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Chapter 6
(on the way in car Jalal was silently driving it and Jodha was just looking outside and thinking ways to get away from him after sometime Jalal looked at her and smiled than in calm voice).

Jalal said : do you know girl talk to much but with your case it's different isn't it it's going to be ten minutes and you didn't say a word come on kitten say something.

(listening his words she looked at him and saw him smiling at her than she again started seeing outside and calm yet nervous voice).

Jodha said : well ...it's .. doesn't ... matter... if ..I ...will.. say ..or ...not ...as ...you ..will ...always...do ..what ...you ..like ...or ...want... to ..do ...from ...the...time ...we ...meet ..you ..always ...scare ...me ...and ...force ...me ..and ...now ...to ...you ...are ...doing ...the ...same ...why ...don't ...you ..let ...me.. .live ..in ...Peace ...what ...the ...hell ...you ...want ...from ...me ... I ...already ...told ...you ...why...I...don't ...want ...to ...be ...with ...you ...than ...why ...don't ...you ... understand ...why ...you ...are ...behind ...it's... not ...like ...I ...am ...very ...beautiful ...or ...popular ...girl ...I ...am ...just ...a ...normal ...middle ...class ...girl ...with ...simple ...dreams than ...why ...are ...you ...behind ...me...why.

(listening her question Jalal stop the car at side and turn towards her and looked at her).

Jalal said : look at me here Kitten.

(but she didn't listen so he grab her hand).

Jalal said : look at me now.

(saying this his hold on her hand get tight which make her winch in pain and look at him seeing her in pain his hold automatically get loose).

Jalal said : you know Kitten you are right ... I can get many beautiful girls like my type... and same as my standard ...but I don't want them... because they will be not like you... they will be same like me... selfish self centered with ...greed of power fame and money ...they will be beautiful but just by outside... they will not have inner beauty like you...they will not have golden heart like you... they will never care about my parents like you... care about your brother and Bhabhi ...heck in fact I don't care about them like you do ...I mean it's true I love them and I can kill anyone... if anyone dare to hurt them but it's all in limit ...but with you it's different before seeing you... I never believe in love but from the time... I saw you I don't know why ... I felt if I will not have you in my life than I will die... I don't know what this emotion called ...but if it's love than yes I fell in love with you my sweet little innocent Kitten ...you Know I felt ashamed at myself... for the first time when you talk to me that day ...when I beat your best friend so just for repenting... I started changing I stopped being rude with others ...started helping needy people and you will not believe... I started getting satisfaction with that... which I never get by hurting others and that's all because of you... your one look and few words change me so much... I started doing the thing which I never did... you know I don't have idea how to explain you...you know in past just little smirk or few cheesy romantic line were enough... to make any girl my girlfriend ...but with you just to go out is like Joining Army and going on world war... I mean you are stubborn not very strong but you always stand by your decision ...no matter how powerful men you have to face knowing there is no chance that you will get away... but you fight till you loose but you never admit that you loose the game... and that's what attract me ...or should I say make me fell for you more and more Please Kitten ... I just wanted to be with you I promise I will not hurt or betray you just give me chance... I promise I will do as you say...

(listening his words Jodha get hell shocked she didn't knew what to do believe on him and his words or not give him chance or not).

Jodha pov : oh god what the hell how can anyone fell in love just by one look and what makes this handsome and powerful rich guy like him fell in love with me and if whatever he saying it's true than still there is any future of his love towards me what will happen when Bhai will got to know about all this yes it's true that he trust me and always fulfill my wish never let me feel like I don't have parents still what will be his reaction after knowing about this oh god what will people say about all this oh god what to do please show me path god at least help me this time Please.

(seeing her lost Jalal understood what she is thinking so he take her hand near his lip and kissed them softly and that break her thoughts she looked at him and tried to release her hand but no use).

Jalal said : I understand Kitten what you are thinking... and don't worry I will talk to your brother myself ...and will take all the responsibility... I will not let anyone talk ill about you or your family... in fact I will make you my life partner...and that's what I want I just don't want to have time pass with you... I want to spend my whole life with you...I want share my everything with you Kitten...

