Akdha ff love or Obsession Epilogue on page 138 - Page 30

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Chapter 15

(it was now morning Jodha and her friends family reach Chandigarh where on the way girls were sleeping except Sonal and boys so after reaching farmhouse boys Carry them and lay them in there respective rooms than come out and goes to freshen up and again comes and goes to hall room and sit on sofa).

Sid said : now what are we going to do.

Ryan said : well now we will take care of our business from here as without revealing our identity.

Rahul said : and we will take revenge from those rascal to.

James said : no first we need to see what are they going to do than we will plan something what say.

Ankit said : that will be good and we should concentrate on Jodha now as she is hell disturb from all the events isn't it.

Sid said : thanks guys if you all are not with us than don't know how I save her.

Ryan said : no need to thank us as Jodha is our best friend and like little sister how can we leave her alone when she need help.

Sid said : she is really lucky to have friends like you all and I am lucky to have sister like her.

Rahul said : no actually we are lucky to have her in our life.

James said : yes we are you know Sid Bhai she is very innocent but very strong girl she help all of us many time you know once I was driving my bike when I hit with one car no one come to help but she didn't even take me to hospital but stay with me till I get fine for whole day that's was the first time I met her but Didn't knew soon we will meet again in college.

Ryan said : well she is such a nice girl ready to help others without condition or greed.

(all were talking no one noticed that Ajay is silently seeing something on laptop when Sonal comes there with coffee and snacks).

Sonal said : here have some coffee and snacks.

(saying this she serve everyone and about to give Ajay but notice him not taking).

Sonal said : what's wrong Ajay here take coffee where are you lost.

Ryan said : well yaa you didn't said anything to us now.

Ankit said : what are you looking in that laptop.

Ajay Said : our enemies guys and seeing there reaction nothing much.

James said : what do you mean.

Ajay Said : well look at this than you will know what I mean.

(saying that he showed them his laptop and everyone Started watching as it was showing Jalal his father and his friends reaction when they enter the house).

Jalal said : what the hell where the hell they are.

Abdul said : it's look like they run away from here.

Seher said : where they will run we will get them and make them suffer for hurting you.

Viraj Said : but how can they leave from here this early.

Natasha said : maybe her so called friends help her but they will not be able to save her from us she need to be punished by us.

Aslam said : true very true let's see for how much time they can protect her.

Humayu said : what do you think Jalal where they can be now.

Jalal said : well maybe they gone to Delhi as there friends business are there only and in other countries but in India only in Delhi.

Humayu said : well than we will destroy there business first as she loves them and she will not be able to see them suffer isn't it.

Salima said : uncle and Jalal please drop this plan forget about them they did nothing wrong they are just protecting there friend and sister just like you are doing for each other.

Mirza said : and please Jalal I'd you want her to be with you than you should stop behaving like bloody jerk please because if you did anything against her friends or family than she will hate you please uncle you should make him understand not help him in all this it will lead us no where please listen to us.

Shivani said : oh please Mirza don't be so much spoil sport and about our revenge so she is the one who is responsible for all the things which we are going to do with her and her friends.

Seher said : yes if she didn't hurt Jalal than we should never think about anything like this .

Salima said : as girls you are all saying this I can't believe it shame on you all and I now regret to be friends with you.

Mirza said : same here and uncle i respected you very much but today you lost that respect in my eyes I am leaving as neither I can help you and nor I can see you all hurting an innocent girl.

(saying this he Started going out when Salima take his name).

Salima said : stop Mirza I am coming with you as I to didn't want to be friends with them so good bye guys.

(listening this Mirza nodded his head in yes and than both of them get out of the house than Mirza call someone and the person pick the call).

Mirza said : hello aunty are you there it's Mirza please aunty stop Jalal and uncle only you can stop both of them as you are his mother.

Hamida said : why what wrong Mirza what I should stop them and for what.

Mirza said : actually aunty we gone to Shimla there Jalal saw...

(and he worriedly told Hamida everything word by word making her hell furious).

Hamida said : what the hell are they lost there mind where are they tell me Mirza.

Mirza said : well they are in Goa now please aunty Do something.

Hamida said : don't worry Mirza I will not let them destroy and innocent girls life I will do everything which can stop them.

Mirza said : thanks aunty.

(than both of them cut there call and Mirza Salima than left for Mumbai to see there own business).

Jalal said : what should we do now.

Humayu said : for now we should go back to Mumbai than we will see this matter.

Abdul said : I think uncle is right we should go back than think about all this.

Aslam said : good idea as I am hell tired now.

Jalal said : okay than let's go and dad are you okay I mean you are continuously traveling so you are fine right .

