Akdha ff love or Obsession Epilogue on page 138 - Page 19

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Posted: 7 years ago
not Di guys I am still just 18year old anyway glad you like it dear thanks for comment.
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Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Wah Rashmi What a Update...

Interesting Interesting...3 years passed...
JO as Mehak. Nice name... she is living her life peacefully..
Everything is going good but Jalal's love and possess for Jo increased more...
He is a good business man and obedient son but a mad lover...
Well Jo is so smart she is still in contact with her friends but not to let Jalal know about her...Smarty...
Ja is very confident of meeting her and having her as his...
Well His friends and parents also found they are correct pair..
Now Jo and Ja meet in shimla...
Waiting for this eagerly.. to know about Jo and Ja reaction...
This is progressing well Rashmi...

well that's how my stories are and about Jalal so he is fine with everyone but with Jodha his ways are very complicated and about our heroine maybe she is innocent but she knows her ways and about there meeting just wait for next update dear and at last thanks for your such a wonderful comment dear love it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I m also 18 dear ..heheheh ..
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Originally posted by: simranjitkaur

I m also 18 dear ..heheheh ..

well than we are same age so no Di Di at all chill out as a friend
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Posted: 7 years ago
WOW Mindblowing Update..
So, three year leap..
jalal still didnt forget her..
oh my god Shimla..
that would be too interesting..
Dont know what jalal will do...nd how jo will react..
Cnt soon..\tnx fr pm😉



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Originally posted by: divyaJA

WOW Mindblowing Update..

So, three year leap..
jalal still didnt forget her..
oh my god Shimla..
that would be too interesting..
Dont know what jalal will do...nd how jo will react..
Cnt soon..\tnx fr pm😉



glad you like it dear and how can Jalal forget her she is her love and obsession isn't it and don't worry within few minutes i will update Chapter and thanks for your wonderful comment dear.
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Chapter 11
Ryan said : finally we reach so guys it's our hotel here is your room keys let's go now.

Rahul said : you are talking like you are manager of this hotel anyways let's go guys.

James said : but we should be ready today we are going on club for party okay.

(listening this everyone smiled but Jodha was somewhere lost and Looking at her Shivanya ask her).

Shivanya said : Mehek are you okay what happen you are not looking good is there something wrong.

(listening her question everyone looked at Jodha and wait for her answer and seeing there curious look Jodha get nervous so she looked around than look at them).

Mehek said : wo don't know but I am feeling strange here like something bad is going to happen.

Shreya said : don't think like that everything will be fine now let's go to our room.

(than they all goes to there book room and at that time Jalal and his friends enter there and goes to reception area).

Abdul said : are you okay dude you are smiling for no reason.

Salima said ; where he is lost look he is not answering you.

Viraj said ; I think he like that long hair girl what do you think.

Natasha said ; but he didn't saw her face than how can he like her.

Aslam said : and more ever why he change his plan we were going to his farmhouse than why he choose this hotel.

Seher said : don't know what he is Planning.

(listening there talk Mirza and Shivani get irritated but just waited for Jalal to say something after sometime Jalal look at everyone).

Jalal said ; guys don't know why I think she is here and I will get her soon my heart is feeling the same Peace whenever she was around me and now to I am feeling the same way.

Mirza said : Uumm maybe now let's go to our room we have to on Party to.

(listening this everyone goes to there room and freshen up and started taking rest and in the evening all of them get ready and goes to club Jalal and his friends left early and reach before Jodha and her friends there was Mask Party was going on so everyone were wearing Mask).

Seher said : it's really interesting isn't it dance with Partner without seeing his or her face.

Aslam said : yes kind of but if I didn't dance with will not you get angry on me.

Natasha said ; why are you so scared.

Viraj said ; well what to do when you are with your girlfriend and you have to dance with other girl than who can save that boy.

Mirza said ; leave all that let's drink something.

(than they order something and started drinking some wine and Juice and that time Jodha and her friends enter there to wearing Mask but don't know why again Jalal started feeling Peace and Jodha started feeling fear but ignore that).

Rahul said : you know it's one of the best club here.

Shreya said : really .

James said ; did you like like it here Mehek.

Mehek said ; well yes it's beautiful I like it here.

Ryan said : leave it what would you like to drink.

