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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

So he still has one month time aa Jo also agrees

N he is sure he will make her fall in love
Loved it
Post soon

well I thought to make him have sometime to take his action so here it is and he is confident about his decision dear anyway thanks for Lovely comment dear and I will try to update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

What i feel is jo will fall in love with ja but will not realize it or show in his presence but as per his promise he will go away from her life and then she will start missing him badly and pursue him😉

well you are really very fast to thought about climax dear but this type of story I read it before so I don't want to take in that way dear so there will be twist ad I love twist anyway thanks for such wonderful sweet comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sranjani

After a long time

Fantastic update
Nice deal

yes after long time I updated as I was feeling very much better now so thought to update for you all guys and I am glad to know you like it dear anyway thanks for comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
U updated Rashmi..
Hope u r fine dear..
Ur health is good Na?

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Update dear...
Jalal is live torturing Jodha...ha ha...
Jo knows that he Madly loves her but don't know y her?...I hope in this one month duration she will come to know...
The morning struggle of Jodha and Ja think of about Dreaming is hilarious...Lovely...
Jalal's offer of this deal is quite interesting...
Now waiting for Jalal's steps to make Jo fall in love...He have to work hard...
Thanks for pm dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

U updated Rashmi..

Hope u r fine dear..
Ur health is good Na?

well yes I updated as I am very much fine now dear thanks for asking dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Nice Update dear...

Jalal is live torturing Jodha...ha ha...
Jo knows that he Madly loves her but don't know y her?...I hope in this one month duration she will come to know...
The morning struggle of Jodha and Ja think of about Dreaming is hilarious...Lovely...
Jalal's offer of this deal is quite interesting...
Now waiting for Jalal's steps to make Jo fall in love...He have to work hard...
Thanks for pm dear...

well it's great to know you all like and enjoy the update and you all will soon know how he will take his action and he will get success or not and thanks for such a awesome lovely comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Vry Nice chptr..😊

glad you like it dear and thanks for comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful chapter... please try to update soon
I would love to read the story further. ..
Thanks for the beautiful story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 21
(After Listening this song Jalal started smiling .and after sometime he stop the car near one cafe than come out of car and goes to her side open her side of door and Make her come out than both of them enter inside the Cafe and Jalal than Make her sit than order food for both of them and when Waiter after serving them Left Jalal Motion her to eat and she just started eating without saying anything after sometime Jalal in calm yet nervous voice).

Jalal said : I fell in love with you because of your innocence Kitten, because of your strong yet Caring nature Kitten... and top of that you are Beauty with innocence... you Know Kitten the Day I saw you I taken a Decision to Help Dad in Business... as I was bore with lot of Girlfriend but After Seeing you I...I don't know how and why I change My Decision Kitten ...you did something in those Five Minutes in Me I never I felt something very strong Regarding any girl but you you just don't know... what was that but later I knew that you stolen my heart I know I know I already told you... all this but but you never think about all this you Know Kitten ... Just a thought to be away from you... or Not be able to see you, make me dead Kitten. how I spend those Bloody 3 years... without you only I know Kitten. it was Like I am living without soul ,as there is no Life no aim I just want to see you, stay with you. but those years make me ruthless and... Bad. but I never ...knew that when I will see you I ...will act like jerk. but again you run away and top of that My Mom Punish me by making me arrest and disowning me .I live three months without luxury I spend two ...weeks in lock up . And that time ...I understand how the Person feel, when his life ...started controlling by others and I promised myself, that... I will never force you again for anything .but again you come in front of me... after one Month I tried to ignore you .but again I ...lost myself and thought ignoring you will not solve my Problem ,at least I need to apologize to you so after one week I ask forgiveness ...from you. and started avoiding you again after listening... your point of view about me as, I don't want to make you uncomfortable in my Presence .but again after one month listening... your view about me I lost my Mind. I mean come on Kitten I did everything I can do to make you comfortable. ...but you don't give shit about me. and I again force you... but trust me Kitten i didn't want to, I just just... want to be with you... I can't live without you Kitten... just try to give me chance Kitten ...I promise you will not Regret this.

