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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay guys,


This is a very long update, but trust me it was needed, as it would have the effect when read together as one in continuation
Hence why i uploaded 5 parts as one

Actually its not five parts but i had to break it down for IF to allow me to post it

So here is my Advay and Chandini, my interpretation, I hope you like it

I am not goign to put disclaimers, if any part of the story makes you uncomfortable please skip it, tho i have tried to write it as tastefully and aesthetically as possible.
Do comment and do let me know what you make of it so far

PS : Pls do ignore typos and TAGS that IF messes for me, Mainly Dialogyes, when i put them in closed inverted commas, IF deletes the end bit, hence not clearly defining where the dialogue ends😡

So please forgive, i do not have the patience to go back and correct every single dialogue, as i am lazy 😆

Oh yeah most importantly please forgive me IF MY GEOGRAPHY AND CHOREOGRAPHY IS ALL OVER THE PLACE 😆

so thats it for now , Love u all

Chittu
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hailly thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Chitra thank you so much for the back to back update.
Been waiting for it, loved the story dear. You wrote it so well.
Do Continue soon please. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh wow u finally updated dear
Thank u so much
I love u
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ChitraGS


Hi princess

dont worry, you will know what happens next when read my next update

Its is not cliched let me tell u that much

and Leela is not so wicked in my story , she is angry but not wicked, she has a sharp tongue but thats it


Oh thank u dear
I can handle an angry Leela
But not a wicked Leela
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ChitraGS


Awww thank u so much pri, I am glad to know that you are able to read it repeatedly,

As of me, i am going to write it fully and then take a break and then go back and read it all in one go with a fresh mind 😳

I will then be able to gauge if i was able to tell the story properly or not


U have made me addicted to your story
This is my daily does of drug
Lots of hugs to u for this and kisses too
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was a long one.I finished it in one go. AdNi were sensual.☺️ Really hope Advay tells Chandu about him being Dev. And they baby truth (not whole) came out in such an unexpected way.☺️
Was waiting for the update for a long time.☺️ I am as usual falling short of words. You are the best writer I have come across on IF. Hands down.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved every bit of it
I'm in heaven☺️
Thank you so much for the back to back update
Lots of Love❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh! I am now in lala land. what an update. you truly made my weekend. loved it so much. eagerly waiting for the next part now.. thank you so much once again for giving us this beautiful story
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Posted: 8 years ago
The way you have written this story is so amazing tapping on all the right issues at the right time never forgetting about chandni's ptsd and sucidial tendencies and always making Advay think logically about everything. This is truly amazing and no matter how big or small your update makes my day!
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG Chitra this is sensory over dose
Triple update to pleasantly torture us with triple intensity
I have gone to Heaven and writing form there
I cannot review from here
Will go back to earth and then do that

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