

Mumma bula rahi hai.Baad mein baat karunga.

Bye. '' Rishav kept the phone and joined Nisha and Nirupama outside the house.

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"MUMMA! ''Nisha  howled and ran towards Naina.

Naina choked on the water she was drinking hearing  Nisha's voice.She saw  Nisha come running and tumbling on her bed to hug her.

Nisha hugged her mother tight and  Naina  peppered Nisha with the most  affectionate kisses.How terribly both missed each other.

Nisha  sunk her face into her mother's chest. Naina  clasped her arms around her. A mother's arms are more comforting than any one else's.

"Mumma!Aap yahan the? Mujhe kyun nahin leke aayi?'' Nisha questioned with a cross looking into her mother's eyes.

"Mujhe nahin pata tha ki main yahan aaungi isliye nahin layi.'' Naina  tried answering  to the questions that were cooking in the tiny head.

"Aap book likh rahi thi?Book kahan hai? ''Nisha asked searching for the book which kept her away from her mother for so many days.

"Book? ''Naina asked surprised and saw Nirupama gesturing to nod a yes' to Nisha's questions.

"Haan book...wo kya hai na wo book  main publish karne ke liye bhej diya hai. ''Naina understood that Nirupama had cooked stories to convince Nisha that Naina was  fine and  in very good health.

"Aap mujhe phone kyun nahin karte the?Meri birthday bhi aapko yaad  nahin thi na.Aap  sab bhul gaye..mujhe bhi'' Nisha complained as Naina tried holding back the tears.How would she let her baby know that  she was on the see-saw of  life and death?

"Nahin Nisha.Mumma kabhi apni Nisha ki birthday bhul sakti hai? Mumma ne to bola tha Nisha ko mandir le jane ke liye''. Naina  said as she  caressed Nisha's back.

"Hein? Aap kab bole the? Wo to main Uncle ko dukan mein bola tha'' Rishav protested seeing his  credits going to someone other.

"Rishav! Aunty kuch bol rahi hai an Nisha se.Tu chal yahan se,hum ice cream khate hein.'' Nirupama  quietened Rishav and pulled him from the room.

"Aap mere liye kya gift laaye ho? ''Nisha asked  with expectations filled in her heart.

"Gift? Wo..Paise nahin the na.Jab hum ghar chalenge tab kharid lungi.'' Naina  knew her daughter would definitely understand some situations.

"Okay'' Nisha voiced and shifted herself from Naina's lap and mistakenly grabbed Naina's hand to avoid herself from stumbling  to the floor.

"Ahh! Beta dhire.'' Naina flinched in pain as Nisha had grabbed the place where the IV was connected.

"Aapko dard ho raha hai? Yeh kya hai? ''Nisha saw a big needle pierced deep into her mother's dainty hand and some water is dripping through a white tube.This devil tube and needle were surely hurting her mother.

"Yeh..dawai hai.Isse Mumma jaldi thik ho jayegi. ''Naina explained as Nisha perched to inspect the connections of tube and needle.

"Aapko dard ho raha hai na? ''Nisha repeated to which Naina nodded in affirmation.

But then what followed was completely predicted yet unexpected.

Nisha pulled out the tube and gave the drip-system stand a push.

"Nisha! Kya kar rahi ho,Mumma ko zyada dard ho raha hai. ''Naina was terrified seeing Nisha react  such impulsively and violently.

"Aap mera haath chodo.Yeh sui(needle) main nikal dungi.'' Nisha tried taking out the needle while Naina vainly tried calming her daughter.

"Shaitan sui.Meri mummy ko dard ho raha hai''.Nisha looked at the needle with scowl and fury before pulling it out with force.Drops of blood trickled down from Naina's hand as she tried to keep off the intense pain.

"NISHA!Kya kar rahi ho?'' Nirupama rushed to Nisha and pulled her from Naina .

She called the nurse and doctor to check on Naina and reattach the tubes and needle.

"Yeh bacha aapka hai?'' The nurse in mid-fifties asked as she checked on the IV connections.

"Haan..'' Naina confirmed and looked at Nisha who was sitting on another bed with Rishav and Nirupama by her both sides.

"Bacha sambhal nahin sakte to paida kyun karte ho?Doctor ne mana kiya tha na bache ko nahin lane ke liye.Tang karenge.. ''The nurse was surely pissed in handling such incidents on regular basis.

"Wo..ro rahi thi isliye hume lana pada.'' Nirupama interrupted in between.

"Maa ke bina bache to royenge.Lekin aapko patient ki haalat ki bhi fikr honi chahiye''. The nurse threw the words and left the cabin perfectly content with the arrangements.

"Mumma! Sorry.'' Nisha voiced from far.

"Koi baat nahin beta.Idhar aaja''. Naina called her.Nisha jumped from bed and rushed towards her mother.

"Mumma! ''Nisha called and pulled Naina's face.She  planted a kiss on her cheek and  kept her head on Naina's lap.The tenderness of her mother's  caresses drove her into sound sleep.The long sleep that was cure to the worries of tiny heart and apprehensions of troubled tiny brain.

Few hours later.

"Nisha! Chalo ghar chalte  hein.Der ho rahi hai''. Nirupama  called Nisha as she found her playing with her mother's  hair sitting beside her.

"Nahin mujhe nahin jaana.Aap jao.Bye Rishav.'' Nisha  said and pretended to sleep.

