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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovespari



😆OK no problem tk ur Tim.. M in no hurry😉😆

thanks for understanding dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats on new story Rashmi...
Interesting prologue...

again a bad boy Ja and scared Jo from him...
it will be nice to read how Ja will pursue Jo in this story...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

Congrats on new story Rashmi...
Interesting prologue...

again a bad boy Ja and scared Jo from him...
it will be nice to read how Ja will pursue Jo in this story...

yes a new story Di as I am thinking to finish my previous one that's why and about this story well just a bad boy Di not gangster or don and not week Jodha maybe little scare but I am glad you are excited regarding this and after such a long time you commented Di thank you and you are fine right I mean in your ff I Read that your health is not fine.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

thanks dear and I hope like prologue you people will like chapters to.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 1

(on one cafe four boys were drinking coffee and having fun by pulling and teasing each other).

one boy said : so you break up with your latest girlfriend Jalal.

second boy said : oh god really i mean she was hell beautiful Jalal and the way you were with her I thought she will be the only one.

third boy said : come on Viraj and Aslam you know about Jalal he is a player and get bore easily and I don't think there is any girl born in this world to be with him forever right Jalal.

Jalal said : yes you are right Abdul but Viraj was right she was hell beautiful but.

Viraj Said : but what.

Jalal said : yesterday when we were alone she said she love me and you all know that I don't believe in this isn't it so I need to break up with her and more ever she was just with me for Money nothing else.

Aslam said : than what now are you going to get your new pray.

Jalal said : no I am tired of this now and I am thinking to focus on dad business now.

Viraj Said : oh my god are you by chance thinking to become a good boy now don't do this college girl will commit suicide after knowing your decision.

Abdul said : well we don't know about girl but you definitely get heart attack isn't it.

Aslam said : yes looks at you face looks like someone break your heart Viraj.

Viraj Said : correct if Jalal will become good boy than how will we spend our time as you all know without him we can't enjoy isn't it after all he leader of us.

(suddenly his cell started ringing he check the caller ID it was from his PA he received the call).

Viraj Said : yes what happen.

His PA said : sir you have meeting with Delhi delegate you have to come office now sir as they want to meet you.

Viraj Said : okay I am coming.

(saying this he disconnect the call and looked at his friends so he in Calm voice).

Viraj Said : well I have to leave as one important meeting is come up so meet you all at college on Monday okay bye.

(saying this he left from there).

Jalal said : Abdul Aslam let's go we to have to meet someone now.

Abdul said : okay let's go.

(than they all left from there to and other side girl and boy around of age 18, 19 walking on silent road in the afternoon carrying some shopping bag on there hand).

boy said: now our shopping to get complete and from Monday we will join our college and I am very happy knowing that we both will study at same college what about you Jodha.

(wiping the sweat from her forehead by handkerchief Jodha smiled at her best friend).

Jodha said : I am happy to and thank you Ankit for helping me in studies on final exam.

(suddenly there peaceful walk from mall to home get disturb when a gang of bikers entered the silent street and approach them thee raging voice of tires fill there surrounding making both of them shudder in fear and the situation make Ankit more scared when he saw them stopping there bike at five step away from them and taking of the helmet and that's when he saw the leader of the gang who was none either than Jalal Mohammed getting down from bike threateningly and coming towards him with rage before Jodha could understand anything the spoil brat grab the shirt collar of Ankit and in stern Voice).

Jalal said : you father must be not aware with whom he is showing carelessness with isn't it.

(if looks can kill than Ankit was definitely dead by now he was hell scared seeing the most popular powerful bad boy of city front of him but then he in fearful voice).

Ankit said : sir give us... som... sometime he ...will... is really doing lot of ha...rdw... ork ...hardwork ...he will return your money soon.

(his stammering words just fuel to fire in already angry Jalal with gritted teeth).

Jalal said : when ,when he is going to return that we given you enough time to to collect the amount by all the hardwork you bloody people do isn't it.

(without mother living with father and only child Ankit from childhood get care and love from his father only who with hardwork always fulfill his wishes never for once he looked at him angrily forget about yelling and because of love and care he was reserve and shy type but a very good boy never in life he fight with anyone always score good in studies so violence and abusive language make him hell terrified but now coming to present here the boy is not only threatening him but yelling at him to and maybe can do more things with him as he was alone and they were three seeing him lost he shook him and yelled in loud voice).

Jalal said : tell your useless father return the money in two days or be ready to loose his job.

(and grabbing his collar more tightly).

Jalal said : and don't you dare to think that I will leave you if he didn't return the money you will suffer by me am I clear.

(unable to say anything Ankit just nodded his head shakily making Jalal hissed in rage).

Jalal said : speak from your f**king mouth you moron am I clear.

(a loud scream echoes there as till than no one noticed that Ankit was not the only one to get scared of all the yelling and threatening there was another soul to who was watching everything hidding behind her weak best friend and her scream swapped Jalal attention towards voice and the time he looked at her his eyes get stuck on her eyes his heart stop beating that time he absent minded leave Ankit and looked at her doe like eyes who was full of fear yet he can't deny how Mesmerising they were as she was hidding behind Ankit he can see her eyes only and noticing the bad boy is looking at her she fearfully hid behind Ankit more and clutch his shirt by behind and her action was caught by Jalal he pointed his hand at her finger).

Jalal said : come in front.

(a natural action was performed by Ankit he gently pushed her more behind and in shaking voice).

Ankit said : sir she...is...inn... innocent.. and don't... talk ...to... strangers.

(Jalal grab his chin tightly and in stern Voice).

Jalal said : you little boy don't ever try to tell me what to do.

