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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


😆

She is special na that's why 😆

Okay!! 😔





Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Part 2:


So post-marriage sherbet date of Mr. and Mrs. Khan😉...

😆

Stuti, what lovely reviews... Really had a good read!! ❤️
Edited by Kalgi22 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22



😆

Stuti, what lovely reviews... Really had a good read!! ❤️


Thank you DI!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Part 2:

It was a fairy-tale chapter! So simple, so delicate and so beautiful! Loved it!

Special mention to the first scene! What a sensational shaving description! So sensual and appealing!☺️ Wow! Maza aa gaya! Enjoyed each and every detail of it! 😆 😃

Also the charming light conversation of Akbar, Azeez and Ibrahim, the warmth of their personal relationship and of course talks about Heera's new title 'Bhabijaan'... The whole scenario was so simple, realistic and heart-touching... Loved it!❤️

Akbar found out Heera's hair on his pillow!! Wowww!!☺️ ☺️

"Pinching the tress between his fingertips, he held it up against the sunlight. Long. Dark brown. Wavy. And enticingly familiar."

Don't know why but I found this very romantic. 😆 Reminds me our childhood fairy-tale stories where the prince falls in love with the princess only by finding two strands of her beautiful hair... ❤️

So post-marriage sherbet date of Mr. and Mrs. Khan😉... And she wore the necklace gifted by him haa?😆
I was just as mesmerized as Khan Sahib to read the detailed description of Khan Sahib's observations and feelings after he sees her... 👏 Di! None can write such a simple scene so delicately like you!!!⭐️

"But what he noticed adorning her lips this noon was something else altogether. She was truly happy. At peace."

-As she has got back her belief... She wants to live happily with you now! And I am so happy for Heera now!😳

"The walls and distances should've pulled them apart. Yet, she seemed more comfortable around him, as he felt around her. As if in this time apart, they'd sought and found a small breach in that wall to be able to reach out to each other."

-Love these lines!! So simple, so touchy, so poignant!👏


"the subtle language of his eyes gave the impression that it wasn't only the diamond set he was complimenting when he whispered 'beautiful' twice. 'Thank you...' she took a sip of the sherbet to mask her grin."

-☺️😆


Oh our mischievous Khan Sahib! And his thief-prank.😆 Loved his way of revealing the fact the she has been caught! So sweet and lovely it was!😳 And followed by their casual conversation, like every normal husband-wife, their discussions about the chausar, and his possessiveness...😃😳 Akbar seemed too cute to me today than I supposed him to be. 😆

'16 years of living in paradise... in a home... with nothing but the comforts of the wind, the greens and damp Earth... and suddenly one day...' an empty beat passed 'and suddenly one day... you wake up to find it being taken away...' he sensed the dip in his voice. The words were flowing, and he was beginning to flow with them, backwards, into the past. No, he had to stop. 'It must be hard...'

-Loved Akbar's sensitivity...😳

'I am 17 years old now'

-So we are getting a belated birthday party? 😆


A picture flashed in his mind's eye just then. Of him acting on an emotional impulse, getting off his divan and pulling her passionately close to show she wasn't alone. Clasping her within his arms to show he would always be around watching out for her, even if he couldn't always be with her. Fastening her palm to his chest to show how her joys and sorrows mattered. Having her gaze into his eyes to show none of this was an exaggeration.

-Come on Khan Sahib! I am with you...😆 Really, today Akbar Bhai is looking too cute!😳


'But...' He rubbed the back of his neck.

-Awww 🤣 🤣


" Heera realised she was using every womanly trick she was familiar with, to stay poised 'I wasn't aware...'"
-😆 😆

So time for the gift which makes Heera so excited. 😃 She is truly excited, just like a teenager girl should be... 😳 It really touches the heart when the very matured and sensitive Heera acts like a 17 years girl.😳

Years ago her father had gifted her lenses to help her to see properly, and today her husband gave her the same, a binocular, to expand the scope of her vision... It was touchy!👏

Loved Heera's confusion about the new type of lens she got.😆 And loved her enthusiasm when she discovered the working principle of those 'funny lens' all on her own!😳

It must have been best gift of Heera among all the gifts she will get from him throughout her life... ⭐️

Also expecting an important role of this binocular for upcoming events. Will we get?😉😃

Thank you so much for such a beautiful chapter Di! Loved it!⭐️


Stuti
Beautiful review dear 😳
Akbar bhai is looking too cute 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
EPISODE -5

Khan Sahib came slowly towards Lana and whispered into her ears, inaudible to the others.

"Kindly do not delay any further Sahiba. I want as much time as possible at the mansion to search"

The celebrations

There were colours and sounds everywhere. Not just the mansion, the entire town seemed to be in a festive mood. Traditional music, folk dances, turban tying competitions, vendors and crowds, the little town was in a carnival mood. But none of these impressed Azeez Shah, now the new Sahib of the little group of invitees. The smell of ghevar, malpuas, balushahis and sohan halwa were assaunting his olfatory senses and taste buds. The memories of the hare channa that he had a couple of days before he left, triggered a stinging yearning for all of the delicacies.

His partner was lost in yearnings of a different kind. How she wished she was a part of the turban tying competition, holding the colourful cloth in her hand and going round and round him...

