Black love | Haasil FF |Update: PART -44 | PAGE-116 | 14/12/18 | - Page 5

Originally posted by: anshvi

Elvi

I loved the 3rd part...I am so curious to know who murdered both mom and daughter...Kabir and Aanchal are not compatible it seems while AanVir are alike. Super interesting!

Eagerly waiting for ur next update!

I wish writers could make something like this ! Sigh !

😃

Thank you for ur comment Aanshvi:)

Glad you loved it!:)

Some more things coming in next two parts:) I will try to post chapter 4 tmrw:)

P.S When writers sees grey as "more black and tora sa white" kuch nahi ho sakta😆

Finally AanVir met. I can already feel the connection between the two n their conversation is damn good.

Who is thr murderer? I hope Ranvir is only grey here. But then again it's Elvi's ff. Ranvir is the hero 😆

Nice update

Its really good.

Wonderful awesome update Enjoying reading this than watching the original one 👏

Originally posted by: ElviraRK_PC

Thanks for comment Laksh😳

There a lot of twists in Ranvir - Aanchal's story...And not less in Kabir-Aanchal's:)😛


Sarika😆


Yeah...Im trying to create a lot mystery around him and his character...Without making him psycho obssesed lover...There a thin line between psycho obssesed person and person who just obssesing with something or someone:)

kaash cvs also understand abt it...

Originally posted by: Neenzm

Finally AanVir met. I can already feel the connection between the two n their conversation is damn good.

Who is thr murderer? I hope Ranvir is only grey here. But then again it's Elvi's ff. Ranvir is the hero 😆

Nice update

For me grey characters who struggle against that darker side of themselves whether it's addiction, rage, murder, a thirst for revenge, or something else. Characters who make terrible mistakes with dire consequences and have to face and accept the side of themselves that they so desperately want to bury. Characters who aren't white or black, but somewhere in between. Characters who are dynamic, who struggle to make decisions, who aren't always sure if they're doing the right thing, or what the right thing really is. 😳

So like Anshvi saying even if person did crime also imp reasons behind it...Maybe he is not wrong:) Anywyas:)) I hope you will like my twists and turns...All 3 will be on same level..You will hate and love all 3 ppl:) Its like how I wanted to see Haasil:)

Originally posted by: _Payalj_

Its really good.

Please isme to Aanveer ki shaadi kara dena .😭

Originally posted by: SumoKaShravan

Wonderful awesome update Enjoying reading this than watching the original one 👏

Eagerness on it's peak to read more

Update fast 🤗

"Black Love"

Note: So many things will come as flashbacks. For example how Aanchal and Kabir's love story started. During events of the present time characters will have flashbacks about all main events from their past. *************************

PART-4
Ranvir and Aanchal siting in car and waiting for Kabir.
"Woh nahi ayega..." - said Aanchal with sadness in her voice.
"Aanchal maybe we will back? I feel his announcement really very important for him"
"Ranvir...Apko pata nahi..."
"Tum ko..."
"Matlab?"
"When you saying 'aap' I feel like I'm 50 year old uncle...So please 'tum' bolo..."
"Par hamari rishta 'tum' tak nahi phochgayi..So I can't..Sorry"
"Chalo..Teek hai. As you wish. So will we back?"
"No. Kabir should understand that everything won't be always as he wants. Mere bhi kaam important hai...Mere bhi feelings important hai.. Like just look.. Maine aap ko kaha 'hamari rishta 'tum' tak nahi phochgayi' aap mangayi...You are respecting my feelings...Agar Kabir hota..We are would have been fighting."
"Strange...You know me just few hours but already compare my brother with me."

Ranvir looked at Aanchal and Aanchal looked at him. She felt herself awkward.
"Chalo...Lets go." - said Ranvir.

Kabir was drinking and was recaling what happened on party.
"Try to understand my situation...Its very important..."
"Kabir tum kyu bacche ke tarah behave kar rahe hai?"
His eyes where filled with tears. With sadness in voice he said:
"Pehli baar...Pehli baar bade mere saath nahi diya...Pehli baar. Par kyu? Kis ke liye? Woh Aanchal ko sirf 3-4 ghante janta hai..Par main..Main uska chota bhai hoon na...Main galat nahi tha..Main sirf Aanchal ko propose karna chahta tha..Aur woh..Woh toh apne kaam ko choose kia..Mere pyaar ko ignore kia...Kyu Aanchal? Kyu tum bar bar aise kar rahi hai? Aur Bade..Aaj tum pehli baar mujhe dard diya...Pata nahi kyu ab mujhe aisa lagta hai ke Aanchal ke wajah se hamare beech bohot bada toofan ane wala hai.."
"Finally...Tumhe kuch toh saamaj aaya." - said Sarika who heard Kabir's words.
"Maa.."
"Kabir yeh ladki nahi...Barbaadi hai..Toofan hai. You should break up with her. Woh tumhare liye sahi nahi hai...Dekho...You wanted propose her but she didn't even listen you. Unn ke liye uss ka kaam important hai. Tum nahi. She insulted you so much. Pyaar karne wali ladki aise harkate kabhi nahi karegi."

