Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 89

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

LMAO!
I know😆
Take your time!
And chal bye for now!

See ya!!
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Posted: 7 years ago


Aati hu jald idhar!
Pakka!
😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
RES
Ek saath unres karungi!!

Sukoon
Haaye!
****
Zealous si Zoya🤗

First things first!
Dedication to me?..That was a surprise!
Sukoon..your dedication to me and I must be the last one to unres!
Shii!!
Sorry!
But you know after what you said there ,what I must be feeling right now!
Overwhelmed isn't the word I guess!
It's just that Zo...(After you, Prii gave me the official permission to call you by that name ok 😆)

On a serious note,
What you said is what I wanted to ya!
This Forum is home because of you and I mean it!
I told you this before and I will say this again, I won't be able to see this home without you. It won't be the same! It can never be the same!
But I don't have to and am happy with the fact!

I am comfortable here, I am happy here...the reason is you!
Thank you for always being the strong willed person that you are. You gave me the much needed confidence that I always lacked!
You are the person I admire and respect.
I am a person who don't trust people easily and respect...Well respect is what a person has to gain for me...And you have my respect from the day one and you managed to increase the level as the time passed.

Thank you for always being there. Thank you for always being honest , Ofc for never sugar-coating the bullshit and for always being the same.
Thank you for being my friend in every way!
Thank you for simply being you!
And you'll never lose me as I myself can't afford to lose you...Here on IF, Wattpad or whatever the other means...I'll be there!
The Celebration thread, it was a proud Fan there and your friend there was even more proud to do that!
I am!
I Love you Zoya!
Donno why but am suddenly very senti!

**************
Ok!
Coming to the upi now!
Seedhi baat no bakwaas here as warning aa jaayegi😆

Sukoon...Solace and it gave us exactly that!
Title ek number!
Timing...can't be more perfect!

The first line and My mind went to...you know where?
Qatra!

The dream..Oye hoye!
Par Sumo lives up to her name...and ye diya Chammaat!
Aisa kon karta hai re!
Bechara Sapne waala Shravan!

The continuation of dream...It so happens!
And ye to dream hai hi *ahem ahem*

Pappi!!
Damn😆
Preeta ke ideas and Sumo ki uljhan😳

A pair of eyes..Those eyes
Again nihaarofying..aaye haaye!

Chashmish ❤️
The Longing looks...Baat hi kuch or thi!

It was his personal heaven and his very own hell...I Love it!
His love that was much more deep and pure than one can imagine!
He lived it all those years, each day, each moment and alone!
A Love so rare!

Tonight he would find the Sukoon he lacked all these years...He found it!
And this time, he wasn't the only one.
Sumo found hers too!

She could be doing anything and yet manage to light up all the dark places of his being...The power Sumo had over his entire being consumed him as a whole!
Every emotion, every feeling...for her, cause of her!

Sardi ki dhoop, Gharmi ki chaav,
Baarish ki pehli boond, Ek pyara se gaaun,
Dekh kar tumhe jaane kyun, Hamesha yeh khayal aata hai,
Jaane tumhari har beeti hui baat pe, kyun mujhe pyaar aata hai...
I So Loved how he whispered it in her ears!
And this couplet...In Namik's Voice ..Uff!!

Self Control....Bhara hua hai bande mein!
Sorry sanskaari Shravan mein!
Pfft...Sumo aisa zulm na kar!
Bechara!

Is baar sacchi waala chamaat😆
Ache bhale scene pe chanta maar diya!
Ye Sumo hi kar sakti hai!

If Shravan felt at peace earlier he was completely shook now...Same Shravan same !
This was the craziness he fell for, only now it was surely amplified...Amplified 🤣
Ye limit paar ho gayi!

Glasses..baat hi nyaari hai!
Just because I slapped you, why didn't you kiss me?...🤣
Sumo!!!!
Shravan ne bhi mauke pe chauka maara...wah wah!
She is hilarious indeed😆

Shravan is such a tease
but but but..
Chasma beech mai aayega...🤣
#3Idiots
#NaakBeechMeinAayegi
#Epic
😆

Laughing Shravan.❤️
Sumo in her sleepy self admiring him happily.
Haaye ❤️

Why are you in my room?
No, why are you in my bed?
No! Why the heck were you kissing me!...Hosh aa ra hai dheere dheere😆
Red with entertainment...embarrassment to generally hota Shravan ke saath 😆

His eyes always betrayed him, he may say a mouthful but one word from his eyes and she knew what he wanted to say and couldn't...Love love love!!!!
❤️

Miffed Shravan.😳
Roshan...😲
Hritik Roshan...🤣

I don't buy that!...Nobody can Shrav!
So lame Sumo!

