Akdha ff love or Obsession Epilogue on page 138 - Page 50

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

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Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Liked the chappy
Jodha and Jalal open their heart infront of each other
Smoking and drinking is what Jodha hates, n that causes Jalal to be silent
Would wait for next chappy...

well it's great to know you all enjoy this small chappy dear and about there like and dislike well they are quite opposite to each other isn't it anyway thanks for Lovely comment dear.

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

awsome update..

love it..

she hates smoking n drinking..n jalal is shocked..lol..

plz continue soon

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glad to know you like it dear and yes you are right it make him kinda shock and I will soon update next dear don't worry and thanks for such a sweet comment dear.

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Sorry for the late reply

glad you enjoyed it dear and I will update soon dear don't worry and have patience dear they will talk and without uncomfortableness soon and no need to apologize dear for me you all give your valuable time to read and comment that's enough dear so I don't mind of late comment but seeing no comment make me sad anyway thanks for your comment dear.

Awesome update Rashmi..

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Awesome update Rashmi..

I think this is the 2nd time Ja is opening his heart to her,and Jodha too...But this time they shared different feelings...Feeling of love,pain,care...

The reason behind the love and fear...

Wonderfully written...

So now they are in a mission...

Last part in the car is nice...Jalal...Ha ha.a.

Waiting for the next process...

Thanks for pm...

well you are absolutely right dear it's Second time Jalal is telling her about his feelings and this time Jodha to did and to yell you dear I just love to make my story positive at the end always I believe if you do something wrong than no need to cry or try to get sympathy from others you need to earn forgiveness or you need to suffer to and I like to portray boy and girl both of there pov don't know I get success or not but I do always try isn't it anyway thanks for such a lovely comment Dear. it means very much to me.

Very nice chappy .

Originally posted by: aamirgo

Very nice chappy .

Update next soon...😳

glad to know you enjoyed dear and thanks for comment dear I will update soon.

Chapter 22

(After sometime Jodha Looked at him and started smiling than in calm voice).

Jodha said : you are so funny...

(saying this she started Laughing and listening her words Jalal Looked at her confusingly).

Jodha said : don't look at me like this you are looking no less than any kid right now.

(and again started laughing).

Jalal said : will you care to explain me why you are laughing at me like this.

Jodha said ; I told you I don't like to drink and smoke and I hate those People who drink and smoke right.

Jalal said : umm...hmm yaa Right so what

Jodha said ; and just listening my dislike you started coughing it means you drink and smoke to isn't it.

(listening her words Jalal get nervous but than within few minutes he compose himself and in calm voice).

Jalal said : umm yaa you are right I love to drink and smoke ...but it's now my Past... I mean at college time... I always goes out with my friends... and drink but ...now I don't drink ...but smoking habit is... something hard to leave ...so I sometimes smoke to ...so when I listen your words... I get hell nervous ...as you already didn't like me... and after knowing my Likes... you will hate me more... so that's why...

(when he started explaining her he was calm but at the end he get more nervous and seeing him nervous and embarrassed Jodha again started Laughing and seeing her laughing Jalal get more confuse).

Jodha said : oh god... you are really something... uff come on in this whole world... half of the people like to drink and smoke... I don't like doesn't mean... you or everyone need to dislike that to... anyway leave it ...tell me what you dislike the most...

Jalal said : ummm I hate when People ignore me... and when the things don't go according to my wish... and I get frustrated...

(listening his words smile get disappear from Jodha face she get nervous and started Looking outside of the car and seeing her Like this Jalal take her hand in his and kissed them softly making her Look at him).

Jalal said : don'rt get nervous Kitten I will never hurt you for anything trust me.

(Listening his Words Jodha Just smiled nervously while he again started Focusing on driving soon they Reach Movie theater and get out of the car and goes to watch movie and enjoy there time with each there it was not very Nice for Jodha as she still need time to be comfortable with him but at the end as deal she try to enjoy with him other Side Jalal tried his best make her comfortable with him and like this they enjoy there half of the day watching movie and than goes out and eat something in Cafe than goes ourt to go home after sitting inside the car).

