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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's interesting with action & luv at 1st sight start... It's beautiful... Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

It's interesting with action & luv at 1st sight start... It's beautiful... Continue soon

oh thank for liking and giving such a awesome comment dear and I will update soon don't worry.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1...

so good yr. 👏

am pretty much intrigued with the storyline...😳

gosh jalal literally thrashed ankit poor guy , well jalal is the bad guy & he has seen jo i wonder what would be his next step .

loving it , plz continue soon .

can't wait for the next !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice chapter..
Love the meeting of ja and Jo...
That part is beautiful...
Jalal is blown by Jo...I like Jo's words to jalal...
Nice start...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 1...


so good yr.👏

am pretty much intrigued with the storyline...😳

gosh jalal literally thrashed ankit poor guy , well jalal is the bad guy & he has seen jo i wonder what would be his next step .

loving it , plz continue soon .

can't wait for the next !

well it was kind of jealousy and irritation which make him beat Ankit so much and knowing about his step you have to wait for next chapter so have little patience dear I will update soon. And thanks for such a awesome comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Nice chapter..

Love the meeting of ja and Jo...
That part is beautiful...
Jalal is blown by Jo...I like Jo's words to jalal...
Nice start...

well I hope that you will like chapters to as you already like prologue and I am happy that I didn't disappoint you dear and about her words well it was my thought as many times listening about fight which happen for land or money I always think when anyone kill others do they ever thought about this anyway thanks for such beautiful comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing start to the story. Well done.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Amazing start to the story. Well done.

oh thank you for comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 2

(in Hospital Ankit Father Shiv Jodha Siddharth were sitting besides him and were happy knowing nothing serious by doctor but still he was not in his sense).

Siddharth said : don't worry he will wake up soon.

Jodha said : why don't we complaint against him you know he was very cruel I pleaded him still he didn't stop he is bad very bad he need to get punish.

Siddharth said : you are right we need to complain against him.

Shiv said : no my son it will be wrong and dangerous to do.

Jodha said : but why uncle.

Shiv said : because he is rich and powerful and more ever his father will save him to and after that they will make our life hell knowing we are the one who go against them and you know he is very dangerous and selfish type always get what he want by hook or by crook perfect bad boy.

(listening this she shiver in fear and hugged her brother more tightly).

Siddharth said : don't be scared dear nothing will happen.

Shive said : oh my god...

Siddhart said : now what happen.

Shiv said : he study at same college where my son and she is going to study Jodha always stay away from him okay.

Jodha said : I will uncle.

(after sometime they saw Ankit opening his eyes they sometime stay with him whole night and next morning when he get discharge they left to there home and started taking care of him like this two days get over and on Monday both of them goes to college by Siddharth who drop them by his car).

Jodha said : are you fine right.

Ankit said : what do you think.

Jodha said : that you are perfectly fine.

Ankit said : my first class is not with you so bye meet you at canteen on lunch.

Jodha said : okay bye.

(then Ankit left for his class and Jodha was walking towards her class when some senior group of boys come on her path and stop her and surrounded her).

One Boy said : what's your name beautiful you are new isn't it.

Another boy said : why are you wasting time by asking give her task.

Third one said : first let her know who we are.

Fourth boy said : well we are your senior and as you are new so you have to do what we ask okay so first tell us your name than we will give you a task to complete.

(she was very scared but didn't show them and was listening them silently than with calm voice).

Jodha said : my name is "Jodha Singh"

first boy said : well like you your name is beautiful to now here come your task you have to propose the boy who will enter first from this gate now or else from one of us will kiss you right now.

Jodha said : I will not do that it's wrong I am not going to obey you all.

Second boy : said : than be ready to get kissed by one of us.

Jodha said : you all can't force me I will complain against you all right now.

(listening this they all started laughing).

third boy said :you will complain against us and do you really think the old lion who lost his all teeth will take action against us really do you have any idea who we are.

Jodha said : may be I know what you all are.

Fourth boy said : oh really you know than tell us.

Jodha said : you all are arrogant spoil brat who just know how to trouble others isn't it and before you all started showing your power on me let me tell you if you all didn't get out of my way than you all will regret for sure as the Principle is standing behind and seeing all this.

(listening this all turn to look behind and taking the chance she run from there and goes to her class and get busy in her studies when they didn't find Principle they look back at her but get shocked not to see her there so they understood she make them fool but than they left from there to find another pray to have fun with and like this two more week pass she and Ankit get busy on there study and was having fun with there family and on one but she didn't knew someone is stalking her everywhere she go and was got to know many thing about her and that someone was none other than Jalal who was now laying on his bed and looking at her Bracelet when Abdul enter in his room and saw his lovesick friend and sighed when he saw him laying on bed and looking at her pic on his cell since the day he saw her his friend is not himself anymore he stopped being mean at college he had stop talking rudely with juniors he barely reply his friend and had left every girlfriend he was dating according to Abdul he was avoiding every incident to occur which may worsen his reputation because all of sudden he started caring what others will think about him and Abdul know who those people are he shook his head looking at Jalal).

Abdul said : don't be secret admirer meet her and tell her about your feelings.

Jalal said : she will get scared Dude.

Abdul said : at least let her how you have been these days how you turn out from Being Rowdy to Romeo. the boy about whom every girl dream is now stalking a shy little girl.

(Jalal glare at Abdul but he just shrugged his shoulder).

Abdul said : I am just telling you to at least let her know. Accepting or Rejecting are the thing to care about later but for now Talk to her.