(listening All this Jodha Just look at him she didn't knew what to say or do she get loss of words).

Jalal said : after one month to if you didn't like me than ...I will Keep My Promise I will not bother you... but I will never have anyone in my Life Kitten... I will never let anyone to be with me...

(listening this Jodha expression change from shocked to Horror .And seeing her Expression Jalal understood what she is thinking, so he grab her hands. Lightly than kiss them very softly).

Jalal said : don't worry I.. I ..I...

(he never wanted to think about all this but gulping his Saliva he Look at her than Nervously).

Jalal Said : you can have anyone like I said I will not bother you so I mean it Kitten... I know I act like a Possessive Jerk ...and a Bloody psycho but trust me...I will never Destroy your happiness ...if you find your Love with someone else... than I will let you go it's it's my Promise Kitten...

(only he know how Much his heart was crying. while saying those words he was having an urge to huge her tightly, Kiss her senselessly and tell her. no no he will never let her go ,she have to be his he can't be away from her. but he know he want to see her happy .he know he can't act as selfish person again .now more than his desire and wish he care about her. he love her and Love can't be selfish .so he just compose himself ,and just look at her .who was now having tears in her eyes ,and it's make him scared .he thought he again hurt her ,so he wipe those tears and goes to her side).

Jalal Said : what happen Kitten did I hurt you...if I did than I am sorry Kitten I am sorry.

(listening everything from him Jodha heart to get sad. if only she can love him back so maybe he will not in Pain. right now she Didn't have Parents but She Have Best Friends and Bhai Bhabhi. who always love her. Just a thought to be away from them Make her scared beyond Limit when Jalal Kidnapped her three times she was just scared because of this Reason only as He Often tell her that he will not let her see or meet them when First time Jalal force her to stay away from Her friends she just cried because she never imagine her Life without Ajay silly act Siya Smart Advice And Nisha Caring heart Ankit Sweet Help she can't imagine to live Without Sid Bhai And Sonal Bhabhi she don't wish to live if she don't have them because she loves them more than themselves and now seeing him confessing her love to her and listening he is ready to let her be away when he don't want to make her cry for him as she know how difficult it is to live without them whom you love and Now Listening his Apologize that to fort the thing he didn't do make her Lost her Mind And Hugged him Tightly).

Jodha said : wh...y ...why ...you ...love...me ...this ...much ...why ...wh...en...when... you... know ...I...just...gi.v..e..give...you...pain...why...you...love... me ...this...mu...ch...much...

(shock would be an understatement for Jalal first seeing her crying make him scared but than her sudden hug make him lot his mind than listening her words Jalal get very much confuse but than composing himself her rub her back after ten minutes she get calm than he break the hug his Shirt was now wet because of Tears but he don't care and make her drink Water after sometime).

Jodha said : I Lost My Parents when I was little... you know I was there Princess ...yes we are Middle class People... but they fulfill My Every wish like other Parents...and when I lost them... I thought there is nothing left in my life...I didn't spoke to anyone didn't go out...I started ignoring everyone... but than Sid Bhai Make Me come out of my Pain ...I was not the only one to loss them he to loss his Ideal his hero his Peace...But he compose himself for me ...and I like a fool was crying for those who left me... I wasted my Three Months for those who left the world... to enjoy in heaven Leaving there two little children... behind with nothing except ...one house and some Money...No one to care for us no one to help us...but Bhai did everything to make me happy ...he started doing Part Time Job in Cafe with his studies ...he did so much hard work to protect me or fulfill my wish... and I to tried to calm him or lessen his Pain ...avoided celebrating Birthday or Festival ...that time we Met Shiv Uncle he help us... and because of him we started becoming normal...Bhai get one More Ideal and I get one Best friend... and in school I get Siya Ajay Nisha as best friend... to and My world start with them doing studies ...and Spending time with them was... the only thing I ever did...soon one more Member come in our Life And that was Sonal bhabhi our family become complete...I can never think to live without them ...you Know when you Kidnapped me and told me... I should stay away from My friends ...you will not let me see them or meet them... I thought you I will die as I never think about a life ...where my friends and My Bhai Bhabhi are not there...and now listening your words are making me feel guilty ...that I unknowingly Making your Family and Friends suffer ...and More than that I am making you suffer ...tell me is there any mother live who will be stay happy... after disowning her son or making him arrest by police ...tell me is there any friend born ...who can see there friend sad or in pain... tell me is there any parents live in this world ...who can see there only son alone and in pain...you are ready to let me move on... if I don't love you or find someone else ...Right but you are not ready to move on yourself why...you said you can't live without me ...tell me before seeing me were not you living your life peacefully... were not you had aim in your life...you yourself told me you were going to help your dad in business... the day you saw me than what was the next plan of yours... after helping him and taking his burden on your shoulders ...were not you than find someone in your life... or maybe you get married to a girl who choose by your Parents ...than what change now why can't you forget me ...do you have any idea how much pain you are giving to your Parents and friends By all this...you told me your Condition Right than I have one condition to...if I didn't love you back in one Month... than you will forget me and move on in your Life...if you agree with this than I agree with this Deal... or else I am going Back to my Home...

