Maaneet Farewell Party Event - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.3k

Views

61.1k

Users

53

Likes

4.1k

Frequent Posters

priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Priya : ab bdte hai hum apni ek aur kahani ke aur
ye kahani Prince ki
Sanju : sapno ki kahani
Kalpi : par sapno ki duniya aur haqiqat me kuch toh farq hota honga
Priya : ye mera sapna hai sch kaise ho sakta hai
sanju : kuch yaad aa rha hai kya
kalpi : yes we talking about maaneet dream wedding PROMO
priya : it's lovely na😳
sanju : super se upar tha😉
Kalpi : 😳
.
.
.
maan : geet
.
geet pass the file
.
geettt

Geet : yes sir
Maan : you come here for doing work
or seeing dream
.
geet : 😡
sir if your taunt completed
please tell me
why you shouting on me
maan : what you dreaming
geet : about my prince charming
Maan : what
Geet : kyun mein soch nhi sakti apne prince ke baare me
Maan : it's mean you thinking about me
Geet : you and prince
no match Sirrr
Maan : geett
Geet : dekha babji
ye kaise mujhe bulate hai
Maan : then how i call you
tell me
geet : like my prince
Maan : geet stop your prince puran
Geet : why
he is my prince
and i am his princess
next moment she is in his arms and he kissed her..

.
.
priya : let give maaneet break for private moments😉
sanju : tb tak read kriye
next story
Kalpi : MY PRINCE
Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#72


Geetu I'm so jealous of you yaar ..teri kismat toh bilkul Cinderella jaisi hai .. Pinky complained cutely to her best friend Geet who lost in her Prince ...

Soh toh hai . Geet touch her phone screen , admiring dreamily to the picture , who is the center of her world Mr Maan Singh Khurana the hottest guy of Delhi University.

he is so perfect ...so handsome sexy... Pinky stop as Geet glared at her ...

aare i was praising him after all he will be my jiju ... Geet blused at this ' married to Maan her only dream '

par kab tak tu aase unke phiche rahegi...apni dil ki baat baatati kyun nehi ... Geet averted her eyes from her friends as she lied ..


aa bohot jald bata dungi ...but in truth she already confessed to him ..That too one year ago but to her bad luck he rejected her saying Grow Up ...
why he thinks that I'm just a child ...I finished college and soon will be in University. Let's see Mr Perfectionist how you reject me? '

waise Geet its very bad that when we will enter university Maan will be gone as his studies gonna end

. hmm . Geet replied with gloomy face.

we can't see him then na ...uffo main toh bhul hi gayi he is giving you tuition so you will always see him

nehi yaar exam is over so my tuition also over . Aur waise bhi maine suna hai he will join family business. He will become busy so no tuition . thinking about this she became more sad ...

koyi nehi Cinderella at the end Prince will be with you


no escape on this ... both laughed at their remark ...

Cinderella is she ? Geet thought as Pinky left ...


Pinky her only friend she always called her Cinderella ...at first she doesn't like it but now she doesn't mind...Why would she after all her life seems like Cinderella too ...A wicked step mother and Sister , a sweet father who stay most times out of country and her Prince charming Maan .

Thinking about him always makes her feel light. From childhood whenever she is sad as her step mother scold her or hit her she would just think about him and feels like , her all pain is gone . He has that power over her . Unknowingly a mere crush of her became a deep love and saviour of her life. She just waits for the moment when he will come to get her free from this cruel family.


its raining now and I'm missing you more . It's not new, whenever it rains I only thinks of you My Prince. I remembered how last year we ate ice cream in rain...I want to do it again. .

She closed her dairy thinking about that day. She literary forced him to get her a ice cream and at the end they ate together although Maan was totally angry at her guts still its make her smile as its a precious memory for her . She sighs feeling tried and slept hugging her pillow tightly.




. Maan just come ..Or else i will surely throw this idiot to road . Rohan told him from other side of phone ..Maan can sense that he is very pissed ...so making him more irritates he said causally...

Why ask, do whatever you want

. Maan yaar please come na . Only you can handle her... Please I beg you ... Rohan literary cried . He smiled imagining his friend's condition

OK relax just wait a little im coming .saying he hung up the phone ...Shaking her head he went to get ready ...


Where? Maan asked as he spot Rohan who looking really pissed...

There rohan point a corner of the bar where their friend drinking continuously ...He went there taking long step ...Snatch the glass

stop it ...time to go home ..Get up

nooo mujhe pina hai ..pina hai ..pina hai ... Lizza stubbornly argued but Maan didn't pay attention and picked her her on his shoulder ...

. oh she is so heavy man . shutting the car door , both took a sigh of relief .

Why this drama again ... he asked as he start driving ...

. wohi purana matter break up .

isn't it second time in this month .. he said shaking his head.


pata nehi koyi dhang ka ladka kyun nehi dhoond thi woh ...

mujhe toh yeh samaj mein nehi aata woh sarre gadha kaun hai jo iss chaudal ko date karne chala aata

shut up man. She is our friend..thori toh respect de ..

Respect my foot ...bas subha ki intezar hai dekhna main isski kya haal karti hoon ...



Thank you guys ... Lizza said to the angry duo as they are shooting dragger at her direction ..


.. don't get tried ..I mean don't guys get tired dating you ...


ah that's mean ... she throw the bottle which hit Rohan head making him screamed in pain ... Chaudal kahi ki mera saar phor diya ...

serve you right ...

waise Rohan is not wrong ...I also wonder who are those idiots

. ahh I'm going ... she gets up getting irritate at their teasing ...and as expected both went to her saying sorry


All looked at them with admiration... some with jealousy ...Maan ,Rohan and Lizzi are best friend from school its not hidden from anyone ... their bonding is too strong to break ..one can do anything for others that's why people love also envy their friendship many tried to join this trio but no they don't like to include fourth person in their friendship... For Maan they are his family , he trust them like his own people . But the big problem of their friendship is that they sometimes forget to maintain boundaries between friendship and other things which is equally important to their life ...



Today lunch my treat ...

wow Maan you are so nice man ... Rohan about to keep his money back when Maan stop him ..

oh hello I didn't say I will pay yours ..its only for my beautiful friend Lizy ... Lizza almost chocked hearing word beautiful ...she narrowed her eyes to him ...

shoot it Mr Khurana ...

what? Maan asked acting innocent ...

you never called me beautiful unless you facing some problem ...say better say it , yet don't expect me too agree though ... she took a sip of her drinks lazily ...

Liz please help me ... Maan knows showing attitude won't work so he literary begged her to help him ...

Pari is here ... three of them looked at the direction where a cute chashmish girl is waving at Maan who trying best to ignore it ...

Pari likes Maan and it is not a secret to anyone ...she always follow him or say stalk him ...he already told no but no use , now its getting hell irritating for him ..so from last month he always sent Lizza to handle this matter but he doesn't know how his friend actually handle that girl ..he only happy that whenever Lizza went to talk to Pari , she would vanish for some days and that's a big relief for him .

I can't listen to her love chant again ..please Liz do something ...

its your problem what can I do ... she looked at his worried face ... OK fine ...

his sigh in relief ... thank u yaar ..you are best ...

I know just don't thank me yet ... she makes a thought full face ... I heard your uncle gifted a BMW ..I want that ...

what ? ... both Rohan and Maan screamed ...

calm down just for riding ..hmm one month what say ...

over my dead body .its my favourite...

15 days

nope ...

fine then handle that stupid girl I'm going ... she was about to get up but Maan held her hand ...

3 days ...

1 week or I'm out

OK fine go ... she smiled and went , Maan keep glaring at her back ...



Aare Geet bete kittne dino baad aayi hai app ... Dadima hugged Geet as soon as she saw her ... missed you beta ...exam kya khatam ho gayi app toh hume bhul hi gayi ...

aasa nehi hai Dadima just was busy ... Geet said guilty... for past one year she came there ...to get tuition from Maan .. Dadima liked her a lot not just her , whole family like her and treat her nicely ..she feels peace whenever she came here ...the love which she never got from her family she got from here .

ha busy ka excuse ...hume pata hai app yehi kahenge ...khair choriye ...kaise hai app ...? kitne patle ho gaye hai .. exam ke tension main thik se nehi khaya hai na ...

Dadima scolded her in which she smiled , she so missed this care but what can she do ...Her so called mother didn't let her come even her father is out of town , so that woman can do at her wish .

ap bathiye hum abhi apke liye kuch laate hai ...

no Dadima I'm full ... but she is already gone to kitchen ...

sighing she got up ...went to upstair to go to Aniee's room ...as she was passing Maan's room thought to look at it ...She open the door but her bad luck its empty ...

Mr Prince still not back ...must be with his friend ...

she made a sad face .. She doesn't jealous of his friends because she doesn't want just a friend of him but more ...' he loves his friends so dearly then how much he will love his partner ' this thought always make her smile ...


She open her bag and took out a envelope , kept it on his table . Just then she saw a watch ...she picks it smiling . Its his Grandfather's watch very old but still Maan wear it .. He always said its his lucky charm . Maan shared that to her when one day she hide it to irritate him ... she was not aware of its importance then but now she knows what this watch mean to him ...



wow Geetu we did it ...hum dono phir ek sath ekhi university main ... Pinky is excited but her friend is busy searching someone ...

ah Mr Prince you looking for him hai na ... she nodded disappointed not finding ... ... Geetu he done with his study why he would come now ...

i know but he still hang out with his friends in canteen ...I heard today he will join business officially so may be he would come to meet them ...

she looked at whole canteen but trace of Maan .. sadly she turned to go when saw Maan coming toward her ...She smiled ...He stop before her.

I want to talk to you ... ...she blinked for sometime ' is he really talking to me ? ' that's first as he never talk or give interest to others , than her friends ...all were looking awed to the scene ...He held her hand

let's go...'I must be dreaming ...Finally Prince comes for Cinderella ' she blushed at this thought ..but to her surprise someone took his hand way ...

There is no time for modesty ... its Lizza his friend said pulling him toward her ...she was so in Maan zone that didn't notice his friends are also with him ...

no Lizza its not right , people are here , I will ask her alon... but before Maan complete she asked or rather accused

where is Maan's watch ? Give it now ... Geet looked confused don't getting her ..
what watch ? ...

oh please don't act innocent ... Lizza shouted scaring her...


Do you know how much that watch mean to him ...? how can you know ? girl like you just brainless ... just know to irritate people ... this make her blood boil ...

i m quiet that doesn't mean I m here to listen your nonsense ...I really don't know about your watch Maan ... she lastly told him ...He looks at her for sometime...

Geet you know its really not funny ..last time you did I got it but now just tell me did you saw it somewhere...I mean keep it by mistake ...

I know how its important for you ...I would never do it ... she told him honestly ..

cut the crap Geet ..last day I saw you coming out of Maan's room ... she remembered when she was about to come out if his room , she bumped to Lizza ...

yes I went there but I didn't ...I mean why I would do that .. ...

Because you crazy for Maan ...you want his attention ...when he not giving you that , now you using this cheap trick ... Geet shocked for Maan too ...both didn't get how Lizza knows that ...

Maan clearly rejected you last year but no you still hanging up in him ... Geet looked at Maan as accusing him ...

' didn't he tell me that he won't tell it to anyone as people will tease me , make fun of me ' that is also a reason why she still loves him , as he cares for her reputation even he rejects her...

and this dairy isn't it yours ... Lizza throw it on floor ...

this diary clearly said how much you obsessed to him

..when she bumped to Lizza that day her dairy fall from her bag and Lizza took it ... All people looked at her with disgust ...

Liz stop now enough ... Maan came to her ... look Geet ...

do you also think I stole your watch ?she asked as a small tear fall from her eyes ...she doesn't care what others think ...just his opinion matter ...

do you think I can do that ? do you think I can hurt you ?

' he can't think so cheap of me .. he knows me for one year now ...we are closer than before ..may be he never said he likes me but I know he does ...I can feel it in his small gesture ..in his care even in his anger ..' but to her surprise he kept mum ...

Geet that watch ...

yes or no Maan ... still no answer ...her eyes wet up again at his silence ...people start whispering bad about her ...

Stop this melodrama Geet ...

Liz stop I'm talking ... he glared his friend

I didn't take your watch Maan if you want you can search my bag ...

Maan's phone ring and he went to take it ...there Rohan come forward and took her bag but find nothing ...

it's not here ...

then must be in her home ... Lizza glared as if ready to hit her ...

can you two stop itMaan at his friends as he comes back ... And Geet I'm so sorry ...

but she is already gone from there ...the last thing he remembered is her tears filled innocent eyes ...



Her phone rang for thousands time and as usual she didn't pick up .. she looked at the sky drown in cloud her life is same now ...Maan her Prince didn't trust her ...when there is no trust then how can she expect love ..no he is not her Prince and she is not some Cinderella ...she wipe her tears as she got up to went inside just then heard someone calling her ...

she turn around and saw Maan standing there . He came forward with slow step...she looked at his face clearly shown he couldnt sleep last night...But why?.. He stop before her ...looked at her pale face same as him ...

' what I have done? Why didn't I act first? I knew that Geet didn't take my watch...I know this girl she could never do something like this ...but still I acted so poorly ...Aniee mistakenly took my watch with her and their I blamed this innocent ...shame on you Maan ' he thought as his mistake and curse himself ..' no what done is done now I need to apologize ...at least she deserve it '

I'm sorry Geet ..Yesterday we behaved so wrongly...Actually it's all my mistake I should have stop my friends...They were really stupid back there...I'm truly sorry Geet ...

OK she only said this..Maan looked confused at her cold answer

what o...OK I mean did you truly forgiv...

I listened to your apology and your reason unlike yesterday where you guys didn't and accused me blindly...Maan close his eyes

ya I know ...and I'm really ashamed of that Geet please forgive us

if this you want then fine I forgive your friends for insulting me ... her words pinch his heart he nodded

and me ?...

I can't ... she answered simply ...

please Geet I know I did terrible mistake ..I promise I will make everything alright, even I went to university and announced that you are innocent, we were at fault ...

hmm you did your job then why you want my forgiveness...

because your forgiveness is important to me ...it's important to me to know we are good ..I won't be in peace for rest of my life if you don't forgive me ... just punish me Geet but please forgive me .

he is sincere Geet can feel it but what to to her silly heart ...the thought he chose to believe his friends and let them insult her killing her inside .

Fine let's go this way ...I won't forgive you this is your punishment...


6 years later


mummy please do something, how could Geet gets such good proposal...I'm elder to her shouldn't i get married first... Kia sadly told her mother who also looking sad ...

you know your father he would always do what he please. If it's in my hand I would never let this happen... She hugged her daughter...Comforting her...

don't worry these people just came, it's not that they agreed for the marriage... Kia jumped out of her mother's arm

oh ha that's right ...kaun ready hoga Geet se shaadi karne...She is such a rude girl they will surely reject her... both laughed at this ...they are sure with Geet's reputation in this neighborhood no one will ready to marry her .

Past 5 years she was with her grandparents in Dehradun ..last year she comes back home ... her step family still same but was glad that her father now stay at home as her bother handling business so devil duo don't get much chance to torture her ..But one thing they did well that is gossiping bad about her. Rude, arrogant, full of attitude with this people described her now , because with those her step family introduced her to everyone .. She doesn't care its people thinking ...whom she is close they loves her and knows how she is...

She looks at herself, ' why on an earth I get ready? another rejection on the way let's go Geet ' she thought without worry as her mother came to fetch her ...she doesn't care about marriage so another rejection won't hurt her too ...


so ...

So he repeated her still looking lost in her , and its making her uncomfortable...

She looked at him ...he is same no not same he is more handsome now ' stop it Geet ...stop your stupid crush ..' she scolds herself ...' I get over him right so just focus '

. I didn't expect you to come ..I mean Papa showed me your pic and I was sure you won't... she said as the silent and his look making something inside her.

Why wouldn't I come? His question took her of guard...because she doesn't know what to answer that ...isn't it logical the girl whom he insulted openly 6 years ago , now he is here to see her as her suitor ...

it doesn't make sense that's all ...

How are you? The only thing he asked after sometime ...the eyes damn...She can feel the pull in his intense look ...she blink for few times to stop the thing which she feeling now...

We both know the answer so let's go ...there is no use of keep our family waiting for nothing ... As said with small smile as she got up ...

She was about to enter when she heard him saying determinedly... I'm going to say yes for this marriage..

She stop at her track ...turned to face him...Again he is pulling her towards him ... ' it's still strong ...it didn't fade a bit ' her inner voice said her ...she ignore it ...

she wants to shout at him, give him many reason why he shouldn't do that ... I guess you don't know about me well Mr Khurana ...I have a horrible reputation all over...

. I'm keen to know that. he answered with a smile ...that smile for whom she can die ...his smile remind her of her Prince , her first love ...he is here ...' don't go there Geet '

You see people call me ..sarfira , pagal , rude ah not to forget lady killer ... She laughed then took a pause ... and a thief...

He didn't flinch a bit at this... ahh then it will be great to tame a lady killer what say? Everyone will wonder and praise my gut to marry a girl like you...Wouldn't that be great. He winked at her ...

She understand he us determined...So finally she asked why actually he wants this alliance... Why Maan ? . ...

