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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dellaakdha


Yes .. Akdha is the best for me...I too love that scene..cute😉

well same here dear that was very cute and funny scene for me whenever i remember this I always laugh hard dear.
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Chapter 3

(after breaking the kiss both of them look at each other with love and than smiled at each other after sometime).

Jalal said : I think we should leave for home what say.

Jodha said : hmm you are right Let's go back.

(than both of them goes out of the club and reach to there bike and both of them about to sit on bike when Jalal grab Jodha hands and pull her towards himself and in Calm voice).

Jalal said : Mehek if in future you get to know something about me which I didn't told you still you will trust me right.

Jodha said : come on Veer any relation need a strong base of trust if we don't trust each other than we don't deserve to love each other but I love you that mean I trust you so don't worry about that now let's go.

Jalal said : hmm you are right actually i just thinking that...leave it let's go now.

(than both of them wear helmet and sit on bike and Jalal started Driving and soon drop her to her home than left to his after freshening up both of them lay on bed but sleep was far away from there eyes).

Jodha pov : how nice this day was for me hmmm awesome I never thought I will ever love anyone either than halal my best friend whom I hate now more than anything why why Jalal why you broke our friendship why I loved you and you I hate you I hate you.

(thinking about Jalal she started remembering some childhood memories other side Jalal to can't sleep).

Jalal pov : I won I won I fell in love with Mehek I thought if I will have any girl in my life than it will be you Jodha you but you are not and I am happy for that how beautiful and kind girl she is Mehek just like her name uff so sweet I still remember the day I meet you Jodha I and I curse the day we meet I hate you I hate you why Jodha why you left me why.

( flashback ).

(Jalal was standing outside of the class's in school because he was punish by teacher when from other class one girl to come out and stand opposite to him leaning on wall and bumping her back to the wall continuously after sometime she take out one chocolate and started eating).

Jodha said : I hate her she is not my sister.

Jalal pov : I was frustrated and angry at my Brother he always make me punish by teacher. here I am standing outside from last 30 minutes but who care anyway as I was frustrated when one girl come out of 5 B class she has doe like eyes her hair were tied her face was fair and she was so cute her chubby cheeks uff how I wish to pull them out but I come out of my thoughts when I heard her sweet voice but I get confused at her words.

(he was busy gazing at her when she looked at him).

Jodha pov : I come out of my class as I get punished by teacher and take out a chocolate from my pocket and started eating but than I saw one boy standing outside of class 9 A he was taller than me but he was looking at me I think he wanted my chocolate so I goes to him.

Jodha said : umm wanna have some.

(he come out of his thoughts and in Calm voice).

Jalal said : sorry I didn't get you what were you saying.

Jodha said : you want to eat this.

(saying this she show him her chocolate while he smiled at her innocence).

Jalal said : no thanks I am fine Little one you eat this yourself.

Jodha said : umm hmm okay fine.

(Saying this she stand beside him).

Jodha said : how much time left for recess.

(listening her words Jalal look at his watch).

Jalal said : 20 minutes are left.

Jodha said : umm oh okay but what are you doing out of the class do you get punished by teacher like me.

Jalal said : so you are punished by teacher.

Jodha said : yes my elder sister tore my notebook to which I was unable to show my homework to teacher so she told me to Stand out of the class and you.

Jalal said : my brother beat one boy and blame me so teacher punish me as at the end the boy to blame me as he was scared from my brother.

Jodha said : oh Okay.

(saying this she get silent after few minutes).

Jalal said : what's your name.

Jodha said : my name is Jodha Singhnia and your Name.

Jalal said : nice name anyway myself Jalal Mohammed.

Jodha said : hmm nice.

(again they get silent after sometime Jodha teacher call her back so she left from there but from Jalal class some other students come out and saw her).

one boy said : wow what a girl she is so beautiful her skirt was to short isn't it.

Second boy said : yes but what was she doing with you Jalal.

third boy said : is she your girlfriend.

(Jalal was getting angry hearing there words but didn't say anything and ignore them after sometime period get over and he left from there to park and sit behind one tree but than he heard someone crying he looks around and find one girl crying so he goes to her side).

Jalal said : why are you crying little one.

(listening his words the girl looks at him and he get shocked to see Jodha there he wipe her tears hurriedly).

Jalal said : what's wrong why you are crying.

Jodha said : she...my ...sister...make
me ...fall... from ...stairs... look... my... foot... get... hurt... she... is ...bad very ...bad... I... hate ...her ...my foot... is... paining ...allot...and... she...throw ...my...lunch
...box...to...I..am... hungry...to...

(she show him her left leg which was bleeding one Little handkerchief were tie on it but it's soaked with blood now he to get angry on her sister but composing himself he give her his lunch box).

Jalal said : here eat food from my lunch box you will feel better.

