Ravages of Kasam Se

This is a poem which is an adaptation/remix of couple of songs by Vital Remains...

25% of Vital Remains
75% of Sheena Row

I apologize for the randomness and chaotic thoughts...the poem is strictly not linear in thought, just a jumbled mess that was my brain...

I like JB a lot, I really really am a great JB fan, in fact, when JB ends, I will not write any more KS fan fictions, but I really don't hate Meera...I think she is superfluous and redundant but she is really not hateful, selfish and unworthy of our respect.

But I understand your pain, you want JB badly, and we all feel righteous about saying bad things about Meera, but are we taking our hatred too far??

Ravages of Kasam Se

By storm, by force
With might... without remorse
We are here to establish JB's Love

Like cancer, our hate (for Meera and creatives)
Consumes the light of elysium
Unstoppable force of bigotry and supremacy

All destroying...all devouring
Heaven now ravaged... scarred and empty
Embedded in the deep, dark abyss

Strike the death knell of the pandemonium
Imbue one's hands in the blood of Meera,
Ringing our words of righteousness

Scared by the dimming of the light
Engulfed in our own bitterness
We wear our halo of truth

Mourn the missing chemistry
With passion, we pray for the bitter reunion
Through the grim chaos and endless pathos

We wait for the day of reckoning
Glory of wrathful indignation
We deny the union between Jai and Meera

Obsessed with our poisonous truths
We think it is wrapped in impurity
Screaming in your agony

Vehemence... the innocent shall feel our steel
Implode the structures of decency
Meera is no enemy of mine

But my shrine of gold has rusted away
In my heart, I know it's wrong
Worthless to the masses...end all for the few

The fading images through your merciless eyes
Watching as KS wastes away....
Heaven denied, as the show will now decay

Paradise scorned, eden all but burnt to cinders
Loyalty has turned to betrayal
Mourn the thought of hope departing

To walk the path of the righteous love
Forever dragging the chains of torment
It neither ends nor lives fully

The skeptic within me
Forever unbelieving JB will ever be together again
My Hope and sanity is all but gone

I am hanging on like a masochist
Gravedigger, Bring on the shovel
Hold that thought,

May be digging is not enough,
How about a crematorium?
Dust to dust, ashes to ashes…

Hope there is no room for resuscitation

Love,
-- Sheena

Really nice one and I am glad at seeing that there are a few people today sharing my thought that though JB remain the 'couple' of Kasam Se, Meera is not wrong, selfish or the right recipient for hatred here!

To answer what I think is a rhetorical question - Yes, the hatred has gone a bit too far and has no reasoning now. It is just that 'I hate Meera' and no valid reason for the same!

Shoba very well written and though the thoughts may not be linear the message has been brought about clearly - that's what matters! 😊

Shruti

sheenu...yaar...thank u...that poem was beautiful... and im so happy you kept me in mind when writing it...brilliantly done 👏

you are right...the hatred has gone way way way to far...i can get with JB, im not against it...i just get so mad when i see people bad mouthing an innocent meera...i know its all reel life, but it just gets to me.... 😕 😕 ...im just too involved i guess 😆 ...lol...

great job yaar...hats off to you

JAZ

Thanks for liking the poem, guys! I know this poem won't get too many responses...

All I wanted to say was,

YES! KS is in the pits, most of us want JB together, we know Prachi is leaving for five months and this is bringing a big void within KS!

The union might not happen, that leaves all of us empty and start some of our departures.

But stop with the hatred, it's bitter and it's consuming...and it's not worth it -

State what you want, without hatred...without name calling...

I Want JB,
I want Meera to straighten the mess between JB and leave the show with dignity!!

Wow Sheena, a brillant poem. Your so good with words. I agree 100%. I don't watch or read KS updates but every now and then I run into a post that pretty much tells me whats sort of going on. The show is gone, it was long gone. JB are only real and alive in our fan fic. That's why wrote number 19 fan fic. I needed closure and ended the story with humor and the way it should be. The show is so so so depressing. It makes you go on antidepressants. Seriously, one could have the best day ever, win a lottery, go on a date with their crush or dream guy but when you read KS updates or watch the show...your in bed for weeks and sad. Thats why stoppped long long along but I love the fan fics. So continue with that. But I think its time that we all move on and have our own version of JB that are together and happy.

But amazing poem! Very...whats the word....poetic and emotional and exactly what everyone is feeling. Your brillant with words!

Cheers,
Lilly

Sheena,
This was very much needed! I love JB a lot, very much want them to be together. But with Prachi out of KS for at least 5 months, and maybe never coming back, JB seems a dream! Unless there is a replacement, but even then our JB will never be the same.

But at the same time, this "Hate Meera" campaign is going a bit too far. She is being hated and true, without any strong valid reasoning! People don't have to like her, but this hatred is being carried a bit too far!!

I look at things from another angle too! Imagine how this is affecting the actress playing this role, getting all these bashings, I mean, our KS actors too will play other roles in other serials. Imagine if they are attacked without any serious reasoning. Put Prachi in place of Pallavi in another serial where her character may be splitting a beloved couple.This would be a creative decision. Would we like her getting bashed to this extent? Pallavi is a good actress, but this hate is making many say that she is a stone, expressionless, something which I do not agree as I have seen her in some episodes of KAA where she is good! In KS, she isn't as bad as she is made out to be, most of the problem lies with the creatives who haven't given her character a proper shape!

JB not being together is also a product of Prachi's other commitments along with whatever reasons the creatives had in the past for seperating them! Nowadays, our forum has only these "Hate Meera" threads, its sad, all this negativity!

Lilly,

I loved your FF, it was funny, bright and cheery - just what is needed.

I see so much despair, negativity, hatred now on the forum, and it's making me upset. This show is not worth it...Much as I love Jai and Bani...the KS team is not going to make their union happen, this looks like the end of the road.

Suganthi,

I know the reasoning behind the hatred that she is coming in between J and B, but you are right, it's not the character bashing anymore, it's the actress bashing. Just like we were really careful about not saying anything negative against RK or PD, we should respect PS the same way. I am sure she is a good actress.

I will probably be hated for writing this but during the holocaust many Germans chose not to say anything in support of the jews because they might receive the wrath of Hitler. The outcome was not good...If I am unpopular by saying the truth, so be it!!

Brilliant Sheena..you are very talented...first FFs, and now poem......a poem about us and posted for us....thank you!

Arre Sammy Dallas,

Tumhara hatred from the bottom of your feet is wasted on the show or the lady in question yaar! There are so many things in the world that we can direct our hatred at.


- The poverty and illiteracy

- The Child labor

- The child abusers/the spouse abusers

- The violence in the name of God, Nation and Ethnicity

- The corruption


But I respect your opinion!