He smiled coming more closer to her ...she tried to go back but he pulls her closer to him

.My name suits in your lips most ... i want to hear it often, is this reason is enough... She didn't give any answer his advances are making her nervous...

. Also there is another reason you know ...we would be together forever, so it would be easy to ask forgiveness for the rest of my life... with this he left her to go inside, leaving her shocked.


'Did he really mean what he said? It's past now. Did he really remember that matter? Is her forgiveness still matter to him that much? '

He come out from room and said YES for this marriage, hearing his words she feel once again same emotions, which she feeling 6 years back or till now... but in pain she always said to own self , she forget own love for him... but today his words , his one YES doing work like medicine on her heart... She just seeing him, his smile, she not realized when his father hugged her from side and asks what she wants... she look him, seeing spark in his eyes, only one word come on her lips YES...

Daadi held her hand and make her wear gold bangles, she bend and take blessing from her... pinky make her stand near maan, she feel his touch on fingers, she going take hand back but feel he entangles finger to her...she look him, now his eyes trying to convey some different emotions...

Her mother and step sister not happy with turn of events, but due to him, all hugged geet one by one and congratulate her...

Days start passing and both come front each other many times, but each time her query get unanswered, sometime maan change the topic and sometime another family members around her...

Finally the day come, when maaneet take seven vows and become husband wife with all rituals, she entered in his room as wife... She touched the same desk where his watch placed, once again his friend accusations fill her eyes, tears going fall from her eyes, before it's fall she feel his touch...

Why you said YES MAAN

I ask same question geet

She held his shervani and said bhut chaha maine

Aapse nafrat kru

Bhool jaayo

Par mein haar gyi apne aap se maan

I not able to stop own heart

I Love you

After knowing you are never my prince

Never

Sshhh geet

Am always yours Prince

He cupped her face and said I denied and say you childish on that moment because you are young geet

Your feeling get changed with time

And I also have no strong feeling for you

But teaching you each day, your act

I don't know when you enter in my heart

That day when my friend insult you

And your eyes seeing me only

I feel some strange emotions

When you give me punishment and left me alone

Then I realized what you are for me

It's not childish; my attraction for you is not going fade with time

Day by day, I get assurance

I feel same like you

Just waiting for you come back

When you come, simple I send daadi for our alliance

You're one YES

And trust own love tied us

**********THE END*******


Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Sanju : laal dupatta uda gya re hawa ke jhoke se😃
Kalpi : kya baat hai di😉
priya : sanju kuch huya hai kya
hume bhi suna
Sanju : sun kalpi sun
kalpi : aahhaa
priya : don't try to give background music Kalpi😆
Sanju : 😉
priya : its just all about our next story
.
kalpi : but
.
.
.
as usual Maaneet busy in own sweet nok zok...
geet kiss me now
Geet : maan are you gone mad
we getting late for party
Maan : mujhe nhi jaana fir
geet : ok
maan held her sari and pull closer
geet : maan leave my aachal
Maan : first kiss then
.
.
😉

priya : ab puri picture dekhni hai kya
Sanju : nhi na
😉



Maan singh khurana! Aj to ap gaye.

When he saw uncle Sharma enter as an invigilator in his class quickly he covered his face by his hands and mummer which is quite loud. Due to loud voice geet handa turned and saw him, she got idea that invigilator is known to him that's why he covered his face. But how long he hides? Invigilator after giving geet handa her answer copy came to him and shocked.

Tum...?

He standup

Uncle! Dekhye meri koi ghalti nhi hai mein paper daney nhi arha tha wo to yash ne majboor kr dia

us ne dhamki bhi di ki us ki tayari zero hy

aur kaha tum to MSC aur mform ho

tum to hr topic py chahye wo history ho

ya current affairs py ghanton boltey ho

tumhari knowledge ghazab ki hy

tum mera paper dey do warna ma sucide kr loon ga aur ilzam tum pr aye ga

aur ma itna handsome plus genius banda maan singh khurana murder kay case ma saza katney se bachney k lye paper daney chala aya.

mujhe kya pata tha k invigilator k roop mein aap hoon ge

by god agr pata hota to getup change kr k ata

aap mujhe ghoorein to mat beshak ghar akar yash ki class ly lyjye ga

us ne kis hoshyari sy admit card py meri pic lagayi hy ...

He said nonstop all students busy in filling first page of copy but geet handa put her elbow on desk and hold her chin with his palm only looks slow whispered maan singh khurana.blue jeans and white shirt his greek body makes surrounding stunning, their talks make realize that invigilator is his relative and he came instead of someone named yash.

Jantey ho kisi dosrey ki jagah paper dena kitna badha crime hy?

Uncle said with angry tone but in slow voice so rest of the student didn't hear except geet handa.

Private student ko kon phechanta hy? Agr ap action na lein to kisi ko khabar na ho...oh no kya ap ne humari baatein sunn li hain?

While talking she saw geet handa who listened their talks with so much concentration so he said last line to her

Ji haan

She nodded

Phr...?

He said helplessly she smiled and said

Be fikar rahyee ma ek handsome plus genius bandey k khilaf kuch nhi kahon gi.

Her eyes and smile have naughtiness he saw geet handa for few seconds and then smile and said

Thanks a lot!

Its pleasure for me

They both smiled

Uncle yeh stranger ho kr sath de rhi hain ek ap hain ki...haan to mein kab keh raha hoon ap burey hain bura to wo manhoos yash hain

When unlce Sharma glared him he changed his line

Tum mere best friend k bete na hote to ma abhi action leta aur Vicky tumhein bhi akal nhi aayi jo in dono ko samjhatey.

Now uncle Sharma turned towards Vicky who sits after maan

Mein kya samjhata?

Baith jao yeh last paper hai is lye kuch nhi keh raha

he sighed and sit on his chair

uncle ko dekh kr tum chup q hogye? Wahan yash ka to bhut sath de rahe the

Mujhe himmat dila rhe the ab kya ho gaya tha

iss ghadari ka sila to mein tumhein ghar ja kr doon ga

to ruk beta zara!

He turned and take vicky's class. Seems interesting guy for geet handa but at last question papers came and pin drop silence in class

Invigilator kay roop ma uncle Sharma bar bar round le rhe the

balkey apni moti moti gaye(cow) jaisi ankhon se ghoor rhe the

us ka paper 2 hours ma ho gaya tha pr uncle ne kaha paper wo time pe hi lenge

Maan take a look in class a girl on first line reads her paper and nodded her head in negative one boy copy another one so hurriedly but that guy didn't know that someone is copy him, on back side a guy checking his chits poor boy forgets which answer in which pocket then in last his eyes saw geet handa who sits in his front light brown hairs with red shine, her pen moves very fast, then she hits her pen on her lips may be thinks something and her rosy plump lips a sudden argue to touch her lips then she put her curls who touched her cheeks behind her ear that makes him conscious he sit straight and nodded his head in negative but his eyes automatically goes on her

Maan! Sunn q nhi rha deaf ho gye ho?

He heard vicky's irritate voice

unlce Sharma also reached them

Vicky kya poch raha tha tum se

Some students including geet attract to the voice

Yeh poch raha tha japan ka capital kon sa hai

Phir tum ne kya kaha?

Uncle Sharma glared him

Maine kaha ek bar to tune tok dis ab bar bar mat "Tokyo

His innocent way makes other students laugh geet's laughs makes him to look her again uncle Sharma controls his smile and goes

Apka humor bht acha hai thanks fourth question ka answer mujhe bhi yaad nhi arha tha apki wajah sy wo ho gaya

She appreciate him after few minutes his paper flied and lands near geet's feet unlce also come kya ho rha hai?

Question paper udh gaya

Geet pick his paper and smiled

uncle Sharma picks geet's question paper and give him so geet put his paper she saw he wrote something then she reads

Shakespare ki zindagi py behas kyjye?

He wrotes

Hum badhon ki zindagi py behas nhi krtey

Second hitler ki zindagi s yap kya smjhtey hain?

Yeh hi k wo uncle Sharma ki jaisa zalim tha mein yash ka paper daney chala aya aur uncle Sharma mujhe ase ghoor rhy hain jaisey chicken wala chicken ko marney sy phele gurta hai

She smiled on that

Next pheli jang e azim py roshni dalye

Kitney watt k bulb sy aur kitney qareeb se dalon?

Geet turned towards him maan is unique she thinks

At last paper end and everyone go out geet also goes towards library to collect her phone due to security every student have to submit their phone in library she saw maan comes towards her but someone asked her about paper and when she turned maan is already leaving and when she came out someone pushed her and she bumped to none other than maan she quickly get straight and politely said

Sorry wo kisi ne push kr dia tha

It's alright class mein apne mjh bacha liya yahan maine apko

He said with smiled with that both turned to go but something pull them together then they both saw geet's anchal got stuck in his shirt button situation is awkward maan saw her she is looking so lovely maan eyes got freeze on her face geet came forward and take her anchal smiled at him and goes maan saw her going but his eyes didn't move vicky's voice get his conscious and he think

Yeh mjh kya ho gaya dil q chaha raha hai k bus usse hi dekhta rahu

He jerked his thoughts and turned towards Vicky

When geet reached home meera asked her

Hey geet paper kaisa hoa?

Geet narrated her day to meera

By god meera aj paper daney ma bht maza aya

Kaisa tha wo?

Mat pocho janti ho na mujhe impress karna easy nhi hai pr us ne mujhe impress kr dia

Checking kr lo geet kahin kuch chori to nhi ho gaya?

Meera asked naughtingly

Shahyad haan shahyad naa

What!!!

Both laugh on this then meera said

Yaad hy na kal party ma apko papa ke friend ke batey se milna hai

jis se aap ke rishtey ki baat ki jar hi hai

Haan yaar yaad hy pr meer agr mjh wo pasand nhi aya to?

Aur agr agaya to?

Mujhe impress krna easy nhi hy janti hai na

Haan baba pr mujhe yaqeen hai jis larkey se to milney wali hy wo tujhey impress kr ley ga

akhir ko itna badha business chala raha hai

young aur dashing hai koi to baat hogi na us mein

tab hi to papa ne usey tere liye pasand kia hai

Haan yeh bhi chalo chado kal ki kal dekhin ge

Next day geet got ready in white and golden anarkali meera teased her

Oh ho lagta hy wo to tujhey aj pasand kr hi lay ga...

Geet blushed

Party got started guests came and then mr.handa called geet and introduce her to family

Yeh hai meri beti geet aur geet yeh hain raj and priya ma ne bataya tha na apko

Geet nodded and touched their feet

Priya pecked on her forehead and said

Bht hi pyari bachi hy bhai sahab bus yeh to meri beti hy aj sy

Arey phele geet se bhi to poch lo ki usey humara nalayak se shaadi krni bhi hai ya nhi

Kya raj usey nalayak to nhi kahein itna acha to hy mera beta

Acha ji nhi khatey pr aap ke wo ache se bte hai kaha?

Abhi to yahin tha ab pata nhi kahan hy?

Jaayo geet inke ache se bte ko le kr toh aayo

Raj said with smiled

But uncle mein kaisey...?

She said hesitantly

Koi nhi geet mein chalti hoon tere sath aa jaayo

Meera said they walked

Pr meera mein to usko janti bhi nhi hoon mein kaisey milon gi?

Pr mein to janti hn na

Arey ap yahan????

Geet heard a familiar voice and when she turned her anchal also got little flied and goes on that guy she slowly pulled her anchal and saw him and shockingly said

Ap yahan kaisey?

Ji ma apne parents k sath aya hoon

Bus meri complain mat kr dijiyenga

Aur aap?

Maan said smilingly on which geet laughed

Ji yeh party mere papa ki hai

Aur ap bilkul fikar mat kriye apka secret marey sath save hai

Then meera interrupted

Ap dono ek dosrey ko jantey hain?

Both looked her questionly

Arey geet yeh hain maan singh khurana raj uncle ke bete aur maan yeh meri behan geet hain geet handa jinse milne aap yaha aaye hai

Oh really!!

Maan said with happiness

So miss geet handa kya khayal hai mere baare mein???

He asked mischiefly

Ji...!

She didn't know what to say

Kya huya mein pasand nhi aaya aapko?

Dekhiye maine paper ma apka ek answer bhi karwa dia tha ab apko bhi mujhe reject to nhi krna chahiye

He said non stop

Hunh...!

Geet saw him amusingly

Maan usko tang mat karo

Priya came to her rescue

Arey mom ma tang thori kr raha hoon ma to bata raha hoon k mein kitna acha hoon maine inki help bhi ki thi

Acha jaisey mujhe to pata hi nhi k tum kya kr rahe ho

Geet beta bus mera yeh beta thora naughty hai pr dil ka bht acha hai

Geet smiled

Ji aunty

Acha waise geet tum ne bataya nhi mera maan tumhein kaisa laga?

Aunty...!

Geet blushed😳

To kyun na apkey maan ko geet ke anchal se band de?

Asked mr.handa

Mom phele inse toh puch lijiye, kya ye mujhe apne anchal se bandhein gi?

He said naughtily

Acha ji...!

To ap batayen kya ap marey anchal se bandhein ge???

Geet asked boldly

Arey ap ek baar haan to karein phir dekhna ap chahein bhi to apka anchal nhi choron ga

And everyone laughs on his naughtiness...

😆

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Kalpi : har kahani mein flower important hota hai
Sanju : we talking about love story
priya : par yaha kahani shuru hi flower se huyi hai
.
remember geet scene
jaha geet maan ko flower deti hai
Sanju : yaha hai thoda alag
Kalpi : wo kaise
ye jaanane ke liye
you have to read next story

PART 1

At a prominent flower shop in Shimla...

A 20 year old girl is just lost in her own world and has been sitting idol for quite some time at one of the busiest flower shop in Shimla. . She's GEET HANDA...a naturally beautiful cute, innocent and bubbly girl who loves to live her life to the fullest in way she wants especially doing things that money can never buy or give. Its Sunday and she is just back from Delhi during early morning hours. It was a short trip just for a week to spend with her parents who are settled down in Delhi and she has been dropped back by her family driver all the way from Delhi to Shimla. She too has her own dreams of Mr. Right. Unlike other girls of her age who dreams of a Rich prince charm, she dreams of an ordinary guy. As per her, the guys from Richie rich family are Casanovas and they would marry a girl only to keep her as a show piece. Whereas a guy belonging to a middle class may not be rich money wise but will possess true feelings and commitment for the girl they love and ensure they marry her and get committed to her for their entire live. And she has been dreaming to have such a guy to come into her life. But with her recent trip to Delhi, she fears that her dreams shall never come true.

Geet's family originally hails from Hoshiyarpur. She has great respect for her family. Especially for her parents and her Daarji (Her Paternal Grand father). Geet's parents, Mohinder Handa and Rano Handa are settled down in Delhi and rest all relatives still live in Hoshiyarpur. Mohinder has a flourishing business and has made a name for himself in the building materials industry. Even Rano contributes in his business to a great extent. He has been quite successful and has not only earned a decent money but a Strong Goodwill and reputation. Geet was put into boarding school in Shimla at a very young age in order to initiate self dependency and strict discipline in her life whilst maintaining a strong relationship with her parents and rest of her family. After completing her 12th, Mohinder and Rano wanted her to move back to Delhi for continuing with her higher education but she preferred to stay back in Shimla as she loves this place and its far away from the hush bush of the City life in Delhi. her parents mainly agreed for it as she is staying at Pinky's home who is not only her class mate but her dad Mr. Deepak Manchanda is also one of close family friend of Mohinder. Geet and Pinky belong to same age group and studying Business Management at St. Martha's college. Geet loves Pinky's family as for their simple life style and the huge flower and gift shop which they own where Geet also volunteers to work on part-time basis in good understanding with Pinky and Manchanda uncle and ofcourse Mohinder and Rano doesnt know about it as they wouldnt allow their daughter to work like this. That's why Deepak Manchanda ensures that either he or Pinky is always around when Geet works in his shop as he respects both Geet's as well as Mohinder's point of view.

Back to Flowershop...
Its a busy Sunday morning...this flower shop is going to be too busy till next Sunday as that day is going to be Valentines day and huge sales and advance bookings of flowers and gifts are expected during this week. Geet slowly started to divert her mind in arranging flowers and gifts, meeting customers and taking orders and so on...This last two years she has gained enough knowledge not only about flowers, plants and maintenance of the shop floor but also maintaining cash, accounts and stock. On Sundays, Geet and Pinky almost work for full time at the flower shop until and unless they do not have any other personal commitments.. Geet is not herself since the time she is come back from Delhi... Just then, Pinky walks in

Oye Geet...When did you come back?

It was around 4 o clock early in the morning when driver uncle droped me. I slept for sometime, had breakfast and came here.

Arre...should have woken me up na?
I came to your room and you were in your sound sleep. Didnt want to disturb you as it is Sunday anyways
Aur batha...Kaisi hain re tu?
Hmm...fine...how about you?
Kya hua Geet...Main dhek rahi hoon tu itni chup chup kyon hain? Is something upsetting you? until your previous trips to Delhi, You will be so chirpy sharing too many things about all what happened during your trip and this time you are totally oposite. Kya hua?
Woh...nothing Pinky. Forget about me...Tum Aur bata apne baare main...what all happened in this one week?
Oh...I am all excited...You know na...Comming Sunday is a Valentines day.

