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Originally posted by: hira2010

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everyone seems posting so why not I ????
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Last Part -


" Look at the full moon Geet , yeh hamari pyaar Ku sakshi rahega , this moon will bless us when we will tie in scared bond for forever .. no one can stop me from making you mine ..."

her lips adored with a smile smile as he kissed corner of her lips...but before take full charge her adamant tone stop him


" what if I refused to be yours " he silent her with a goan and kissed her hard instead


" from the time you said yes you were already mine ...so if it need to force you I won't mind a bit ...".

" you will force me to marry you ? " shocked clearly seen in her face which he only gave a look and it said all ...her boyfriend won't stop at anything ..this thought make her giddy yet scared and nervous too ...


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Remembering their past a tear roll down her eyes ..she look at the beautiful moon clenched her fist how stupid she was ..she was so selfish played with someone's emotion she want to shout and cry her heart out but she can't because her precious husband won't allow it. Still another tear fall that moment Maan hugged her from behind ...


" how could you do it ? " she started by his sudden closeness " woh i ...".


" I hate to see tears in your eyes ..didn't I tell you if you cry the consequence won't be good ..." his grip getting stronger on her clearly showing his annoyance ...


She turn around and hugged her tightly ..a loud sob came out but she didn't stop this time ...from morning she was trying to stop this but seeing him she couldn't..


she was so sure that he won't come ...she will be dumbed at her own wedding but to her surprise he came with the same glory which he promised earlier ..


In every rituals she only looked at him ..content , happiness , love was oozing from his face from his eyes , a smile always stayed in his lips as if he getting some trophy ..during sath phere he hold her hand tightly as if she gonna run away somewhere and from that moment he didn't left her hand till last ... even after what she did his love is still same that making her more guilty . Can a person love his partner that much ?


" I'm so sorry ...sorry . I_I .."


" ssh " Maan cut her off breaking their hug and wipe her tears away ...


" I'm pretty serious your tears actually making me mad ...I didn't go away but if you continue like this I have no option but to go right now ..."

" No ..."


she held his sleeve tightly ...wiping her tears give a tight smile ...Maan kissed her forehead and again turned her around , his chin on her shoulder looking the beautiful scenery before them ... pin drop silent only their heart beat can hear ...don't know how long they stayed like this ...Geet lean to his arms closed her eyes touched his face , still not believing this man is actually hers its not a dream..

" I thought you won't come " after sometime she broke the silence " I thought I lost you ..."


he kissed her palm, there is so many question in her eyes seems like its time to answer those ..." I already knew about it ...I already knew that you were not serious ..that day in library when you were talking with your friend I was also there ..."

" What ? ".

she shouted in surprise try to move away but Maan didn't let her " clam down my lady gundi ..yes I knew it all theses years ...".


" Then why ? "

he already knew the truth of their relation at the day itself when he proposed her ..then how can he still continue with her ? she is confused ... ' did he really mean that day, when he said I love you in front of everyone ...it was just a joke right ? or not '

" it was not joke " may be he read her mind and replied her doubt ..

" I wasn't joking when I confessed my feelings Geet ..I always loved you ...not from that day I loved you from the day I understood the meaning of love ... "


Geet gaped at him in shock ...maan smiled at her reaction and gave a tight peck which broke her trance ..." Maan how long you love me ? from when ? "


suddenly she feeling shy excited happy her emotions are everywhere ...she is breathing hard ...Maan loved her reaction he was waiting for it . He was waiting to confess this for long she deserve to know ...He kissed her shoulder softly ...


" it all started from childhood when you used to bully me. " he smiled at those memory ..." you really tortured me you know that ..."

" I _I. ".


but he didn't let her complete " I couldn't be in peace because of you ...there were not any single day when you spare me ..you were really evil my lady gundi ..." she closed her eyes feeling little shame ...


" but I enjoyed it ...I won't lie at first I was angry but then I start enjoying those ...I start liking your attention ..do you remember school main pohoch te hi tumhara phela word hota tha 'woh goal gappa Maan kidhar hoga ' ..I so love this even just to bully me I was always in your mind just this thought always make me happy ..."

She opened her eyes at his clear confession . How can anyone love his source of pain ? yes pain she only make his life hard in whole high school days but still he fallen for her ..is it possible ?


" its love my lady .. Love doesn't see its reason " again he answered her reading her unsaid words ..." Then in college I thought to propose you but never got chance ..one day I saw you with Pritam my blood boiled but stop himself from hurting that idiot because I know your fling won't last long, all know about his reputation... I just don't get why girls fall for bad boys ..." he clearly sounding angry

..." I didn't fall for him ...it was just u_mm its me and Prita".


he kissed her lips at once stopping her , " dare you take anyone's name other then me in these lips ...i m dead serious baby " she shivered at his tone


" Then rest you know you broke up and we start dating ...that day when I heard talking you with pinky I won't lie I was hurt very hurt ..." he took a long breath

" i m sorry ".