Jalal said : so you Like Salman khan hmm.

(he ask her as he get to know today that she get very excited while talking about him).

Jodha said : hmm Like I love him just see his Acting... uff he is Mind Blowing you Know... Ajay to like Salman ...so we often fight with each other to Prov ...that who is best and big Fan of him ...Just look at his Dance move... My My girls can die for his Look... and More than his Acting I love his Movie... as they are very clean anyone can watch...children to youth or elders to...not only Salman... I like Amir Khan Ajay Devgan to ...they are an awesome Actor I love them...

(listening her words Jalal get frustrated or should I say Jealous).

Jalal Pov : uff here to Ajay come god I will kill him someday what is so special about those Actor they just do acting nothing else and My Kitten Like them wow she can like anyone but not me.when that Salman was Dancing without Shirt how much I wish to close My Kitten eyes so that she don't saw him but god she was busy drooling at him that time I just wanted burn the whole Cinema Hall how can anyone watch that.

(he come out of his thought when Jodha Pinch him on his shoulder).

Jalal said : what's wrong Kitten why you Pinch me are you fine do you need something.

Jodha said : from Past Five Minutes I am calling you and you are not listening so I pinch you what happen where were you lost.

Jalal said : umm nothing wrong I just thinking about something. you say what were you talking about.

Jodha said : actually I want to eat Ice cream now.

Jalal said : oh okay than.

(After sometime Jalal stop the car at side of the Road near Ice Cream vendor Cart which was Near Mumbai Beach area And come out of the car Jodha to come out).

Jalal said : which Flavour you want Kitten.

Jodha Said : Graeter's Black Cherry Chocolate Chip.

(listening this Jalal Just Nodded and buy Ice cream for her and give her).

Jodha said : you will not eat Ice cream.

Jalal said : I don't like it.

(listening this Jodha Looked at him top to bottom and in shocked voice).

Jodha said : are you from another Planet or what hmm you don't like Ice Cream can't believe it in this world no one can dislike Ice cream.

Jalal said : hey it's not so much shocking Kitten don't make fun of me actually I like them but I don't eat them as caught cold fast.

Jodha said ; oh okay still just a little try once only.

Jalal said : okay if you are insisting than I will eat but I want to share your Ice Cream.

Jodha said : no no I will not it's my Favrouite Iwill not share with you.

Jalal said : fine than I will not eat.

(saying this he Make a sad Face and seeing that Jodha Forwards her Ice cream to him and he get happy than both of them share it and enjoy suddenly Jodha Put some Ice cream on Jalal Nose Making him glare at her which she Laugh at him and take his Pic on her cell and stay four steps back).

Jodha said : I will show this Pic to My friends now Look how funny you looking now.

Jalal said : no Delete that Kitten or else.

(saying this he started going towards her while she started Running towards Beach side near After Ten Minutes of chase Jalal caught her Hand but Jodha was Fast enough hew slip Making her fell On Sand with him both of them get lost in each other but within Few Minutes Jodha come to her sense and started Pushing him off from her as he fell on top of her but he was Lost in her and her hands which were Pushing him irritating him so he Grab her Both hands and Put them on Sand By Side and started Gazing at her Lips without knowing that his Action is Now Making Jodha scared).

Jodha Said : get up get off from me.

(But Jalal didn't listen her words he was Lost in her seeing him lost Jodha get More Scared).

Jodha said : stop it Jalal get off from me.

(she yelled at him making him come to his sense he get up than Make her Stand).

Jalal said : I am sorry I just it will not happen again Kitten but can you say my Name again kitten it was first time you say my name Please repeat it.

Jodha said : I want to go home now Please.

(his action really Make her scared again and Listening her Words Jalal Understood very well so he without saying anything Goes to his Car and Jodha Follow him and after half they Reach Jodha House and after coming out of Car Jalal hugged her than Kissed on her forehead).

Jalal said : I apologize once again for what I did at Beach Side I am sorry for that I just lost my Sense that time hope you understand Kitten.