Geet Nods for a Yes hiding all her sadness.

And Aadiya is coming to Simla for a week. and I will get to spend this valentines day with him. Pinky is all excited and goes to her dream land. It seems he has a new boss now and his boss is visiting Shimla around that week and Aadi has to be with him...and that's how he is going to be here.

All Geet could express is a smile. but deep within her she is depressed and she didnt even hear half of what Pinky has been blabering.

Geet cutely looks up and fights with her babaji...Eisa main ne kya maang liya babaji? All I asked you is for a cute boyfried who will Madly love me and will go to any extent to be with me and spend time with me...And ofcourse who will be my valentine and who will be extremely serious about this relationship...she sighs...you didnt even find one person like that? Kya main itni buri hoon?Makes a cute angry face...even this year, I will be left all alone on this auspicious day...again lost in her own world where as per her she is left all alone.

Oye Geet...Kya hua? Are you even listening to what I have been saying?
I heard you...Valentines day and Aaditya is here on that day...hmm... (Conveniently neglecting what she told about his boss)

Right...

but why are you so quite yaar? I expected you to tease me tickle me and what not...but you are not showing any reaction...what happened my dear?

Because I am jealous of you Geet pauts so very cutely...pulling Pinky's cheeks and laughs.😆

Ouch.. Pinky rubs her cheeks now..Thanks god my Geet is back...Pinky takes a sigh looking at Geet's smiling face and her naughty self.

Seriously yaar...how lucky you are to have a guy like Aadi to spend this valentines day with...

Acha? tho yeh baath hain? And she tickles Geet...and both laugh out loud...and chit chat for sometime...

Ab batha...what happened? Missing your parents kya?
She nods for a yes and its true. but there's some other reason too.
Woh Pinky...she has tears in her eyes...
Geet...I am your best friend na? Then tell me what happened?
Woh.. I heard my mama-papa talk with each other...
She is sad with what has been discussed between Mohinder and Rano on the previous afternoon. which is supposed to be a confidential conversation between her parents but Geet was just entering the home after meeting and bidding good bye to few of her close friends in Delhi. Mohinder and Rano were making sure that Geet doesnt get to hear this for the time being as she has come over here on a short trip and doent want to spoil her mood.unfortunately Geet got to hear them talk.
Mohinder: Rano, there's a aliance for Geet and they are wonderful people. If Geet gets married into their family, they will keep her happy by all means.

Rano: What? Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain? She is just 20. and what about her further education?
Mo: Its certainly the right age for a girl where the parents start looking out for a suitable groom. But we were more focusing on her further education. But Rano...we are so very lucky to get this aliance for her. Eise rishthe baar baar nahin aathe. Moreover, they wouldnt mind Geet continuing with her further eductaion.
Ra: Yeh kya hain? overnight you decide that you will get your daughter married and you are willing to implement it without even consulting Geet?
Mo: I have not yet given any word or promise. it has been decided that this aliance shall be discussed with their respective families and shall be taken further with the mutual consent of both the families. Moreover, I have not even shared Geet's photo with them. Coming to Geet...I will surely discuss this with her Rano. But not immediately. I have to think how to approach her and make her understand.
He rests his hand on Rano's shoulder and continues. We will never get such aliance for Geet once again. Even when we will be seriously sourcing for it 2 or 3 years down the line.
Rano takes a long sigh...for her Geet is still too young and the very thought of her marriage at this point of time makes her feel low. But she trusts her husband and his decisions.
Ra: Can you tell me more about the family?
Mo: They were our neighbours in Hoshiyarpur.
Rano is blinking who it could be.
Mo: You wouldnt know them as they left from Hoshiyarpur to settle down in Mumbai very long time ago. That was few years before our wedding happened.
Rano is wondering what's happening to Mohinder. He was so much planning his daughter's further education and was even willing to send her abroad and today, he is in full talks with regard to wedding..She trusts her husband that there must be some valid reason for this. She curiously waits to hear what her husband has to say...

They are Khuranas. They belonged to a middle class family until 35 years ago and the entire family was settled down in Hoshiyarpur that time. It was headed by Pratap Singh Khurana and his wife Savithri Devi Khurana and their sons, Gaurav and Vishal. Papaji (Geet's Daarji) and Pratapji were very thick friends where as Me and Gaurav were thick friends as we belong to the same age group and studied in the same school. Pratapji was a highly ambitious person. He wanted to make a name in the construction industry.He started off a small business unit in Mumbai and started doing pretty good in their respective business. Hence their family had to shift their permanant base from Hoshiyarpur to Mumbai. Me and Gaurav had completed our 12th Std together and after that Gaurav was sent to London for his higher education and on completion he slowly got invoved in his family business. and few years later, Gaurav got married to Priya whom he used to date during his collage days...Pratapji passed away due to a massive heart attack and entire business responsibility fell on Savithriji and Gaurav. his younger brother Vishal is not much involved in family business. Our families somehow lost contact with eachother as we all got busy with our own lives. As on today Khuranas have occupied a huge in business world not only in India but London, Paris, Hongkong and Singapore and few other countries.

I met Gaurav during the latest business event that happened last week. We instantly huged eachother in all excitement and our joy knew no bounds meeting each other after such a long time. You know something, Gaurav has not even changed a bit even after his education abroad and being one of the successful businessman in the country. We had dinner together and we shared all the personal informations with each other. He is blessed with 2 boys. the elder one is 23 years old and the younger one is 19 years old. That's when showed eachother our family pictures over our mobiles and that's when he got to see Geet's photo and he was enquiring more details about her and gathering all her personal information.
______
Ga: "Bhura math maano tho ek baath kahoon??"
Mo: "Haan Kaho Gaurav...from when there has been any formalities between us? Please go ahead"
Ga: "Main Apne bade bete ke liye, Tumhari beti ka haath mangna chahtha hoon". We have actually not started to source suitable aliance for him. You see...he is just 23 years old. But after looking at your daughter, I feel She will be ideal match for my son by all means. And hamare khandan ki Aapasi Dosthi, Rishthedaari mein badal jaayegi. Is se badi khushi ki baath kya ho sakthi hain?

Mohider got confused. didnt know what to comment. Actually, even he has not seriously considered his daughter's wedding for the timebeing as she is only 20 years old. He knows his daughter's interest in further education and also, she is not looking for a guy from a rich background. On one hand he is happy for this aliance for his daughter as he can be rest assured that she will be loved and will be blessed with a wonderful life when she gets married into Khurana's family. He is in a real fix now.

Ga: Kya sochraho Mohinder?
Mo: Yeh tho bohuth hi achi baath kahi hain tum ne Gaurav...you see..even I havent priortised my daughter's wedding yet as she is only 20 years old. I have to discuss with my family about it. Moreover, my daughter's primary objective as on date is in continuing with her MBA.. Please give me some time. I have to discuss with my family and get back to you.
Ga: Even I have to discuss with my family too but rest assured that my family will stand by my decision. Coming to Geet's further education, we will never come on her way, she can very well continue with her education after she becomes a part of our family. By the way, you take your time and I will request Geet's photo only after you take a positive decision hmm...and please keep in touch henceforth.
Both share their contacts and emails with each other.
Mo: And what about lunch at our home tomorrow?
Ga: Some other time Mohinder...I am leaving back to Mumbai early morning. Will catch up soon.

They both hug each other and bid goodbye...
____
Back to Mohinder - Rano...

Mo: Now you tell me...isint it a wonderful aliance for Geet? I know Khurana Family very well. They all are well cultured and expect the same from the Bride's family.
Geet overhears them by hiding from them. She too keeps this as a secret till her papa talks to her about it. But she is in a fix seeing the happiness in her dad's face and she wishes he is always happy like this.

Back to Shimla...
Geet is arranging flowers wilst talking with Pinky about all what she got to hear from her parents...and she is very sad and lost.

I am sure my papa will talk to me about it anytime. I am not in a position to tell a No as I love my Papa-Mama and no way I can disappoint them. You see they have always showered their love and given me the life that I always wanted to live and in return if I dont fulfill even this wish of theirs then I am sure I will be punished...she tells this in one go and takes a long sigh.

Arre Geet...I was so worried to see you like this thinking some unplesant incident has happened with you and that's why you are upset...Thanks God that allz well at Delhi...Now coming back to your short story from this short trip...Is mein udas hone wali kya baat hain? Seriously yaar...Now, its my turn to get jealous of you haan!! If I was in your place I would have gone crazy with happiness...

Geet looks back at her giving amused look.

Aur kya Geet? ...It seems to be an aliance from a rich & famous family

that's my point...they are rich people. I am not interested to get married to a rich Guy. Moreover, I dont even know him.
Then try to know him na??
Kya Pinky, you know me for this many years na...and you know what kind of a guy I am looking at. I am so eagerly waiting for my Mr. Right and I am sure I will get to meet him. Mujhe apne Babaji pe poora abarosa hain.
Geet...ho saktha hain babaji ne hi yeh rishtha beja ho khas tere liye.
Pata nahin Pinky...why Babaji is testing me like this. All I asked him is for someone who will love me madly...and such true love cannot be expected by a rich guy.

Its not necessary that all rich guys will have such mentality...now see Aadi's new boss...Aadi has been boasting about him so much. It seems he is the most eligable bachelor and the richie rich girls from Mumbai are all looking out for their chances to trap him and date with him. But he has never bulged for anyone. Moreover, he is someone who has clean habits. It seems he never had any affairs or never ever dated any girl till date.

May be someone out of the blue yaar...anyways...I dont want to think much about it until and unless papa talks to me about it. Wonder what Babaji has in store for me.

A week has passed by somehow. Geet got involved with her daily routines of attending to her regular college and would spend rest of her quality time at the flower shop. She happen to talk to her parents a couple of times but they never spoke about this alliance due to some or the other reasons.
Its Saturday evening which will witness the eve of the Valentines Day this year...There's lot of work to be done. Pinky has got even more excited. Moreover, Aaditya will be here in Shimla in next few hours.
Geet and Pinky busy working at the flowershop

Oye Geet ...my heart is beating faster and faster and am not able to control myself.☺️

Geet smiles at her plight.

Aaditya is coming to pick me up tomorrow morning and I will be back only after finishing Dinner...I am sorry yaar...tomorrow is going to be a very busy day and you and papa has to manage the shop all alone...

Geet hides her sadness not for handling the shop all alone but for spending this auspicious day all alone.

Pinky, we have few shop assistants also. Me and uncleji will manage. you dont worry abut us. Enjoy your day hmm...

Tu kitni Sweet hain yaar...I will pray to your babaji that all your wishes comes true.

Geet smiles weakly

Finally, the day has come...VALENTINES DAY and its a special one as it has fallen on Sunday this time. It has been very busy and hectic day. Geet has been fully involved in attending to customers. Of course the customers who walk in this day are so interesting and romantic...she has nick named them "Chirpy Love Birds". She is so excited to see the joy in their face when they buy something very special for their "LOVE" and its worth watching. Geet innocently prays to her babaji for the success of the love life of these "Chirpy Love Birds"
___________
On the same day around 5:00 PM, A flight has just landed at Jubharhatti, Airport, Shimla which is almost 25 KM away from the main city. A young and dashing guy dressed in his casual dark blue jeans and half sleeves white shirt, walks out of the flight and takes a long breath with a sigh...its been over 10 years since he had visited Shimla last. He is all so excited to be here again...he walks out of the Airport and finishing with all the formalities.The driver is already waiting for him at the Arrivals section to receive him. Maan instantly recognizes him...

Aap Shambu Kaka hain na?
Haan Saab...Aap tho itne bade ho gaye hain...Agar aap mujhe nahin pehchanthe tho main aap ko kabhi nahin pehchan paatha.

Maan just smiles back at him 😊

Aap tho mujhe Maan baba kehke pukarthe the...hain na?
Shambu kaka smiles at him...haan sab...thab aap bohuth chote the...
Aap ke saamne main abhi bhi chota hi hoon...tho aap mujhe ab bhi Maan baba kehkar hi pukariye.

Shmbu kaka is all amused with Maan's kindness. No wonder his upbringing is worth an appreciation.

Maan takes the Car keys from him and decides to drive all alone...

Sab...Mera matlab...Maan baba...yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?
He opens his pouch which is full of credit and debit cards. There's only one 1000/- Rupees note which he has been carrying and he gives it to him...

Please Keep it.. and he pats on the Shambu kaka's shoulder..
baba...what is this for?
Its because I love this place and I am here after a very long time...Moreover its a token money to keep quite and not to tell anyone that I am driving the car myselr..you can take a cab for yourself...Maan calls out for a cab for Shambu kaka

Maan Baba...please...Malkin will shout at me if she comes to know about all this.
Dont worry kaka. I know very well how to handle her. I will take care... Ab aap is taxi main challe jaayiye.
Sambu Kaka has no option than to listen to him...He is in great fix. He cannot even call his Malkin now.

Maan has been driving all alone following the directions boards. He is driving a bit slowly as its relatively a new place and will gradually get back to his normal speed once he gets completely adapted to the place.
He has entered into the city and he gets to see that the city has been crowded with pairs and lot of banners promoting valentines day here and there and there were so many red heart shaped baloons decorated every where...
Oh my goodness..today is 14th Feb... Oh Maan...how could you forget this day? How can you meet your girlfriend empty handed? Couldnt you buy her a gift from Mumbai itself? Huh?

Its 8:30 PM and most of the shops are closed as its Sunday or its closed as its already close to 8:30PM. Luckily, he finds a flower and gift shop which is still open.

He has to park his car and makes his way towards this shop which is located on a slight hill and has to walk 20 steps above.
________
Around same time frame at the flower shop...at around 7:00 PM...

Ofcourse it was a wonderful day witnessing excellent sales records. Deepak Manchanda (Pinky's dad) is so very happy with the days turnover...But he seems to be too exhausted.

Geet beta...you did a marvelous job. really appreciate it.

Pleasure is mine uncle ji...but you really look tired and exhausted. please go back home and take rest

Beta...itne saare kaam baaki hain. Still some customers are there...and around shop closing time you need to sort out the stocks and return back flowers to the wholesalers, close the cash counter and what not? You have to attend college tomorrow.

I will manage uncle ji... Anyways, there are only few customers left and I have attendants to help me. Trust me...I will handle it myself... See, I am not tired. I will be back home max by 9:30 PM.

Are you sure beta?

Sure uncle ji...now please go home and stay relaxed. If there's anything specific which only you can handle then will surely call you on your mobile. our home is just 5 minutes walk from here. So, please carry on.

Deepak rests his hand on Geet's head...beta, I am so very proud of you and proud of Mohinder and Rano who are blessed with a daughter like you. But please dont over load yourself..if anything happens to you I am answerable to Mohinder.

Uncle ji...Aap Itni badi badi baathen na kijiye...I have to thank you as I have learnt a lot from you and I always consider this shop as my gurukul. The knowledge that I have gained here shall never be forgotten.

This is what I really admire in you beta...he takes an envelope and hands over to Geet...

Uncleji..yeh kya?

Special bonus for all your hard work for today.

Is ki kya zaroorat hain?

dhekho...its your hard earned money...Its sweet fruit for all the hardwork that you have done today hmm??He has few more envelops in his hand which he hands over to the sales attendants and other workers in the shop floor.

Geet doesnt want to argue further and takes it from him with a smile...thank you uncleji..Ab aap please jaayiye aur aaram kijiye.

After Deepak leaves from there, Geet is still involved in attending to some more customers who are still present there and completing some of the end-of day tasks at shop floor...by then the time is already 8:30 and Geet is attending to a middle aged customer at that point of time...

Around this time, Maan walks in...and stops at one point when he gets to hear sweet voice of a girl (Geet) and he makes his way towards that direction passing by different varieties of flowers arranged in bunches, baskets, plastic wraps ...and all of a sudden he got to see Geet's face in between those flowers and he is all lost in her natural charm and sweet voice. Her face looks so pure. She is dressed so very simple in her jeggings(Jeans leggings) with a simple yellow tops...yet she looks out of this world..He walks further and found her moving towards the cash counter whilst interacting with one of the customer... Maan is all lost in Geet's looks, sweet voice, actions and gestures whereas Geet is engrossed in her work and she is yet to acknowledge Maan's presence which she is still oblivious about as he (Maan) is almost hiding and watching her now

I would like to buy these plants...One each in Red, Orange, White, yellow and any more colours of its flowers that you have. My wife is so fond of gardening and she would love them... Tells the customer so very excitedly.

You have made the right selection sir...Its flowers are known as "Hilly Lillys" and its most fast moving plant of our shop...and she goes on and on...
Maan folds his hand and rests himself on a wall close by where he can get a clear view of her and can hear her sweet talks. He is all lost in her looking at her without even blinking.

These are the four colours of the flowers ...Very easy to maintain...She starts preparing the bill at the cash counter and feeds in the details into the system...Sir, its night time. If you want, we can arrange to deliver these plants to your home and it will reach you by tomorrow morning. You can write down your address and contact number here.. and hands over a letter pad and pen to him.

No need dear...I am carrying it all the way to Chandigar.

CHANDIGAR? Oh no!!! 😲

Geet asks in shock...doesnt know what to tell this customer now.
Sir...I thought you are from Shimla. She takes a long sigh and continues Sorry sir but have to keep you informed that these plants grows well only in hilly vegetations...It will slowly die when its moved to the plains...Do you get me sir? Now, may I request you to not buy these plants? She tells this with a face dipped with innocence.