"Nahin Nisha.Chalo.Mumma ko rest chahiye.Hum phir kal aayenge.'' Nirupama said as a  promise  as she lifted Nisha  off the bed.

"Mumma ..mujhe nahin janaa..wapas ''Nisha pleaded and held on to Naina's arms.

"Nisha! Tum meri pyari bachi ho na.Aise zid mat karo.Aunty ke saath ghar jao.'' Naina cupped Nisha's  sullen face and tried convincing her.

"Nahin...main nahin jaungi..main aapko pareshaan nahin karungi..Promise.Mujhe rehna hai aapke paas.Mumma ..please. ''Nisha cried breaking into sobs and hiccups.

"Nisha! Aaja beta.Hum ice-cream khayenge,ghumne jaayenge.. ''Nirupama  tried this trick to distract Nisha.

"Main Mumma ke saath ghumne jaungi..Mumma aap Aunty ko bolo na..mujhe nahin jaana..aapko chod ke''.Nisha  cried harder  in her mother's lap and Naina's eyes  pooled up with tears of helpnessness.

She was helpless  once again.She hated these moments of helplessness.It paralyzed her.Its a sickness.The cure calls for monumental effort to stand up and start walking.

And she always had been weak in nick of time.

"E Moti! Itna zid kyun kar rahi hai..Pagal ho gayi hai..Chal.CHAL! ''Rishav yanked her while she didn't leave  Naina's  hand.

"Rishav! Haath chodo Nisha ka.Aise pakad te hain kya?'' Naina rebuked Rishav a little for roughly handling her.

"Sorry Aunty.'' Rishav apologised and left Nisha's hand.

"Mumma..dekho na..mujhe moti bulata hai Rishav..mujhe nahin jaana.'' Nisha  cuddled more into Naina's arms.

"Nisha! Hum kal aayenge phir.Aaj chalte hein.Meri Nisha to badi samajhdar hai na.Wo Rishav ki tarah gadha aur shaitan thodi hai.'' Nirupama cajoled her and gestured her to come into her arms.

"Haan haan..main hi bura hoon,gadha hoon,shaitan hoon, aur yeh Moti to badi pyari hai,achi hai...Mujhe koi pyar nahin karta.Sab daante te hein.'' Rishav  uttered and sulked in  a corner.

"Kisne  tujhe bura kaha?'' Nisha was more sad now seeing her best friend in tears.She climbed down from the bed and walked upto him.

"Bura hoon isliye tu Aunty ke paas rehne ke liye zid kar rahi hai.Mere saath rehna tujhe pasand nahin hai.'' Rishav replied reasonably.

"Tere paas to teri Mummy thi na par mere paas to nahin thi.Tu ro mat.Chal hum sath mein aaj ice cream khate hein.Tu aise rota hua shakal mat bana..Gadha ka papa dikh raha hai. ''Nisha wiped Rishav's tears and planted a kiss on his cheek.

"Wow! Mere bache to samajhdar  hogaye hein ''Naina cheered up seeing the bond between both the kids.

"Mumma main kal phir aaungi.Byee..''. Nisha kissed her mother and left in await of a new day,of seeing her mother again.

"Naina ji! Badi khush hain aaj.Aapki bache the?'' The doctor asked while he checked on Naina.

"Haan..Itne din ke baad dono ko dekh rahi hoon..Umeed bhi nahin thi ki phir kabhi dekh paungi..'' Naina's voice choked remembering the past few gruesome days.

"Aapko kya lagta hai? Aap aise inhe chodke chali jaati? Nahin jaa paati.Bache to farishtey hote hein.Bhagwan ka roop hote hein.Banjaar bhumi mein sawan ki tarah  hein.Inki dua ho to zindagi mein sirf khusiyan hi khusiyan hoti hai.Aap  khus kismet hain ki aapke itne pyaare bache hein.

Waise aap ka parso discharge ho raha hai.Rounak ji ko bata dijiyega.

Take Care.'' The doctor said and left.

Naina closed her eyes to relish the feeling of being back to life,being back to home,being back to her Nisha.

What more she would have wanted?

(To be Continued)

P.S.:Thank you for reading.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Would love to read all your feedbacks.๐Ÿ˜ณ

                                    WISHING  A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 6 years ago
awesome update
loved it
happy Birthday to your sister
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update! It's lovely how Nanu found Nisha.. and it was so wonderful to read about Nisha's visit to the hospital.. you have portrayed her mixed emotions and reactions so aptly!

Regarding Naina taking her to the church every Sunday.. makes me wonder if Naina has adopted Nisha.. is there actually no real connection between Nisha and Sameer?
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I am in love with your baby Nisha as a character... all the scenes where she is are so cute...heart touching...i keep thinking of them till very late๐Ÿ˜ณ
I'm kind of having an intuition that she isn't Naina's biological daughter...probably she adopted her... dont know but i do have this feeling๐Ÿ˜‰

You are increasing the suspense quotient with every part... its 9 parts up and nothing has yet been revealed so far... waiting for the next part dear๐Ÿ˜›

Loved to read this one and thanks a lot for the pm๐Ÿ˜ƒ  
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Amazinggg work Minu!!...Loved it!!...Naina is back...Misha is such a cutee!!...Can't wait for the next part!!...Happy birthday to ur sis...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Happy birthday to Sweetylina
Nice update
I luvd Nisha n Naina together..they're each other's life
So Sameer Delhi chala gya๐Ÿฅฑ
Rishav n Nirupama hv been strong support to Nisha n Naina
Waiting for Naina to be back home