(Listening her Words Jalal get shocked and get lost in his thought's).

Jalal Pov : how caring and Pure heart you Are kitten My Pain and My Loved ones Pain Matter to you ...you think about me and them you care about me and them uff how Right you are I hurt my Parents and Friends to by my Act seeing me in Pain they suffer to I need to apologize to them to I don't have any right to Make them Suffer.

(thinking All this Jalal after sometime in Calm voice).

Jalal said : Okay I agree with your Condition Kitten. Now tell me what would you like to do, is there any Plan you had today.

Jodha said : No I don't have any Plan for today you say.

Jalal Said : if you don't have any plan than let's go for Movie what say.

Jodha said : hmm okay.

(than he Pay the Bill and take her hand in his than goes out of the cafe make her sit inside the car and goes to his side and started driving after sitting inside and to Start Conversation with her).

Jalal said : what you like to Do often Kitten.

Jdha said : Not Much as I never Plan to do anything... it's always My friend who Plan to do something ...and I just Participate with them but I I Love to dance... or Play guitar sometime...Painting and I have special interest in Football Match ...because of Ajay he Love to Play and I love to watch ...and I I I love to Do Bike Racing that's all you say...

(listening her interest Jalal Smiled but inside he was getting jealous Because of Ajay).

Jalal Pov : everywhere this Ajay Football Match Bike Race this all like by Ajay and her to ufff there is nothing which she Like to do and Ajay don't.

(but than he compose himself and in calm voice).

Jalal said : well I love to Sing and Listen Music...hang out with friends... I to has interest in Football ...but it's very long since I play or Watch... you know I was Best Player in Football... I to love Bike Racing... but never Participate in that... Because Dad And Mom Don't like as... they always get worried for me... so I never did ...and apart from these things I love to cook... it's my Favrouite time Pass... you know in Past I often do experiment... to make new dishes... and Make My Friend and Parents to taste that...but after getting over with School I lost My interest in that... but few Months Back when I was Living like Middle class Person... I again started getting interest in that ...that's all I like to do.

Jodha said : cooking not bad I always Help Bhabhi or Bhai... they love my hand made food so my Friend...

Jalal said : hmm well you are really good cook Kitten and now add one more Person in your Admiring list Kitten...And That is Me as I enjoy your hand made food yesterday...Anyways tell me what you don't like to do.

Jodha said : well there are nothing much to Dislike but yes I hate... To smoke and Drink Alcohol and... those who drink and Smoke I hate them... I hate rude arrogant Rich People who always show off to others.

(listening this Jalal stop the Car with jerk. and started coughing and Jodha get worried. so she started Patting his Back. by Removing Seat belt from his Body. and than Pass him Bottle to drink Water).

Jodha said : are you okay.

(he drink water and than calm Down).

Jalal said : yes I am fine and sorry to make you worried Kitten.

Jodha said : no need to apologize it's fine.

(Again he started driving the car but this time he didn't spoke anything And keep silent).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago

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