The customer remains quite. Also, Maan is so lost hearing to her sweet gestures filled with innocence. If she wants, she can cheat on this customer but she is so honest and doing full justice to her job...hmm...this girl is really amazing...😊and he is further amused with how she deals with this customer further.

Sir...you see, even plants have life and can stay alive only when you give into their living conditions. Moreover, you are spending so much money na and also your wife will feel disappointed to see these plants dying like this. I am really sorry if I have upset you by any ways...😕

The customer is so delighted with her honesty...Oh I am not upset with you my dear...In fact I am so glad that you told me the truth. I have never come across a shop like yours where people work with so much honesty...I really appreciate it..he tells this by patting on her cheeks...

Maan still has been looking at them from a distance and now he is fuming at this customer for patting her chubby and pink cheeks...😆

How dare he? Those cheeks belongs to me and only me and no body have any right to even touch them... 😡he gives angry filled glare at that customer...bina chuye baath nahin kar saktha hain kya? 😡He knows that the customer doesn't have any bad intentions but still he is fuming within...and closes his eyes. Maan...what happened to you? You are here to buy gift for girl friend and you are all lost in this girl?...huh!!! Yeh ladki mujhe paagal kar rahi hain.🤢

Thank you sir...Geet smiles and a cute dimple appears on her cheeks...and of course her smile has its own advance effects on Maan who is secretly watching her.


Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#75

PART 2 (A)


Thank you sir...Geet smiles and a cute dimple appears on her cheeks...and of course her smile has its own advance effects on Maan who is secretly watching her.

She calls out for a shop attendant who can assist this customer further on the kinds of plants which will survive in the place he comes from. She checks the time. Its already 8:30 PM and she has to work towards winding up process for the day. Meantime, She has to start arranging flowers based on their freshness and remove the ones which have started showing signs of fading.

Now, Maan walks towards her...his vision is all glued on her without even blinking for once.

Geet keeps the lader and checks for the flower baskets which are kept on the top rows... She takes the first basket which has full of beautiful bright red roses. Tears wells in her eyes...

From the time she has ever come to know about Valentines Day, she has dreamt of spending this special day with that one special person...and all she wanted from him is one rose on this special day... and once again another Valentines day has passed by which she has spent all alone...she looks up for a brief sec...You must be very happy to see me in this condition...Hain na babaji? By next Valentines Day, I may not be in a position to even dream about it. Henceforth, I will not ask you anything. huh...She wipes her tears but still lost in those beautiful roses as she is not able to come in terms with the fact. She feels that she is in between so many flowers all the time but not even one flower belongs to HER. It really hurts her.

Just that time Maan Comes near her...

Excuse Me...

She is still lost in those red flowers and still positioned on the ladder.

EXCUSE ME...This time Maan calls out her name little louder she jerks and looks at him...and looses her balance and he instantly reacts faster and reaches out to her and she fell in his arms in a way he hugs her and both their lips smash on eachother's shoulder sending shivers down their spine...She hold him so very tight as she is in a state of shock...She composes herself and slowly turns to look at him with her blinking eyes...

She is so very lost in him without even her own knowledge. Their eyes met and drawn deeper into each other's vision...She is all wondering who is he and what is he doing at this point of time..but without even giving her concern to these questions she simply looks at him with her innocent gaze as if she is trying to memorize his features and printing it to her heart...

Are you OK? he asks with a concern

She cutely nods for a YES...Both lost and still drawn in each other's eyes...as if they were eagerly waiting for this special moment to make an entry intro their respective life. He is still holding her in his arms...

I...I... she stamers in excitement and gulps...I...am fine...you can...put me down...

That's when he realised he has still been carrying her and gently brings her down..

Her mind talking to her Babaji whilst she is all lost looking at him...is he been sent by you for me Babaji? Finally you are showing some mercy on me...and a blush touches her cheeks..He knows very well that like every girl even she has been smitten by him with his very first look but she is hiding it to the maximum possible...

Woh..I am sorry...I mean Thank you..She doesnt know to say "Sorry" or "Thank you" and she tells both the words so very sweetly with her face dipped in embarrassment and instantly melting him with her cuteness.

I mean...If you were not there, I would have fallen on the ground...THANK YOU for saving me... and SORRY if I have hurt you by falling on you...

Yes...No...He closes his eyes not able to believe even he is stammering...Pleasure is mine...

She smiles at him...You here? I mean...She is so very spontanious when it comes to attending to customers..but today, she has got back to square one and she is not even able to frame right sentences

Are you here buy something?

Oh maan...in between all this you forgot the very purpose of you being here in this shop...yeh ladki mujhe baar baar pagal kar rahi hain...😕

Haan yes...I need to buy something...

Actually its a quite a tricky situation for him which he cannot share with this girl (Geet) as she would laugh at him. He has never bought any gift for anyone personally. If he had to gift someone he would ask his mama-papa to get it. Now, the latest trend is he would have taken help from Aaditya, his PA in his office. but today being Sunday and its been Aadi's day off and Aadi had his own commitments. And today Maan is all here to buy a gift for his girl friend as he totally forgot its 14th Feb. On top of that Geet's presence is adding more vulnerability to his difficult situation. He is seriously thinking what gift to buy?

Sir, how can I help you?

He is all lost in her sweet voice again...and she too lost in him but controlling herself not to make her drolling so obvious to him...least does she know that he too sailing in the same boat.

She clears her throat and repeats her question.

Excuse me sir...

And he is out of his own world...

How can I help you?

Well, I need to buy gift for...someone...

Would you please tell me for whom sir?

He gives her a questioning look...

See...I have to show you gifts accordingly...

Its for my GIRL FRIEND... he tells this in one go without even thinking twice.

What?? The word Girl Friend echoed in her years more than 3 times... with what she just heard...her world suddenly came to a standstill...just a second back she was in cloud 9 and now she feels she has been pushed from the same cloud and she is falling back on earth and the earth suddenly opens up in order to consume her alive.

Geet is not able to come to terms with what she heard now...She is cursing her own situation as if she got so very desperate to achieve her emotional valentine goal...and somewhere she feels so very low about herself..

Excuse me? he calls out for her..

Hun?? and she answers coldly and now her face looks pale...and Maan wondering why she apears dull all of a sudden? I hope I didnt say anything wrong...

Woh.. sorry...I was...she composes herself and talks further..I was thinking what gift to suggest for you to gift to your girlfriend and smiles weekly...

He further thinks that this weak smile doesn't suit her face...wondering what happened to her all of a sudden... but he is running short of time and has to make it fast...See...I need something special...She is very important person for me...you see, I am already late to wish her and be with her on this special day...but it went totally out of my mind..and I want to make up to her...so please suggest something which will wipe off all her anger and replace with smile filled with happiness...

Geet is soo very lost in him...Bechara...kitna pyar karta hain apni girl friend se...I really wish I found someone like him in my life who would have made me feel special on this day...made me feel a complete person...and sighs... but she wants to help this poor guy (as per her)

She tries to bring some excitement in her conversation now...Listen...you need not worry...I have a wonderful gift for your special person..I am sure it will do wonders...believe me ...

Oh really?

YES...Just wait...she has a big smile on her face but still something missing compared to the smile that she had sometime back and that's making him weaker..wondering what is happening to him...and why is he so seriously thinking about this girl..as if he could clearly see her facial expressions but not able to understand what's going on in her mind and so very curious about it...he is cursing himself why he didn't make it to this place earlier

she comes back to him as she had a doubt to ask...she is wondering how to ask this question. She cannot ask if his GF is thin or fat...woh main puchna bhool gayi...may I know her appearance?

He gives her another questioning look to her..

I mean, is she small built ...medium built..Large..Extra Large?

(Aurthour Note: You will know why she asked this question at the later stage)

Maan is wondering why this question in the first place. He closes his eyes and imagines his girlfriend...

Hmm...can say Extra Extra Large (XXL)..

What? 😲Geet couldnt believe what she just heard...

Yeh ladki...baat baat pe itna shock kyon hoti hain? Huh...

Yes...any problem?

No..No..No...Sir and she again stamers and turns to leave from there...give me a minute will be back..

She turns back and rolls her eyes trying to find out what's actually happening here...yeh ladka...he is so much packed with surprises...Hmm...XXL? OMG..so, his girlfriend is reasonably fat in appearance...but still he admires her the most and he is all here to buy something special for her...how sweet...Aaj kal ke ladkon se kitna alag hain...She is again lost in his sweet nature...She looks at him from a distance and admires him even more...Lagtha tho middle class ka hain...ek dam seedha saadha types...She is so very lost looking at him...haaye he is so handsome and cute and he is soo very sweet nature wise...Geet snaps out of her thoughts..Geet stop drolling at him..he is already booked..tumhare babaji ne decide karliya hain ke tumhara kuch nahin hone wala...she gives a angry glare up at her babaji and stamps her feet...CHADDO

She hides all her sweet and sour excitements and gets back to him with a box which is already sealed and gift wrapped in full bright red colour cover with golden ribbon...Its a special valentines day gift...and of course she recommends this for Maan's Girlfriend...

See this gift box is a very special one for this special day...

Hmm..Interesting...but what's there inside?

Sir..that's the specialty of this gift box. Its bundle with whole lot of surprises...Only your girlfriend has the right to open it and bet you, she will go crazy with happiness and you will enjoy seeing the smile and glow in her face when she picks out each and every item from this box...Geet tells this with all her exciting expressions...and he is all lost in her.

But how can I buy something without seeing or feeling?

Sir trust me...

He looks at her cute face...Oh...how he cannot trust her...Moreover, with what all he heard her talk with the previous customer, he can blindly trust her

OK I will buy it...

Yeh huyi na baat...you can always return back the gift if your didnt like it...

I am sure there wont be any need for it...

Oh...thank you... and this is complementary ...she hands over a bunch of bright red flowers which is neatly wrapped...

He is all amused with it...this girl will make me mad today for sure...

They make their way to the cash counter...Sir...its 1000 Rupees. He takes his pouch out and about to take his credit card and then only his eye fell on the small note boards..."WE ACCEPT CASH ONLY..NO CREDIT CARDS PLEASE". He had one 1000 Rupees note and he searches for it in his pouch...Damn..I had given it to Shambu Kaka...now, what will I do? I cannot give her my Credit card...

Sir...Any problem?

Woh...woh...I missed to carry enough cash...his face dipped because of this and Geet feels bad for him...

Bechare ke pass itne paise bhi nahin hain...if he doesnt take this gift, his evening with his girl friend will be spoiled. Atleast let him enjoy his time with his girlfriend...why should he be unlucky one like me?😕

She thinks for a while what to do...OK..you take this and you can pay us later...

Maan is going speechless with her kind gesture...

But..

Its ok sir..I will keep a note at the cash counter...no problem..

Are you sure?

YES...and please carry on...your girl friend must be waiting for you...

He is so much relieved...Thank you so much...this one for you...He takes out one Rose from the buch of roses which she gave him...

She takes it from him controlling all her shivers...she knows she is not suppose to take it as this whole bunch of flowers belong to someone else...but still she is not able to deny it either...YOU're WELCOME... she smiles hiding all her emotions...

They again have an eye lock and He wishes he doesn't go out of this place...but has to leave as he is already late and his girl friend must be mad at him...

You take care...BYE...

BYE with a smile..

Her smile fades away as she is all lost looking at him till the time he exits out of the entrance. She takes the red rose and looks at it with so much of admiration and gently caressing its petals a tear drops falls on the rose.

She is not in a mood to work anymore. She takes the bonus envelope which Deepak uncle gave her...takes 1000 Rs and adds it to the cash counter ensuring the cash received tallies with the total amount of bills.. and carrys the entire amount from the cashcounter to behanded over to Deepak uncle as he has left earlier today. She assigns the further shop closing tasks to her assistants and she leaves from there..



PART 2 (B)

______

at Khurana Bunglaw...Shimla...

An old lady is shouting left right and centre on Shambu Kaka...giving him all lessons of life..

He told you to take a cab and leave from the airport and you left him leaving from there all alone? she is litterally fuming

Malkin, I requested him so much and he was not listening to me...he wanted to drive the car all by himself.

Aap ko patha hain na? He visited this place when he was mearly 10-12 years of age...and this place is relatively new for him and you left him to drive alone like this? Hamen aap se ye umeed nahin thi.

Arre Arre...what happened to my Girl Friend?

That old lady and Shambu Kaka move their gaze towards the entrance of the bunglaw...and in no time, Maan runs to her swings her and hugs her tight and swings with her...

Arre Arre...Maan...yeh kya kar rahe ho beta...

I am all excited to meet my Girl Friend ...HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY GIRL FRIEND...He hugs her tight and gives her light kiss on her cheeks.

That old lady blushes with his act and nods her head in amusement...

Aap ko yaad tha beta?

Haan Girl Friend...You know how eagerly I was waiting for this day to celebrate this day with you...He hides the fact that he actually forgot her Birthday and was running from pillar to post to buy her a gift...till he made his way to that flower and gift shop

kuch tho sharam kijiye...itne bade hogaye ho ab bhi mujhe Girl Friend kehke pukarthe ho...call me Daadima atleast from now onwards...

Mmm...hmmm...you are my Girl Friend...no changes in that...

And what if you meet your girl friend in real?

He instantly remembers that flower shop girl...Oh...why am I not able to remove her thoughts from my mind?

Huh...but you will always remain my First Girl Friend...

Aur yeh...aap keliye gift...

He handsover the big red box of Surprise and the bunch of flowers to his Daadima (Girl Friend)...

Wow...This is the first ever gift from you...Dadi is all excited She takes the flowers and places them in the flower vase near by...Now let me see what is there in the Gift Box...

Haan Girl Friend...Jaldi Jaldi open karo... Maan is even more curious you see even I didn't get to see what is there in this...It seems its a surprise gifts and only Girl friends can see?

Daadi is not able to register what he is saying KYA???😲

Haan... that's the speciality of this gift box

Maan...what if something comes and out like a spring and punches on my face??

Aap na, please stop watching those old comedy movies...again and again...

Now, please stop this suspence...tell me what's in this box?

Mujhe nahin pata...that girl told me its special one and only my Girl Friend can open it and see...

Girl? Now who is this girl?

That girl from the Flower Shop from where I bought the gift...ab chodiye...jaldi open kijiye...because more than you I am curious to see what's there in this box...

Daadi opens the box slowly and gently...

The first item that comes out is a huge white cute teddy bear holding a red colour double heart.. "For my Valentine" written in the heart...Maan is looking at it and his eyes pops out and he thinks WHAT THE??? Daadi is not able to control her laugh...still she gives a stern look to Maan..and Maan looks away hiding his uncomfortableness..Then she Takes out a box full of heart shaped dark brown and white chocolates neatly arranged and packed in heart shaped transparent box...A cute coffee mug again imprinted with cute hug of two teddy bears..A small pouch full of colorful hair bands...and finally, a T-Shirt neatly folded and packed...She takes it in her hand and opens it...its XXL size cute baby pink T shirt with Teddy bear with heart print...(That's why Geet had asked for the size😆)

Maan is all Astonished with the items that has come out of the box...No wonder it has surprised him and his Girl Friend but in a very different way...He doesnt know what will be his Girl Friend's reaction seeing this...Huh...I am sure she will turn towards me and hit me left right and centre...he opens his one eye and looks at her she is standing folding her hand giving a killing stare...

Woh... His face is full of embarrassment...wondering what to tell his Girl friend (Daadima) now...

Daadima bursts out in laughter...and hugs Maan Tight...Maan couldn't believe that she is reacting in such a way...in a sense that Shop girl is true that this gift box will do wonders..somehow he is happy to see this laughter in his GF Daadima.

You know Maan...This is the best gift I have ever had..You know, when your dadaji was alive, he didnt buy me any such romantic gifst for my Birthday which invariably falls on Valentines day not even flowers...Maximum he would buy me a saree, or sweets and once or twice he has got me some jewels...and your papa-mama would always buy me shawls, white/cream sarees making me realise my old age...but I was so much longing to get these kinds of gifts for such a long time...Today, you made me feel almost 40 years younger...You really made me feel so special today...

Sach main Girl friend ?? You really liked it?

I loved it...especially this teddy bear...this is so cute...and she hugs it tight...This mug...I will keep it in my table...Chocolates are my all time favourite...Now, Maan gives a stern look at her...Dont worry beta..I will not consume entire box in one go. I will eat one chocolate each in two days...T-shirt and rubber bands...I can use it when I work out in my secret Gym...

Mazze ki baat yeh hain ki yeh actually Valentines special gift box hain...Did you specifically ask for it?

He nods for a No...I just told that girl that I need a gift for my Girl Friend...

KYA??😲

Haan...you are my girl friend na...that's what I told her... and I didnt tell her I want Valentines day gift...Promise...but then why she gave me such a gift box? Wondering why she suggested giving this gift box to you...

Daadi hits her head...Itne bade ho gaye ho maan...Zara si bi akkal nahin? When you went to this shop...that sales girl would have definetly asked you for whom you are buying this gift and you told her its for your Girl Friend? Woh bi Aaj 14th Feb hain..which is also Valentines day...How on earth you expect her to assume that you are actually buying a gift for your Daadima for her Birthday and this Daadima is also your Girl Friend?? Sach main..such a dumbo you are...

