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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 11...
they met but were under masks...😛

& he did what he is perfectly good in...😡

INTIMIDATING & KIDNAPPING...argghh !!

all three years peace crashed & troubling times await her...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 12...
gosh jalal , u're sooo despicable...😡

( sorry dear its just my outburst for the character )

did he ever thought how his parents & friends will react once they know his exact words , no matter how much it was part of plan .

this is not love !

kiss & slap part reminded me of some other ff...😛

it was all so scary , wish no girl suffers this .

thankfully she escaped & could manage to return back to her friends , waiting to know next .

will jalal ever realize his heinous act & try to rectify or change !
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-



Sorry for the late reply

don't worry I will update soon and thanks for comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 9...


baap re so much happened...😲

his frightening continues but a notch higher it has gone...poor jo...

poor girl has to avoid her friends though they were smart enough but destiny has other plans .

liked the way jo confronted him & he cannot stay away from his friends but expects her to forget hers...😡

nothing worked nor his friends advice & explaining nor his parents pleas infact he threatened them gosh this guy is sick...this is purely obsession & madness .

i give it to parents their fault for being too lenient & easy for their son , now the result is thye r totally helpless .

anyways i liked jodha's smart actions , gutsy & clever move...kudos to u girl !

well that's what happen when you never stop the person for anything wether he is wrong or right from childhood whatever he desire to have his parents given him so he thinks he rule the world so he was ordering her to as he want but doesn't want to do anything she wish to at last thanks for your such a cute comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 10...


poor sid...😭

understanding sonal...👍🏼

jalal's tempo rises...😛

evenhurting himself...

poor parents...😔

though everyone is relieved but tensed as well , ahh jo what u hv gotten urself into...

so jo & family shifted to goa .

3 yrs. passed , so she is in contact with her old friends , he could get no clue though he was following them .

more ruthless he has become & dangerous more than ever .

next meeting in shimla...😛


well that's happened with everyone if you love someone and then you unable to protect her and got to know that how much that person suffer anyone Will be feel guilty and ashamed same happens with Sid and Sonal like a true life partner make him understand and about Jodha so she maybe helpless in front of Jalal but she knows what and how to escape from him dear and at last thanks for your such a awesome comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 11...
they met but were under masks...😛

& he did what he is perfectly good in...😡

INTIMIDATING & KIDNAPPING...argghh !!

all three years peace crashed & troubling times await her...
[/QUOTE hey it's really very cute I mean you explain my whole chapter within words Anyway I thought it's enough to stay away so let them meet so here it was and it's just to show Jalal didn't change even a bit his obsession for her still like it was before but don't worry Jodha is smart enough to make him suffer thanks for such a cute comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 12...

gosh jalal , u're sooo despicable...😡

( sorry dear its just my outburst for the character )

did he ever thought how his parents & friends will react once they know his exact words , no matter how much it was part of plan .

this is not love !

kiss & slap part reminded me of some other ff...😛

it was all so scary , wish no girl suffers this .

thankfully she escaped & could manage to return back to her friends , waiting to know next .

will jalal ever realize his heinous act & try to rectify or change !

well will you like to tell me which ff it's remind you by that slap scene dear because when I was writing that part I was thinking no one is written but if it is than its wrong and about there reaction for that have to wait dear and I to agree no girl suffer like this and no need to apologize dear I understand how much it's getting bad buy what to do it's story way and don't worry my Jodha is not that much week dear and thanks for such a wonderful comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 13
(Jodha and her friends were in Airport now and Waiting for there flight and sitting besides each other and Looking at Jodha who was Shivering in fear still and crying like hell her friends were trying to console her).

Amy said : please Dear stop crying there is nothing happen you are safe Just calm down.

James said : yes Just calm down soon we will be in Goa with Sid Bhai and Sonal Bhabhi don't cry now.

