Meri ishq khumaari bas tumse,pt 9 on pg 131 on 25 /1 - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome prologue di... just superb raman is telling mihir his and ishu story... 1st part was really awesome... superb ... aww both r so cute di ... and their talks i just love baby ishu and raman love story... how can i missed this cute story really sry di for late comment... teaser is also cute one raman is blushing aww... so cute starting di... truly loved it... continue soon di
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 1
Lovely update..
The flashback...
Raman meet ishita in his KG class she is new student the teacher introduce her to everyone. Raman deny to let ishita sit with him the teacher thought a way so all the student become friend with each other. Cute raman he told ishita not to cross his place. Ishita remember amma word to share the food with friends raman finally accept friendship they share the food with each other. Oh no.. raman get angry to see ishita fall down he concern for her. Raman did not want to left ishita alone. Appa arrive he want to manofy his angry daughter he took ishra to ice cream parlour...superb they first time...thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Cute & lovely teaser..
Raman keep on blushing while mention his new friend..
She is a girl toshiji shock to know it...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyamittal1234

Lovely update.
Chotu ishu Raman so cute.
Please update soon


Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends back with new update .


Part 2


After having their ice cream ishra settled in their respective car and drove away to their house . Raman reached his house and saw toshiji was waiting for him on the door ,he happily hugged his mother while toshiji pecked his cheek and asked " kya kya padha mera bachcha (what you read my son ).

R- Abcd aul 1234 bach .

T- aur kya kiya.

R- aul khela .

T- and .

R- aul pata hai ma ,aaj na madam ne chab place badal diye aul ab Ali mele chaat nahi baith paayega (teacher changed the sitting arrangements and now Ali will not be able to sit beside me).

T- achcha aisa kiya, if not Ali then who will sit beside you .

R- mam ne saale lalke lalkiyon KO ek chaat baitha diya ,aul pata hai mele chaath new girl baithi hai .( mam make sit all boys and girls together and you know a new girl is sitting beside me ).

T- okk , achcha enough of your talk ,now go and change, till them I will check your homework .

Raman nodded and went to his room while toshiji instructed neelu to help raman in changing and she herself started checking his bag ,she checked his homework and then lunch box.Toshiji took out lunch box from Raman's bag and checked it ,that if he has completed his tiffin or not. She saw a bite of idli and a bite of paratha was left ,thats when Raman too came down after changing .Toshiji asked Raman " puttar where did you found idli ".

R- my fliend gave me .

T- which friend puttar ,I don't know any of your south Indian friend .

R- aaj hi ek new fliend bani hai ,main bataya na mele bagal mein new gal aayi hai .( I befriended with her today only ,I told you na that a new girl sat beside me .

T- achcha so you befriended with a girl.


R-(blushing )- haan wo ek lalki hai
(she is a girl). haan ,wo bahut chundal hai ekdum choft choft ..(yeah she is very beautiful and soft soft ).

Toshiji's friend sweety aunty who just had come to talk to toshiji listeon this and spoke " wah toshiji tera puttar to wadda ho gaya ,see how he is blushing ,narrating about the girl "
(toshi you son has grown up ).

S- raman puttar wo teri sirf friend hai ya girlfriend .

R- (blushing hard )- wo silf meli fliend hi hai aunty ,matlab ki galfliend hai kyouki woh to lalki hai na
(she is my friend only meaning girlfriend as she is a girl)

Toshiji and pammi aunty laughed while Raman glared them with angry pout and shouted " bola na meli hai fleind hai ichmein hachne ki kya baat hai ".( I told you na she is my friends then what's there for laughing).

Sweety aunty spoke " achcha baba sorry I m not laughing at you ," saying so she was going then came back and asked " achcha puttar us kudi da naam te das de."(at least tell us name of that girl).

Raman thought for a while, actually he had forget her name as it was not usual one ,he thought for long and spoke ," ucka naam tha etita ( her name was etita ).

S(making faces )- eitita ye kaisa naam hai ,tu aiwaye hi koi naam bata raha hai na ( what type of name is this , you must be telling some name like this ).

R(getting angry)- ek to main abhi echool che aaya hoon ,ooper che itne saale question pooch lahi hai ,phil mujse jhoota bhi bol lahi hai ( I just came from school as she is asking somany questions and also telling me liar).

T(getting worried )- sweety you go from here ,don't know why you teases him always .

S- tu nahi jaanti toshi mujhe bad a mazaa aata hai ise pareshaan karne mein ( you don't know toshi but I enjoy a lot in teasing him )

T- sweety tu bhi na chal ja yahaan se mere puttar nu pareshaan na kar ( sweety go from here ,don't bother my son ).

S- achcha baba ja rahiyan ( ok going )

Saying so sweety aunty left while toshiji kept Ramans lunch box for washing . On the other hand Ishita's mother was also checking her bag and she too asked same after seeing paratha on her tiffin .

A- ishu kanna from where did you get paratha .

I- Maine apne naye fliend ke chaat shale kiya ,jaiche apne bola tha (I shared with my new friend as you said ).

A- that's great what is her name .

I-(thinking ) uchka naam ummm uchka naam tha laman ,haan laman hi tha ucka naam .
( his name ummm ,his name was laman ).