Maan is in his deepest confusion ever with what has happened...and his thoughts gets disturbed when his Daadi holds on his shoulder...Jo bhi ho...I loved the sweet surprise and will cherish this for ever...

Daadi pats on his cheeks...Ab aap jaldi se nahalijiye aur fresh ho jaayiye...I will arrange for the dinner to be served...

Hmm...he moves into his room and immediately heads to take a hot shower...he is all lost with series of inciedents that happened in the flower shop...that girl is really driving him crazy with her simple innocent looks and sweet gestures...How he felt the moment she fell in his arms..he could still feel her lips on his shoulder...Her Eyes...He could see the same reflex of the feelings in her hazel eyes which he possessed for her...She was so happy seeing him just like he did...but all of a sudden she became pale...just then he realised that he has been blaberring "Girl Friend" instead of his Daadima and that too today is Valentines day...OH Ghosh..yeh main ne kya kar diya? He instantly stops the shower nob and comes out of his washroom wiping himself...Is ka matlab...she also truely fell for me like I did without even knowing my name, who I am, what I am doing...a smile touches his face...Moreover, she also helped me on money part..He sighs...Any other girl in her place would have thrown me out of the shop showing her true frustation dipped with jealousyness...but this girl genuinely helped me and told me to pay later...Ghosh...kya kar daala main ne..Did I hurt her by any means?

Now he is really feeling sad to have hurt her unknowingly. I will tell her the truth when I meet her at her shop next time.

___

At Geet-Pinky's home

Geet is walking back to her home..Its just 5 mins walk from the flower shop to Geet's home but today, she is taking much longer time than usual. She is still holding that single rose to her heart...Hey babaji...yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain? Why am I thinking only about that guy? Why? First ever time in my life I met someone who created a positve place in my mind...and I am sure that I will never be able to meet him again or there's no way there's going to be a future for this relationship...then why am I still thinking about this guy?

Geet reaches the door steps of her home...and she gets a call from her papa...

Hello beta..

Papa ...how are you?

All fine here beta...How is your studies going on?

its all going good. Preliminary exams are going to began in another 2-3 weeks. waiting for the time table.

Gr8..Well..Beta...I had to talk something very important with you.

Ji boliye papa. Geet could sence that her papa is going to comeup with the topic with regard to the aliance...and that's it...the time has come where her papa spills the beans...

He spoke to her for some time about khuranas their family and how will she lead a wonderful life when she too will become a part of their family...Overall his discussion with Gaurav..

Papa...they seem to be far far rich than us and too much of a upper crust..

I know you have never liked guys from rich families but believe me...Khuranas are quite different people...they value humans more than money...Palkon pe bitake rakhenge tumhe..

Geet is loosing all her sences...she still has that one rose with her which she is gently twisting and rolling in her hand...she is all lost in that guy...and the next moment she reminds herself that he belongs to someone else..and she closes her eyes and tears wells down her cheeks...and she sobs...

Geet beta please rovo mat...I never intend to build relationships at cost of your precious tears...When Gaurav calls, I will call Gaurav and tell them a NO...

Nahin ...mera woh matlab nahin tha...sorry, I got emotional. Ab aap hi sochiye aur faisla lijiye. She wipes her tears and continues...Mujhe aap ke har faisle par barosa hain...

Thank you...thank you beta...Geet's papa is so delighted...this will take some time as Gaurav is in travelling for some time..will update you on this hmm?

Hmm...Bye Papa..Good Night..

She again looks at that flower...she still wants to retain it..is phool ka kya dosh? Dosh tho meri kismat ki hain...Shayad main bohuth despirate ho gayi thi life main...But not any more

Just then, Aadi-Pinky's bike arives...Pinky runs and hugs Geet...Oye Geet yahan betke kya kar rahi hain?

Woh..I got a call from papa when I was just entering home...

Pinky lifts Geet's chin...kya huva Geet...sab tik hain na?

Haan yaar...

Chall Aadi wanted to say hie to you...and waves bye to Aadi and walks into home

Aadi's family lives in one of the neighboring house. Pinky and Aadi were good friends since their childhood... and it was just a year Back Aadi proposed her and both families accepted their relationship. By this way, Geet and Aadi too became good friends...Geet really admires Aadi's simplicity and his patience level...especially his winning smile even when he is going thro tough situations.

Hey Geet...how are you? you had been to Delhi right? How is uncle and Auntiji?

All fine Aadi...Aur sunao...how was the Valentines day?

He gives a weak smile...it was great Geet. Challo catch you some other time. My family is waiting for me...bye...

Bye Aadi.

Geet could sence something fishy...will check with Pinky on this..

Geet enters into home...hands over the cash and all transactions details for the day to Manchanda uncle...and uncle leaves Geet and Pinky all alone as he know how long Geet and Pinky take when they sit in the dining area...munching food and their non-stop talking...and today, Pinky is even more excited...

Oye Pinky...kya chal raha hain? How was your day today? I am dying to know since morning...

Arre yaar Aaj ka din kitna maza aaya pata hain?

Mmm...hmmm...She is listening and munching her dinner...

Sabse pehle..we went to have breakfast...Aadi took me to my fav restaurant where I get different varieties of parathas... 😛Pinky rolls her eyes recollecting all the events...and from there we left to a place where you get an excellent ghanne (Sugarcane)ka juice...Geet...kya fresh juice tha...main ne 2 glass piya...I will take you there next sunday...you must come with me..😛

Hmm.. dhekhajaayega...now I am very curious what lays ahed so please continue na.

and then we drove for 20 mins and by then the clock stuck one and I was feeling so hungry...I requested Aadi...Lets finish with lunch...You know na, I love Gujarathi Thali...it was so sweet of Aadi..he made sure to take me to a Gujrathi Restaurant...😛

Geet is rolling her eyes thinking how the day went from Aadi's point of view...no wonder he looked so worn out...She is looking at Pinky who is still accompanying Geet during dinner session by munching apple...and talking in between...Geet is now controlling her laugh to the maximum extent...and still more curious to know further on their exciting date...

Fir kya hua Pinky?

Fir..fir...haan...At Guj restaurant they served so many varieties...I spent nearly 2 hours there...next week I will take you there too...😳

PINKY...Geet almost shouts...Aur kya kiya batao...

Woh...Aadi wanted to take me to waterfalls...but to reach there I had to walk down so many steps and it was so steep...woh main ne itna khaliya tha na, I couldnt walk down...and I came back...aur waise bhi...I am so bored of seeing waterfalls regularly. Pinky is still lost in munching fresh apple

Geet hits her own head with her palm...Mera yeh haal hain tho Aadi bechare ka kya haal huva hoga...😆Even though she knows nothing more happened in this romantic valentines day appart from Pinky's continuous Munching. But still hoping on hope that some romance would have happened in last few hours...Hmm...phir kya hua kya kiya??

Hmm...We couldnt go till the falls because it was steep...but we sat for sometime and were able to watch the falls from a distance...

Geet takes a sigh and thinks...challo kuch der keliye hi sahi ...but Pinky and Aadi sat down for a while looking at waterfalls..Aur phir...

Wahan na garma garam channe milthe the...It was so yum you see...

Geet has completely lost it...🤢And I know what happened further?

Kya?

It might be dinner time hain na?

Arre Wah Geet...you are reading my mind like an open book...

Pinky...the book of your mind can be easily read without even opening it.

Pinky is blinking at her without even understanding what Geet is trying to say.

Pinky...what is this yaar? Is this what you were considering a romantic valentine date and you were waiting for this for such a long time? Geet is really getting mad on her now...Bechara Aadi, did you even consider what were his expectations out of this day?

Pinky stopped munching apples in mid way...Nahin Geet...I completely lost on him...I didnt ask him and he didnt tell me...

He didnt ask and you stopped taking his wishes into consideration? Pinky blinks back and Geet continues...Mujhe pata hain Pinky...I know Aadi as a best friend and that's how I know...he loves to watch movies, he loves to go for a long walk along side nature...isliye he was insisting on that waterfall part...If not those waterfalls, you should have given him a chance to hold your hand and have a long walk somewhere in the park or on a loanly road side..or a hill side...

He also loves shopping and he would have loved to take you some where and buy you few things...And I could see clear disappointment in Aadi's face today. Eise ladke kahan milthe hain aaj kal bolo? He did everything that only you wished...

Pinky is in all tears now...Geet...yeh main ne kya kar diya? Apne Excitement mein, main ye bhool gayi ki Aadi kya chahtha hain...Pinky sobs...Geet...I am worried if Aadi will leave me for ever...geet comes and consoles her...

Please calm down Pinky...Aadi eisa kabhi nahin karega...You know each other for more than 10 years and it was last year he proposed you. He is a far good friend of yours before you both got into this relationship hain na? ... Us ne muj se khud kaha hain he will never leave you...

Geet...Please suggest me what to do?

OK...call Aadi and talk to him...you both decide may be go out for one more day...

It might not be possible Geet. He has lot of work to do with the new boss...

Woh tum dono baat karo aur decide karlo...But remember this time you need to give full importance to Aadi...hmm?

Pinky hugs Geet...Thank you Geet...I am so lucky to have a friend like you

Geet responds to the hug equally...

Geet..you didnt tell me how the day went at shop...and you were also sad today when I was just walking into home...kya hua Geet?

Geet tells all events that happened in the day...Including that guy (Maan) who came to buy gift for his girl friend and series of incidents that happened between them...and her talks with her Papa..

I gave positive answer to my Papa..

Pinky is worried for Geet now as she sounds too cold...Oye Geet...you should have taken some time from your papa na?

Kya time pinky? I have realised noting is going to change for me and moreover, I dont want to get despirate for someone to be a part of my life...I think I have crossed that age now..

Geet..yeh kya badi badi baathen kar rahi hain? You are only 20 and like every girl you too have your dreams of ideal partner...

I understand one week back I told you to consider the aliance what your papa has choosen for you and I still suggest the same...but I dont want you to force yourself..

Geet rests her hand on Pinky...Dont worry Pinky I will never ever force myself into any relationship.

Aur ek baat poochoon? Sach sach batao Geet...

Hmm..

Are you falling for that guy who visited our shop late in the evening?

He has a girl friend already

I didn't ask if he has a girlfriend or not? Are you falling for HIM?

She looks away from her and tells NO...

I know my friend very well...I am seeing so many changes in her within a day...and I could see its all because of that stranger...

Haan Pinky...he has all the qualities that I had ever desired..but he has a girl friend..I have no right to think about him what so ever..


PART 3 (A)

I know my friend very well...I am seeing so many changes in her within a day...and I could see its all because of that stranger...

Haan Pinky...he has all the qualities that I had ever desired..but he has a girl friend..I have no right to think about him what so ever..

Par Geet...

Geet cuts her off ...Ab jaldi se Aadi ko phone lagao aur baat karo. Main bohuth thak gayi hoon ...I am going to sleep...Aur haan by the way, remember we have a field tour arranged in our college for tomorrow.. so we need to wake up early so finish your talk and sleep fast...hmm? Good Night Pinky..

Good Night Geet

Even after a Hectic sunday with so much of work she had been assigned with, she had a disturbed sleep. She wakes up and sees the rose which was given to her last evening kept in the side table. She again takes it and gently caresses it.. she is wondering with her own weird feelings. She has to make a move fast as she has a field trip to attend...there's a field trip arranged by the college...today, they are going to visit a Tea Estate.

Next day morning at Khurana Banglaw:

Its 6 AM and Maan has been working out thinking all about that sales girl... her cute and innocent face..her sweet voice...huh...her eyes reflecting equal passion for him...her face going pale when she heard about his Girl Friend...a naughty smile touches his face again

Maan finishes with his shower and breakfast and immediately leaves to meet that sales girl taking this big reason of returning the amount that he owes to that flower shop.

At the flower shop:

He walks into the flower & Gift Shop at around 9:30 AM and despirately looking around for that Sales Girl in every nook and corner and happen to bump on Deepak.

Hello Sir..how may I help you?

Woh...I met a girl yesterday here...

Deepak doesnt like these youngsters flauting into his place with the purpose of flirting and he thinks the same about Maan..

Now he talks a bit sternly..Listen...are you here to buy something in this shop which I shall help you with?

Maan rolls his eyes and not able to get the right words...he again continues asking the same question..

Woh ..I met this girl yesterday late in the evening in this shop..

What do you mean this girl this girl?

See..she is a sales girl here...

Deepak is still not able to understand...it didnt strike him instantly about geet as he has never considered her as a sales girl. She is like his own daughter assisting him with this small business.

Woh..she was wearing a yellow dress...

Now, its confirmed that he's referring to Geet as he remember very well she was the only one wearing yellow dress yesterday.

But she is not sales girl..and he instantly stops to talk about her further in order to avoid giving any further details about her.

Ok...now that I am here, you can talk to me...how I can help you?

But I have to meet her only...

He scans Maan from top to bottom...yeh bandha tho tik hi lagtha hain...and also he sounds like a gentle man...but why is he so much insisting to meet Geet? I cannot give way to any guy meeting her just like that...No no...I am local guardian of Geet and ...If any serious consequenses occur then I am answerable to Geet's parents.

Listen...I have been asking you so many times how I shall help you and you are simply blabbering "That Girl" "That Sales Girl"? This is my shop and I will not permit any nuisance here...do you get it?

Huh...Maan is litterally going mad now..on one end he is not able to see that girl and to make it worse he doesnt even know her name. On other hand I am forced to listen to the nonsence of this guy...How dare he talks to me like this? If he talks to customers like this then how will be his behaviour towards that sales girl? Poor girl.

Listen...I am asking for that Sales Girl as I owe her money?

Ji?

Yes, yesterday evening I purchased a gift item and I didnt have immediate cash...That girl was so kind to tell me to pay as and when possible..that's why I'm here to settle that money today.

Deepak is seriously lost now...we never sell on credit...and if Geet helped someone like this, she would have told me yesterday evening and also the cash and bills were perfectly tallying for the previous day...

Listen gentle man...give me 5 mins.. Let me check yesterday's transactions and come back to you.

Hmm..

Deepak checks and there's no note by Geet, there's no descrepancy of even 1 rupee in the transactions...

What's the amount you owe gentleman?

Its 1000 Rs. Here is the bill...

He rechecks the systems and checks the bill and PAID stamp was already mentioned on the counter part of the bill in shop's box file.

There's nothing like that mentioned here and there's no such note for yesterday...

But that Sales Girl...she knows about it. I owe money to this shop.

Deepak is really getting mad about this guy. Is he trying to play smart by throwing this amount as a token moeny and I will permit him to get friendly with girls working here? CHEE...anything can happen in today's world and I shall not tollerate this. Now, Deepak's tone gets rude..Listen gentleman.. I have clearly told you there's no such pending amount noted for yesterday. Your bill shows that its already been paid...so, please, if you need to buy any more stuff here, I shall help you with otherwise, you shall leave.

Maan was really getting mad angry on Deepak...I came here to pay the money that I owe and look at this Old man...he is behaving so non curtious...that girl was super honest in her job and also she helped me with this money part and this old man is not willing to take that money from me...huh...sach main.. namoone bhare pade hain!! The cherry that topped his anger is he couldnt meet that girl... But He has been very patinet and decided to move out of this place only because of that girl who is working over here...otherwise, he himself dont know what damage he can do to this flower shop if his anger would have triggered further.

Maan Calls Aadi and he sounds so rough and tough...Aadi..I will be in Tea Estate in another 30 minutes. need to check all the files, documents and fix a meeting with staff.

Y...Y...Yes sir...I am already here and arranging for the same.

Maan cuts the call and Aadi looks at his mobile as if he is seeing it for the first time...what happened to sir. Till date, he never raised his voice on me...and today he was sounding as if he was agitated and rude...kya baat ho saktha hain? have to talk to him once he is calm.

At Tea Estate:

This Tea Estate was bought by Gaurav almost 10 years back and there was an innaugaration function organised by the Khuranas and that was when Maan last visited Shimla. Savithri Devi had taken the incharge for this business and she used to visit this estate once every 2-3 months...but oflate she has been facing so many challenges healthwise and has been staying in Shimla for the last one year in order to give full attention to this tea estate whilst avoid frequent travelling between Mumbai to Shimla. Gaurav and Priya have been too busy handling other businesses falling under Khurana Enterprises. That's why she wants to handover this estate responsibility to Maan and he's all here for this purpose.

Maan has just got into the Estate premises and parked his car...On the other hand, he sees college bus making its way into the premises...He walks in and understood from the estate security that there is a field trip organised by this college to train their students with regard to tea estate operations.

Another baseless anger hits his brain and he barges into his room...asking the security guy to send the Estate Manager to his cabin.

Maan walks into his huge cabin on the first floor...which also has a clear access to the ground floor factory operations.

Aadi wishes him...Good Morning Sir..

What so good about this morning Aadi? Tell me one good reason?

S...Sir...whhh hat happened? you really looked tensed today.

Maan doesnt answer him and just that time there's a knock on the door and the estate Manager walks in

Manager Saab...what is this? What are these college students doing here? Do you really value time? I am here and this is my first day and I have important meetings lined up ...and HAH...I have these college crap...