Shivanya said : uff you know that still you are asking we don't drink wine so get a soft drink for us only.

Ryan said : oh okay than I am going to get it for you all.

Amy said : till you come back we will sit there okay.

Ryan said : oh okay.

(than all of them goes to sit at one side where some chairs were present and started talking soon Ryan comeback to them with there drinks and all of them started drinking and after 10 minutes one Men goes to stage he was the host of that party and club to).

Host said ; hello everyone how are you all are you enjoying the Party here.

audience shouted in excitement : yes we are.

Host said : glad to know but now here we will going to play one game as you all are having one token number am I right .

again everyone reply : yes we have.

Host said ; so you all should dance with the Partner with whom your token number get Match okay and the couple who will dance well will get the award today I mean a special prize from us so are you all ready to break the Dance floor by your rocking Performance.

again everyone shouted in excitement : yes we are .

(soon everyone goes on Dance floor with there Partner who has the same token number as them by).

James said ; my bad luck I thought I will get some hot girls to dance with but I have to dance with you .

Amy said ; and I thought that I will get to dance with handsome boy but my bad luck I am stuck with you .

Mehek said : at least you all are lucky to get a Partner to dance look i didn't get one.

Rahul said : well yes maybe you will get soon so let's go guys.


(and than her friends left to dance floor other side Jalal friends to left to dance floor and Jalal stand at one side it's not like he didn't want to dance it's just that he want the Person who has same token number as him come to him by himself it's his ego which was stopping him to search the Partner by himself and our Jodha was so shy to search for her Partner so both of them were standing at one corner opposite to each other when host of the club saw Jodha and Jalal so he goes to them).

Host said ; what's wrong why are you not dancing.

Jalal said : there is no Partner for me.

Host said : what's the number of your token.

Jalal said 20.

Host said : oh okay.

(than he goes to Jodha).

Host said ; what is your token number.

Mehek said : 20.

Host said ; oh than Please come with me there is your Partner who has same token number as you.

(saying that Men started walking towards Jalal and Jodha Follow him behind silently looking at everywhere accept the Person whom she is going to meet but don't know why the fear in her heart increasing with each step she is taking forward but she tried to ignore that and Soon both of them stand in front of them).

Host said ; here is your Partner go and dance now.

Jalal Pov : I don't know why from the time I step my foot in Shimla I am feeling strange joy here and on the way I saw one girl talking with her friends her long silky hairs were dancing with air but unfortunately I can't see her face but than I follow her and reach the hotel but didn't find her there than with my friends I come to this club wearing mask when the host announce to dance with Partner who have same token number as you like really I Jalal Mohammad will search for my Partner that to for just a dance no never I am searching for my love of my life my Kitten that's enough than the host come towards me and question me than left and now again he come back with one girl who was wearing light Pink white color gown with open hair she was coming towards me looking around nervously but because of her Mask I can't see her face don't know I was liking her and can't wait to hold her in my arms soon but my thoughts get broken by host voice who told me that she is My Partner).

(than Jalal forwarded his hand towards her and she nervously take that but the time she touch his hand a shiver run down her body she take it back which irritate Jalal little so he grab her hands and started walking towards dance floor and this time Jodha didn't do anything and started dancing with him).
Zara zara si neend bhi

Ajnabi si ho gayi
Zara zara chain se
Dushmani si ho gayi

Tum mile ho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karoon, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha

Samjhu kaise koi samjhaye..

Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyaar ho jaye
Jaane kahan kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyar ho jaye

O...

Ho..oonchi oonchi diwaaron si
Iss duniya ki rasmein
Na kuch tere bas mein jaana
Na kuch mere bas mein

Tum mile ho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karoon, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha

Samjhu kaise koi samjhaye..

Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyar ho jaaye
Jaane kahan kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyar ho jaaye

Jaise parbat pe ghata jhukti hai
Jaise sagar se lehar uthti hai
Aise kisi chehre pe nigaah rukti hai

Rok nahi sakti nazron ko
Duniya bhar ki kasmein

Tum mile ho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karoon, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha

Samjhu kaise koi samjhaye..

Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyar ho jaye
Jaane kahan kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyar ho jaye
Kisi se pyar ho jaye
Kisi se pyar ho jaye..


