Tum mere aasma meri zameen ban gaye # 3 pt 25 on pg 137 on 7/1 - Page 48

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 20
Awesome update...
Poor ishita she feel hurt to know that her father did not feel anything for her. Ishita pour out her feeling how she always want his appa love & support but he always ignore her. Appa feel shame & guilty he try to said sorry but raman stop him he is enough for her as he will love & take care of her. Ishra shock to see appa fainted while amma worried as their losing very chance as everyone start to support ishita & simmi plan fail to seperate ishra. Appa plead forgiveness from ishita he did not wish bad for her & feel bad for not supporting her all the while. Simmi shock to see mrs iyer she reliase what would happen. Raman angry with simmi for what he did to ishita & feel no different between her & shagun. Simmi could not said anything as for her raman is everything but she already hurt him. Raman announce to everyone that he love ishita & going to marry her soon...superb finally raman told them ishita important in his life..thank u for pm & update
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Superb teaser..
Ishita is dieting...
Continue soon..
Thank u for pm & update
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Congratulations for the new thread
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part 20
wonderful update
iahu z too hurt wth appaz behaviour
n raman z like a pillar to her
he wont let anyone hurt his baby
appa was feeling guilty
he got a mild heart attack
ishu n raman took carr of him
raman asked mihir to cm wth simmi
he z too sad n hurt wth simmi's behaviour
he declared dat he loves iahu n wl marry her asap
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Hi friends back with new update .At first wish you all a very happy Durga asthami ,hope goddess durga brings all the happiness in your life .



Part 21


Ishra left from iyer house ,mihir too left behind him while simmi too followed them . Soon all of them reached to the appt where ishra were living .Mihir just went along with ishra while simmi was making faces looking to the house as it was very simple house ,with very less amenities. Simmi scanned the space and spoke " yuck bhai you are living here ".

R- yeah ,what's wrong in it ,its a nice place .

S- what nice ,see around ,is there anything which suits your class ,this cheap furniture ,this small room ,no Ac and all.

R- these things doesn't matter when your company is nice and here my company is so good that I can overlook everything .

S- I m amazed to see changes in you bhai ,you are same Raman bhalla na who don't want to go to play out as it will be hot outside when you were small ,you are same Raman bhalla na who gave your favorite car to the driver just because ,you were going somewhere and its Ac stopped working ,you are same Raman ...

R- yeah I m same Raman bhalla but at the same time ,I m sane Raman bhalla who had spend about 10 days in a normal hospital and in a normal room ,just to save my life .Simmi insaan ko zaroorat ke hisaab se khud to badalna hota hai .

S- I got you bhai but this place ,its so unsuitable for us .

R- then you can go and stay in hotel but I m not going anywhere ,I will be here only ,with my ishita .

S- what my ishita my ishita ,she is just so imperfect for you ,not even in class but in look also ,you are so handsome and she is not even smart ,and adding to it she is fat too .

R- correction she is not fat but plum and I like the way she is .

S- usse koi dark nahi pasta bhai ,may be you don't listen to me but have to listen people .I agree you have to live with her but along with each other we gave to live in society also and this society never fails to mock an uneven couple .And trust me bhai you two are very much uneven ,you people don't complement each other .till now I had listened that pyaar andha hota hai but aaj dekh bhi liya .

Simmi declared looking to ishita with hatred filled eyes while ishitas eyes were moist ,she turned to go but Raman had already noticed those tears on her eyes ,before she leave he held her firmly and spoke " whatever I don't care , meri biwi to yahi banegi ".

I(meekly)- but Raman she is right ,you can get any other girl who will complement you .

R- tu samajh nahi rahi hai moti the problem is that I want non but you .

S- see even you are admitting that she is fat .

R- that doesn't make any difference ,I want you only .

S- ok then tell her to reduce her and get in shape .

R- she will not do anything like this .

S- then forget that you ever have any sister ,be with her only .

Saying so simmi got up while Raman too turned his face to other side .Siblings were fighting for ishita which she was not liking a bit ,she interrupted and spoke " Raman please don't say like this ,I can never be happy if you two will part because of me. I too agree with simmi talk ,I will try and reduce myself .

R- ishita I told you na it's not needed .

Ishita stopped him and spoke " don't come in between this Raman ,Simmi is right ,I too is fed up of this mocking and bad mouthing moreover I don't want to be reason of differences between brother and sister ,so if I have to be slim to marry you ,I will definitely do that ."

S- ok ,so its a challenge, if you will become slim I will happy accept you as my sister in law .

I- ok

It got decided that ishita will try to loose her weight then only she will marry Raman .Though Raman was not so happy with this but deep down he don't want to loose his sister that's why he too accepted this challenge.All stayed in the appt for night and then left for Delhi ,even simmi stayed with them .

