Tum mere aasma meri zameen ban gaye # 3 pt 25 on pg 137 on 7/1 - Page 58

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Part 21
Awesome update...
Simmi not happy to see the surrounding ishra living she think how her brother as change bzcos of ishita. Simmi try to show the different raman where the place did not suite his standard & taste. Raman insisted to stay with ishita saying people get change life as teach him a way the live & he is happy in his life as ishita was with him. Ishita get teary as brother sister argue bzcos of him she even told raman to left her but raman very strong in his decision. Simmi challenge ishita raman try to stop her but ishita accepted it as bzcos of her she did not simmi raman relationship become bitter. Ishita start her workout while raman company her he tease her. Ishita find difficult to control food at first but slowly to start to follow the diet & did it regularly. Raman could not see different in ishita but mihir reliase about it...Mihir plan to make raman see ishita different...thank u for pm & update
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Lovely teaser...
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Amazing update.
So ishita started dieting.
Raman is going jogging with her.
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Hello friends back with new part .


Part 22



Mihir held Ishita's hand and took her out of her cabin then out from office . She asked " arey mihir where are you taking me ".

M- will come to know shortly .

Saying so he make her sit in car and drove away from there ,soon they stopped in front of a mall ,he took her inside to a ladies shop and told her to choose a beautiful slim fit evening gown . She made faces and spoke " Mihir why you wanna make fum of me ,I m so fat , gown will not look good on me ".

M- try for once .

I- won't it sound weird asking a gown of XL size .

M- why XL size .

I- what type of question is this , because I m fat aur kya .

M- will you keep quite for sometimes .

Ishita made a puppy face and got silent while mihir told the sales person to show some M size gown ,ishita made a scared face and whispered in mihir ear " I m not going to try it .mujhe apna mazzak nahi banana ".

Mihir made a irritated face and spoke
" ishita for god sake be silent for sometimes and choose a nice gown from these ".

She made a puppy face and start choosing a gown ,she saw many and finally chose a blue self designed gown as per Raman's choice . Mihir pick two three more and gave her to size them ,she went to the dressing room and tried them halfheartedly knowing well that they will not fit her bit to her surprise all of them fitted well to her .She rechecked the size then went out to show mihir ,he smiled fully on her sight and spoke " see how much you have lessened ".

She checked herself in the mirror and spoke looking at herself " haan Mihir main kitni patli ho gayi and Raman is so bad he never noticed me ".

M- aisa kya .

I- humm ,he never told me that I m getting slim .

M- I think its because your face is like that only moreover you both live together that why may be he wouldn't had noticed .

Ishita nodded ,they took all the four gowns and then went to well known beauty salon. He took her inside to told the receptionist to do her makeover . The receptionist told that it will take about two hours ,mihir told ishita to stay there while he will come and pick her after two hours ,see nodded and mihir went from there .The receptionist took Ishita inside and told of one of the girl to do Ishita's makeover .

She settled ishita in a chair and started her makeover ,washed her hairs ,did her manicure and pedicure ,like this she did everything and then finally ishita was done with her makeover . She paid the bill and was waiting for Mihir ,he came after sometimes and asked for her , the receptionist pointed towards ishita and he was amazed to see a simple girl transformed to a gorgeous one . He rechecked to confirm that she is ishita only na and ishita asked that if she is looking that different .He told that if she didn't believe him then can wait till Ramans reaction .

Ishita blushed listening to his remark and both drove towards bhalla mansion . They were still on the way when mihir received Raman's call ,he picked the call only to know that Raman is finding ishita everywhere and is panicking as he is not founding her anywhere .Mihir told him to relax as ishita is with him ,Raman asked surprised that where they went and now where they are ,mihir informed that they are on the way.Soon they reached bhalla mansion and saw Raman walking to and fro waiting for them . Mihir told ishita to wait outside while he will call her after sometimes. She nodded and remain outside and mihir entered the house ,Raman saw him and asked concerned " mihir where were you ,I was so scared where is ishita ."

M- hold on bhai ,she is here only .

And then called ishita ,she entered the house ,Raman saw her and asked " mihir I m not in a mood to joke ,please tell me where is Ishita ."

Mihir and ishita saw each other abd then Ishita asked flaunting herself
" oh ho buddhu Raman its me ,dekho how m I looking "

Raman scanned her from top to bottom and asked making a dirty face " ye kya kar diya tune madrasan ".

She too saw herself from top to bottom and asked " what happened Raman ,m I not looking beautiful, now I m not so fat na.aur Maine makeover bhi karwaya ".

R- you are looking beautiful but not cute ,I told you na ,I love you the way you were .

Ishita's face fell listening to this ,she pushed him and turn to go when he held her hand and pulled her to him . She tried to push him when he caged her in his arms and spoke " you were beautiful and cutu but now you have became hot too ,now all boys were ogle at you and I have to break their bone too ."

She pushed him again and spoke " jyada jhoot bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai , you didn't even recognized me ,now I have to break their bone too " she said mimicking him and turned to go .

He ran behind her ,held her again and spoke " ale ale le le mera bachcha guchcha ho gaya ,solly baba ."

She shrugged his hands and spoke " no need to pretend that you actually like me ,aap na mujhe sunder dekhna hi nahi chaahte ,actually you don't love me".

