Pt 21 Updated Pg 146: Predator Turns Prey Advni FF - Page 28

Okay guys,

Wow Chitra thank you so much for the back to back update.
Been waiting for it, loved the story dear. You wrote it so well.
Do Continue soon please. 👏

Oh wow u finally updated dear
Thank u so much
I love u

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

Hi princess

dont worry, you will know what happens next when read my next update

Its is not cliched let me tell u that much

and Leela is not so wicked in my story , she is angry but not wicked, she has a sharp tongue but thats it

Oh thank u dear
I can handle an angry Leela
But not a wicked Leela

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

Awww thank u so much pri, I am glad to know that you are able to read it repeatedly,

As of me, i am going to write it fully and then take a break and then go back and read it all in one go with a fresh mind 😳

I will then be able to gauge if i was able to tell the story properly or not

U have made me addicted to your story
This is my daily does of drug
Lots of hugs to u for this and kisses too

That was a long one.I finished it in one go. AdNi were sensual.☺️ Really hope Advay tells Chandu about him being Dev. And they baby truth (not whole) came out in such an unexpected way.☺️

oh! I am now in lala land. what an update. you truly made my weekend. loved it so much. eagerly waiting for the next part now.. thank you so much once again for giving us this beautiful story

The way you have written this story is so amazing tapping on all the right issues at the right time never forgetting about chandni's ptsd and sucidial tendencies and always making Advay think logically about everything. This is truly amazing and no matter how big or small your update makes my day!

OMG Chitra this is sensory over dose
Triple update to pleasantly torture us with triple intensity
I have gone to Heaven and writing form there
I cannot review from here
Will go back to earth and then do that