The GHOST

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beagleboy

@beagleboy

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Ghost sad,

Ghost bad?

Ghost plays his guitar,

smartly clad.

Ghost white

Ghost bites,

With eyes black

he is an ungainly sight.

Ghost blue,

Ghost true!

Ghost blows

wind in the direction he flew.

Ghost cold

Ghost bold

Ghost imperious

takes hold.

Ghost flickers,

Ghost bickers,

Ghost sits up on the roof,

and quietly sniggers.

But Ghost bored

so Ghost stored

details of a flower shop

2 years old. 😭

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

hiya beagleboy... popped over to commend your skill at composing verses.. I loved your previous composition too.. I see how beautifully you extend this unseen,yet sensed being.. his presence is heard by the verses he composes... in The Ghost.. you bring alive the missing Shiv.. well worded verses.. Frost bite.. frozen fire...
thanks beagleboy... keep composing and sharing, love hammie

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Posted: 7 years ago

You seriously have a nice rhyming skill.

Amazing verses. 👍🏼

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beagleboy

@beagleboy

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
hiya beagleboy... popped over to commend your skill at composing verses.. I loved your previous composition too.. I see how beautifully you extend this unseen,yet sensed being.. his presence is heard by the verses he composes... in The Ghost.. you bring alive the missing Shiv.. well worded verses.. Frost bite.. frozen fire...
thanks beagleboy... keep composing and sharing, love hammie

Thank you Hamlet. Thats very kind. I read your threads too, all very beautifully written. But a lot of the times, with three kids I am unable to string my thoughts together to do justice in the form of a respose to your well written prose!