(Amy was Hugging her by side and Patting her back softly so that she could get calm but nothing is working and seeing her like this her friends were very upset they were cursing them selves for her condition but after like ages they heard Jodha voice ).

Jodha said : you all said I should move on ...but how can I when he is after me...you know he said he was searching for me from Past five years...

Rahul said : we know Mehek you already told us everything don't repeat that and Please for heaven sake stop crying we can't see you like this.

Shreya said : Mehek you should feel proud on yourself that alone you fight with him and get out of his den to and now you are with us don't cry we will not let anything happen now.

Jodha said : no no now you all should leave me alone... or else he will destroy all your carrier and family business... he told me he will if I didn't listen to him ...and now I run away again so I am sure he will do as he said...

Ryan said : stop it Mehek don't you dare to forget we are your friends and we will not leave you alone get that.

Shivanya said : he is right for our own good and future we will never leave your side and for god sake stop getting scared of him he can't do anything.

Jodha said : but he did he kidnapped me two times... kissed me forcefully against my wish... scare me like hell ...and blackmail me taking name of you and Bhai ...than why should not I will be scared of him ...you all don't know how ruthless and heartless he is ...I still remember the day when he beat Ankit front of my eyes... he was Just looking like Pure heartless devil...I don't know what he will do now ...I am scare as hell I just can't see Bhai Bhabhi and you all in Pain...I can't I really can't...

(seeing her crying and listening her Painful words Making her friends guilty as they were not there when that so called Devil was Forcing her but what can they do now so they just let her cry so that she get some relief after sometime her crying get stop she just lying her head on Amy shoulder and closed her eyes here they were waiting for there flight other side in Jalal home).

Abdul said : it's 2 hours now don't know what he is doing now.

Viraj said : don't know but we should just pray that he don't hurt her more

Aslam said : but he already hurt her enough what is left now I am sure he is forcing her again.

Mirza said : I can't wait here more I am going to see and i swear if he was hurting her than I will chop his head in million Pieces.

(saying this he was about to go when Shivani stop him by grabbing his hand).

Shivani said : don't go there Mirza he will get angry if we will interfere between them.

Natasha said : Shivani is right Mirza as we all know when he is angry than no one can calm him down.

Mirza said ; do you all think I care a damnn about his anger no I am going to see what he is doing.

(saying this he remove Shivani hand and goes to Jalal room and others Just sigh as they all know how stubborn Mirza is if he decided something he do it no matter how difficult it can be soon Mirza enter inside the room but the scene he saw there make him scream Jalal name in horror and rush to Jalal who was lying on floor and his hands were tied with handcuffed other side listening his scream everyone rush to him).

Mirza said : Jalal what the hell happen.

( saying this He Patted his cheek pour some water from near by Jug and take the key which were lying there he open that handcuffed started patting his cheek again and soon everyone enter inside to saw that and all rush to Jalal ).

Viraj said : what happen to him Mirza.

Abdul said : who did this.

Aslam said : oh my god his head was bleeding.

Mirza said : don't know what happen and who did this but as I enter inside I saw him lying her and i think we need to take him hospital the bleeding is not stopping.

Salima said : you are right.

(than Abdul and Aslam lift him up and take him outside lay him backseat and other follow them soon everyone sit inside and Mirza started driving soon within 10 minutes they reach hospital and take him inside lay him on stretcher and rush to Doctor who was walking left side at the corridor).

Seher Said : doctor Please check him see he is bleeding like hell.

(Doctor saw Jalal and than order the nurse to take him inside soon Doctor left to check him leaving worried Scared and crying friend of Jalal at corridor).

Shivani said : don't know what happen to him.

(listening her words All looked at each other than sigh heavily).

Salima said : it's doesn't matter what how this happen and who did this we should just pray that he get fine.

(listening Salima words everyone Started Praying to god for him and waited for Doctor to come out with good news that he is fine after half hour Doctor come out and looked at everyone).

Viraj Said : what happen Doctor he is fine now right.