Jealous Shravan..Aww Man!
Aisi nazrein to sirf tumhaare liye hain Shravan!
Sumo ka Beautiful boyish Man😳😆

Suman understood but decided to hear it from the horse himself, strike that, giraffe is more apt...Yeah Giraffe is actually more apt🤣
So Sumo ka Beautiful Lambu Giraffe!

"Zindagi guzaar di talaash-e-yaar mai,
Chalte rahe thakan ki aadh mai,
Socha tha hijr ki tanhayi mai faana ho jaayenge,
Yeh na samjha tha ke Sukoon tere dar pe paayenge.."
Bro..👏👏
I Love it so much!
So so apt ya And so deep to say!
Sukoon!!!!
And Shravan's Husky voice is cherry on the top!

He couldn't allow her to know, the walls he built had crumbled at her feet in no time...Shravan's walls and there Sumo's walls!

They are young..agreed!
Needed some time to know each other...Agreed!
Strange feelings could wait...Can they Zoya?😳

Not that he thought she had forgotten but he simply wanted to hear from her, he felt loved, wanted, important...These simple lines but they are so beautiful!
I Love this ya Zoya!

She was his Sukoon and he was her every dream...And together they are home!
Love ❤️

Sitting under the stars,
Talking about everything under the sun,
Sipping hot chocolate,
Their souls knew the other; was the one.
A beautiful upi with a Beautiful Ending!

Ek baar to yu hoga,
Thoda sa sukoon hoga..
Dil mein na kasak hogi,
Baras raha ishq ka noor hoga...

Sukoon bhari Upi Zoya!
Loved it so much!
N Love you more🤗

Keep writing n I'll keep reading!
Nikka sa Nik


Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mesmerising...Complete magic and exquisite
Just loved it

P.S: Sorry, can't comment long (exams n assignments hai and in short am doomed😭)

Thanks for PM Zoya
Love, Sidhi
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Posted: 7 years ago
"Chasma beech mein aayega" 🤣
That was such a Sumo thing!

Oh, I really enjoyed it! Tha balance of the "Pappi" and then the not-so-hidden feelings pouring out. I know it will take a while but I really want to see them as boyfriend and girlfriend. ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
So 1st time on IF...😊
U excel at writing emotions... Literally writing them...
I was so lost in reading this .. didn't even realise when it ended..
Sumo's dream.. to Shravan watching her changing expressions so ardently has been penned down beautifully...

So they both knw what the other one feels... But even after being positive about everything.. they still want to give it time...

Sumo ka Sapna part seriously got me rolling... I m still laughing over the chashma beech me aayega...!!!!

The whole cover-up portions from both the sides was hilarious... Especially the way sumo fumbled for words before finally uttering Hrithik Roshan's name...

Jealousy plays the magic almost everywhere...😉

Shravan ki shayari again reminded of the show I cannot get over from... N d 1 u wrote was amazing.. though i had to Google certain words since I m not so well versed in urdu...😆

So basically this piece was again an awesome work by u... N as I ve already told u many times... I love your writings...

I ve stopped guessing upcoming tracks in any story.. since I had tried many times before but failed miserably... So whatever u ll write to continue this relationship ka progress would be better than my imagination... So I ll patiently wait for the next update...😊


Seeing Alfaaz ka update meri neend urr gayi... But ironically after reading the whole thing I felt a certain SUKOON n now I can sleep peacefully...😆😆

1st post to comment after almost an year... I guess it sets a record for being silent...😆
Lots u love
Swati

Edited by swatiagarwal89 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sooper awesome update zoya..thanq for the update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much for commenting people!
I've read each comment and loved it!
I shall reply soonish!
Love you all!
🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
O my..rhat was lovely
Both want the same but...going slow.
Lived the concept.
Beautifully written.

Thanks for the pm Zoya

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