(listening his words now Jodha is very much confuse but than she nervously looked here and there shook her head and gulp her saliva and than looked at him and in nervous voice).

Jodha said : I... understand ...that ...what ...are ...you ...going ...through ...but ...but...I don't feel... the ...same... for ...you ...like... you... feel ...for ...me ...are ...to ...different ...and ...you... know ...about.. those ...difference ...it's ...not ...only ...about ...rich ...and ...middle ...it's ...about ...thought ...and ...religious ...it's ...about ...our... life ...style ...I ...mean ...we ...can ...be ...as.. a ..friend ...but ...I ...don't... think ...there... is... any ...chance ...by ...which ...we ...can ...have.. future ..together...and.. more ...ever ...I am ...so ...young ...to ...get ...in ...any... type ...of ...relation ...as... I ...don't ...feel ...comfortable ..around ...strangers... or ...boys ...except ...my ...brother ...and ...my ...close ...friends..I ...need ...time...so ..it ..will ...be ...better ...if ...we ...stay ...away ...from ...each ...other...

(listening this Jalal get angry and grab her cheeks and clutch them tightly and look at her coldly his angry gaze scare the poor soul to much she started shivering in fear and started struggling to remove his hands but did she can get success with Jalal so like always get fail).

Jalal said : I am Rich ...I am Muslim ...I had bad reputation ...that's what make you away from me right... that's what stopping you to give me chance right ...you think I am to bad and be friend with you right ...than let it be ...I was trying to make you understand politely ...but you don't get it right ...than fine now you will see the real me Kitten... now you will see how bad I am ...how I get what I want...

(saying this in dangerous and stern voice he release her cheeks and bang on his car seat and come out from his car leaving a crying Jodha inside as she don't get out of car for that he locked his car and looked at sky stared taking deep breath and after five minutes calming his raging nerves he open the door and sit inside his car again and started driving and after reaching college parking area he looked at her than grab her hands).

Jalal said : listen to me very carefully call your friend and take care of yourself from now on words you will not see me around but if you dare to get close with any boy than be ready to face me as i will not leave you I am ready to give you time and wipe your tears and go now and one more thing you will not tell anyone about me get that.

(scared of his reaction she just nodded fearfully and wiping her tears she looked at him silently).

Jodha said : you ..know.. I ...didn't ...mean ..to.. hurt ..you.. it ..was... just... these ..are ..the ...thing ..which ...make ..me.. uncomfortable... you ..know ...I.. come ...from... that ...society ...where always ..women ...are ...blame... for ...every ...mistake ...whether.. they ..are ...at ...fault ...or ...not...if we...will ...get.. together ...than ...you ...know ...what ...will ...people ...say ...they ...will ...say...I ...am ...gold ...digger ...who... just... trap... rich... guy... for ...money... they ...will ...say... my ...parents... and ...brother ...didn't ...raise... me... well... they ...will... never ...want... to ...know ...who... and ...how... ...we ...are ...they ...will... just... talk... about ...my ...character ...and... will ...say... ill ...about... my... family ...I ...know ..now.. you... will ...say ...why ...should... we ...care ...about ...those... people... who... just ...don't ...care ...about ...us ...and... I.. agree ...with ...that ...to ...but... I ...care ...about.. my ...brother... you ...just... said... that ...you ...can ...kill... anyone.. if.. anyone... try... to... hurt ...your... family... than ...it's ...same ...with... me ...to... yes... I ...can't... kill... anyone... but... I.. to... can't... see ...anyone... hurt ...my ...family... or... talk... ill ...about.. them... they ...are.. my ...everything ... I ...just ...have... my ...Bhai ...and... Bhabhi.. with ...me ...only... we ...don't ...have... any... relative ...accept.. ... Bhabhi... Family ...they... are ...the... only ...people ...whom... I ...loved... whom ...I ...never... want.. to..hurt ...Please... try... to ...understand... my ...problem... an... issue... to ...I... know ...I... hurt.. you ...but... that's ...what ...will... lead ...my... family... in ...future... if... we ..will.. get ...together... and ..for ...you... I.. can't ..betray ...them... and... break ...there ...trust ...and ...disappoint ...them ...try... to... ...understand...