(saying this he looked at her).

Jalal said : and you come in front.

(listening this she clutch Ankit shirt more tightly and sensing her uneasiness Ankit in again in fearful voice).

Ankit said : sir ...please... she... is not comfortable...let... us go...

(ignoring his words Jalal in loud yet cold voice).

Jalal said : I will not repeat this time just come in front now.

(she slowly slowly take step and stand besides Ankit and clutch bags which were in her hand more tightly if her eyes make his heart stop beating than her beautiful innocent full of fearful face stolen his heart by now he looked at her from top bottom open straight hair sleeveless white color top showing her white milky hands wearing one sliver bracelet in left hand and golden watch on right hand carrying four shopping bag and clutching them tightly in fear wearing light brown color jeans and brown boots she was looking no less than an angel from heaven).

Jalal said : what's your name.

(she responded slowly yet fearfully yet audibly to him " Jodha " and listening her melodious voice Jalal again get lost in her and repeated her name mentally "Jodha" and saw her shivering because of fear).

Ankit said : sir please...she is not comfortable...let...

(getting interrupted by him again and again Jalal lost his calm and before he could finish one punch landed on his face seeing that Jodha drop the bag on floor in fear and about to rush at him when Jalal friends grab her hands and let her watch her best friend Misery Jalal again punch him and Ankit lips get cut by corner and started bleeding than he punch him on his tummy he fell on floor).

Jodha said : no no no leave him please leave him do don don't do this please leave him.

(saying this she started crying profusely and started struggling to get out of his friends arms but they were powerful than her physically so she didn't get success and seeing the concern for the boy burn Jalal in rage he than started beating Ankit more dangerously that at the end he started spit blood from mouth and get faint but than Jodha kick both of Jalal friends by leg on side with her boot and for a 30 second they loose there hold on her so she push them and rush to her best friend and Started patting his face to wake him up and saw one auto is coming she shout for him to stop than with the help of driver make him sit on auto and kept bag inside to than turn towards Jalal and in disgustingly).

Jodha said : his father is really very hardworking he will return your money soon but if he loose his life will ever be able to return his only son to him.

(saying this without wasting a second she to sit inside the auto and left from there leaving a thoughtful Jalal behind who looks at her till she get out of his sight than looked downward where she was standing before and saw a silver bracelet is shinning so he bend down and take it and started thinking why was her face and words effect him like this he met many beautiful girls in his life and had many girlfriend than what is with her why she affected him like this is it love at first sight or something else did I want her body or her love his chain of thoughts broken by Aslam).

Aslam said : what was that Jalal why you beat him like this you said you just wanted to scare him than why you beat him.

Abdul said: yes and why were you looking at that beautiful hot girl like mad.

Jalal said : shut up Abdul don't you dare to talk about her like that and I to didn't wanted to beat him but his nonstop words make me loose my calm so I beat him now I am going home meet you both at college on Monday okay.

(saying this he wear his helmet and sit on his bike than left from there and Abdul Aslam to left from there and other side Jodha reach hospital Doctor started treating Ankit she than completed all the formalities and than call her brother within few minutes he received her call).

Siddharth said : hey cutie pie call me this time what happened everything fine your shopping is done.

Jodha said : Bhai... Bhai can you come at city hospital...now...

Siddharth said : why what happen are you fine did anyone hurt you just tell me now.

(saying this he get up picked his car keys and started coming out of his cabin hurriedly).

Jodha said : Bhai I am fine actually Ankit get beaten by some boys please come now I am hell scared.

Siddharth said : okay okay don't worry i am coming there and on the way I will inform his father to don't worry and don't you dare to cry okay.

(than cutting the call he sit inside his car and on the way goes to Humayu company and take Ankit father with him and told him whatever Jodha inform him and after half hour he reach hospital and saw Jodha standing outside of ward they both goes to her).

Ankit father said : what happen who did this and why.

Siddharth said : please don't cry and calm down and answer us.

(Jodha stop crying than hugged her brother tightly and told him everything listening everything).

Siddharth said : but who was he.

Jodha said : I don't know Bhai but Ankit knew him for sure.

Ankit father said : he is Jalal Mohammed my boss son his grandfather was political leader and his father is the most powerful popular businessman of Mumbai I taken some loan for my son education and was doing everything to return that soon but because of sudden I'll health I was unable to return that's why I think Jalal beat my son he is such a bad boy disgusting he use his father power for his own benefit and he is the very popular bad boy of this city.

Siddharth said : uncle how much Money you have to return him.

Ankit father said : I already arranged 6 lack and return them to but still need two lack to collect now.

(listening this Siddharth take out the checkbook from his office bag and written the amount and after signing he forward the check).

Siddharth said : okay uncle here take this check and pay him all the money now only go to him and give him now.

Ankit father said : but how can I take this from you no no need to do this.

Siddharth said : uncle after mom dad you are the one who supported me and Jodha how can we don't need to help you just take it now please.

(after lot of pleading from Siddharth and Jodha he take the check than goes to his office and return the whole money and come back to hospital).


Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Me First
Awesome one
Jalal a bad boy
Smitten by innocent jo
Waiting for next update soon dear
Love it 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Me First

Awesome one
Jalal a bad boy
Smitten by innocent jo
Waiting for next update soon dear
Love it😊

well I will update soon as I will focus on this and MLMP story of mine as His only one story is going to end so don't worry I will update this from now and thanks for first and fast sweet comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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U will continue right.Just like other writers are u stop in middle?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sranjani

U will continue right.Just like other writers are u stop in middle?

no no I will continue till it get finished same with my other story to don't worry about that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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no need to thank dear.

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