Arshi Ishveer Ranjan Aktal FF - Race - Page 17

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Thanks 4pm me
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Hey
Thank u soo much for the updates. Story is really at interesting point. Loved the way Arshi handled Akash and Sheetal. Payal Entry was amazing. 👏
W8ing to see what happens now.
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Part 11
Nice picture edits
Awesome update
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fantastic update
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akash become strong...
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As per the poll results, many wanted Aktal to separate & Akash should move on with another girl. However, there are some readers, including Piyali, want Sheetal's redemption. Since it is her concept. I have decided to give 2 endings for Akash. One is his ending up with Sheetal & the other is with Payal.
Part 16
Akash to Sheetal: I am going to have my lunch now? If you want to join me, then we can have it in the canteen.
Sheetal: Sure.
Akash & Sheetal go to the canteen to have their lunch.

Ranveer & Ishani are having their lunch.
Ranveer: I think we need to take mom to our house. As soon as Ranvi & Gunjan sets everything right, they will join us.
Ishani: There are 2 ways. The one way is either Sheetal has to mend her ways or she should leave.
Ranveer: Right. I am confident that Ranvijay & Gunjan will set everything right. Only if Arnav & Khushi gets to know the reality of Akash & Sheetal, they will be able to bring them to track. Leaving that aside, I need to talk to you about our personal matters.
Ishani: Do you want to talk about starting our family?
Ranveer: There are so many things to talk about. I don't know what is in your mind but as of now, we need to spend more time and understand each other to have kids.
Ishani: Thank God, you said that. If you had talked about that, I would have said the same.
Ranveer: Shall we go to a movie today? I have brought movie tickets.
He takes out the diamond necklace and said, "This is for you."
Ishani: Wow, it is beautiful.
Ranveer: It is waiting for your neck.
Ishani wears it.
Ranveer takes her pictures & selfies with her. Ranveer, Ishani & Dimple go out for the movie.
At Goa
Arnav & Khushi spend time at the beach.
Arnav: Is it fine if we do a little bit of jogging?
Khushi: Yes, it is fine.
Arnav: If you get any problem, stop me.
Khushi: Sure.
Both do jogging at the beach. Khushi is quite comfortable.
Later on, both of them go to the seashore and splash water on each other. The background song is
Jo pehle hua naa.
Ab hone laga hai.
Dil humko Jaga kar
Kyun sone laga hai.

Ye ishq hai yaa kuch aur hai
Ya bas khaali khaali shor hai
Ye ishq hai yaa kuch aur hai
Ya bas khaali khaali shor hai
Ho isko main kya kahun
Tu hi bata.. Tu hi bata..

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..

Tujhko dekh kar,
Tujhko dekh kar
Aankhein muskurane lagti hain
Tujhko mill kar
Dhadkne gun-gunane lagti hain
Aisa hota hai kyun?
Mujhko khabar nahin
Pehle kabhi hua, aisa asar nahin!

Jo mere dil ke paas hai
Naye jaadu naye ehsaas hain
Jo mere dil ke paas hai
Naye jaadu naye ehsaas hain
Ho aise mein kya karun
Kya karun tu hi bata

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..

Both go to the hotel room.

