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Posted: 7 years ago
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Finally back ith new chapter..

Bhool chuuk maaf doston...

Chapter 4 :

Kya hua Maan ... batao na mujhe...Adi called me .. He told me that u are very upset.. Y r u drinking this much...

Adi.. Why the hell did u call her...

Aditya was so angry at his pig headed friend. Off course he called Geet this time instead of Sam. Even if Maan's actual intention of dating Geet were not the purest but he did care for her now, even liked her if not loved her. He knew that Maan was under tremendous guilt but he could not pin point it. He was 100 % sure that it was related to Geet . So after Maan stopped listening to him he called Geet, even went and picked her up and brought her here.

Adi : toh kisko bulata.. Do u think I don't know what is happening. There is something related to her which is eating u alive..so its better u 2 sort it out.. I don't want a repeat of how u were with ur ex..

With his ex?

Yes Miss Geet.. What did u think that u were the only one... I had a much deeper emotional connect with my ex.. U r nothing as compared to ..

Maan felt a sharp stinging slap on is face..

Aditya: enough I am going out for night.. Call me Geet if u need me.. And Maan I hope u have not lost that much sense to forget...

How can u say that Maan...after what we have shared..

Aisa kya special share kiya hai humne haan.. Don't forget that u were a virgin , I was not..

Maan did not know why he said that. He only knew that he had to push her off, hurt her so that she leaves him and finds someone who deserves her and love her.

I know that.. But I was not talking about that.. I was talking about the night when I had my periods and u took care of me..i am in much more pain now

Are u Ok.. Is ur date near.. Does your back hurt.. Its hurting u too much right.. Yes yes that's why u r crying.. Wait I have ur massage oil... I brought it for future use..

Geet cried on seeing this. What did he wanted to prove that he did not love her even after showing this much care.

Listen to me Maan... hum theek hai

No No.. Stop crying .. I will take away all ur pain bachcha..He then brought her to his bed ... made her lie down as a delicate doll.. Then he took off her t-shirt.. Made her turn around and started applying oil...Geet did not stop him at all. The Maan lovingly rubbed her back.

Aur kahi dard ho raha hai bachcha..

Mere dil mei Maan.. Bolo na kya hua.. It kills me to see u like this..

Don't care for me so much Geet.. I am a very bad person.. If u would only know..u would hate me..

Theek hai mat batao.. U think that I will hate u after listening...then listen I hate u more now because u r being stupid.. U want to drink right .. Then take this .. Piyo jitna peena hai.. I am going..

Kaise jaogi ghar..

I will walk..

This area is bad.. I will call adi..

No need ... tumhe kya.. I am not a special person in ur life right.. Main maru jiyu.. Raaste mei koi mera rape..

Stop it.. How can u say that... do u even understand what are u saying..

No matter what u say.. I am nt going to stay here a second more..

Ruk jao bachcha.. Mat jao.. If something happens to you.. I will die with guilt... I like u a lot..

He then went ahead and hugged her. Geet hugged him back crying. You hurt me a lot Maan.

What do u want me to do Geet.. But please don't ask me the reason why I was drinking.. I don't deserve anything good Geet.. U should leave me and go.. Bahut bura hu .. I am a very bad person..

No u r nt.. Its for me to decide what I think abt u.. I don't care about ur ex

Geet had to do something fast to make Maan calm. Come Maan sit with me. She slowly started caressing his face and hair. Ok I will not ask about the reason Maan.. But please I beg u.. Don't shut me out...She then took his hands and kept over her heart.. Bahut dard hota hai Maan... Tumhe pata bhi hai ki kitna pyaar hai mujhe tumse... I love u so much.. Itna pyaar ki mujhe khud soch ke darr lagta hai..

Mat karo mujhse pyaar.. I don't deserve it.. A mean bas***d like me does nt deserve it..

Its for me to decide.. Come here.. Kiss me..

It was Geet who initiated the kiss. And Maan kissed her back taking her completely in her arms.. And then she made love to Maan again and again and Maan kep murmuring Sorry

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When Adi returned after 2 hrs, he thought of calling Geet to check if she had reached home safely but then he saw the time and decided against it.He slightly opened Maan's room and saw a figure sleeping in the dark, he then thought of calling Geet in the morning. Adi thoughts took him to evening, when he and Anni di had finally cracked the code for Maan's new found care for Geet.

Adi: Are u sure Di.. He is going out with Geet to make Sam jealous

Anni: I think so Adi.. But I think he is not very proud of himself abt that... I have seen how his eyes fill up with guilt whenever he sees Geet .. I will also discuss this with Sam..

Just then Adi saw Maan entering the house with a bottle of alcohol..

Adi: I need to call and talk with someone too di..

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Precap:

Geet: Stay in ur limits Sam.. how dare u slap Maan..

Sam : Yeah not me.. it u who shud slap him


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice you've updated this.. after a really long time. Nice update and surprising actually.. Geet knows abt Maan's ex, and is still ok with it. Maan is delirious... doesn't know why he is still with Geet yet wants to be with her, although I'm finding it difficult to digest him addressing Geet as "Baccha.
Pls update this and don't discontinue it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

Nice you've updated this.. after a really long time. Nice update and surprising actually.. Geet knows abt Maan's ex, and is still ok with it. Maan is delirious... doesn't know why he is still with Geet yet wants to be with her, although I'm finding it difficult to digest him addressing Geet as "Baccha.

Pls update this and don't discontinue it..


Thnx.. i will not discontinue it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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the turn of events was not great as Maan really needs to clear his head and emotions.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kkiran

the turn of events was not great as Maan really needs to clear his head and emotions.


that he does
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dear
Liked it !!
Maan is muddled up with his thoughts and is feeling guilty for using Geet just to make Sam feel jealous. Geet likes him and doesn't want him to judge thyself. Hope he clears his emotions and thoughts. I believe it's time for Maan to choose what he want from his life coming out from his guilt trip.
Thanks for the pm!
Hope u will not discontinue this FF.
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome back now plzz update more maan is in guilt for using teeth to make Sam jealous so much he wants geet to hate him but Gert love for maan is so much that she can never hate him she consoles him and both make love to each other Annie is sure that masn is using geet to make Sam jealous and is guilty about it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks 4 da pm! awesome update! well written! Maan feels guilty for using Geet! Adi brought Geet there! Geet knows Maan cares 4 her! Maaneet get intimate again. update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Liked it !!
Maan is muddled up with his thoughts and is feeling guilty for using Geet just to make Sam feel jealous. Geet likes him and doesn't want him to judge thyself. Hope he clears his emotions and thoughts. I believe it's time for Maan to choose what he want from his life coming out from his guilt trip.
Thanks for the pm!
Hope u will not discontinue this FF.
:))



No I plan to finish it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Welcome back now plzz update more maan is in guilt for using teeth to make Sam jealous so much he wants geet to hate him but Gert love for maan is so much that she can never hate him she consoles him and both make love to each other Annie is sure that masn is using geet to make Sam jealous and is guilty about it



Thnx for ur comment

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