" chup bilkul chup ..its past ... I loved you for long Geet so take the risk ...I take the risk to make you falling for me for real and see my love win ...you know Geet even if you never love me back I wouldn't stop loving you ..because I never learn that ..loving you is the only thing that help me to keep breathing "

" how can you love me so much ..? " she feel happy, she feel proud to be his lover his wife ..never in her dreams she though anyone can love her this extent but this man really surprised her ..his love for her beyond limits ...She kissed his check again confirming its not dream ...

" Love is love Geet ..no if, but, why, how ...its heart desire where only you rule nothing else matter ..I was so angry when you confessed the truth which buried for years ..."

" I wanted you to know the truth ..I doesn't want to start our new life with lies ..I didn't thought you would be that angry .. when you left with Jai I thought I lost you ..I lost for forever ..." she looked at his eyes which shimming his live for her " but you didn't ..."

" I know baby still I didn't like you coming to say truth like this ..for me past doesn't matter ..you were young immature I can't punish you for that ...intact I would beat that person who would let a finger in you , in your love for me. Because I know how much you love me now..We can't change the past but we can't live with it right ..present and future matter only ...yes I was angry that moment but not to you ..but to Jai ...he was so harsh on you ...I want to stay with you but that stupid went to meet my family ..I had to stop him so I went away behind him ...I'm so sorry you must me restless whole day ..." he kissed her hair feeling sad for his wife ...

she smiled at his sorry ..' this man is really mad '

" no you did right ..I should feel the pain too ..it was my punishment.. but Maan why Jai hate me ..? I noticed for years he doesn't like us together why ...? ".

Its not that she did something to Jai but hr was always aloof to her . Jai was Maan's friend that's why many times she tried to befriend with him but every time he would give her cold shoulder and after few attempts she give in and never care as only Maan matter and she loves he loves her ..she doesn't need anything...

" no Geet he doesn't hate you ..he just doesn't like the idea of me loving you who used to make my life hell ..he never liked the fact that I mad for you even after what you did in whole high school days that's all " ...

Geet can understand Jai's point even Pinky would feel the same if someone bully her and still she loves him but as Maan said love is love its see no reason ...

" Geet "

her thought broke in her call she looked at him ...

" Geet can I ask you something as my wedding gift ..." isn't groom give gift to bride who cares its Maan rule can change for his wish

" anything "

" Promise me you will forget the past ..and never ever mention it or think it ever again ..."

" Maan " she moan his name hugging him with all her love ..." I m so sorry ..I did so bad still you with me ..I .."

" ssh just promise me Geet ..its my wedding present you can't say no ..." He kissed her tears away as she nodded ..

" i love you "

" love you more " with that he captured her lips for a long kiss taking her breath away ...in other times she would have argue saying she loves him more but this time she knows its not true ...there is no comparison in his love...His love for her is beyond her reach .
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
yup finished ..
its all about his love for her ..he is mad ..possessive yet his love is pure
a sweet OS hope guys enjoyed ..
can't pm now my phn battery low phew
enjoyyy
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear
Liked it !!
Maan knew that Geet was playing with his feelings and he played along. He was ready to take risk with his feelings as he was determined to win her love. Geet was feeling guilty for playing with his feelings but was overwhelmed with his confession and his true love for her. He even started to enjoy and love her bullying too and he started to enjoy her attention on him. Loved his love and possessive self for her. He explained why he left her alone aftermath her confession and Jai's aversion and whole idea about them being together. Geet understood Jai's prespective as pinky to thought and suggested her the same. Maan asked Geet to forget about their past and to never mention about it as their wedding night gift of his from her.
Lovely ending !!
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 da pm! tremendous update! well written! Geet upset! Maan reveals he knew! he loved her since the time she bullied him! he tells her to forget the past! Maan love was selfless! great end! pls post epilogue! thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
such a beautiful story ...
loved reading all the parts of this story ...
geet used to bully maan so much ...she even agreed to be his gf just for tym pass..but maan's love for her was unconditional ...he keeps loving her even after knowing that she don't loves him...he make her fall in love with him...❤️
beautiful ending ...
thanks for the pms dear and sorry for late reply
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Posted: 7 years ago
Great part. So Maan always knew about this truth. But he knew she didn't mean with any word of that. Geet apologized but Maan stopped her. He told her that he has been in love with her since his childhood. She used to bully him but he only loved her. Great os.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice story with a different perspective on love

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