(they both were dancing very Passionately but Jodha was feeling very uncomfortable as he was touching her every where well it was just as Dance step but she was not feeling well with him so she was trying very hard to get out of him but the more she struggle the more there dance get entertaining soon the song get change).


Sholon Si Sholon Si
Tere Ankhon Ki Yeh Roshni
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Chandni Chandni, Tere Chere Ki Yeh Chandni
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Tera Muskurana Nazar Yun Jhukana
Mere Liye Hai Bas Mere Liye Hai
Sholon Si Sholon Si
Tere Ankhon Ki Yeh Roshni
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Chandni Chandni Tere Chere Ki Yeh Chandini
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Samjho Mera Joh Ishara Hai
Joh Bhi Hai Mera Woh Tumhara Hai
Samjho Mera Joh Ishara Hai Joh Bhi...
((everyone left the dance floor only they both were dancing and everyone were enjoying the Performance as the Light was dim so Jalal and Jodha both were not recognizing each other and all the while Jodha was looking elsewhere so Jalal didn't notice that as he was busy in dancing with her)

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara
Suno na sangmarmar ki yeh minaare

Bin tere maddham maddham
bhi chal rahi thi dhadkan
Jab se mile tum humein
Aanchal se tere bandhe
Dil ud raha hai

Suno na aasmaano ke yeh sitaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare

Yeh dekho sapne mere
Neendon se hoke tere
Raaton se kehte hain lo
Hum toh savere hai wo
Sach gaye jo
Suno na do jahaano ke yeh nazaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhara
Taj tumhara..
Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare

(and at the end of song they finish there dance and stand besides each other and soon the host goes to stage).

Host said ; so there is no doubt we find our winner and I know you all are aware who they are isn't it.

(listening this audience shouted in excited voice : yes we know.

Host said : so here is our winner and here is the Prize for them.

(soon he give both of them a beautiful trophy and make them wear a crown and give them Five lack rupees check which didn't matter to Jalal as he was the second powerful businessmen of India).

Host said ; now I would like you both to remove your Mask so we can see our winner.

(listening this both were about to remove there mask when Jodha friends goes to her and take her away from him and left from there).

Jalal Pov : shit bloody hell they left can't they wait for sometime so that I can saw her face but never mind better try next time.

(thinking that he remove his mask and left outside of Parking area where he saw Jodha with her friends he get shocked).

Jalal Pov : oh my my the world is so small where the hell I didn't search for her and look she was here and she is the same girl with whom I dance with well that's the reason I was feeling very happy when I was dancing with her so here you are my kitten but I will not go close to you now because I can't take risk what if you again run away so i will get you soon but now enjoy because after day tomorrow you will not meet your friend and family again.

(thinking this he look at her who was smiling and very happily showing her crown to her friends and jumping in joy).

Mehek said ; hey look how beautiful this is.

Ryan said : well yes but it's looks more beautiful when you wear that.

Mehek said : really.

James said : yes there is no doubt.

Mehek said : thank guys now let's go I am tired now.

(listening this everyone left for hotel other side Jalal friends come out and and goes to him).

Abdul said : hello don't you want to go come let's go.

(listening this Jalal sit inside the car and his friends to sit inside and soon started driving towards hotel and reach there at the same time when Jodha and her friends reach there and Jalal saw them).

Jalal Pov : well donee so she is staying at the same hotel where I am staying great god thank you for this now I am sure you are the one for me made by god and he himself want you to be with me so let it be Kitten Just wait and watch you will be mine soon and yes how could I forget you have to get punish by me to for betraying me.

(thinking all that Jalal smirk and come out of his car till than Jodha and her friends left for there room and after freshening up slept peacefully so he to left for his room and after freshening up slept peace fully after such a long time Next morning Jodha and her friends after freshening up get ready and left for one mall and Jalal who was already out without informing his friends follow them).

Shivanya said : well very nice mall let's see we will get our desire dress or not.

Ryan said ; you will get that or not one thing is sure we will get frustrated for sure.

Amy said : shut up Mehek Shreaya Shivanya let's go and see the dresses what say.

Mehek said ; well that is what we are here for isn't it so let's go.

(than all the girls started seeing the dress and Jalal look at them from a safe distance he can see everyone but no one can notice him soon he call some one soon the Person pick his call).

Jalal said ; get my private jet ready I will leave today and prepare my farmhouse it's should be neat and clean okay.