(listening this Jodha wiped her tears).

Jodha said : but what will you eat than .

Jalal said : we can share this as I am sure a little girl like you will not eat whole lunch of mine right.

Jodha said : buy I don't know you.

Jalal said : so we can know each other by becoming friends what say as it will not be difficult we already know each other name isn't it.

Jodha said : okay so friends.

(saying this she forward her hand to shake with him and he shakes his hand with her).

Jalal said : so now we are friends anyway now eat this you are hungry right.

(than he forward his lunch box to her she was about to take it when she winch in pain as her hand was wounded to so he make a morsal and make her eat by his hands and she eat it after done with there lunch he get up and take out handkerchief from his pocket and tied on her leg after removing a soaked handkerchief from her leg).

Jalal said : can you walk or should I take you to your class.

Jodha said : I think I can manage thanks for lunch and your help.

Jalal said : come on your class is not far from my class let me help you.

(than he make her stand and by his support she walk slowly and soon they reach her class he make her sit inside her classroom where other students watch him).

Jodha said : you know everyone in my class.

Jalal said : no I don't know them but they know me.

(listening this she look at him confusingly).

Jodha said : what do you mean.

(listening this Jalal smiled than patted her cheeks softly).

Jalal said : nothing just take care of yourself see you soon.

(saying this he left from there leaving a very happy girl behind).

present

Jodha pov : how caring you were that to with a stranger but after knowing and becoming my friend you left me you didn't trust me why Jalal why you knew it I can never hurt anyone still you didn't trust me you knew about my sister nature but you believe on her words more than me why Jalal why what was my mistake I love Veer and soon I will tell him about you because secret are biggest enemy of love or any relation isn't it anyway i am happy that I have someone in my life now who love me.

(thinking about him she cried other side Jalal sitting on couch).

Jalal pov : why you did that with me Jodha how much i loved you cared for you and you you tried to hurt me you why just for once of you told me than I should have left you what was the need to hurt me I hate you from bottom of my heart Jodha I hate you but you know what I love Mehek more than. I hate you Jodha and soon I will tell her about me as I don't want to hid anything from her

(both of them thinking about each other and Started loving each other in present to unknown to there hate and true identity of each other what will happen when they will know who they are will they left each other or stay with each other and forget everything and keep loving each other).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wah wow...This is interesting Rashmi..
So their love is not love at 1st sight...They do know each other...their souls recognise them...Lovely...
The flashback part is very cute...Cute little Jo and boy jalal...
He was so caring...
Between Jo has sister?Ja has brother?(own or cousin)
I thought family rivalry is the reason between their hatred but it's not the only reason...
If there is no twist then it is not ur story Na?
Awesome story...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Wah wow...This is interesting Rashmi..

So their love is not love at 1st sight...They do know each other...their souls recognise them...Lovely...
The flashback part is very cute...Cute little Jo and boy jalal...
He was so caring...
Between Jo has sister?Ja has brother?(own or cousin)
I thought family rivalry is the reason between their hatred but it's not the only reason...
If there is no twist then it is not ur story Na?
Awesome story...

well you are outstanding dear yes it's true if in story there is no twist than that can't be my story dear and they are there cousin dear not there own as according to character sketch they are only son and daughter of there parents dear Anyway thanks for such Lovely beautiful comment dear you are the first one to comment to dear thanks once again.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wat an update dear
Superb chappy dear
So it is joja childhood love
Too good
Waiting for next update soon dear love it 😃
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Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Wat an update dear

Superb chappy dear
So it is joja childhood love
Too good
Waiting for next update soon dear love it😃

well yes they know each other from childhood dear and soon you all will know what are the reason that they hate each other dear And thanks for such a cute update and it's feel so great to know that you enjoy the update thanks dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 4
(here they were thinking about each other and other side in Jaipur in one palace A boy was drinking Wine and staring at one Pic when one Lady enter comes to that boy).

Lady said : what are you doing here Adham you should be stay in Mumbai keeping an eye on Jalal and you come here uff don't know what that Son of bitch doing there.

Adham said : he get her Ammijaan he again fell in love and you know what she is the same girl whom I want.

(listening this Maham Get shocked and in desperate voice).

Maham said : that means she is back to his Life no no that's not Possible.

Adham said : I am not Joking Ammijaan they met at the day when I lost the Race with her and now both of them are comfortable and here see this I order my men to keep an eye on Jalal here he send me this see this by looking at this Pic you will understand how close they come now.

(saying this he give her some Pic of Jodha Jalal in which they were dancing with each other and looking at them Maham sit on bed).

Maham said : oh god now everything is over we should Pack our bag and need to leave from here if she is back and he fell in love with her than it mean our game is over Adham she will not leave us in childhood to she hate us Remember she make us suffer and now she is young enough to destroy us after whatever we did Come on Adham get up Pack your Bag and let's go from here.