"Welcome Sahibs and Sahibas..." , their host interrupted Lana's imaginations from going any further. " Lana's uncle returned the respects and introduced his guests. "This is my niece Lana and her fiance Rajendra Singh" Azeez instinctively looked around and then remembered that it was HIS name now. And did a 'Namaste' careful to restrain his usual 'Adab' gesture.

The invitees took to their seats while the valets and maids were relegated to their groups.

At the Parnagarh Haveli

"Have you finished the task you were assigned" , the whisper was so low and sinister.

"Oh yes. The KunwarSa will send his men to collect it on the third and final day of the celebrations there" came the reply in a more uncanny tone.

At the celebrations

"Do you want some ghevar beti?" asked the genial uncle to Lana, "You seem to be so distracted by them." He signalled to the servant carrying the tray.



"Sahiba", Khan Sahib came forward and forwarded the plate with deliciously golden ghevar with copious rabri toppings.

"Oh! This is our javaisa's valet. You have mingled well here my boy" , the old man tapped on Akbar's shoulders cheerfully.

That evening outside Kuki's house

Kalgiakka was waiting in the dark behind the bushes straining her eyes and ears to find out what the conversation was about. Earlier that evening, she had seen Kuki happily humm and sing at her balcony. She was so happy after giving pain to her friend and throwing a froggie at her and making her fall in water. Abruptly Kuki had stopped her song midway and looked as if she just remembered something. "Oh yes! He'll be coming for dinner. I almost forgot. Let me prepare something." She had said aloud.

This made Kalgiakka determined to find out who the ' He' was. Azeez was supposed to be with Lana for a week. Was he sneaking back, or was it a different ' he'.

Now that gave rise to many possibilities.

Kalgiakka could now hear voices and see shadows but nothing more. She decided to go nearer. She went closer and placed her leg over a stone that could get her nearer to the windows...and THUD.

Kalgiakka slipped but was caught in the firm hands of a stranger.


"It is wrong to follow a lady in the dark. But how right is it to peep into another's window in the same dark?" came the soft genteel voice.

Edited by Sandhya.A - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

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Lashy Sahiba, you, too?😲

Quote : Lana... Bhabijaan left😡


Congratulations Manu , Lana, Chellam -the hall of fame celebrities- way to go, Sahibas! 👏 👏 👏

Chellam- No. 4 overall - that is a laudable achievement!⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏

Chellam, with so many different time zones, I included Lana and Vathsy in the biggest group but since you so happily pointed it out as being incorrect (I really wonder why the Sahibas are always out to get teachers! 😆 ), I will shift them to the author's group to keep her company ( since it would be 1 a.m. in California /5 p.m. in Malaysia).

Periyamma ...HBAS Chapter 41 in Karkuzhali's Day Dream.

Absolutely fabulous, Periyamma. 👏 👏

The Robin Hood gifs are just superb!

Thank you for making this Monday so magnificent, Periyamma. 🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lana and her distraction... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 I wonder why she didn't go 'THUD' when she heard that husky whisper... 🤣 🤣


And Azeez suddenly remembering his position rather looking around and his yearning... cute!! 😆


What? 😲 'HE' coming for dinner?? 😲 who's HE kuki?? 😲 that too when Azeez not around??? 😲


Again Kalgiakka met a guy in the same dark?? and Who's HE?? Is the both 'HE' same?? 😲 😆
Edited by Kalgi22 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Chellam- No. 4 overall - that is a laudable achievement!⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏

>>> Thank you, Miss!! Image result for qoobee shy emoticon

Chellam, with so many different time zones, I included Lana and Vathsy in the biggest group but since you so happily pointed it out as being incorrect (I really wonder why the Sahibas are always out to get teachers! 😆 ), I will shift them to the author's group to keep her company ( since it would be 1 a.m. in California /5 p.m. in Malaysia).



It's so nice to catch Errors in Teachers, Miss!! Image result for qoobee shy emoticon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Lana and her distraction... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 I wonder why she didn't go 'THUD' when she heard that husky whisper... 🤣 🤣

Because it reminded her that he didn't stop in his tracks to admire, but was irked at her delaying in all that solah singar.😆


And Azeez suddenly remembering his position rather looking around and his yearning... cute!! 😆

Azeez is cute.


What? 😲 'HE' coming for dinner?? 😲 who's HE kuki?? 😲 that too when Azeez not around??? 😲


Again Kalgiakka met a guy in the same dark?? and Who's HE?? Is the both 'HE' same?? 😲 😆

TWT, W&W,

Btw, did you read the last line i added Chellam?

Edited by Sandhya.A - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A



Because it reminded her that he didn't stop in his tracks to admire, but was irked at her delaying in all that solah singar.😆

>>> Oh my poor Lana she was dreaming that he stopped to admire her.. .🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣



TWT, W&W,
>>> 😡 😡 😡 😡

Edited by Kalgi22 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

When Maharaj kakasa served Azeez some hare chane ka halwa at the dining room

>>>>>> 🤣 🤣 🤣


Thank you for the heavenly rose pudding!🤗
Thank you also for the reply to my first set of comments, Sahiba!❤️


😳 ☺️ 🤗 Both of you...😆 😆 😆
Kuki 🤗

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