SIR..I am really sorry but please allow me to explain...

Aadi holds Maan's hand and tries to console him. Aadi has also become his good friend as they both belong to same age group and both get well along with each other. Aadi murmurs to him...please calm down...

Maan turns away his face and Aadi continues to talk with the estate manager

Ji Boliye kya baat hain? what is this college trip to our estate all about?

Sir..every year students from 4 different college visit here which is a study tour for them and they make a project report with what they get to see here how a tea estate operates and flow of work...Various departments within a tea estate and so on... They regularly visit between Jan-March and it happens in batches...Savithriji knows about it as she has granted permission to these colleges.

Tik hain...Koi baat nahin...till what time will they be here?

Sir..Max for one hour.

Hmm..please leave and finish attending to the students as soon as possible.

The Estate Manager takes their leave and Aadi rests his hand on maan's shoulder.

Kya baat hain sir? I have never seen you loosing your temper like this...

Maan is still angry with the series of incidents since morning. Moreover, he is so very despirate to meet that sales girl again...

Woh Aadi, Yesterday was my Girl Friend's Birthday

SIR...GIRL FRIEND????Aadi is shocked to here this as he knows Maan doesnt have any Girl Friend...

WOH...Sorry I mean...It was my Daadima's Birthday and right from my childhood I have been adressing her as Girl Friend...

Aadi takes a phew ok..

I didnt remember about her B Day till I landed here and reached the main town of Shimla and all shops were closed apart from this flower shop in the uphill and I happen to meet this sales girl...

Aadi has been listening to all further incidents that happened patiently...Maan tells him all what ever happened between that sales girl and him...till all what happened in the morning...

Aadi has been patiently listening to him and all what he could react is with his typical smile...Hee...Hee... which annoys Maan further...

Aadi, I am telling you as I consider you as my very good friend..

S..Sorry..Woh...Actually, that shop belongs to my Girl Friend's Father.

What??

J...Ji sir...As you know yesterday I was out for the whole day with my Girl Friend...but not sure who is this sales girl you are talking about. Even it didnt strike aadi that he is actually talking about Geet as Geet is not considered as a Sales Girl there. Infact Geet doesnt even come into this topic picture. Now he is really wondering who this girl could be.

I was so despirate to meet this girl this morning and on top of all that there was this old man who was showing ME ...MAAN SINGH KHURANA all attitutes...

Hee..Hee...again Aadi laughs and Maan gives one deadly stare at him

S...Sir...that old man is the owner of the shop. My Girl Friend Pinky's Dad...

What?

Ji Sir...He is very strict person and follows rules of his business...He is a very sweet guy by heart...believe me.

Maan is still not able to come in terms with his first meeting with Deepak and he simply walks away towards the Glass covered wall from where he gets a clear view of the happenings in the ground floor. His eyes opes wide to see the same Sales girl who is one among the college students...she is all dressed in light blue jean with attractive baby pink top clinging to her perfect figure...and she has a long woolen scarf which is of a size of a duppatta and loosely wrapped arround her neck. He is rubbing his eyes to confirm himself...and he calls out for Aadi.

AADI...come here fast...see that sales girl is here...

W...what? Aadi thinks Maan has really gone Mad thinking all the time about that girl and his eyes pops out seeing Geet is the one whom Maan has been referring to...Also Aadi's face lits with joy seeing Pinky standing right next to Geet...

Oh...yeh GEET hain sir.

GEET?

Yes...her name is Geet..

GEET...wow..such a sweet name...Geet ki Maan...no no...Maan ki Geet...he is all lost in her and his silly thougts and a blushy smile touches his perfect M shaped lips. Aadi is getting shock after shock. His boss was all angry sometime back and now his face is glittering with all happiness...

Sir..Both Geet and Pinky are in their Final year of Business Management from St. Martha's College here in Shimla. And Geet is staying here as a Paying Guest at my GF, Pinky's house...Also she works part time at the flower shop which Pinky's dad owns that's how you got to see her.

Maan is listening to aadi obtaining all her details...and he is falling more and more for this girl now...and he is despirate to know more about her.

And Sir..she is working part time not for the sake of money but to give into her flair for learning, and moreover, she loves being inbetween flowers and plants. Her parents live in Delhi and they dont even know that she is doing part time job here. Her father and Deepak uncle are thick friends that's why Deepak uncle is more strict and protective when it comes to Geet.

He is really amazed about her. How she handles the shop floor operations without any attitude and with so much of dedication to her work and so very sincere and serine..and also she is a full time management student.

He holds Aadi's hands ...Aadi..I am...I am in love with this girl...

Today is a day of ALL SHOCKS for Aadi as the last sentance that he heard from Maan has litterally pushed him down...

S...Sir...????

Yes Aadi...I love Geet..and I could see that she too loves me... It was love at first sight for both of us...and this is the first time, I have come across a girl who fell for me and not for my richness and background..and she too coming from a upper middle class family, but still holds simple and kind nature..

I understand you know her personally...please help me...

S...Sir...I will su...rely help you...but one thing to began with...Geet is a girl who doesnt like Rich guys.

KYA?

Haan sir...As per her rich guys dont posess good culture and values...I dont know why she has these thoughts in her mind but she has this opinion bout richie rich guys...LIKE YOU..

Maan gives a stern look at him again..

I am clearing this fact to you...She prefers guys from Middle class or even poor to that matter who even if they lack in finances but will be loyal to the girl whom they love..

Huh...On one hand Maan is Madly falling for this girl now...and on other hand he is worried with her so called imaginations and assumptions about rich guys...

Aadi and Maan work towards some further talking on this and walk towards the ground floor where Geet, Pinky and all other college students were busy invoved in noting down each and every detail on how a tea estate works...its operations and they visit various departments..

Pinky turns back for a sec and jumps with joy seeing Aadi...and she screems...AADI...and runs to him and about to hug him when he gestures her to stop...

Pinky...kya bachpana hain yeh..this is my work place...calm down baby...

Pinky makes a baby face dipped with embarresment while all people were looking at them...

Just then Geet turns to look at Aadi..and shell shocked to see that stranger who walked into her shop previous evening and he is standing right next to Aadi...

She looks away and rubs her eyes in order to confirm ...Why am I seeing him every where? she cutely looks up...babaji..yeh kya ho raha hain mere saat?

She slowly turns to look back where Aadi and Pinky are talking to each other and shockingly confirms herself with that stranger's presence.

They both (Maaneet) happen to look at each other without even a blink of their eye..So very lost and seeking peace of missing eachother since previous evening...Geet's heartbeat raises when Aadi and Maan walks towards her and she shifts her vision on Aadi . Now Pinky comes back to stand along with Geet.

Maan could sence that she is trying her maximum possible to avoid him now..Her eyes looks tired as if she too didnt get enough sleep last night..just like him..

Hey Aadi..how are you?

Im fine Geet...

Hmm..so this is the place you work?

This is just one of the organisation which falls under the Parent company..This entire week I will be here along with my boss..

Geet gives a week smile and gives one look to Maan and slowly turns her face away. where as he is all lost in her..

Pinky is curious to know about his boss now...

Hey Aadi, you were telling me a lot about your boss and you were about to introduce him na? Where is he?

Aadi instantly turns to Maan and continues...He is my...

Ouch Aadi shouts as Maan pinches him on his hand...

Kya hua Aadi? Pinky asks in concern...

Woh I was standing so close to this machine which clears tea leaves and my hand touched it by mistake...

Hmm..Main Keh raha tha ki ... he is my friend Maan...

Geet is busy noting down something or the other but her ears all glued to what Aadi is talking. MAAN...she closes her eyes and tells his name and a smile touches her lips...and she slowly opens her eyes again to look back at him..and seeing his vision all glued only on her...she couldnt help to control the red hue forming on her cheeks and she again looks away. Also she notices all her class mates were gaping at him...

Oh..hie Maan...I am Pinky...She introduces herself with all excitement...

Hie...Maan shakes hand with her..

And she is my friend...Geet...

Hie GEET...he brings his right hand forward gesturing for a shake hand to which she obliges... and he slightly firms his grip on her hand

Hie ...I am Maan

Hie...I am Geet...It was so natural for them to get lost in eachother's eyes whilst their hands locked as they are still not out of their shake hand mode.

Aadi notices it and clears his throat and both (Maneet) instantly snaps out of eye lock

The professor incharge was calling out for all students to make way towards their bus...

Aadi...mujhe chalna chahiye...and did you take boss permission for a leave from 3:00 PM today? Pinky asks curiously

Aadi was about to talk about it to Maan but couldnt as Maan was in such a bad mood..

Maan rests his hand on his shoulder noding for a yes...

H...Haan...Pinky. Be ready. I will pick you direct from college...Aadi holds her hand...and wispers on her ears...BYE AND SEE YOU :)

Geet is feeling happy to see Aadi and Pinky bonding back to normal...

Geet too bids Bye to Aadi...she turns to man and bids him bye weekly and both Pinky and Aadi leave from there.

Maan is again feeling low now...sometime back he was shouting at the estate manager to have allowed this bus to come in today and now he regrets the bus leaving from there so very early.

The rest of the day passed by so slow and boring for Maan inspite of so many things to do. His lips has been chanting only Geet's name since the time he has come to know her name.. He is really lost in his magic world of his first love...he just met her yesterday evening and by today he has reached a condition where he cannot live even a second without her...

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#76

PART 3 (B)

The rest of the day passed by so slow and boring for Maan inspite of so many things to do. His lips has been chanting only Geet's name since the time he has come to know her name.. He is really lost in his magic world of his first love...he just met her yesterday evening and by today he has reached a condition where he cannot live even a second without her...


On the same evening around 5:00 PM he takes his car and makes his way to the flower shop...He slowly walks in and sees that Deepak is still in the cash counter...and Geet is not around...He hides behind one of the shelves where flowers are arranged and just in few minutes he takes a sigh seeing Geet walking in...

Geet beta...I have some important work outside will be back in an hour. You see...kal ka sales ka saara hisab kitab chukana hain..

Uncle ji...I am here so, dont worry...you carry on...

Thanks beta...and deepak pats on her cheeks...

Maan is so very wild seeing this...Why on earth everyone is behind patting her cheeks...huh..Is uncle ki tho main..Morning he was shouting at me in name of discipline and here...how dare he touches my girl with a reason of patting her cheeks..

Geet walks by the shelf where Maan was standing...

He immediately grabs her hand and pulls her to his side...

She is shell shocked and about to screem out and Maan instantly closes her mouth with his palm...CHUP...BILKUL CHUP...he is all lost with the soft feathery touch of her lips on his palm...

Geet's eyes are wide open with shock...her chest is heaving up and down and she is unable to breath as his palm still covering her lips...she gestures him to remove his hand...he gently removes

You...she gulps You here?

You wanted something?

Yes...You...

WHAT?

I mean...I wanted to talk to you...

She just looks back at him without any reaction

Why are you avoiding me when we met in the morning and now?

Sir...its nothing like that...you see, Morning I was with my classmates and now, I am at my work place...that's it...by the way, why are you here? You needed to buy something else for your Girl Friend? and turns away her face

He smirks seeing her all tensed and jealous...All that discussions can be done later...now, answer me...why you permit people to touch your cheeks?

Geet couldnt get what she heard just now...KYA??

Yesterday that customer was patting your cheeks and today...this so called uncle ji...

What? It was just a pat in a sence its a way they bless us..Wait wait...why are you asking all this? and How did you know about that customer patting my cheeks yesterday?

Because I walked in much before you fell on me?

She gives a stern look to him..

He clears his throat and continues...I mean, I was already present in the shop floor much before you got to attend to me...

Huh...I am really loosing it...now please come to the point...what do you want?

I wanted to know why you didnt ask me??

What?

Dont you want to know about my Girl Friend's reaction on receiving the special gift? He is all smirking and she gives a shocking look at him with her mouth open "O"...

Geet gets all wild imaginations about all what she would have done to him...hugged him...kissed him slowly slowly they are off their respective dress... and making their way to the bed...That's so very common in foreign countries and thats why they also include a pack of Con***s in the valentines surprise gifts..She snaps out of her wild wild thoughts..what ever may be, she cant listen all these things from him...she cannot bare it if he talks about what all she did to him...EEH...chee chee babaji

He is enjoying all her shock wave reactions on her face..He is so very lost looking at her...

Oh..so, you have come all the way here to tell me this?

Oohhh her eyes spitting fire... and her cheeks going red with anger..as if she was expecting him to come to meet her and without mentioning about his Girl Friend. Ohh she looks so very cute...he really wants to eat her alive right now...

Ofcourse YES...

She looks up cutely..hey babaji..yeh main kahan phas gayi? I whole heartedly accepted that he has a girlfriend...but yeh kya? Ab us ki GF ne kya kya kiya, woh bhi mujhe sunna padega? She clears her throat...Why should I? She is your Girl Friend... why should I know her reaction? That should be a secret between you and her right? Looks away hiding all her embarresment.

Because I want you to know...

Her mouth again wide open with shock...

Look I am least interested to know about it...

She tries to move from there and he pulls her towards him with such a force that both fell on the floor he fell down first and she hits on his broad chest..He wraps his hand on her waist taking full advantage of the situation..Their lips just a centimeter appart...he looks at her lips..they were naturally pink and feels like making those trembling petals all his right away and never to let it go...She is again lost in his eyes..which were initially gazing back at her and then she saw his vision moving towards her lips...and her cheeks gets beetroot red because of shyness...he is really loving to see all the effects his one look has on her...he sees some hair strands are falling on her eyes blocking his eye lock with her...he gently frees his right hand from her waist and moves towards those hairstrands and tugs them behind her earlobes...she closes her eyes to feel his long fingers partially carressing her cheek and earlobes which increases her heartbeat all of a sudden which was loud enough for him to hear it...she opens her eyes gently into his and the harsh reality strikes her that he belongs to someone else and she immediately gets out of his hold...

Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap? She gets up and adjusts her self...

You were about to fall and I helped you...

And..And why did you push the hairstrands from my face?

Woh ...I was concerned if you had any head injury as you fell on me with a thug you see...

She knots her eyebrows in anger...but her eyes clearly speaks an opposite language.

You still didnt ask me what was my GF's reaction...

I know you wont leave me..ab bol bhi dijiye ki aap ki GF ne kya kya kiya? She looks away with disgust and closes her eyes and mentally blocking her ears not to listen to anything what he talks about his GF...but she is able to hear it even more clerly than normal

Mere Girl friend ne...He comes close to her...and he pushes her to the corner..Mere Saath...He moves further and her heart beats faster than ever...and he comes close to her ears...Kuch Nahin kiya...

She turns to look deep into his eyes...and he moves away from her...

I couldnt meet her yesterday...and that gift is still unopened.

What? Why? What happened??

She had to leave to her home town for some personal reasons..

Actually geet sighs that nothing happened between them...but still feels bad for him as he was so excited to be with his GF...Ooh...that's sad..did she contact you?

He nods for a NO. I got a Message when I was on my way to meet her. She had mentioned there's some emergency and she has to leave and she wont be reachable for a week and she will be back by next monday morning. She ended the message with an apology...

Geet is feeling like jumping away to glory but holding herself back to the maximum..She knows that there's no future with this guy but still her selfishness awakens within her knowing atleast they didnt even meet last evening and she takes a very long sigh...Least she knows that she is under complete observation under Maan's gaze.

But ...she should have called you na and informed you na? OR Maybe she is really in middle of something...Aap ko us ke saath hona chahiye...may be she is in trouble..

I dont have any other contact detail apart from her mobile. But rest assured that she is not in danger...

Geet Sighs and says..I am really sorry to hear this...I understand your entire trip to shimla is spoiled.

Hmm...but I still want to explore this place will you help me?

What? I am sorry...its not possible your girl friend will get upset if she knows about it.. Aadi is your best friend na...you can take his help on this.

Dont worry about my GF, She wouldnt mind...Coming to Aadi is busy with his work...and Apart from Aadi I know only you...

We know each other only since yesterday evening..

But one sec is enough to know a person and I dont know why I feel that you can really help me in this regard...And I found a true friend in you...So, friends? he brings his right hand forward again..to shake hands..

Hmm..friends..and she gives a smile...

Sorry Geet...I know you love me like I do...but we have a thin wall which we have to clear...and for that we need to be good friends first...I am not in a position to propose you and all because of the silly mistake that I commited yesterday...I will confess my true feelings once you start feeling comfortable with me and the first step towards it is this friendship between us.

Geet is not able to decide anything..on one hand she really wants to spend her time with him ...on other hand she is scared of consequences...

See...Please bura mat maanna...I cannot guide you on this...I have my college and this shop work...

You can take time inbetween...I know its not impossible for you

She is in deepest of her thoughts...and with a big fight between her heart and brain, she decides to help him..

OK...

He again shakes hand with her..THANK YOU GEET...So, see you tomorrow...

Hmm.. will call you when I am out of college...

Both of them exchange their contact details.


PART 4

(AUTHOR NOTE: I have never been to Shimla and it still remains my dream destination. But I have written down my personal expereinces of places that I have visited like Ooty, Kodaikanal and Munnar.)

He again shakes hand with her..THANK YOU GEET...So, see you tomorrow...

Hmm.. will call you when I am out of college...

Both of them exchange their contact details.