(since the day he beat Ankit he was ashamed at his act for the first time in his life and had didn't courage to come in front of her so from Past two weeks since she join college he had been following her and checking on her routine he was sure that she must be hate him now for that incident or maybe she forget him and he knew if she somehow get to know about his stalking ways she will get unnecessarily scared so, it was safer to see her from far and smile at her always and told his juniors to keep an eye on her and don't let any boy near her).

Jalal said : I think you are right I should talk to her.

Jalal pov : may be a simple talk wouldn't scare her would it.

(next day Jodha was walking on road alone and going towards bus stop as Her brother left early and Ankit was gone with Shiv to Delhi for some function and she listening some songs on earphone she silently going when one car stop at side of the road and Jalal comes towards her and called her name which startled her a little she take of her earphone and look back and get scare to see the him there he saw her scared face and felt guilty but than composing himself he take step towards her while she just gulp her saliva).

Jalal said : do you remember me "Jodha" My name is Jalal Mohammad

(he forwards his hand to shake it with hers but saw her at him in fright He action towards his hand with his eyes and saw her acknowledging it but she only nodded reluctantly and he awkwardly pulled it back).

Jodha Said : I do

(she said : it low tone but that make his day only he get excited to talk to her now seeing her wearing light green color Sleeveless Salwar suit with open hair he was smiling and looking at her softly).

Jalal Said : I ...I ...actually me.

(he smiled awkwardly and than nodded a little than take a breath).

Jalal said : can I drop you college ?

(her eyes furrowed while he sighed).

Jalal said : I can drop you to college as you know I study there to and have car to and the day is quite hot isn't it.

(He trailed off while gesturing towards his black - colored car parked aside he saw her eyebrows raising when she understand the meaning the most popular bad boy of the city is offering her lift she gulped in fear and quietly shook her head).

Jodha said ; tha...thank ...you...but I ...am...fi...fine.

(saying this she started walking when).

Jalal said : wait.

(she stopped and closed her eyes last time she saw him here this very road had turned out the life death game. but now they both were alone don't know what he want from her now she get scared of him like hell the road is silent no one is here and than he com in front again but before he could say anything).

Jodha said : listen...we ...didn't ...taken ...any ...money ...from ...you ...or ...your company ...there... must... be... some ...misunderstanding.

(her innocently spoken words stab his heart like a sharp arrows He blinked and kept staring at her feeling extremely guilty).

Jalal said : look .

(he gulped nervously).

Jalal said : I am sorry I don't know what come over me that day I didn't mean to beat him or hurt him trust me I just I am sorry for whatever I did to him.

(Jodha was shocked to hear him as whatever she heard about him she know he never apologize to anyone but than why he is doing that to her).

Jodha said : You...you... should...apologize... to one... whom.. you... hurt ...why... me.

(she suggested nervously and bit her lip fear fully what if he get angry on her and her this action just turn him on now but composing himself).

Jalal said : I will but for now I want you to know that I didn't mean to kill...

(he stopped himself and squeeze his eyes shut nervously and open them than looked at her doe like fearful eyes).

Jala said : I didn't mean to hurt your best friend and I am asking your forgiveness too.

(she nodded and start to walk again).

Jalal said : hey stop actually I want to help you by dropping you college would you like...

(she gulp and shook her head and nervously).

Jodha said : it's so kind for... you to help but... I can't ...take it as I ...don't talk... to... strangers ...and taking... a lift is to ...much...I am comfortable... going by myself please let me go... now .

( she told in her soft voice fearfully and stepped aside to walk but now Jalal block her way by coming front she take a breath and again nervously).

Jodha said : please... I know... you want to... help me but ...I am really ...fine please... let me go.

(she stepped aside and started walking again but only four step she taken when Jalal grab her wrist making her shiver in fear).

Jalal said : I wanna talk to you so a lift in my car will easily help I am asking again would you like me to drop you. to the college.

(he ask calmly looking at her from behind Jodha just turn side and looked at his eyes fearfully and than).

Jodha said : if you... ..wanna ...talk ...just talk ...here.

(Taking her words lightly he nodded sternly holding her wrist he stepped closer making her lower her eyes in discomfort).

Jalal said ; the thing is that I want to spend time with you I want to know you more we can get properly acquainted if you come with me after the college we can have coffee or something.

(offered Jalal while observing her expressions but all he could see was fear he felt he was scaring her so tried to lighten his words).

Jalal said : we can end up as a goods friends but that can happen if we spend time together what do you say ?

(now she was ready to faint as the boy who beat her best friend front of her mercilessly asking her to spend time with him that to after college and want to become her friend she looked around nervously than fearfully).

Jodha said : I need ...to get home... before dark... so I can't ...come anywhere... with you and that to after college...

Jalal said : than bunk last to college and I will make sure you reach at 6 pm always.

(a wave of terror crawled down her spine relizing he knew her casual time for reaching home she tried to reason).

Jodha said : but... .b.ut... ..I

(sternly).

Jalal said : but what .

Jodha said : I can' trust strangers.

Jalal said : I talk about being a good friend isn't it.

Jodha said : but.

Jalal said : no if's and but you are coming and that's final.

Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Super Update ..
I like this part...
Bad boy jalal is changed into love sick puppy because of Jodha's one look... Beautiful...
I like the way how Jo escaped from the senior gang...clever girl...
Ja is stalking her everyday..
The part where Ja is offering to Jo and her fearful and nervous refusal is well written...love that part...
His numerous attempts to make her not to scare and her fear increases more ...
Lovely story...

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