#4 Pyaar Ka Imtehaan, pt 110@38 27th jan - Page 24

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Part 106

Manik brought Nandini in a dark isolated place of their garden area and then hugged her from back side... Nandini also rested herself happily on him...


He rested his face on her shoulder and gently kissed her on her cheek.Nandini with closed eyes cherish this love .

Manik : Nandini tum... khush to ho na...


Nandini heard him and then with a lil tilted face looked up in his eyes...then asked: U have any doubt Manik...?

Manik with small smile: Hmmm no...


Nandini also smiled and replied chirpily: Good and then turned her face back and closed her eyes...


But on same moment her mind reminds her of soha... and an unknown fear once again griped her heart... the guilt of not telling this to Manik is also there...

She wanted this serenity which she was feeling right now in his armfor her lifetime... but soha's thought once again disturbed her ...to shooo this thought she tightened her grip on his arm...and pressed herself more into him .


Manik felt this change but think otherwise ...he also tightened his grip around her waist...

Nandini mumbled his name after some time: Manik...

Manik with closed eyes: Hmmm


She wanted to pour her heart out... she wanted to tell him about soha and her meeting with her... and for that she need some courage...coz today is their day and she don't want to spoil it for anyone...but this soha ... her thought still haunted her.

Manik waited for her to say something but when she didn't speak. He turned her in his arms to face him and after giving a deep thoughtful look at her face he asked in concern: Nandini ... Kya hoa... ? kuch problem hai kya...?


Nandini saw that tensed lines on his forehead and her love for him once again stopped her from telling about soha at this moment...


With a small smile she shook in No... while cupping his face she kissed him on his forehead... then after giving a pyarwala look to him she kissed his both eyes one by one and then his cheeks...


Manik was enjoying this love from her with an adorable smile...but then he pulled her more to himself with a sudden jerk... and this caused the meet of their lips...


Her lips crashed on his and on the very next moment she felt his hand on the back of her head. he started nibbling her lips with love.Nandini also replied back with same fervor.Both wanted to tell eachother with this passion that how much they love eachother,how their lives are incomplete without eachother, how much they care about eachother, and after today how much important they are for eachother.


Their moment of love broke with a noise nearby...Nandini leaned back her head and gazed in his lovefilled eyes.Manik also adores her by removing her hair strand from her face and then at last he also kissed her on her forehead... And said: I love you...

Nandini with a smile replied: I love you too... and she placed her head on his chest and heard the magical rythem of his heartbeat.


While resting her head on his heart her mind walked through the memory lane... all her moments with Manik came infront of her eyes... their bulling session, that spot time, their togetherness for dhruv and rishab,then their newly budding love, and in all these memoriable time her mind once again alerted her that on their each and every special moment there was any mishap... So kya ajj bhi...?

And this thought send a fearful shiver in her body...she pressed herself more into him to give this assurance to her heart that no... ajj aisa kuch nahi hoga...


Once again her such actions forced him to read her restlessness.

Manik asked in soothing voice: Kya hoa Nandini... bolo...batao mujhe... why I feel k tum kisi tension me ho...


Here Nikki fastly came towards Aryaman and by holding his arm drag him outside without saying a word...


Other friends saw this and while laughing said to each other: Kamal hai yaar ajjto sub hi apne apne partner ko le k bhag rahe haan...

Mukti to cabir: Waise cabir terey pass bhi yeh chance hai ... in case tu avail karna chahe...

Cabir while making puppy face: tch tch soch to leta but kya hai na mujhe tere pe nazar rakhni hai...

Mukti asked him with raised eye: Mujh pe... Why?

Cabir: arey Party time chal raha hai... tu ne phir se pi k koi hangama kar diya to...


Mukti retorted back: So what ... ( While pulling Maddy towards him) ab yeh hai na merey sath...

Cabir again making fun of her: Na na ... Wo abhi nya (new)hai... ose terey dramas ka abhi pata nahi so kisi experienced banday ka terey sath hona zarori hai na.( while saying this he winked towards maddy)


Mukti : Cabir main choron gi nahi tujhe... U Moron...