Kabir carefully listened her. He was confused so much. He dont want believe in Sarika's words but from another side he thinkshe is right.
"Accha mom...We will talk tomorrow. I'm tired and want to sleep. Good night""
Good night"
Kabir left to his room.
"Agar main iss ladki ko tumhari zindagi se bahar nahi pheka...Toh main Sarika Raichand nahi hoon."

Ranvir and Aanchal in car. Aanchal was very sad and was thinking about Kabir. Ranvir was looking at her.
"Phone karo."
"Ha?"
"Kabir ko call karo...You should talk to him.."
"Mujhe nahi lagta yeh sahi waqt hai..."
"Aanchal main Kabir ko acche se janta hoon. Woh kabhi nahi manega ke woh galat hai...And you should accept that."
"Par Ranvir ek din manna padega na...There will be people who will not tolerate his childish behaviour."
"Kabir bohot ziddi hai..."
"Main bhi ziddi hoon."
"Phone nahi karogi?"
"Chalo...Teek hai."
Aanchal called Kabir.
"Hello..""Kabir..." - said Aanchal with soft voice.
"Ha..Aanchal bolo."
"Tum teek hai na?"
"Ha...Mujhe kya hoga? Tora dard hai dil pe par yeh kuch naya nahi hai."
"Kabir...I'm sorry...Par mere pass koi option nahi thi...Please try to understand me. I really love you... Kabir you changed my life..."
"And you changed my life...Tum mere zindagi ho Aanchal..."
"But you can't change me...Kabir you should accept me with all my flaws..Like I accepted you...If you can't then we should..."
Kabir scared when he heard it from Aanchal's mouth. He thought he loosing her.
"No! Never! Aanchal tum mere zindagi hai...Main tujhe khona nahi chahta hoon!""Main bhi...Okay. Listen you can prepare your surprise for tomorrow. I promise kal main puri din tumhari saath bitaoonga."
"Promise?"
"Promise."
Ranvir looked at Aanchal. His gaze was mysterious and incomprehensible.
"Bade tumhare saath hai?"
"Ha. Baat kar na hai?"
"Nahi. Tell him I don't want see him."
"Kabir."
"Thats it. Bye."
"Kabir..."
Kabir hung up phone before Aanchal could say anything.
"Baccha"
"Kya hua?"
"Woh Kabir...Aap se naaraz hai."
"Kabir? Mujh se? Aise toh pehle baar hua hai."
"Shayad woh naaraz hai kyu ke aap uska saath nahi dia...You always on his side and today first time you supported a stranger. "
"Iss mein kuch naya nahi hai...logo ka aadha waqt toh, anjaan logo ko impress karne mein aur apno ko ignore karne mein chala jata hai."
Ranvir gave a mysterious look to Aanchal again. Aanchal felt something strange.
"Mera matlab tum stranger the mere liye right? But tum haamari ghar ki hone wali bahu hai. So I should impress you. Make you feel herself comfortable in our house and among all of us."
"Oh..Yeh. Thank you Ranvir."
They are smiled. Ranvir and Aanchal came to victim house. Aanchal asked police give to her all detailes about murder. Police gave to listen to her a recording of that call...
"Hello...Hello...Police..."
"Ha...Koun bolti hai?"
"Main..Main Shanti hoon...Meenu ki mother. Woh mujhe marna chahta hai..."
"Koun? Aap kaha hai?"
"Main apne ghar pe hoon...Please mujhe bachali je..."
Someone hold her hand and she screamed.
"Please...Don't kill me...Please...Main kuch nahi kia..."
"Hello...Hello...Shanti ma'am...Hello"
"Help! Help! Police will find you! You think you will kill me and no one will get about this!"
The man stabbed her in stomach...She fall on flor...Before death she was trying to say something...
"Rai...Rai..."
"Hello! Are you hear me?"
"Rai..."
Aanchal was confused after what she heard. But then Ranvir suddenly said:
"Raichand.."
Everyone was shocking. Especially Aanchal.
"What?"
"Her last word...Raichand"
"Ranvir do you understand what you are saying?"
"Yes Aanchal. Woman tried to say "Raichand".
""Excuse me..Can you leave us alone for sometime?""Yes. Ofcouse."
Police left room.
"Ranvir yeh aap kya kehra hai?"
"Sach kehra ha hoon Aanchal. Shanti ma'am tried to say "Raichand"
"Par Ranvir...Do you know whats that mean?"
"Ha. Iska matlab ke aap tujhe humne aur mere family ko suspect karna hai."

Aanchal didn't understand why he says all this. Why he openly says she should suspect him and his family.

"Dekho Aanchal...Main hamesha sach ka sath dete hoon..Agar tujhe sach doonda hai toh apne aap ko bhi shaq karo. Agar mera apna galat hai toh galat hai."
"Agar tumhe sach ki talaash hai,to na sahi raaste se hato aur naa hi shaq ko koi apna par paida hone do..."
"Sach kadwa hota hai,lekin us ka phal hamesha meetha hota hai.Jhoot hamesha meetha ban kar zaahir hota hai aur us ka phal hamesha zahreela hota hai. Tum darti hai ke sach kadwa hogi..."

They are looked at each other. Ranvir smiled. He got out his harmonica and playing on it he left. Aanchal didn't know what she should do.

wow amazing