Adham said : I already Pack our Bags Ammijaan let's go now.

(they get up take there bag and started going out when Hamida Humayu saw them).

Humayu said : what is this where are you both going.

Maham said : woh we are going Shimla.

Hamida said : why so sudden Plan to go there is something wrong.

Adham said : actually We need to take care of our business there and I want to Be with Ammijaan so she is going with me We will be back soon .

Humayu said :hmm okay let me escort you to airport.

Maham said : no we will go by our self don't worry.

Hamida said : okay as your Wish.

(than Adham and Maham left from there Leaving Happy Hamida and confused Humayu Behind ).

Humayu Pov : what is wrong With them I myself handle there Business than why they left from here something is Fishy.

Hamida Pov : thank god this Black Fox and Her Bloody son Left from here now I can live in Peace I wish Jodha was here she would be so glad to know but never mind now she hate us oh god Please Make everything fine.

(thinking all this Both of them goes to there room).

Hamida said : when will Jalal come back.

Humayu said : after two Month Hamida why is there something wrong .

Hamida said : no nothing just asking anyway do you want something.

Humayu said : no I don't want anything.

(listening this She Just Nodded there head and about to go when Humayu grab her hand).

Humayu said : don't you think you should give sometime to your Husband Hamida I mean now we are alone Maham is gone Adham and Jalal is not here just you and me in this big home we should enjoy our time here what say.

Hamida said : I think you lost your Mind you are getting old and thinking about Romance.

Humayu said : Oh madam if you think you are old than it's fine but don't call me Old as I am still young Jaan I can still Make other Ladies fall for my Looks.

Hamida said : okay okay I get it now tell me what you want.

Humayu said : you I want you now.

(saying this He kissed on her Collar bone and than take her in his arms make her lay on bed).

Huamyu said : thank you Hamida for giving me Such nice gift our Son Jalal who love us like hell thank you for coming in my life and making my life fill with love and care I can never thank you for what you did for me I love you Hamida and you know if I ever die what will be my last wish.

Hmida said :P lease don't talk about Death I can't Imagine My Life without you.

Humayu said : let me Finish Hamida My Last wish will Be to see you or Die in Your Arms.

(Saying this he hug her and than both of them get lost in each other love and slept while and next morning Other Side in Another Place of Jaipur in One Home one Men Remove the curtains from Window and goes to bed side where one lady was sleeping covering her head with Blanket so the Men sit on besides her).

Men said : come on love wake up it's Morning now.

Lady said : Please Prithvi let Me Sleep now I am, tired whole Night you didn't let me sleep and Now I don't want to get up.

Prithvi Said : come on Gaytri I need to go office Just go and freshen up as today I made Breakfast for us once you Eat that with me than you can sleep Peacefully you Know Right I never have breakfast without you so please just for me get up and Let me see my Beautiful wife face which you are hiding by Blanket.

(Listening this She remove the Blanket from her face and Look at her husband).

Gaytri Said : My head is Paining Prithvi.

(listening this he started Massaging her head).

Prithvi said : Don't worry Love I will Massage your Head and after that go freshen up and I will make Coffee for you Okay.

Gaytri said : how sweet My Hubby you are best Husband in the world.

(listening this he smiled).

Prithvi said : thanks for acknowledging Loved anyway now get up and freshen up breakfast is ready and I am sure you will love to eat My hand Make Breakfast .

(he told her before to But that time she was not awake so she didn't knew that he Make Breakfast but now Listening again).

Gaytri said : you Make Breakfast Why it was My Work to do.

Prithvi said ; come on love I didn't let you sleep whole night so I knew you will be tired so I make it what's so shocking in this and it's not the first time I make breakfast right.

Gaytri said : but it's my Job to Do ladies should do theses house chores Hubby.

Prithvi said ; in which book it's written love that husband don't need to these House chores Love anyway if Wife Can Make breakfast for there husband Daily than what wrong will happen if one time Husband Make Breakfast for his wife Love anyway leave all this and freshen up or do you need my help than you I am ready to accompany you in Bathroom Love.

(listening this She Just shook her head in disbelief and get up from bed but listening his last words she throw Pillow at him and run inside the Bathroom blushing heavily Leaving Laughing Husband Behind and in the same home other room one girl was staring at one Pic).

Girl Pov : it's so long time I saw you Jalal and do I need to tell how much i missed you but just because of That Jodha I let you go away from me Because I wanted you and if you can't be mine than I will not let you become someone else Jalal and Jodha uff how much I hate her how Many times I tried to kill her but she never mind after Long time she will comeback I don't even know How She looks but now she will die by my hands for sure I will kill her than I will get you.

(she was lost in her thoughts when One Lady enter the room).

Lady said : what is this Sukanya you still not ready you need to get up you need to go Office with Prithvi get up now.

