OS-7 Minutes In Heaven (14/06) - Page 3

Originally posted by: sue1o1

Is it okay to ask you to continue this? Because I LAHVEEE IT 😳😳 Thank you for this! Esp with the painful stuff going on in the show this was so much more of a blessing. Thanks <3

Well an another nyc update..!!
An electrifying os i must say..
Shivaay is so insecure that he himself stops the bottle and that too pointing on him.. hahahaa
What a move.. 😉
Malika's advice after sensing annika's awkardness was so good..
Nxt what happens in the closet is beyond words..
Totally loved it from shivaay's desperation to anni's boldness.. Both cannot resist each other..
Everything was just awesome payal..
Totally your all updates r worth appreciating.. Thanks for this supercool os dear..
want to read more..( i knw sounding greedy but wat to do i m helpless)
Till then - gud wishes 😊

I too really wanted you to continue this... I lov readng pre-marriage ff ot shivika. And this os was a treat. 😊

Originally posted by: sarcasticsmiley

Well an another nyc update..!!
An electrifying os i must say..
Shivaay is so insecure that he himself stops the bottle and that too pointing on him.. hahahaa
What a move.. 😉
Malika's advice after sensing annika's awkardness was so good..
Nxt what happens in the closet is beyond words..
Totally loved it from shivaay's desperation to anni's boldness.. Both cannot resist each other..
Everything was just awesome payal..
Totally your all updates r worth appreciating.. Thanks for this supercool os dear..
want to read more..( i knw sounding greedy but wat to do i m helpless)
Till then - gud wishes 😊

Originally posted by: panjami

I too really wanted you to continue this... I lov readng pre-marriage ff ot shivika. And this os was a treat. 😊

Those 7 minutes in heaven were heavenly amazing 👏 and you should continue it and you should add something in the next part like 14 minutes of their romance 😳😳 then in next part minutes should be 21 ... Then in next should be 28 .. then .. 35 .. then 42... Then 49... Then 56... 63... And finally 70 minutes 😳😳 it will be a treat for us to read what theyll do in those minutes of togetherness .. and yesss there will be forever cheapda Shivaay and tough Anika 😳 don't forget to show that how the wild imagination of Shivaay of being on bed with Anika coming true😳😳😳 ...

The "mark" and lipstick on over mouth were awesome. And shivaay thinking about his tigress in bed was even more hotter. Amazing

Very hot and sexy