TS: Under The Sun (Coming soon - SP : 17/11)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello!

How are you all?
So once again I'm here to announce a new story!

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Under The Sun

Burning or Glowing under the Sun is an art!
An art that few people manages well!
A management which includes our heart and body!
Is another word for body: soul?

Let's discover!


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Index

Sneak-Peak
Part 1
(Coming soon)


- Maithili

(See you all soon!)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello!

I thought to not have a SP to this story!
Then my inner voice said 'You need to pleasure your bad mind! So SP is needed to confuse your readers;-)!'
So here, I'm with a SP to satisfy that inner voice and bad mind of mine!
Happy reading!



Sneak-Peak


Beautiful!" he said as he checked the beautifully clicked picture in his camera.
The picture of a green van in front of red sands in the dessert with blue colour bangles adorned hand of a girl holding a white veil, hiding her face from the sun as she peeked out of that truck from it's top.

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With her form brushing against him, he made her get on her feet safely as she adjust to stand on the ground instead of mango tree branch.
With her one hand unconsciously on his shoulder and one hand setting her dress, he caught the sight of fresh raw green mango in her hand and with a childish smile adorning his face, he advanced his face towards her hand.
Felling the fanning breath getting hotter near her hand, she lifted her head to find his face near her hand and pulled it away immediately along with the mango as if he was going to devour her hand.

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"You are our guest! So stay"
"Sorry to cut your words sir!" the young man who was standing in front of 4 men and 2 women "You are saying your way of thinking changed and that's the reason why you are giving example to this village buy getting your daughter married. But isn't it wrong to get her married to a man double her age? Or are you"
"Enough!" her father turned towards the other men "I'm really sorry for the drama! I will get you good news soon! Excuses us"
"You are fooling your people in the name of changed thoughts! If you have really changed, this not what you would do to your daughter. You are repeating the same mistake you have done years ago Sir!"

(That's all for now guys! As always no PM for SP!
PM for story update will arrive to everyone who are already in my PM list.
In case you have never received any PM!
Please leave me a message!
Thank you!)

- Maithili


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting
Waiting for the update!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting sis..
While reading tis i feel the backgroud as rajasthan..
I m waiting 4 the update sis..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting sneak peak
Waiting for update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting SP
In the first scene, did he know who she was when he took the picture?
Suraj will help Chakor get down from the tree? how romantic.
Is the Chakor the girl they're talking about?

Eagerly waiting for the story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mitthu...that one word in the title is enough to caught my attentionšŸ˜‰

"Burning or glowing under the sun is a blessing...
A blessing of a lifetime...that everyone wishes to feel.
A blessing whose management is just to soak within it,and let it reach your senses...
Another word for soul is feelings...ā¤ļø

and I would love to discover it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Golden.dust

Interesting

Waiting for the update!

Thank you so much dear!
Sorry for late reply!
Will be updated before end of Feb 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Interesting sis..

While reading tis i feel the backgroud as rajasthan..
I m waiting 4 the update sis..

Thank you so much sis!
Glad you liked it!
Heee yup it's kind of Rajasthan but I will not mention the place ;-)
Will try my best to post it after Roman candles!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting sneak peak

Waiting for update

Thank you dear!
Happy you find SP interesting!
Hope the story too is interesting!
See you!

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