(saying this she come out of his car and run from there leaving angry Jalal behind who just look at her way till she get out of his sight than he started driving towards cafe where his friends were waiting for him).

Abdul said : what happen Dude you look angry is there something wrong.

Viraj said : yes you gone to meet her right than what happen.

Aslam said : did you had fight with her.

Mirza said ; or did your plan get flop.

Salima said : whom you all are talking about.

Shivani said : yes who is she is she is Jalal new girlfriend.

Seher said : is there anyone answer our question.

Natasha said : first let him sit guys and take some rest than ask your question.

(getting irritated with there nonstop chatter he break the coffee mug on table in rage).

Jalal said : shut up don't you all dare to ever talk about her... bloody heartless girl... I poured my heart front of her ...and she ..she talk about bloody society moral and our Difference... answer me guys it's my fault that I am Muslim... it's my fault that I am Rich... it's my fault that my life style and standard is to high front of her ...answer me if I am rich than I don't have right to get the girl whom I love... it's so difficult for her to understand me ...Dammit she bloody middle class girl have a guts to reject me ...to tell me to stay away from her ...that little 18 year old girl I will not leave her ...I will not she will have to pay for rejecting... me she will have to pay for hurting me...

(he yelled in front of his friends who were now shaking in fear seeing him this much angry he was Frustrated irritated hurt and what not his eyes are blood shot red his hairs were messy his face was showing how much he is suffering by one rejection and seeing him like this everyone get angry on Jodha for hurting Jalal but than composing themselves Abdul Viraj Mirza Aslam hugged him than make him sit on chair than make him drink some water and sit besides him).

Viraj said : calm down Dude and tell us what happen that to everything.

Aslam said : yes because without knowing we can't do anything.

Jalal said : well as I already told you what I did yesterday and you know guys according to my plan I goes to meet her today to and...

(in calm voice he told them everything word by word which make everyone shock they didn't knew what to say as both of them are right on there place as they all knew how difficult it is fore a girl and her family to live as they all are rich so they never face this type of situation and for the first time they got to know how difficult it is for a middle class girl).

Shivani said : I think you should forget her she can't be with you.

Salima said : yes I agree with her as she is very innocent girl who just want to live her life on her own condition and want to make her brother proud.

(listening this Jalal get angry).

Jalal said : no she is mine and only mine if she will become someone partner than that person have to be only me I want her and I will get her by hook or by crook.

Abdul said : but there is no chance I mean neither she get impress by your look neither by your power and money than how will you make her yours.

Aslam said : I think you just need to give her time maybe in future she to agree with you as we don't know what future is store for us.

Mirza said : that's not possible because there is only few weeks are left to finish our college and after that we will be left than how will she fall for him.

Natasha said : well he is right how will he make her his when she just get scared of him.

Jalala said : there have to be some way I mean come on guys think something.

Viraj said ; than just kidnap her and marry her all problem solve.

Abdul said : are you crazy what if she tried to hurt herself.

Aslam said : than blackmail her.

Jalal said : no guys these are not the things I want to do with her I want her to marry me by her wish.

Seher said : than why don't you impress her brother I mean if you really want her to be with you than make her brother on your side as the type of girl she is I am sure she will not have problem if her brother will agree to make you her life partner what say.

Jalal said : that's can be possible yes I will do that only so now I should impress her brother only great idea Seher well done okay now let's go to college.

(than all of them goes to college and reach there in half hour and started attending there class and in the evening goes to sit on canteen and started teasing each other other side Jodha to come out of her class and goes to canteen and sit on one chair staring at her cell phone when Ajay Siya Nisha comes towards her and sit besides her and looking at her lost they get worried).

Ajay said : hey what's wrong Dear why you look sad.

Siya said : yes today you were not paying attention on class to.

(she didn't answer them just staring at her cup and seeing her like this Nisha shake him and she come to her sense).

Nisha said : are you listening we are asking you what happen.

(seeing her friends she didn't control herself and started crying tears started coming out of eyes like water fall and seeing her like this they all get worried so they hugged her tightly).

Ajay said : hey what's wrong please you are scaring us tell me did anyone hurt you just tell me I will not leave that person.

Nisha said ; yes Jodha come on answer us.

Siya said : first stop crying and calm down and share with us what's wrong.