A- laman ,what type of name is this .

Appa cleared " his name is Raman ,he is a very nice boy ,today I reach bit late ,all had left but he was with ishu ."

Amma- achcha hai ,but viswa boy .

Appa- yes ,what's the problem ,now a days boys and girls are same ,moreover our ishu is too small .

Amma- actually you are right ,we should give freedom to our daughter to choose her friends .

Appa - yeah you got my point .

I- amma ,laman Jo aaj tiffin laaya tha no wo bahut tasty tha ,aap bhi mele liye bana doge .( the tiffin which Raman brought was too tasty ,you too make it for me ).

A- what parathe was it .

I- woh uche aaloo ke palaathe bola tha lekin mujhe aaloo dikha hi nahi ( he was calling him aaloo paratha but I didn't see any paratha in it ).

Amma and appa laughed on her innocent question and amma spoke " ok kanna as you say ,I will make aaloo paratha for you ".


Next day kids were standing outside the school as it was still ten minutes for school time . Today Raman was late ,ishita has reached ,soon the bell rang and all the kids entered the class in queue ,and as per sitting arrangements ishita went and sat on her place .Soon Ali too come and saw ishita sitting there ,he reached to her and spoke " tum yahaan kyun baithi ho , ye mele aul mele fliend ki ceat hai .( why are you sitting here ,this is mine and my friends seat ).

I- nahi kal mam he change kalwaya tha ,ab che main yahaan hi baithoongi .( yesterday mam has changed sitting arrangements, from now onwards I will sit here ).

A- mujhe kuch nahi pata ,tu bhaag yahaan che, main yaheen baithoonga .( I don't know anything ,you go from here ,I will sit here only ).

I- nahi ,biltul nahi main nahi jaane waali. (no ways I will not go anywhere ).

Ali started crying while ishita too started crying looking to him ,soon Raman and teacher too entered the classroom ,seeing his friends crying Raman got worried and asked reaching them " kya hua Ali ,kya hua itita, tumlog kyun lo lahe ho ".( what happened Ali and ishita ,why you people are crying ).

Teacher too asked same while after crying for some more time ,Ali told " ye lalki meli ceat che nahi hat rahi hai "
( this girl is not leaving my place ).

Teacher got to know whats happening, she talked to Ali ,make him understand thst she has changed the sitting arrangements and now a boy and a girl will sit always .Ali made dirty face and was going to his new place ,while leaving he showed his tongue to ishita while spoke showing his little finger to her " katti ".

Raman become sad listening to him ,ishita tried to talk to him but he didn't talked to him rather he was sitting making a gloomy face .In the lunch time ishita tried to talk to him but he told that he is sad because his best friend is not talking to him ,ishita saw Ali who was slowly opening his lunch box ,she went to him and stood beside him ,he saw her and spoke " kya hua ,tu yahaan kyun aayi hai ".( why did you come here )

I- Solly Ali .

A- tu kyun solly bol lahi hai .( why are you saying sorry )

I- kyunki mele liye mam ne chabko idhal udhal baithaaya hai .( because of me mam had changed the arrangements ).

A- to .

I- to meli koi galti nahi hai phil bhi laman mujhse baat nahi kal laha, Mela koi fleind bhi nahi hai ,tum chal kal ucche mitthi kal lo to wo baat kalne lagega ,phir hum log fliend ban jaayege .( its not my fault but still Raman is not talking to me ,if you will talk to him them he will talk to me also then we will be good friends ).

A- mujhe tujh che koi dosti nahi kalni ,tu ja yahaan se ( I don't wanna be friend with you ,go from here ).

Ishita cannot take his rejection and started crying while Ali opened his tiffin box and was about to eat when Raman and teacher reached to them . Teacher asked ishita what's the matter ,she was too busy in crying that she couldn't answer when Ali spoke " mam mujhe ichka fliend bhi nahi banna Phil bhi meli fliend ban rahi hai ( I don't wanna be her friend still she is trying to do friendship with me ).

Raman saw ishita and asked what's the matter ,she told her intention to him while teacher was impressed listening to ishita ,she supported her and made the boys friends again ,after teacher left Raman told Ali to befriend with ishita at first he denied but when Raman told that she is his good friend and nice girl ,he too became friend of ishita . She got happy and then trio shared their tiffin and ate happily ,sharing their child talk .

That's all for now friends ,hope you like this .Enjoy reading and do comment.

PS - 180+ likes and lovely comments for next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
cute update
ishra are so cute
both parents got to k ow about idhra friend ship
sweety aunty teased ramanhow cutely he is getting angry on her
ali came and he got angry on raman for giving his seat to ishu but our cute ishu raman aur ali ka pachup karadhi and three of them become friends
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
So cute update di
Sweety was teasing raman
He was blushing like a tomato 😆
Ishita is a cutie pie
Ali was sad that ishita sat on his seat
Ishita initiated their friendship
Very sweet update di 😛 😛
Cont soon di
Ty 4 d pm too
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chappy Di
Cute kids
Update soon Di
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di

Cute kids
Update soon Di


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 8 years ago

Sorry for the late reply Di

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