Saying so she again started going when he pushed her to wall, caged her between wall and himself ,and hissed in her ears " don't you ever say that ,I love you a lot ,got that ,I love your soul not this face and figure ,I don't care if you are fat or thin ,I don't care if you look simple or gorgeous ,I just love you and you don't have to change yourself for me .".

She look at him ,he was already looking at her when he slide finger in her hairs and messed them ruining her curls , wiped makeup from her face and spoke " jaan you need not to do this to impress me , I love you the way you are comfortable . I know you are mad at me for not reacting positively on your makeover but I was just teasing you .main mana raha tha na ,why did you said that I don't love you .I think you remember this was simmi's challenge and you have done this for her not me .understand ".

Saying so he pulled her in his embrace when he her her soft voice " but then also you should have praised me a bit , I was not expecting this reaction from you ,I thought you will get lost in me ,will take in me tight hug and kiss me but you reacted other wise . "

R- actually I was so worried for you for vanishing without informing me ,I thought that you people are out with some important work but when I saw you ,at first I was not expecting you like this and secondly I didn't recognized you .I was mad at myself for not recognizing you ,mad at you that you went with Mihir not me and finally I was mad at mihir that he took you without informing me , so as a whole that time I was too upset to react positively , atleast you should have told me one ,I missed you ,I felt left out ,I felt bad for not recognizing you .you are mine only mine ,samjhi tu .

Ishita was listening to him keenly then hugged him tight ,smiling fully on his possessiveness while he got busy in showering a number of kisses on her face and jawline . Ishita teared herself from him and spoke " samajh gayi main ,ab gussa kar liya na , now tell me how I m looking ".

R- (checking her from top to bottom )- just too tempting .

I- chee gutter mind ,can't you praise me for once .

R- arey meri jaan that was the greatest praise for anyone ,ab ek kiss de de .

I- kuch nahi milega,I spend so much time and money ,spend hours for this and you cannot even praise me properly .

Raman pulled her cheeks and spoke " you know that's why I like you ,you are so good and cute like a kid ,Maine itna kuch bola but still you want me to praise you .

I- ( looking to him )- aur nahi to kya ,you didn't said it properly.

R- to sun ,I m so sorry for not noticing your efforts and hard work . don't know why,but actually you have lessened very much ,will not say anything about your beauty as you were always beautiful but now looking hot too . let me call simmi
and inform her that you won the challenge and also I will announce our engagement today itself .

I(excitedly)- today only .

R- aur nahi to kya already our one month is wasted ,now I cannot wait to see you dressed as my bride .shaadi karegi na mujhse .

Ishita nodded and looked down to hide her blush while he captured her lips for a deep kiss ,she too responded fully ,he pulled her more closer while she encircled her arms around him reciprocating the kiss fully ,soon they were fighting for dominance but as usual Raman won and entered her mouth . They kissed each other hungrily ,relishing each others flavor and finally parted after long when they felt suffocated.

Later Raman called simmi and told her that he is organizing a party next day on the occasion of his engagement ,simmi made faces and told " how can you do the engagement so soon bhai ,didn't you remember Ishita challenged me that she will get slim before marriage.

R- and she completed her challenge.

S- (shockingly)- kya .

R- humm ,Ishita won the challenge and now looks too beautiful and stunning as per your demand .

S- you must be lying bhai .

R- come and check yourself .

S- OK .

After sometimes simmi came to check ishita and was shocked to see ishita while Raman smirked and said "I hope now you won't have any problem in our marriage."

Simmi was silent when ishita walked to her and spoke " simmi you told that I m fat so will not fit in your society but now I completed your challenge then why are hesitating ,please tell me why you don't like me ,I will try to change myself according to you ".

Simmi cupped Ishita's face and spoke
" you don't have to do anything else, as you are perfect for my brother from earlier itself ,it was me who couldn't see your goodness and inner beauty and was bothered about your outer look but you proved yourself as the most appropriate girl for my bhai who can do anything to be with him . Ishita my bhai is the only one I have ,he has completed his duties by getting me married to a suitable life partner ,so promise me that you will also love him and keep him happy always .Atlast I wanna say sorry to both of you for troubling you people unnecessarily as you people were always perfect it was me who was wrong ."

Raman smiled listening to simmi and hugged both ishita and simmi on his either side while they too cling on him happily .

That's all for now ,hope you like it .

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Mihir took ishita for shopping then makeover
She actually lost a lot weight n looking too slim n hot
Awww puttar ws tensed for her n wen saw cudnt recognise
She ws gussa he DCidnt praise her properly
He manaofied her she is his n he loves her soul
Simmi too realized her mistake n apologized
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
mihir noticed ishita has lessened so much
he took her with him to buy gowns even she cant beleve that she has feduced so much
she did her makeover and came back with mihir
raman is so much worried for her
he failed to recognise her which miffed ishu so much
he like ishus soul not her beauty liked their cute banter and ramans possesiveness for her
he is planning enhagement immediately
simmi got shocked seeing ishita and apologesied for hrr behaviour
wow ishra are gettinv married soon
continue soon
Edited by jakkula.sirisha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Lovly
Ramans confession was fabulous
Cont soon
Loved mihir and ishitas bond
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
ishita won the challenge
nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
happy birthday nice update 😊 👏

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