Arnav: I hope you are not tired after jogging.
Khushi: Not at all.
Arnav: I think it is a good sign and your system has completely accepted La's heart. We will go for the check-up as soon as we go back.
Khushi: When your love is there, I don't have to worry about anything else. I want to live every moment with you as long as I live. I don't know how long I will live.
Arnav: Don't ever say that again. Neither will you die before me nor will you die after me. We will live and die together.
Khushi: I'm saying this because there is nothing like the original heart.
Arnav: There is a point in what you say. I will definitely talk to Preity about it.
The next day, Ranveer calls up Ranvi and asked, "What is the plan for today?"
Ranvi: I am thinking of going to Arnav's office with Gunjan to tickle Sheetal's a**e. Gunjan had heard the conversation between Akash & Sheetal but is skeptical about Akash changing overnight. There is a point in what Sheetal says. She told him that it is cos of Payal, he changed his mind.
Ranveer: Yes, that is very important.
Akash & Sheetal go to the office.
Ranvijay & Gunjan follow them discreetly and reach the office before them.
Payal comes by rickshaw. She does not have the change for Rs. 500/-. She goes to Akash's cabin & said, "I don't have change for 500 INR. Can I get the change for the auto rickshaw?"
Akash: How much do you want?
Payal: I want Rs.50/-
Akash gives her Rs. 50 and said, go and give him that money. See that you carry change next time. (He sees Sheetal peeping to hear their conversation.)
Payal gives the money to AD & sends him off.
Sheetal gets irked. Ranvi & Gunjan are amused at that scene.
Payal starts her work. Gunjan sits next to Payal. She asked, "So, you are Payal right?"
Payal: Yes
Gunjan: Your designs are very attractive. From where did you learn?
Payal: From your company in London.
Gunjan: That is really great. I want to learn from you. Can you teach me when you have time?
Sheetal storms in. She said, "I am an expert in graphic designing. You won't get a better trainer than me."
She opens her laptop & shows the designs. Gunjan & Payal are amazed. Sheetal then sits next to Akash at the cabin.
Akash: So, Sheetal, did you get rid of Arnav sickness? If yes, then we can start everything on a new leaf.
Sheetal: I'm ready to forget Arnav if you stop going after Payal.
Akash: So you feel the pinch when I get over-friendly with Payal. If you say yes to my offer, I will maintain my level with Payal though she is my childhood friend.
Sheetal: Why didn't you tell me that she is your childhood friend?
Akash: Because our wedding took place under weird circumstances. Whatever is gone, we cannot get it back but we can mend our relationship if you don't go between Arnav & Khushi.They have moved on in their lives. So we should forget whatever happened & move on.
Sheetal: I am ready.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is the ending part. I would like all of you to give detailed comment & mention your fav scene & fav couple.

Part 17
Akash: The first condition is, you won't go between Arnav & Khushi. The second condition is you will respect elders at home. Are you ready for that?
Sheetal: Done.
Akash: Deal?
Sheetal: Yes, it is a deal.
Ranvi & Gunjan peep there & rejoice.
Sheetal's flashback
Sheetal calls her mother & tells about Akash.
Mother: I suggest you forget Arnav & focus on Akash. Be a good wife & good DIL. The Raizadas are very good people. They will accept you. You tell them the truth before it comes out on its own."
Flashback ends.
Gunjan: I think we need to observe them
Ranvijay: Yes, we have to.
All of them go home.
Sheetal prepares all the dishes. Everyone is amazed at her drastic change.
Ranvi calls up Ranveer & said, "Our plan has worked. I think Sheetal has changed for the good. We will come back once Arshi returns from Goa."
Ranveer: That is really a great thing to hear. Fine, you keep a watch on her until that time.
Arnav & Khushi come back from Goa. The family welcomes them. Sheetal gives them a warm welcome & hugs Khushi. She said, "I am sorry for all wrong that I've done to you. Please forgive me."
Khushi: It is ok.
Everyone is happy.
Akash & Sheetal go to the bedroom.
Akash: I am happy that you have finally changed. I love you.
Sheetal: I love you too.
Everyone comes to the room & clap for them.
Arnav & Khushi go to Dr. Preity for the checkup.
Dr. Priety: Nothing to worry. Khushi is fine. She is ready to carry & deliver your child.
Arnav: What about her lifespan?
Dr. Priety: She will live long but too much stress won't be good for her health. Even with us, it is the same.
Arnav & Khushi return home. Ranvijay & Gunjan go to Ranveer's house. Ranveer & Ishani hug them.
Six months later, Ranvi & Gunjan is blessed with a daughter. They name her as Dhara.
Arnav & Khushi get twins They get one boy & a girl. They name the boy as Aarav and girl as Arshi.
Ranveer & Ishani get a boy child. They name him as Ishveer.

Akash & Sheetal get a boy child. They name him as Akal


They live happily ever after.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thnk s for the pm and this part is good and finally sheetal changed
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow dear
Awesome update
Well written
Thanks for pm continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update...
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