Predestined!#T3!*TEASER @144[CH 43,CH44@pg 99,127]21st Nov - Page 94

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom


So lag gayi apne kaam pe hai na😆😉


Aur nai 2 kia
Chorne nai wali hu me
Kal tak pakka ek teaser nikalwa k rahungi 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: solaceMG


Aur nai 2 kia
Chorne nai wali hu me
Kal tak pakka ek teaser nikalwa k rahungi 😆

😡🤢🤣
Kisi bhi Maan ke bare mein bol beta but not my PD Maan and AE Maan!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
agai ipti agai
Teaser dedo plz
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SimranD

Loving you work! Can I have password please.

Hello sweetie
please read the note at page 99
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida


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<font color="#009999">Kisi bhi Maan ke bare mein bol beta but not my PD Maan and AE Maan!!!</font>


Mtlab ye dono maan me jhol hai
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: solaceMG


Mtlab ye dono maan me jhol hai

Aisa kuch nahin hain!! 😆
These two are my Favorites that's it! 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Kya update tha just loved it but yeh sab kya Ho gayea geet kis ko keh rahi thi that she love dev and to get him back she can do anything waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update...
Maaneet so happy...
what happen?
why suddenly Maan misunderstood Geet?
Where he go and who he meet?
I hope Maan will listen to Geet once...
Dont separate Maaneet...
waill waiting for next update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
TEASER~~~~~~~




"Aap...Aap aisa soch bhi kaise saktey hain Maan...How!!! Itni asani se keh diya aapne ye sab mujhe??
I AM NOT PREGNANT...Aap abhi chaliye hospital mere sath...aap gusse mein kiya bol rahe ho aapko maloom bhi hain Maan??...Maine itna jayada pyaar kiya aapse...Pyaar kiyah??..Ibadaat ki aapki...Uss hadhtak...Itna junoon...Shiddat...Sari hadh todh ne ke liye taiyaar...Aisi Mohabbat...Ki aapse...Ek baar toh mujhpe yakeen karke dekh liya hota..
Maan...Past mein jisne bhi dukh diya ho aapko...Usse nikal ke aaiye Maan...I am not like them...I am NOT them...Kabhi toh yakeen kijiye logo pe...

Main patni hoon aapki...Saath phere lene wali patni...Iska koi mainey nahin hain na aapke paas?? Bas ek phone call aur ye jhuta report...Itna tak hi tha hamara pyaar??

Aap jis sacchai ka duhai laga rahe ho kiya aapne mujhse koi jhooth nahin bola hain Maan??" Her flaming hazels burned him as she shook him fiercely inside her continuous lamenting, "Aapki khud ki past...Iss bare mein kiya...pata bhi kiya hain mujhe...Kuch bhi toh nahin...Lekin kiya maine aap pe shaq kiya?
Kyun nahin samajh te ho aap...Haar koi ek jaisa nahin hota...Sabko ek tarazu mein maat toliye..." She could not hold her temper further witnessing his back to back impertinent remarks hence inside her turbulent cries she spoke her heart out and made Maan more incensed!

~Rahe tere dil mein magar
Teri dhadkan tak na jaa sakey~

Pin drop silence hovered after she rumbled her side of perturbation then he finally moved his passive lips after an eternity and she peered up at his quivered frame!

"You are right...You are not HER...or THEM...Because you are WORSE...And coming back to my Past or even Present..." He couldn't meet her red optics anymore, it's making him defenseless in a twisting fashion hence looking away he raised his finger at her, "Why didn't you?? Haah... Tumhe toh sawal karna chahiye tha na?? Koi bhi aur hota toh woh karta..."

Finding her silence he dared to look back into that elegiac yet the rampant pair of eyes and crooked his lips while continuing, "Par tumne toh woh jaan bujhke nahin kiya hoga kyun ki tum dikhana chahti thi ki tumhe pura yakeen hain mujhpe...bishwas jeetna tha na tumhe meri...Iss rishtey ko aur majboot dikhane ke liye aisa kiya hoga...It's all coming out like sunshine to me now...!!" Maan accused the love of his life of something which is going to become his biggest regrets of all time!


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NOTE :No update Until Chapter 44 hits 100+ likes so make sure to give your response guys!! If this takes one month then shall be like that!!

A few points I would like to make regarding the comments about last chapter>

1. I do not understand what does this firstly meant by you all... Separation as in what?

2. The MU shall be cleared within 2/3 updates!! I hope!!

3. Those who are concerned for the sudden twist> this has been the very root plot of Predestined, the last chapter you read I have written that 2 months ago so you can imagine the initial plot and how advanced I have been with that one particular chapter!
To shape up the story it is extremely essential for me!!

4. Why Maan is not listening to Geet? Because he is extremely angry and not in a correct mindset.

PD Maan is heavily inspired by the original Maan, if you all remember when Geet herself confessed to Maan about her pregnancy, even they were not married, nothing still Maan didn't listen to her and was in shock for days! Here she didn't tell him anything rather he accidentally listened to the bizarre talk she had over phone so how will he react?

4. After a few more updates everything shall make more sense!!



User Rithi and 9290860623 please clear your PM, i am unable to reply your pms!

PRECAP UPDATED - Page 127

Thanks a lot for reading!
Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb teaser..
maan accusing geet without even listening to her..
indeed anyone will regret it.. as it's not a small mistake..
hope maan realizes it soon..
waiting eaerly for next update..

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