Doctor said : well you all take him her right time just five minutes late and you all can lost him he is fine now don't worry and you all can see him but now he is not in his sense because of medicine effects.

Aslam said : thank you doctor for what you did.

Doctor said : no need to thank me it's my work anyway excuse me now.

(saying that Doctor left from there and all of them enter inside the room where Jalal was lying on bed).

Mirza said : I never knew talking about killing him will make me see him in this state.

Shivani said : don't worry he is fine now.

Mirza said : it's all my mistake I was cursing him and look what happen.

Abdul said : don't blame yourself Mirza it's not your mistake.

Salima said : but the question is who did this.

Mirza said : we will not leave that person you know when I enter inside he was lying on floor his hands were tied with handcuffed to I remove that first than tried to wake him up but no use.

Aslam said : but who can do that.

Natasha said : I think Jodha did this with him.

(listening this everyone look at her with curious look).

Natasha said : I mean when we gone there she was not there so it's maybe possible that for escaping from there she hit him with something and he soon don't caught her again she tied him with handcuffed and left because she was not there when we gone there.

Seher said : than she need to get Punish for hurting him like this.

Abdul said : correct what if something happen with him like Doctor said 5 minutes and we can lost him thank to Mirza who enter there and we take him here or god knows what happen with him.

Aslam said : well we were feeling bad for Jodha but now we will not leave her for sure and we will do everything for Jalal no matter it's right or wrong.

(listening there words Mirza get angry as he think they are wrong).

Mirza said : are you all gone mad what are you talking about I mean what wrong she did to deserve your Rage guys.

Shivani said : are you in your Sense Mirza don't you see what she did with Jalal.

Mirza said : I can see that but don't you see guys whatever she did was just a defend action of Kidnapped girl I mean Jalal kidnapped her and scare her like hell forcing her to marry him than what you accept from her she will agree no I don't think so answer me Seher Shivani Natasha if you all will be on her place what you all should did hmmm.

Natasha said ; so you think she did nothing wrong.

Mirza said : I didn't said that as I to am angry on her for hurting Jalal but thinking from her point of view I don't think there is anything wrong she did so better you all drop the Plan of revenge as it's not right to do.

Viraj said ; we can lost him because of her didn't you hear doctor words.

Mirza said : we can but we didn't right he is fine and soon he will be like before so don't think about that which didn't happen because of god.

Aslam said : you don't love Jalal he is our best friend and hurt because of her and you are taking her side we hate you.

Mirza said : I don't care hate me as much as you all want... but I will not stop saying what is right as a friend it's my responsibility to make all of you understand ...what is right and wrong Just think guys seeing him like this you all are worried like hell ...than what about her when he was talking about One sided lover action regarding rejection... and blackmailing her by taking her family and friends name just think about ...her friends and family who will hell worried to find her missing and kidnapped... Just think about her than take action as whatever she did is nothing in front of what Jalal did with her.

(as all were angry and worried for Jalal so they were not understanding anything and Mirza was aware of that no one want to hear about her here they all were talking and other side Humayu reach Shimla for some Meeting and goes to Farmhouse where Jalal take Jodha he enter there and guard saluted him he nodded and ask him).

Humayu said : where is Jalal and his friends.

Guard said : well sir they were here before but now they are gone hospital.

Huamyu said : hospital why what happen.

Guard said : what happen we don't know sir but yes Jalal sir was not fine his head was bleeding.

(listening his words Huamyu get worried so he ask again).

Humayu said : which hospital they taken him.

(guard said : City hospital Sir.

Huamyu said : oh okay

(saying that he goes to his car and Order the Driver to drive towards City hospital and within 15 minutes he reach there and enter inside and asking from Receptionist he rush towards the room where Jalal was present).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mirza said to his friends was right
Nice update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sranjani

Mirza said to his friends was right

Nice update

thanks dear for comment and you are right whatever he said was very true.

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