Sukanya Said : I am up Mom but do you know when she will comeback.

Menka said : no I don't know but Maybe After two months why.

Sukanya Said : just asking I mean she is my Sister and she is coming back after so much long time don't you think she deserve special welcome from me Mom.

(listening this Menka Smirk and Nodded her head than Sukanya left to get ready after half hour She come downstairs where Prithvi Gaytri were having Breakfast she goes to them with Menka).

Sukanya Said : good Morning Mama Mami.

(both of them Wish her back).

Prithvi said ; so ready to Join office with me.

Sukanya said : yes Mama after all I need to understand how you work as at the end I will be the one who will handle all this as Jodha is not interested in Business Right.

(Listening this Gaytri Glare at Sukanya while Prithvi smiled fakely but didn't said Anything after sometime everyone done with breakfast so Prithvi get up Kissed on Gaytri Forehead anbd Left from there with Sukanya and in car).

Prithvi Pov : just for once I get solid proof against you and My Bloody sister than I will mke you rot in hell forget about My Business Sukanya you will cry for drop of water for what you and your Mother did with my Daughter.

(thinking this he sigh heavily and look outside when his cell ring he Pick the call).

Prithvi said : hello Princess good morning and tell me how are you.

Jodha said : good Morning Dad I am fine you say.

Prithvi said ; I have such a caring beautiful Loving wife with me than how will I be Princess.

Jodha said : perfectly fine anyway Dad I call you to tell you that...Um Hmm I ... that I I I Fell in Love ...Dad...

(listening This Prithvi get so much happy).

Prithvi Pov : thank god Now she have someone in her life I thought after Heartbroken by Jalal She will never trust anyone forget about Loving someone but now she did.

Prithvi said : glad to know Princess but who is he and when you will let us Meet him Princess and I want to know everything in Detail Princess when you meet him how you fell in love with him everything.

Jodha said ; his Name is Veer And soon you will meet him dad and...Met him the day I won the Race with Adham Dad and you know we ...

(calmly she told everything in Detail to Her Dad Making him very happy after sometime He reach his office So he come out of car).

Prithvi said ; I am so happy to know about this Anyway take care and be careful to okay now I will talk later With you bye.

Jodha said : okay dad Bye Love you.

(saying this she cut the Call Prithvi Enter his office and soon get busy in work Sukanya to started Seeing everything and get busy in work other Side Jodha get Ready and Make breakfast and arrange them on table soon Salima Rukaiya come out of there room and started having breakfast).

Jodha said : I need to tell you something Guys I yesterday I met Veer and you know we both goes out in night and...

(she told them everything to making them happy they both get up from chairs and hug her tightly).

Salima Said : I am so happy for you.

Rukaiya said : but I am angry why didn't you told us we accompany you in Night to.

Jodha said : it was sudden Plan and you both were slept so I didn't wanted to disturb you guys.

Rukaiya said : oh okay Fine now Let's have Breakfast and yes Careful with him as you both are so fast just in second Meeting you both confess and kiss each other to it's really so much early isn't it.

Salima said : come on leave it I am happy that now you have someone Else to whom you love.

(listening this everyone nodded there head and started having breakfast).

Rukaiya Pov : Veer Singh hmm not Bad you are very fast hop you will not break her heart like that Jalal did I hate that guy but now I need to check on you what if you are Playing with Her.

Salima Pov : thank god for Making my friend happy after such a Long time I am seeing her this Much happy I wish she always stay happy like this.

(after sometime they were done with Breakfast so they left for college other Side Jalal Abdul Mirza to get in there car to reach college and on the Way).

Jalal Said : I guys I need to tell you both something.

Mirza said ; go on we are listening.

Jalal Said : I I confess my love to Mehek.

(listening this Abdul stop the car with Jerk).

Abdul said : really but when you did this and how did this and more ever where you did this.

Jalal said : yesterday night I met her and take her out on My Bike we reach one club and...

(he told them everything and Listening this Abdul Hugged him while Mirza smirk).

Mirza said : hhmm not Bad Just yesterday evening you were so shy that you didn't even let us tell her that she is your love interest and in night you become so bold that you not only tell her about your in fact kiss her to wow would you like to tell us what you eaten on dinner time Dude.

(Listening this Jalal glare at Mirza but than smiled slightly and seeing his reaction Mirza Abdul get happy soon Abdul again started Driving Car and within half hour they reach College).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow wow totally awesome update dear
Thanks for pm dear and
Waiting for next update soon dear 😃
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Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Wow wow totally awesome update dear

Thanks for pm dear and
Waiting for next update soon dear😃

glad you like it dear and don't worry I will update soon and thanks for sweet comment dear.
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Originally posted by: divyaJA

Vry nice update...😊

thanks for comment it's great to know you like the update dear.

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