Humayu said : yes I am so let's go than.

(than all of them leave for Mumbai unknown to them there talk and action was watch by Ajay and his friends).

Ryan said : uff they are hell disgusting.

Rahul said : no doubt in that anyway but how we are seeing all that Ajay.

Ajay Said : actually I believe to punish the person who hurt you and those to who help him and I was aware thst they will come there so I installed cameras there and by that we are seeing all this so now our target are there business and girls we will make them suffer by hurting there girlfriend but for now we will wait for there action.

(saying this he smiled and others gulp there saliva as they are well aware that once Ajay plan something for his enemy than no one can save them).

Ajay Said : so let's wait and watch but two person I like the most in there gang.

Ankit said : and who are they and what's the reason.

Ajay Said : Mirza and Salima as they are the only wise and smart people but Nevermind as they are not in my hit list.

Sid said : but Ajay don't you think it's wrong I mean they are planning to hurt her because they are egoistic arrogant and bad people but we are not out life view are simple live and let other live to.

Sonal said : yes is right if we will take revenge from them than what will be difference between us.

Ryan said : why not if they can try to hurt us than why not we please Bhai and Bhabhi we to believe in peace but we are not the follower of Gandhi ji that if someone slap you on one side of face than you should forward second one to.

Rahul said : yes if someone is planning to hurt us than we will not leave then in peace to.

Sonal said : still think will Jodha like after knowing what you all are planning to do.

Ajay Said : and who will tell her all this and Bhabhi and Bhai trust us we will not do something which make you feel ashamed at us trust me.

Sid said : I don't know i should agree or not as I never thought to take revenge from anyone anyway one request don't do anything which make you all regret okay.

Ryan was ryt not everyone follows Gandhiji steps

What I love about your stories is that you try to give balanced views regarding the actions of the characters.

In Chapter 14, while some of Jalal's friends were rightfully angry at Jodha for hurting Jalal , we had Salima and Mirza who were trying to calm things down and putting whatever happened into perspective to show that Jodha was not totally at fault.

Humayun , too, tried to control his anger and persuade Jalal to forget Jodha but with Jalal appealing to a father's instincts, even he gave in.

So Ajay has taken them to Chandigarh while Humayun and Jalal are hot on their heels.

In Chapter 15, again we see the debate going on both sides if their plans are justified and how it would affect everyone concerned.

Mirza and Salima have given up trying to get Jalal and Humayun to see the folly of their approach to seek revenge while Ajay is waiting for them to make the first move.

Waiting to see what Jodha has to say about all this.

Rashmi, I really look forward to your stories ( this and My Love My Possession ).

Both are superb! 👏

Originally posted by: Sranjani

Ryan was ryt not everyone follows Gandhiji steps

More interesting

Plan is worth to read

Nice

well I am glad that you like it dear and you are right not everyone follow Gandhi ji steps here we hurt the person in worse Manner who hurt our loved ones or us anyway thanks for your sweet comment dear.

Continue your plan don't drop it..

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">What I love about your stories is that
you try to give balanced views regarding the actions of the characters. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">In Chapter 14, while some of Jalal's
friends were rightfully angry at Jodha for hurting Jalal , we had Salima and
Mirza who were trying to calm things down and putting whatever happened into
perspective to show that Jodha was not totally at fault.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Humayun , too, tried to control his
anger and persuade Jalal to forget Jodha but with Jalal appealing to a father's
instincts, even he gave in.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">So Ajay has taken them to Chandigarh
while Humayun and Jalal are hot on their heels.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">In Chapter 15, again we see the debate
going on both sides if their plans are justified and how it would affect
everyone concerned. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Mirza and Salima have given up trying
to get Jalal and Humayun to see the folly of their approach to seek revenge
while Ajay is waiting for them to make the first move.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Waiting to see what Jodha has to say
about all this.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Rashmi, I really look forward to your
stories ( this and My Love My Possession ).</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Both are superb!👏</font>

well in story emotion action are main thing which make them interesting and any action or reaction of any emotion play without notice or proper thoughts than the story has no value isn't it that's why I always show and describe the thought and emotions or view as it's most important anyway I am glad that you not only read this story in fact you try to understand there thought and view which is very admirable and now about your question what will be Jodha reaction so I can't answer that now as for knowing that you have to wait for next chapter dear and thanks for such a wonderful awesome comment dear even when you are busy thank you very much it means so much.

Originally posted by: Sranjani

Continue your plan don't drop it..

Bcoz it's interesting

thanks dear for encouraging and don't worry I will not drop this story as someone told me to continue for my loyal reader and I can't deny that advice anyway thanks for comment dear.

Interesting

Nice update Rashmi