At Pinky- Geet home on same day:

Pinky returned home at 9:00 PM. Both sit for Dinner session...Today, Pinky was all happy..Geet is sure that Pinky didnt screw her date today

Arre Pinky, curious to know how was your day?

Hmmm...We went out to watch movie in a multiplex..It was so much fun...I had only one full medium bucket of Popcorn and a juice...that's it...The movie got over around 6:00 PM...And then me and Aadi were strolling arround the mall...he got me a nice handbag..its in my room now. Will show it to you later...

Tik hain Tik hain...aur aage batao...

At 7:00 PM we just had some bite in the chat shop..and then we went on a drive and had a mini walk around the market and we shopped small small things...

Aur dinner nahin kiya?

No yaar...I know if I insist on dinner then, it will eat off 2 hours of our precious time...As I promissed myself, I didnt want to trouble Aadi today...Poor guy, he was still insisting for it par main ne mana kardiya...Pinky holds Geet's hand...sach main Geet..Thanks yaar...Today actually I enjoyed more than yesterday...

Woh tho saaf dik raha hain..tumhare chere par...

AAree...you shoud have seen Aadi. He was all happy . Pinky is all excited today.

I am so happy for you both...God bless. Hmm..

Aur tu bata...you too look all happy today...Kya huva?

Nothing like that Pinky...By the way, You remember that stranger I was mentioning you?

Hmm..

Its none other than Maan...Who is incidently Aadi's friend whom he introduced us today...I couldnt tell you that time and later you went out with Aadi..Geet shares further all what happened...and Pinky has been a good listener..

I mean, he is a very nice guy. I dont want to see his trip getting spoilt you see.

Geet..I dont know what to say in this regard but take care and please dont hurt yourself unneccesarilly...Waise woh ladka wake main acha hain...Aadi was also talking positive about him...but only one problem and I dont want to remind you now. Pinky holds her hand and talks further...And so far as you are happy, I am happy my dear.

Geet again smiles and Pinky could easily guess the difference in her smile today it has all new glow added to it..and its very clear that Geet is in love with this guy. But worried what consequenses it will lead her to.

It was time to sleep...Geet still has that red rose which was kept in the window side. Its has started fading but still she carasses it with her soft hands and thinks about all the incidents that happened today...How she fell on him again and their lips were close by a centimeter...She blocks her face with both her hands with shyness...Hey Babaji...why all these incidents are happening in my life? Why my feelings for him is getting stronger minute after minute where in I know very well that he has a girl friend. She takes her mobile and about to press the green button alongside his mobile number and holds herself back..Geet..yeh tu kya kar rahi hain? Tum bil kul paagal ho rahi ho...and she gently hits her mobile on her forehead and smiles at herself...

AT Khurana Bunglaw:

Maan takes his mobile to dial Geet's number...but holds on to himself...He wants to be with her all the time if not atleast hear her voice. He is all lost in his thoughts with all what has been happening in his life in just 2 days...he meets this sales girl and falls for her without even knowing her name. Today he came to know so much about her and again has fallen head over heals for her...GEET...he calls out her name with a blush..Uski aanken...haaye unmein doob jaane ka mann kartha hain...hamesha hamesha keliye...woh bhi kuch kam nahi... she loves me so much and I am pretty sure that she must be thinking only about me and must be despirate to call me and talk to me but holding herself mistaking me to have a real Girl Friend. He closes his eyes and whispers...Believe me..you are the one and only one...and will tell this to you when the right time comes.

Next Day...

Maan had some meetings lined up among the staff and supliers, customers...he somehow managed to keep himself busy and he has been all the while thinking about his time that he is going to spend with Geet and continuously looking at his watch...On the other hand, Geet is also so very excited about the near future happenings. This is the first ever time she couldnt concentrate even a bit during the class hours..Geet is just done with the classes for the day and out of college around 2:30 PM and calls him right awayand could hear a mobile ringing somewhere close by...and she just turns back and finds Maan to stand just behind her...

HIE..

She missed her heartbeat seeing him here so very soon..Oh...why my heart is getting so weak? If this continues like thes, then I am sure to get a Heart Attack. Hey Babaji..Please be with me...I want to live a long life and as I still have so much to explore..She just finishes a quick baby talk with her babaji and immediately composes herself but fails to hide all her sweet excitements from him..

HIE...You here already? I thought you will be waiting for my call and then start moving from your place..

Hmmm...I just couldnt wait any more...

She looks back at him questioningly...

Well..I thought why not come here and wait for you? So that I join you immediately once you are done with the classes. Almost 30-45 mins saved by this and we get more time to spend together I'sit that simple?

she again blinks and goes speechless listening "Spending more time together" and in just 2 days Maan has become an expert in reading each and every expression of hers and smiles within.

She comes out of her little world listening to Maan calling out for her...GEET...Are you there?

HUN..Haan...Please give me 2 minutes and I will come back...

A smile touches his face seeing her shocked reactions for every silly things and on other hand she amuses him with all sweet surprises...He patiently waits for her just to get himself amazed with another creative side of hers as least did he expect her to drive thro and stop in front of him with her Pink Scooty and a helmet covering her head and she looks completely adorable wearing it.

take the back seat...Jaldi

What? Are we going in this? Ironically, Maan has never sat down in a scooty before. Its not that he has not driven bike when he has participated in races...Moreover he has been most comfortable in driving a car...and above all never taken a back seat behind a scooty and that too driven by a girl...But more shocking is what he hears further from Geet...

Any problem?

No..No Geet..I mean..

ap kahen tho Car main challe? Woh bhi Mercedes mein? She giggles...

OMG...how did she ever guess I owe Mercedes?? All question marks written on his face...

HUH...MAAN..that was a JOKE...She remains silent and looks up and prays to her babaji... Inko itna bhi nahi samaj aatha?? Kahan phasadiya mujhe...You see...I wanted to make you feel Ease...Wonder why you are giving such shocking expressions...As if you really owe a mercedes and you have been cought by me...

Woh...yes..I mean..

Oh Maan...challiye na...Deri ho rahi hain...

She senced that he is scared or not confident to sit behind her...You trust me na? with a baby face.

More than myself...he immediately voices it out and she is amused...I mean, the only issue is I have never sat behind ladies scooty..

She smiles at his plight...Ab Jaldi kijiye na...He is in the process of taking his backseat and she still talks...dont worry...See...the place I am going to take you, you can reach there by bike, bicycle AND if you come there by an Auto, Car or bus, The vehicle has to be parked very far away and you need to walk for atleast 5 miles...So..Challen?

Hmm...He now takes the back seat quitely and she hands over a helmet to him...

The drive was quite smooth...He was initially worried about her driving skills but slowly started feeling comfortable. The drive was quite apart from her ensuring every now and then if he was fine and ok.

Where are we going Geet?

Hmm...Its a suspence...But you will surely love the place.

I am already loving it...he tells this very huskyly coming close to her ears and she feels ticklish..

What?

I mean...I really began to love Shimla as a whole.

But you will fall madly in love with this place which I am going to take you.

They are getting out of town and moving towards remote down hill area...where the road gets narrow and steep with few bump aheads which doesnt give any advance notice. There's one such bump which Geet didnt notice and when her vehicle passed thro it, it happen to shake a lot and Maan accidently fell on Geet's back and wraps her waist in order to support himself...Geet's heartbeat raises with his act...eventhough he is not done it intentionally, she shivers with his touch on her thin waist. whereas, he is thanking his stars and thoroughly enjoying this scooty drive now.

You see, driving on hills is not considered easy because of these bumps and ups and downs...You can hold on to my shoulders to get a better balance..and he smiles at her innocence and immediately listens to her and holds on her shoulder with a firm grip as if he was despirately wanting her permission and again Geet finds strange tickle when his hands with long fingers gives a firm grip on her shoulder...

They are nearing the place now and it looks simply marvelous...Its somewhere between high hills and the plains..its surrounded with full of mountains and small small water falls here and there and the clouds were thick and just inches right above their head..its just 3:00 PM but no trace of sun light..it appears as if its late in the evening..

Maan...this place is always like this...formed with thick clouds above you and no trace of sunlight what so ever.. but yet bright enough to enjoy the surrounding. Isnt it magical? He was so lost in this place infact it was so very peaceful and calm.

You know there's one more thing very special about this place?

He just looks back at her as he is really lost in this place and her...Hmm...

The tea which is served here...She points at a small hut occupied by a chai wala...and that chai wala is also over whelmed looking at Geet...

Kaka, kaise hain aap..

Aap kaise hain bitiya? Bohuth din ho gaye aap ko yahan dekhkar..

Woh haan main Dilli gayi huvi thi na isliye...uske baad college aur padayi...waqt hi nahin mila.

Please jald se jald 2 garma garam chai banadijiye..

2 min main chai tayyar ho jayega bitiya

Maan has been listening to their non stop talking...how she interacts with all people around her..and how she enjoys tiny miny things in life..

MAAN...he snaps out of his thoughts when he hears her call...take your tea. Both take their respective tea served in disposable clay mug and both walk slowy to capture the surrounding places...

You had been to Delhi recently?

Haan...My parents are there na? I had off for a week and that's when I decided to meet them.

But why are you staying away from them?

She smiles at his question...well my parents wanted to give me not only the best of the education...but also make me more disciplinned, independent, taking my own decisions, doing my things by myself..and being only daughter I was extreemly pampered and this will effect me in a long run and when they enquired within their social network, majority of them had suggested a boarding school which is primarilly located in a hill station. Initially, I was missing my parents too. But slowly slowly got adapted to this place to the level that I decided to continue with my highter education here itself. My parents agreed mainly because Pinky's family is here..I love to be in a place which is close to nature and far far away from the city life

Maan has been so much lost in her talks...its 2 days past since he first met her and he got to know so much about her as if he has been knowing about each other for a very long time. They keep walking with slow steps sipping their tea and looking at he surroundings..

What about you Maan?

Well..I have been living in Mumbai with my parents and I have a younger brother..

Oh..you have a younger brother? Must be nice to have one..She tells this as she misses to have a sibling.

Yes...but he is direct opposite to me...very mischievious...

Hmm..I guess that's how the younger brother/sisters are and so nice to have them around and them being mischievious adds more spice to it. She smiles thinking the wonderful time with her cousins Rajji and Titto who are much younger to her and they are so very mischievious

And what about your education?

Even I have studied in boarding school in Panchgani...

Panchgani?

Yes, Panchgani...its located just about 4-5 hours of drive from Mumbai city..Amazing place. Its not located in high altitude like Shimla but still its nature's own blessing. like you said, very very far away from the city hush bush. But never came across a place like this one in shimla.

She has such a broad smile as he acknowleges that he loves this place and continues to listen to him simultaniously.

And I shifted to mumbai to continue with my further education. Me too specialized in Business Management

Oh wow...that's interesting. She is all excited that there are so many similarities between them..even he was going to a boarding school and then Business Management...

We have to move I think as its getting late...

Hmm ofcourse we are leaving from here but not now...and giggles...

He is so deligted with her giggles...and a smile touches his face...but curious to know how and why...

What? But why? I mean, you have to go back the shop right?

I requested Pinky to take incharge...you see I had handled the shop all alone for 2 days..so she happilly agreed. Hence today, I AM FREE FOR THE REST OF THE DAY...she screems with All excitement covering both her hands around her mouth and it was echoying due to isolation.

Oops...Dheere GEET..I guess entire Shimla has heard you.

She pats on his hand making a baby face

Her excitement is even more exciting for him as it proves that she is equally in love with him. what else he can ask for...This girl will really make me mad she doesnt fail to surprise me...Anyways, I was all set to visit her flowershop today if she was getting back there to work...and that way all the time around her atleast during evenings..only issue is that Bald old man.

Here, roads are really small that only one vehicle can pass or two people can walk freely. There was a two wheeler which passed too close to them..she instantly hold his hand to support herself and he too holds her hand to further support her...He got so lost with her hold ...and so very eager to continue walking like this.. but taken back with what he just heard from her...

S..Sorry..that vehicle passed so close to me...that's why...She really wishes to hold on to him like this for ever but she stops herself thinking about his GF...On the other hand, he is not atall liking it to see her feeling guilty.

GEET...please dont feel sorry...you can hold me..and I have absolutely no problem..

But..

GEET..I have no problem...especially when its such given situation...Am I clear?

She nods for a Yes. She continues to hold his hand. Its the most wonderful thing to hold on to each other and walk like this...As if their long time sweet dreams are comming true for both of them. Tears wells in her eyes without her own knowledge and she instantly wipes it hiding from him...But he did notice it...Oh...she is so very emotional like Aadi had told me. I wish I could tell her right away but the right time hasnt come. I will convery my feelings and also confess reality about my background. He strengthens his grip on her hand to make her feel comfortable. They stroll around the place for about an hour and Maan ensured he doesnt leave the hold of her hand even when she tried to pull away a couple of times as she was hit remembering about his GF...but still he won over this situation and never let her go of him at any cost...It was something Geet has been longing for and she is cherishing every moment with him...she takes these sweet memories imprinting it to her heart.

Next day same schedule follows where Maan visits her college at a specified time... Geet takes him to a place which is just a short drive from her home. The rain water that flows from up hill making its way towards the plains...during this process it passes thro many places of the hills in form of mini waterfalls. One such mini waterfalls flows down the small hill which is very close to Geet-Pinky's home..about 20 mins drive..the water that flows here is shallow i.e maximum it reaches to the level of your feet.. luckily, not too many people come here as most of the crowd are attracted towards the huge waterfalls in the surrounding hills.

(Authour Note: These kind of waterfalls and surroundings were a blessing when I visit Munnar. I am not able to pen it down with right words and sentances...but have tried to the maximum possible.)

As the water flows down to this place where Geet has got Maan, the water streams down to move at a slow pace and at a very shallow level where you can sit on the rocks around and relax by soaking your feet into the water. The water is pure, chill and so very soothing when you come in contact to it...The only thing that you need to be carefull is there are lot of small and large rocks around and most of them are quite slippery when you keep the feet on them and if you fall, you really get hurt badly.

Maneet sitting down here on one of the rocks and their feet let loose to play in the water that's flowing at a reasonably shallow pace.

GEET...you are really surprising me with these amazing places here...She is also excited like a kid and glad to learn that he is a nature lover just like herself. Maan is now bold enough to hold her hand without caring for her reaction or action...she looks back at him with her trademark shock look but he looks away for sometime as if he is admiring the nature around and he smiles with in...and no way going to leave his hold on her hand.

They sit down for hours like this. Just remaining quite enjoying the silence and sweet nothings..with very occational chatting and playfully splashing water on eachother. by now, even she feels pretty comfortable being with him and at one point she just rest her head on his shoulder holding on to his strong arms...she finds the peace of mind that she was despirately wanting in her life.. She has visited this place so many times and she always dreamt of speding special moments with a very special person and a smile touches her face seeing that silly wish coming into reality...without her own knowledge she is slowly driven to a short nap which she usually takes during the afternoon time and not able to get the required nap yesterday and today and her tiredness gave in to her eyes

GEET ...he gently calls out for her as she is too quite and when there's no answer, he bends down a little to look at her to find she is sleeping peacefully. Deep in her sleep all her imaginations are taking a scary shape...she hears his very sweet voice making a strange request...She sees him and a reasonably fat girl standing a little far from him "GEET..I DONT NEED YOU ANY MORE...YOU SEE MY GIRLFRIEND HAS COME BACK" and walks away conjoining his hands with his girl friend's hand and she (Geet) is left all alone...she closes her eyes and tears start flowing down her cheeks..she instantly snaps out of her sleep and looks at Maan and looks around for his Girl Friend..

(Aurthor Note: Believe me...this bad dream is a harsh reality of one of my close friend... but somehow moved on in her life. just remembered her at this point of time)

She gets restless and she bends down and splashes water on her face continuously for 4-5 times and breathes heavily and lost in her own world

Maan cups her face...Geet...what happened? Are you OK?

She closes her eyes to feel his hard palm on her soft cheeks...he is lost in the feel too and he is simply lost in those hazel eyes which many a times lies to him. Haan...I ...I had a bad dream...I mean...a dream...she looks away from him and closes her eyes and she could still hear his harsh words which he tells her in her dreams but soon she will hear it in reality and has to be prepared for it

Woh..Mujhe chalna chahiye...I have to go to shop today. She turns to leave and he holds her hand.. Geet please..take a day off today too..

Maan..yesterday I took a day off.. I have to go today.

He knows very well that she is not an employee there but working here just out of her own interest and if she wants to take a week off also, she can still takeit ...but he is not voicing it out.

Mere liye, aaj ek aur din...Please!! He litterally pleads her

Even though she too is willing to spend more time with him but after such a dream she is determined to get back to work today.

Maan Anyways, we will meet tomorrow again same timing..

Tik hain Geet...lets leave...but one thing, I want to come over here again tomorrow..I really love this place.

She smiles at him...that's the wonder of this place. you never get enough out it and that's the magic it spells on you.

And above all spending time with the person you love isn't it?? with a naughty smile and ofcouse inviting a stare from her...Oops even in the form of stare...but love it when she looks at me... Maan, you are an ISO certified Paagal now...have litterally stopped to think before talking and on top of that you are smiling?