Men said ; don't worry sir everything will be done.

Jalal said ; good.

(saying that he cut the call and looked at jodh who come out wearing Light orange color top and Black color Pant she Turn towards her friend).

Mehek said ; hey guys how I am looking.

Shreaya said : gorgeous.

Mehek said ; really.

Amy said : yes now try this one.

(saying this she give her three more dress and she again enter the trail room and wearing that come out and show them they all again praise her like this she buy five Jeans top five Salwar suit three Jacket for herself 4 saree for her Bhabhi and shirt Pant and tee shirt for her Bhai and there friends to buy some for them selves but when they started going towards boys Jodha bags fell on floor so she started taking them but her friends were fast so they leave her behind soon Jalal goes to her and started helping her and she without realizing and looking at him).

Jodha said ; oh thank for help but I will manage

Jalal said ; well if I will not help you than who will kitten.

(listening this the bag she taken on her hands fell again she looked at him with horror and saw him smirking at her she get up hurriedly and was about to shout for her friends when he close her mouth and take her inside the trial room grabbing her hands tightly than close the door).

Jalal said ; so how was your days with out me Kitten ...

(saying this he take a brief pause and chuckle lightly and in teasing voice).

Jalal said : uff how stupid I am to ask this isn't it kitten you were enjoying without me as I was not there to order you and keep an eye on you right... so tell me how many boyfriends you have now...

(saying this he looked at her teary eyes filled with horror he again take a brief pause and in calm voice).

Jalal said : no again wrong question let me ask how many boys you love you do or not answer me...okay don't answer as for answering me you have to talk and if I will remove my hand than you will shout for your friends and I don't want any disturbance now so let's go now.

(Listening his words Jodha struggle to get out of his grip and hug but no use soon she saw him taking a Handkerchief out of his pocket while his other hand was on her face soon he remove that and tied that on her mouth and grab a dupatta from her and tie her hands and started taking her out where his bodyguards were already present they take all the bags which was out lead him to his car and he make her sit inside than he sit on other side and started driving).

Jalal said : when first time I kidnap you i didn't had any intention to keep you with me that day I just wanted to make you agree with my wish but now I have a different reason now I will not let you go you will be mine now.

(saying this he turn towards her than remove the cloth from her Mouth and again started looking at front).

Jalal said ; now my car is sound proof so shouting will not help you so why to make your mouth close isn't it.

(she was about to shout for help but listening his words she didn't and looked at him).

Jodha said ; what you want why don't you let me go and live my life.

Jalal said ; you live your life for three years is not that enough anyways now no pleading and crying as I don't care now get that.

Jodha said : but where are you taking me and why.

Jalal said ; I am taking you to my world because you are mine.

(saying this he play the radio and started listening the song which was perfactly showing his obsession towards her).

Main toh bas teri chaahat mein chahoon rehna sada

Main toh bas teri kurbat mein chahoon rehna sada
Saaya bhi tera main, hone na doon juda
Maine tay kar liya
Tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe, tere jism pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera... (3)
Main toh bas teri chaahat mein chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri kurbat mein chahoon rehna sada

Yaadon mein tujhko rakhun
Baatein bhi teri karoon
Itna deewana hoon tera
Hoo raaton mein jaaga karoon
Din bhar batakta rahoon
Main toh yahaan se bas wahaan
Tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe, tere jism pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera... (3)
Main toh bas teri chaahat mein chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri kurbat mein chahoon rehna sada

Baahon mein tujhko rakhun
Dhadkan mein teri sunoon
Aa itna nazdeek aa zara
Hoo jisme duaayein rahe
Har dum wafaayein rahe
Doon tujhko aisa ik jahan
Tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe, tere jism pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera... (3)
Main toh bas teri chaahat mein chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri kurbat mein chahoon rehna sada
Saaya bhi tera main, hone na doon juda
Maine tay kar liya
(when the song get finish Jalal looked at her).
Jalal said : you know this song is perfectly shows my emotion it's really mean what you are for me your everything belongs to me you your soul your heart your emotions your dreams your happiness your pain everything you shoul understand this Kitten.
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ja kidnapped Jo
Ja was not changed
Nice post
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update dear
Jalal kidnapped jo
Now wat will happen to jo
Interesting 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome chappy
He got jo
Update soon

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