(listening his Words Jodha just Nodded her head and goes inside her house Jalal to sit inside his car and left to his house and after one hour he reach his house and entering inside he Saw His Friends are talking with his Parents).

Abdul said : well uncle it was Just Dad Words but I to think to do that.

Hamida said : still I didn't knew you will get married soon Abdul.

Viraj said : Well Aunty I to think to get married what do you think about this.

Natasha said : I think the same to as Dad is talking so much about Marriage stuff nowadays.

Humayu said ; but you all are telling this to us what we can help you in this.

Abdul said : actually uncle first you get Jalal Married than we will get married.

Hamida said : than I think you all should take rebirth ...to get your love in this life... as your so called friend will not get married... as he can't get Jodha by her wish neither... he will get another girl in his life ...s no wedding bells here.

Humayu said : i don't think so I mean he is my son he will get her for sure as we Mohammed always get what we want.

Hamida said : oh Really don't you dare to think about making her you Daughter in Law by Force as I will not let that happen get that straight in your head all of you.

Jalal said : But what if she fell in love with me Mom.

(listening his Words everyone look at him).

Jalal said : answer me Mom what if she fell in love with me.

(saying this he goes to Hamida kneel down in front of her take her hands in his and sit down on floor)

Hamida said : what if she didn't Jalal.

Jalal said : if she didn't fell in love with me than I will marry the girl whom you will choose for me Mom.

(listening this everyone get shocked but didn't said anything).

Jalal said : I know you all are confuse and shocked by listening my words... but whatever I said is True I will marry another girl choose by My Parents ...And ...Abdul Salima ,Seher Aslam ,Mirza Shivani, Viraj Natasha And Mom Dad...I... I ... I... am ...so.rr.y I am sorry for whatever I did ...I am sorry for making you all worried for Me... I am sorry for hurting you all ...I know how much you all loved me... and I use your Love for my own Benefit and selfish reason... I ...make you all scared ...I behave like Jerk in Fact... I force you all to do what I want... I am sorry...Please forgive me...

(listening his words Hamida Humayu and his friends get worried his friends Sit besides him on floor).

Abdul said : what's wrong Jalal.

Viraj said : Did something happen why you apologizing now.

Jalal said : nothing happen guys... it's Just that today I got to know how much I hurt you all... Because of me how much you all suffered ... I just need to apologize to you so I did...

Humayu said : are you Really Jalal Mohammed My son or his Duplicate Hamida just Pinch me I can't believe it he is really Jalal.

Hamida said : How this great thought enter you useless Brain Jalal.

Jalal said : what mom My Brain is not useless okay.

Salima said : Really than where is that Arrogant Jalal who never apologize to anyone except His Love.

Jalal said : actually yesterday I goes to Meet My Kitten and I again...

(he calmly told them everything whatever he did with her and how he make a deal with her and how he spend his whole day with her everything he told them in detail word by word Making everyone shocked again).

Humayu said : My my My what a Choice Jalal...I love her I wish she was My Daughter ...uff how cute and innocent caring and lovely girl she is ...oh god I never saw a girl Like her... My my I really wish that she... fell in love with you... and become my Daughter in Law...

Hamida said : you will Never change right Jalal... You Again force her god I hate you for this... But now listen to me very carefully ...if you again force her or hurt her than I will kill you ...by my bare hands without second thought ...Get that and yes I to wish she fell in love with you...but if she didn't than you need to let her go.

Jalal said : I will never hurt her Mom I promise and yes I will let her go I told her to.

(seeing honesty and determination in his eyes Hamida hugged him).

Hamida said : that's like my Son but now I want to know... from where you meet that innocent Angel...Jalal I am sure she is not the girl to Be around boys Like you right.

Abdul said : you are right Aunty she is the girl ...to run opposite direction ...if she saw a bad guys group.

Jalal said : Mom Please you ask Dad as I am sure if I will tell you than you will definitely going to Kill me.

(listening this everyone started laughing).

Wow too good chappy dear