Prompt - A story like this !!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

The current track has it's own pros and cons. The biggest and probably the only con for me is Juhi and her weird act in the name of majboori.

Any which ways, I had this stupid random thought that crossed my mind. {Most of my thoughts are random when it comes to write-ups, I am crazy like that.} And I so wish to read something on those lines. Unsure, if something of sorts is already up on the forum. Apologies, if it already is. I would like the link though. The idea is quite vague and can be molded as per the writer's choice. All I wish is, to READ something Juhi-free and a bit of jealous Neil. A little more insecure and pumped up with determination to make Avni his.

Vidyut is Avni's boyfriend/fiance (whatever you plan on making him) while Neil is hell bent on seducing Avni.

Neil's advances leave a trail of messed up thoughts in her mind. Leaving her confused and way too engrossed in her own world of thoughts. She doesn't even notice the moves Vidyut makes.

I just wanted to get this out.

Edited by -shenz- - 8 years ago

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lena

@lenageorge

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow gr8 concept😃

Me too would love to see a jealous neil

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lenageorge
Wow gr8 concept😃
Me too would love to see a jealous neil

More than jealous I want him to be the one seducing Avni, maybe when Vidyut's not around. Grabbing her and pushing her aside to one of the dark corners and doing the deed !! 😉 I meant the deed of seducing 😛😃

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

More than jealous I want him to be the one seducing Avni, maybe when Vidyut's not around. Grabbing her and pushing her aside to one of the dark corners and doing the deed !! 😉 I meant the deed of seducing 😛😃

Dear u r a writer ryt?y can't u write an FF/SS/OS/RS , something on Avneil.Forum has got less writers

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lenageorge

Dear u r a writer ryt?y can't u write an FF/SS/OS/RS , something on Avneil.Forum has got less writers

To be honest, I am not a writer. Yes, I do jot down a lot of random stuffs but nit a writer. I believe writers are much more polished and efficient; and I am still not there.

Other than that I am quite lazy when it comes to jotting down these stories. Had I not been that lazy, I would have already written this one out.

I can surely plan on jotting down something for this beautiful couple but when would that happen is a big question mark. Though people would have to be sure they can take random and bizarre concepts as fiction reads. Sorry to disappoint. But I am still looking out for someone to write this piece

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Neethu12

@Neethu12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear writer, I agree with everyone's wishes to what to write. But I would like something like this after Neil left avni at the alter and she decides to leave but instead ended up in a accident which caused her memory loss and then treating Neil as stranger and he trying to win back her and bing bavk her memories. And then avni brings some random guy home and ontroduce him to the whole family and neil as her botfriend and then get to see a possessive and jelous neil. Hiw many of u guys agree wuth my suggetion?

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Neethu12
Dear writer, I agree with everyone's wishes to what to write. But I would like something like this after Neil left avni at the alter and she decides to leave but instead ended up in a accident which caused her memory loss and then treating Neil as stranger and he trying to win back her and bing bavk her memories. And then avni brings some random guy home and ontroduce him to the whole family and neil as her botfriend and then get to see a possessive and jelous neil. Hiw many of u guys agree wuth my suggetion?

Well, That's exactly my take. The writer is free to mend the story in a way they wish to take it forward. I just want a persuasive Neil who is adamant on getting what he wants. And this time it's Avni. I wish to reqd something on those lines. A story where the writer can explore with various layers to Neil's character.

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