Cabir laughed after pulling her leg and said: hawww... Mukti mujhe pakar k tujhe kuch nahi mile ga... pakarna hai to Maddy ko pakar na... remember he is your BF not me...

Mukti's mouth gaped on his tease... and then without wasting any time she started beating him...for this tease...


Nikki and aryaman

Aryaman: Kya hoa nikki tum mujhe aise bahir kyo layi...

Nikki with tensed face showed him something on a tab...

Aryaman saw that and his face color also changed on seeing soha there

With stressed face he said to nikki...: Tum Manik aur Nandini ka dehan rakhna main isey handle karta hoon...

Nikki nodded in yes...

Manan side

Manik : Nandini look at me...

Nandini after gathering courage saw in his eyes...

Manik: now say it... kya hoa hai...tumhe kuch kahna hai mujh se... ya batana hai na...?

But before she say anything Nikki disturbe them and said: Nandini tum yahan ho... wo andar sub tum dono ko bula rahien haan...

Manik wanted to know the reason of her tension but Nandini at once said: ok hum ate haan... With this she tried to walk ahead but manik pulled her back


He asked once again in a pleading way while caressing her hairs: Nandini plz share with me...plzzz look at you... your eyes are telling me that something is bothering you ...so plz share with me... plzzz...

Nandini tried to speak something but again no words came out from her mouth.But her eyes speaking a volume at this moment.


Manik: Nandini plz now u r scaring me.kya hoa hai bolo.

Nandini saw that Manik is very much worried about her but once again her mind stopped her to say anything coz this is not the right time.

So she held his hand to calm him down and said: Manik... Aisa kuch nahi hai... Aur jo hai wo main is function k baad tum se hi share karon gi...I promise...


She gave a assuring look to him and then he nodded in agreement and sid: ok I'll wait.

And with this she dragged him with her inside...


On seeing them Cavya,Dhrulya and Mukdy came to them and started teasing them ... but in all this fun... Manik's eyes and his mind was on Nandini...

Elders saw this young lot pulling each others leg and then they continue with their conversation...

On same Moment Police commissioner entered in and Mr Malhotra went to receive him...

Aryaman and Soha

Aryaman caught her near enterence gate and drag her in a lone corner...


Aryaman: Tum yahan... bola tha na ... Mnaik aur Nandini k aas pass bhi nahi ana...

Soha: but main unhe congratulate karne aye hoon...

Aryaman: stop your bloody drama soha... I know tum phir se un dono ki life ko disturbe karne ae ho... but is baar main aisa kuch nahi hone doon ga...Samjhi... Now go back ...

Soha: Bro plz ... only once mujhe un dono se mafi mangni hai...

Aryaman: No means No soha... ab is se pahle k main yahan police ko call kar k trespassing k jurm me tumhe andar karwa doon ... chali jao yahan se...


After saying this he moved towards Security men and told them: Dehan rakhna yeh larki andar nahi ani chaheye... Samjhe...and in case yeh andar a gayi to is k sath tumhe bhi jail bhijwa doon ga...

Soha saw this with gaped mouth and thought: andar to main pohanch hi jaon gi... kisi bhi keemat me...


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Part 107

Soha started searching for the way to go in... that's the time her eyes caught some strange happening...


While hiding herself behind a tree she saw some strange type of men entered in the farmhouse from backside...


She thought to follow them ...so she walked behind them and finally she is inside the farmhouse... now she was in dilemma to whether she follow them or go to find Manan 1st...

Then her mind told her to see 1st who they are...


Inside the party


Amms to Nandini: Nandu kanna I am very happy for you... God bless you both... Tum dono na aik sath bht acha lagta hai...and you know abhi hum pandit je se tum logon ki shadi k mohrat k bare me hi baat kar raha tha...

Nandini gave a shy smile in reply... And on same moment Mnaik came to them and asked amms while holding Nandini's hand...



Manik: I think merey bare me baat ho rahe thi ... hai na amms...