Sahi kaha aapne...She admits and looks away...it but in a different sense maybe he is planning to bring his GF here once she comes back. She looks up making a cute baby face...hey babaji, you are so mean in granting my wish of spending my time with someone special but LIKE THIS?? Huh...Ab challen?

YES...but promise me...

hmm..

We will come here daily...

She nods for a YES...ab tho pakka confirmed hain...he is going to bring his GF here for the rest of his life.

He gets dropped at the near by market as she heads towards her home and then to shop.He smirks within thinking...Jaao Geet...I promise to be there before you @ at the flower shop later.

At Shop:

Pinky is all strugling to arrange the flower baskets which usually Geet does. She takes a very long sigh seeing Geet walking in...Oye Geet..Thanks to your babaji that you are here today. Daddy is also out and Woh dekho kitne saare foreign customers bhi aaye huye hain

Geet pulls the Red Roses and the basket which Pinky was struggling to arrange. Arre chill na. Now, I am here so, dont worry. Geet couldnt help pinching Pinky's cheeks...

Ouch...Kya baat hain Geet? All Happy Shappy these days??

Hmm..nothing like that ...with a red hue on her face and She is lost in her own world whilst arranging few flower baskets of different sizes filling them with red roses..I was with him till some time ago and miss him already...hey babaji what's happening to me?

Oye hoye...your cheeks are getting red hot, even more brighter red than the roses you are arranging...

Geet's mouth is wide open ...Chup ho ja Pinky, eisa kuch nahin Re...

They both keep talking and talking whilst doing their work without even realising Someone has made a secret entry into the shop and have been abserving them from far...Geet..As promised, I am here...he could see from a distance that both girls are continuously chatting and working and he could sence they are teasing eachother and Geet cheeks are turning all red and a smile touches his lips...After sometime, Geet is attending to those Foreign customers...

Excuse me.. can you help us with some rare flower seeds ?

Sure sir...if you could tell me where will the seeds to be sowed...in hills, plains, sunny, winter places? You see accordingly I can suggest you the seeds.

Maan thinks...Only this girl can think different and ask such questions huh..

Well, we come from island covered with sea and its warm and sunny thro out the year...

OK...I have few flower seeds to suggest...wait let me bring it...

She gets into the nearby room where the special seeds are kept.. and her hand is been pulled by someone and she hit on his broad chest and resting her soft palm there...She instantly knows who it could be ...is it a reality or its a dream? She slowly looks up into his eyes and both their vision captive on each other as if their eyes dont want to see anything else for their entire life...Geet snaps away from him after listening to the customer calling out for her again...

Maan...Aap yahan? She sees the customers have gathered outside this room and She hurriedly takes the seeds packs with her shivering hands and tries to rush out and he again pulls her..Maan..those foreign customers are waiting for these seeds...let me attend to them. He still has his hold on her arms behaves as if he is deaf and not able to listen to her. She is wigling to get away from him..MAAN PLEASE...she pleads to him and he leaves her hand slowly...and she rushes out giving him a look filled with angry pout which again ads to his admiration towards her.

Geet attends to the customers and they are so overwhelmed with the rare seeds collections of this flower shop. You are having amazing collections and you are doing a great Job...one of the customer praise Geet and about to pat on her cheeks but Geet moves away thinking about what Maan questioned her during his previous visit and the cute nok Jhonk that followed...On the other side, Maan was about to come out and punch on this customer but withheld himself when Geet walked back inviting a smirk on maan's face...

Pinky does with the billing and cash for those customers and Geet moves to the place where she bumped on Maan a while ago...she looks out for him and he hides from her purposefully enjoying the tension written on her face as she is unable to find him now.

Was it a dream or hallicunation? She looks up cutely...hey babaji, you have decided that I will get to witness all dreams of my life time in one day? Huh..I am sure that was a dream..She looks up angryily now...Yeh kya baat huyi babaji? First torture me and then keep quite as if nothing happened...that's the rule you follow...hain na Babaji?? She turns around and once again bumps on Maan who was standing right behind her and about to scream when he seals her soft lips with his palm... and releases her slowly.

Yeah kya kar rahe hain maan?

You refused to take a day off today...he looks around the flower shop and continues because of your job...Is liye, main yahan aagaya...and winks..

But..but..huh..

Dont take so much difficulty in framing questions which alreay has answers...

What??

I know very well that you were missing me already..that's why I am here

Par...she turns away from him..eisa kuch nahin hain...

She talks to him further looking down..Please aap yahan se jaayiye na...I am worried if Pinky gets to see you here.

So What? I am not at all worried...about your friend Pinky nor her dad..

Pinky finishes invoicing for the foreign customers and she calls out for Geet but there's no answer...Geet...where are you? Pinky gets tensed and takes another apple and starts munching whilst looking around for Geet and her mouth wide open seeing Geet and Maan in that room and cought them between cute arguments. But Pinky is reacting as if she is the one who has been cought and Geet is going all pink and red being cought by Pinky..

Woh..Woh..Pinky...He He...Geet is not finding right words to phrase and Pinky is still in state of shock seeing Maan here and now Maan's turn to show his reaction and ofcourse he is so very cool...

Pinky, Do you have any problem if I come here daily to meet your friend?

Pinky is in a state of shock..she cutely nods for YES without realising and then immediately nods for a NO.

After shop hours Pinky takes care of the shop closing procedures while Maan and Geet take a short walk till they are near Geet's home...Maan instantly holds her palm once they were out of the shop and she gives a surprised look at him...you see, I am not used to walking in these muddy road..

She responds positively to his hold and strenghtens her grip...You are right...until and unless you have lived here for a long time and you have continuously walked on these roads, it wont be easy...both look at each other and smile...

Both walk like this holding each other's hands...everything looks perfect...their hold, their sweet nothings occationally looking at each other and stealing glances...and their silence communicates much more than their talkings...But the realisation strikes her like a thunder and she snaps away and he looks back at her...Woh...my home is just there and if uncle ji sees us we will get into unnecessary trouble...Is uncleji ki tho main...but he is not convinced uncleji to be the reason...you please carry on. Will meet tomorrow after college hmm?? and she smiles aur haan...please dont walk back as the road is muddy...she points him another road ...this road is far better and it takes you to the market..and you get taxi there...so, take care...bye and she is about toleave when he pulls her almost for a hug putting her into sweet shock and he cups her face gently...He still has so much to talk but either end up in being silent or running short of words...I just called to say...GOOD NIGHT?

She takes a sigh...GOOD NIGHT... and she almost runs towards her home without considering road conditions...and when she reaches home she turns to look at him and she immediately steal her glance and zooms into her home..

Huh..yeh ladki..khud tho paagal hain hi aur main bhi din bhar din paagal ban raha hoon..

At Khurana Banglaw:

The dinner has been served...

Daadi has been closely watching her grandson who is still playing with the bowl and a spoon over the soup that was served 15 mins ago. He is in serious thoughts...and momentarilly smiling at the good times he has been spending with Geet..

Maan...Aap ka soup ekdham tanda ho gaya...There's no reaction from him

MAAN...She shouts loudly now...and he is out of his world instantly...Kya Baat hain beta?

Woh..kuch nahin Girl Friend (Daadi)...I am not hungry now. Will eat later...He was about to leave and Daadi holds her hand..

Beta...you want me to have dinner all alone? I know this is the time you have your dinner...Please thoda tho khalijiye na..

Hmm..

He starts with Hot soup and Daadi smiles at him ...and she surprises him with her question..

Aur batao beta Kya chalraha hain? Aapki woh Flower basket kaisi hain?

Maan instantly chocks the soup he has just consumed...

Kya?? Mera Matlab what Flower Basket?? Who??

Daadi is not able to control her laugh...wohi...woh..Flower shop wali sales girl.

Woh woh...he is cought red handed and is not able to face his Girl Friend (Daadi)..how do you know?

Daadi holds his hand..hamen sab pata hain...I am not only your Girl Friend...I am your DAADIMA...Now she pulls his ears...Samjhe??

Ouch...

She giggles...She was the one who selected that gift from me right??

He looks down and nods for a Yes..

Thanks God someone is comming to take your Girl Friend's place...

I already told you...you are my First Girl Friend..and that's it...

Huh...I had enough of arghyuing with you...Let your flower basket come here and we three will sort out this issue...and she winks at Maan and he blush within and not able to face Daadima's teasing looks...Tho kab milvarahe ho apni Flower Basket se?

Yeh kya? Why are you calling her Flower Basket? Her name is Geet

Arre beta...when I can know so many things happening behind my back, wont I know her name?

But I will call her Flower Basket...She pulls his cheeks...a basket that is not only filled with Flowers but lot of happiness all stored for my Sweet Grandson...She cups his face with lot of admiration...

Acha..ek baat batao...On that day you had blabbered to her that you were buying gift for your GF? Did you tell her the actual truth?

He nods for a no...

MAAN...yeh kya? Why are you not telling her the truth?

Woh...there's a small issue here...she doesnt like rich guys and she is mistaken me to be a middle class person...That's the reason I am first trying to take her completely into my confidence and then tell her both truths in one go...

Daadima is worried now and rests her hand on his shoulder...Maan beta, please dont take it light...when you are in love, its like playing with fire...one wrong move or hiding things unnecessarily will really burn you...you need to be very careful.

He holds her hand...Dont worry about this my Girl Friend...Now the time is nearing and I will confess to her. and hugs her instantly.

I trust my grandson.. But Geet ko aur andhere main mat rakho beta..

Hmm..I promise I will daadi..

Another few days pass and Maaneet continue to meet at their favourate spot, water falls. and later Geet goes to the flower shop and Maan follows her later. Even Pinky has got used to him being in the shop and never disturbs Maaneet. The following Saturday...its a usual day and Maneet spend their time at the waterfalls...

Geet..Geet...stop splashing water like this...

Oh Maan..what's wrong with you? Dont be a spoilt sport...

Me and spoilt sport?? Ruk jao...now its my turn...

He starts splashing water on her rashly but playfully and both of them are completely drenched in water now...He He...Now, you are a good boy...

So you mean I was a bad boy till now..

Arre nahin..I mean...He starts chases her and she runs thro the shallow water towards the spot where the water falls...

She turns to look back at him whilst running within that place and about to fall down due to slippery rocks as its close to the water fall...and he reaches her on time and holds her by her waist..and she instantly hugs him to support herself...The water is now directly falling on both of them.. Their hearts racing against each other...his one hand slowly runs thro her back and the other hand rests on her head and their eyes remains closed and so lost in that moment holding themselves so very close to each other inhaling eachother's sweet fragrance...She getting to feel his strong body and he getting to feel her petite one..She slowly opens her eyes and she is all lost looking at him ...Their lips too very close. He pushes her hairstrands which are falling on her face and tucks them on her ear lobes and she blinks on the ticklish feeling...He gently cups her face and place a kiss on her forehead and she is heaving heavily like ever before...He kisses on both her cheeks one after another slowly and gently and he looks at her pink trembling lips and he couldnt holdon to himself and he sealed the tiny gap between their lips. A current passes thro them and she holds on to his shoulder while he strenthens his grip on her waist..Their hearts thudding against each other..She too slowly started responding to his kiss and thieir kiss turns to be more intensified and passionate...They break away from it and maan kisses her all over her face...I love you...I love you Geet...I love you so much..

She was all lost in her own world and she slowly opens her eyes listening to his confession but what about his girlfriend? She instantly pushes him away...and he is taken back..

Geet...he again wants to take her into his embrace..but she moves back noding for a NO

Nahin...Nahin...yeh galat hain...she is feeling guilty now... She turns away from him...I am sorry...I am sorry...

He again moves to her...and cups her face as he is unable to see her teary eyes..GEET...what are you saying? Why Sorry? I said...I LOVE YOU...

She pushes him away Yeh jhoot hain Maan...Shayad aap bhool rahe hain...aap ki girl friend hain...

Meri koi Girl friend nahin hain samjhi tum...I Love you and...

She stops him instantly...if you dont have a girl friend then whom did you buy that gift for? Next day you told me she is out of town...and now you are saying there's no Girl Friend in the first place...Please stop it Maan...she starts walking away from him

Geet...I wanted to tell you...

I dont want to listen to anything...you are a big liar...

GEET...Please meri baat suno...

Dont meet me again...No...Never...and she runs from that place...

GEEET...

She doesnt stop...He kneels down where he has been standing unable to decide what to do next...The evening is getting into its darker shade and he tries calling her on her mobile and its switched off...He immediately calls Aadi on his mobile and Aadi comes to the place where Maan is there...

S..Sir...What happened?

Woh Geet has mistaken me now...he tells him all what happened..

S..Sir...nothing to worry...I will come with you...But sorry sir you have to come with me on my bike challega?

Maan smiles at him...sure Aadi...for these many days I have been taking a backseat on Geet's scooty.

Aadi-Maan reach Geet-Pinky's home. Pinky...where's Geet?

Her papa had asked her to reach Delhi by tomorrow morning. He had sent driver to pick her up.

Maan is not able to believe what he has heard...What? But why? Is all fine in her family.

She didnt tell me anything...yes, all fine with her family...but haan her papa was interested in an aliance for Geet..may be Geet has been called related to that.

Maan is rolling his eyes...NO...eisa nahin ho saktha...I will leave to Delhi right away.

Pinky, I am not able to reach Geet on her mobile. Can you give me her Delhi Address?

Woh Address tho Papa ke pass hain. He is out of shimla and will be back by tomorrow morning..you see the weather is bad and the mobile signals are very poor. I will update you as and when I will reach him

Pinky, please help me on this...In meantime, I will leave to Delhi. he turns to Aadi...Aadi..my car parked Market parking area. Please drop me there. I have to reach home and leave to Delhi right away...

Sir..Dont worry...I will drop you and will message you Geet's adress as and when I get it.

At..Khurana Banglaw:

Maan zooms into his banglaw without even noticing his Daadima is sitting at sofa and has been eagerly waiting for him..

Maan bete...

Hey Girlfriend..I have to leave to Delhi right away...He is not willing to give her any tension telling all what happened between him and Geet...

Oh thanks god that Gaurav was able to reach you...you see I have been trying to reach you on your mobile and not able to get thro the signal.

Kya...yeh aap kya bol rahi hain? Papa (Gaurav) had called you

Wohi..Maan...Gaurav called me on landline and informed me that He (Gaurav) and Priya are leaving to Delhi right away and also he (Gaurav) informed that both of us should leave to Delhi right away. We all four will meet at Khurana Manscion at Delhi.

But why are we called there? sab tik tho hain na?

I dont know anything beta...Gaurav said its a surprise...We have to leave right now...pack your things we are already late...Shambu Kaka has made all arrangements with the car.

Par Daadi...

Beta..there's absolutely no time...we have to patiently wait till we meet your dad.

Maan is really helpless now...Oneway he is glad that he has been asked to come over to Delhi as Geet is also there. All he will be waiting for is a message from Aadi with regard to Geet's address.

next part - click here

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Sanju 😈

she is totally devil but ya i have to confess, sometime she become sweet too..😲. when she become sweet , it's mean surely she want something from me😆

she is second person know about this event but we not take her in this event this time at first place because her schedule is hectic and we don't want her disturb, but in mid table turned and i make her enter ...
byi kaam dosti se bda toh nhi ho sakta hai😉
smjhti nhi hai ye 😆

After reading surely she going angry on me, but what i do i love her anger too, without our fight when our day not completed, then how a thread get complete...😉😆

jokes apart

she did amazing work , of-course i push her for doing work...so, indirectly all credit goes to me 😃


Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
Fantasy-ka-Love thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#78
This is maaneetfavo ..







First thanks and then complain..😆😆😆


Thanks ..😳😳😳


I don't know u deeply but I know u little bit . You r such a lovable, kind & cute person .when I first chat with u 🤔, hmm yeah I remembered in GHSP celebration thread what is it name? .. after we chat little bit some time not much deeply . whenever I chat with u , you replied sweetly . before I don't know , I work with u in farewell party thread, preet , u easily accept me to ur team..thanks preet .🤗🤗🤗..congrats dear ..😳😳😳







Now complain turn 😈

We miss u Preet .. come back soon otherwise I will eat ur party food alone .. come soon .. love u preet ❤️ and we happy for ur marriage 😃😃😃..












Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 7 years ago
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#79

That's not mean party end here...

abhi toh bhut kuch baki hai friends😉

priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Last VM on our maaneet 😉

Sanju : aakhri jarur hai
priya : par bs event pe
Kalpi : kaha hum maaneetian rukne wale hai 😉

please click here - Vimeo
Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 43~28.07.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Dia_Kapoor

9 months ago

The Wish- a Maaneet fanfic; continued.

I’ll be honest, I don’t remember what the original plot was, but it’s gonna be what it’s gonna be. I’ll try to continue it from khwaishfan. She...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

1 years ago

Maaneet FF- Love Echoes Beyond Dimensions -Chapter 2 Pg 10 Jun 25

Dear All, No, no no... No idea of starting it in near future. Just wanted to book this title as I have an overall idea of the story. These days...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

12 years ago

Richa's Collections on Maaneet Check my post on page 38

HI FRIENDS, Welcome to my world of MAANEET MY COMPLETE COLLECTION :- MY RUTHLESS SAVIOUR IN LOVE WITH STRANGER LUST FOR REVENGE 2 DESTINY PLAY 2...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".