(they were consoling her and trying to get there answer but they didn't knew that Jalal and his friends and there girlfriends were seeing and listening there talk and Jalal is burning in rage seeing Ajay hugging Jodha other side Jodha break the hug and forgetting Jalal warning she looked at Ajay).

Jodha said : you guys remember few weeks before someone beat Ankit.

Siya said : yes and how can we forget that Jalal who did this such a spoil brat he is he change his girlfriend like cloth and use his father money like he is the king of universe I hate him.

Nisha said : but I heard he is change now he now started helping others and started respecting elders to and now days he and his friends started attending class to and behaving polite with others.

Ajay said : shut up guys first let us know what she have to say than start talking about him anyway tell me Dear why you bring that topic now.

Jodha said : woo...he meet me and...

(than calmly she told them everything word by word making them hell shocked and somewhat furious to).

Ajay said : he did this much he manhandle you forcefully take you with himself and behave rudely with you and you didn't told us why.

Siya said : that's why your both cheeks and wrist are red today isn't it.

Nisha said : I thought he is change but he is...what to say about him.

Jodha said : don't know what to do guys I can't tell Bhai now as he is already very tense regarding Bhabi and her Mother and now knowing this he will get more tense and I don't want that.

Ajay said : don't worry you just avoid him and till your brother comeback we all will stay in your house and if he dare to do anything than I will show him what Ajay Singhania is because if he is son of powerful businessmen in Mumbai than I am more powerful businessmen in whole India.

Siya said : I am no less to Ajay now don't worry Jodha we are with you.

Ajay said : enough of these serious talk tomorrow is football match and I want you all there to cheer me okay.

Nisha said : okay done we will be there but for now let's eat something I am hungry...

Ajay said : is there anytime when you are not hungry Nisha.

Nisha said ; just shut up go and get our order.

(listening this Ajay get up and bow like Waiter).

Ajay said : okay so what a pretty and beautiful gorgeous girl want to have.

Jodha said ; sandwich and Coke.

Siya said : Burger and Coffee.

Nisha said : coke and Burger.

Ajay said : okay than let me get for you all.
(than he left to get there orders and comeback within few minutes and soon they started having there snacks).

Ajay said : guys don't you think it's long time we didn't had fun.

Siya said : yes you are right than its there some plan.

Nisha said ; let's go and watch movie.

Jodha said ; what about Participating in Bike race.

Ajay said : good idea as there is one bike race is going to happen on Saturday than let's participate in that.

Nisha said : done than we will go for that.

(here they were enjoying and other side Jalal is getting angry seeing her close with Ajay).


Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Me First
Awesome update dear update soon 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Me First

Awesome update dear update soon😛

thanks dear for cute comment and don't worry I will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb Update
Jodha is scared about society and does not want to hurt her brother by breaking his trust
While Jalal is fumingly angry on her for not agreeing his proposal and him too
Both group of friends are suggesting them ways to go ahead in this matter
Jalal decides to impress her brother first

Continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome chappy
Poor Jodha
When she will fall in love with jalal
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Poor Jodha
When she will fall in love with jalal
Update soon


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Superb Update
Jodha is scared about society and does not want to hurt her brother by breaking his trust
While Jalal is fumingly angry on her for not agreeing his proposal and him too
Both group of friends are suggesting them ways to go ahead in this matter
Jalal decides to impress her brother first

Continue soon...

well she is not scared of society or people she is just scared of breaking her Brother trust as she didn't want to disappoint him and about Jalal so for the first time he get rejection so it will make him angry and that's what he is now anyway thanks for such awesome comment dear and don't worry I will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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glad you like it dear and give such a cute comment and don't worry I will update soon and yes you are third one and dear just have little Patience than you will know by reading next chapters that when she will love him till than wait dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5...
jalal u're too much intimidating the poor soul now !

& oops her speed of running...😛😆

well anyone would do that , when they r hell scared like that .

but jalal needs to realize his actions if he wants her affection !
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Part 6...

oops oops , they r back to square one !

& jalal full in rage , i hope he doesn't end up doing something horrible .

jo so terrified has confided in friends thus riling jalal , i hope he'll understand her fears .

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