Nandini at once said to tease him: Huh hum tumhare bare me baat kyo karen gey Mnaik Malhotra hum to...(thought for a while)... haan hum to rishab k bare me baat kar rahe thay... Hai na amms(at the end she tried to pull amms in this teasing)


Manik with a smirk: came between them placed his arm on Nandini's shoulder and then while looking in her eyes asked: Sure...? Tum rishab k bare me hi baat kar rahe thi... (now he teasingly mocked on her) but Nanduuu tumhare face ka yeh red color... (while tracing a line on her face) yeh jhuki hoe eyes(touching her eyes) yeh to... (then he turned towards amms and winked at her and then continued) yeh to mujhe kuch aur bata rahe haan...


Amms also tried to suppress her laugh on this nautanki but in her heart she felt blessed to have manik for her nandu...

Nandini while touching her face : what red color ... Are you talking about... koi red color nahi hai...ok... hai na amms...


Amms came to her and while cupping her face she said: red color to hai nandu ... Aur tere face pe hi nahi teri life me bhi hai... aur kanna pata hai wo red color kya hai...


Nandini with confused look saw at her and amms told: Color of love Nandu... wo pyar ka rang hai kanna... Manik aur terey pyar ka...and I pray to God k yeh rang hamesha tum dono ki life me rahe ...and with this she kissed her forehead and then kissed manik's forehead also...God bless you both... Hamesha aise hi aik dosre k sath kush raho tum dono...bus yehi khushi dekhne k liye hum ne pandit je ko bola hai k hum jald se jald tum dono ki shadi karna chahte haan.


Manik with extrme happy smile: Really (he gav a side hug to amms in retun of this news)

Amms now tried to tase her so with expressionless fac she asked: haan agar tum ko nandu se shadi nahi karna to its ok... hum apni Nandu k liye koi aur arka dekh lete haan.


Manan looked at each other and said at once: Whattt... No amms ... Hame shadi karni hai...

Amms with same expression: to hum ne kab kaha k shadi nahi karni..? hum nandu ki shadi kahein aur kar deein gay...


Manan once aain while shooking their head in negative said: Nooo amms (Mujhe Manik se hi... Aur Mujhe Nandini se hi shadi karni hai...

Chachi and fab 4 along with partners who saw this scene laughed and then chachi said:wo to hame pahle hi pata hai... amms to bus apne jamae ki tang khinch rahe hi... hai na amms... (on this she smiled brightly)


Chcahi further says: Shadi to tum dno ki ho gi hi jaise Raj aur simran ki,hoe thi(ddlj) jaise Rahul aur pooja ki (dil to pagal hai)...(in her dreamy style she remembered her SRK in each and everyfilm)


Cabir saw her and while placing hand on her shoulder said: Chachi SRK k dreams se bahir a jao amms abhi ahan hi haan aur wo dekho unce bhi app ko dekh rahey haan... Chachi immediately gave a sheepish smile to amms and then said:haan aur aise hi merey shahrukh ki tarhan love aur romance karte raho... Hehehehe...



Mukti and Maddy

Mukti while standing beside maddy saw this happy family scene and said: yeh dono kitney lucky haan na... friends , family, family love , and in ka pyaar... sub kuch hai in k pass...

Maddy felt somekind of longing in her voice ... but to divert her attension he said casually: so r u jealous of them?

Mukti at once : Nooo why would I be... I am happy for them... very happy... they deserve this love...


Maddy pulled her to himself and while tracing a line on her facial features said: I know u r happy for them... but I also felt that ting of pain in your voice ... and I know u r missing your family... am I right...

Mukti pushed him back coz her heart is accepting this fact but her mind... like always...: No what are you saying ... meri family yehi to hai... dhruv,cabir,manik,alia,nandini,navya,aryaman,nikki and tum... aur tum sub yahan merey sath ho... to main kyo kisi ko miss karon gi huh...


Maddy saw her unsuccessful attempt to snub her inner felling... So he pulled her behind a piller and fussed his lips on her... while saying: u r such a sweetheart mukti... and I love you...


Mukti heard this and a smile came on her face while she said: love you too...

Cabir saw Manan together and then his eyes stopped when Nandini placed her phone on the table...he without making any noise picked her phone and walked on the other side...


He came in a lone corner and when he noticed that Manik was not with Nandini and he was busy with some guests then he write a msg full of love and ahm ahm type of stuff and send it to Manik's number...


Cabir then delete that msg from her phone and then after turning off all the tune and vibrator of her cell he put it in his pocket...

Manik received that msg andwhen he saw that it was from Nandini he with his smiling face opened that and ... a shock... he got a real big shock after reading that msg...

His eyes immediately moved towards her and he found her busy with navya and alia...

Cabir started recording his expression...


He came near her and while grabing her hand he pulled her on some distance...

Nandini with amazed look saw him but in reply he gave an unbelieveable look to her...


At 1st he checked her temperature to confirm that is she really fine...

Nandini with specious look asked: Manik what happened ?kya kar rahe ho...?

Manik with raised eyes: What happened (with questioning eyes)...what you wrote ..?

Nandini got confused more on his words and said: what what huh...? Mnaik kya hoa hai tumhe... tum mujhe aise kyo le k aye... and what are u talking about...?what I wrote and where?


Cbair while smiling was recording all this...

Manik: what I am talking about... I mean I cant believe it... Nandini tum... tum aisa msg kar sakti ho...i mean (with sheepish smile) I don't mind if u want all this...


Nandini again with confused voice: msg... what msg... main ne kab tumhe msg kiya...and what I want...? now with a lil worried voice she confirmed: Mnaik tum thek ho na...?


Manik with extremely wide eyes and funny expression: tum ne kab kiya... (he checked her temperature) Nandini have u lost your mind... abhi itna hot and happening msg karne k baad... poch rahe ho kab msg kiya... I am still in shock k tum aur aisa msg...


Nandini: what msg Manik... dikhao mujhe...main ne koi msg nahi kiya... tum kis msg ki baat kar rahe ho...

Now it clicked in his mind k it is someone else...but when Nandini once again demanded to see that msg


Cabir and Manik boths eyes came out on this and Manik shouted: what no...

Nandini: what no huh... abhi to tum ne kaha main ne msg kiya... to ab dikhao to kis msg ki baat kar rahe ho...

Cabir to himself: Abay gadhey kuch bhi kar but msg nandu ko nahi dikhana... he immediately shut down his camera and walked towards them...


He pulled manik and said: Wo manikkk tu yahan ... Chal na tujh se kuch baat karni hai...

Manik saw his urgency and got it that he is the one who did this... And then he showed him his glaring eyes... whereas cabir with his facial expression said don't show it to Nandini...


He once again pulled him and said: Chal na...

After reaching on a lone corner manik gave a fake puch in his stomachand said: Sale kameenay...tu ajj k din bhi baaz nahi aya... tu ne Nandini k phone se... aur aisa msg...where is her phone...? Terey pass hi hai na.


Cabir while smiling: but tell me honestly parhne k baad jhatka lagana... I saw it on your face... see... And then he showed him the video...

Now Mnaik's mouth became open and he held his neck by his arm : cabir kameney saley... tu ajj k din hi mare ga...ajj tu nahi bach sake ga...


Cabir tried to doged him while saying:Manik no... apni engagement k din tu phansi pe nahi charh sakta... Nandu bechari ka kya hoga...


And with this he started running in the hall ... All the guests , friends and family members saw this... and now manik started chasing him...

Mnaik: Nandini ... K liye main hoon yahan tu oski tension nahi le abhi to tu apni tension le kameenay...


Cabir ran and hide behind Mr Malhotra while saying: Uncle bachao... see app ka beta engagement k din hi pagal ho gya hai god knows shadi pe is ka kya haal hoga...

Manik: pagal aur main... tu ruk kameeney...


While others laughed on their kiddish fight and that too on this day...

Nandini now knows that job hi kuch hoa wo cabir ka koi prank hoga... but this reminds her of her phone.


She started searching for her phone and here fab 3 and others tried to sortout the issue between ManBir...

While searching her phone Nandini came out to see the place where Manik brought her...


And that's when ...she felt some disgusting smell near her and on next moment someone closed her mouth from backside...


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Seems like update is coming
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Amazing comeback
Cabir and his pranks
Loved manan scene
Hope nandini will be fine at the end
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Amazing,
Interesting,
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MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU TOO
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omg now what happened yaar I really really missed this ff omg is nandu kidnaped will soha help them to find nandini lots of questions can't wait for more thanks a lot for double update it was amazing all the teasing amidst the tension wow

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