On the very next day after reaching Delhi ,ishita made her routine for next day as she want to start her workout asap.Next morning Ishita was sleeping peacefully ,when her alarm buzzed she opened her eyes lazily ,listening to the alarm ,she searched for her mobile , picked it ,saw the time and spoke " its only 4.00 am ,I think its too early for work out ,thoda aur so leti hoon ".

Saying so she switched off the alarm and closed her eyes to catch a small nap for 10 more minutes.She has just closed her eyes when her alarm buzzed again ,she closed her eyes lazily and then opened then again ,she got up finally as she has to do exercise . ishita got up and freshened up then she wore her track suit and went out for jogging and exercise . She went down and was going out when listened " oye moti , akele kahan ja rahi hai ".

Listening to this she turned and saw Raman was all ready in his track suit ,she smiled fully and asked " Arey Raman where are you going ".

R- wahin kahan tu jaa rahi hai.

I- arey j m going for jog .

R- then I m also coming with you .

I- why I only need that and you are so fit ,bekaar aap thak jaaoge .

R- arey I will safeguard you na ,savere savere koi meri pyaari ,cutu,motu girlfriend KO le gaya to main rota rah jaaunga .

I- kuch bhi Raman.

R- chal chale .

Talking so they went out for jogging and returned after about one and half hours .

Later at the breakfast table Raman was waiting for ishita ,she was not yet come .After a while he saw her coming out if the kitchen with a bowl of sprouts and salad .He saw her and spoke "Ishita come have breakfast ."

I- no no you have yours ,I will have this .

R- Aao na Ishita ,see the breakfast is so yummy ,today neelu had made ghobhi ke parathe .

I(making faces to herself )- not neelu but I had made this ,nd only I know how I stopped myself .

R- aao na ishita at least give me company .

He said forwarding a bite to her ,she shook her head negatively and spoke " I will not eat that paratha but these sprouts ".

She said showing her bowl to him ,he giggled and spoke " I told you ,no need for deiting ,I like you as you are ".

I- but I need it ,as simmi has challenged me.

R- I don't know why you girls want to be mahan, I told you not to do so .

I- and I also told you that you don't come between us .

Raman shook his head and continued eating his breakfast .In night ishra were watching TV ,sitting together ,ishita was watching some serial while Raman was busy in exploring her body .Ishita was removing his hands again and again while he was doing it again ,ishita glared him and spoke " I told you na to stay away from me in this one month ,once we did it ,not again till marriage ."

R- (still touching her )- you know madrasan I have read somewhere that kissing and making love burns lots of calories ,so if you want to loose your weight ,you shouldn't stop me .

I- chee raman you have became so shameless, you stay here ,I m going to sleep .

R- arey jaan come na .

I- no I m not ,you are too much.

R( pulling her close to him )- chup ,bahut bolti hai .

Saying so he captured her lips for a deep kiss ,she too didn't struggled and soon she too started responding him .They broke the kiss when they cannot breath anymore ,she was going when he again kissed her ,like this they kissed some more and then she ran away to her room.

From next day all got busy in their lives while ishita got busy in slimming herself ,she went to nutritionist and got a nutrition chat of her meal ,also she started yoga and exercise . Now most of her time was spend of exercise ,she also started dieting and slowly she started loosing her weight but the speed was so slow that it was not noticed ,even Raman cannot notice the difference . In initial days she was having difficulty in controlling herself as Raman eat a rich food and ishita has to control herself but now she is ok with it .

One day ishita was working in her cabin when mihir came to meet her ,it was about one month after the challenge , and mihir was meeting her after about fifteen days .He saw her and spoke " ishita you actually has lost weight ".

I(excited )- sachchi .

M- haan baba ,I would I lie .

I- but Raman didn't noticed it .

M- its because its not too much but little difference moreover as Raman is seeing you daily may be he couldn't noticed it .

I- aisa kya .

M- humm ,I got an idea ,come with me now Raman will surely notice you .

Saying so he took ishita out of the office .

That's all for now friends ,hope you like it.

PS - 200+ likes and long comments for next update .
Edited by Divanru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was awesome.
Raman is so supportive.
Is Ishu gonna try tight dresses?
Waiting for the update.
Tq for pm.
Me first.
Even before u.
Edited by Gigli - 8 years ago
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Updated next part, have a look
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Lovely update dii..
Simmi didn't like the place where ishra was leaving..
So Raman ask her to stay in hotel..
Simmi challenged ishu..
Ishu accepted it..
She was working hard for her slimming challenge..
BT Raman didn't notice..
Mihir told her that she was actually became slim not more BT better than before..
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wish Ishita didn't lose weight bc someone else pushed her too...Raman is right in saying she shouldn't have to change
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Lovely update...
Simmi don't like Ishita and challanged her that if she slim herself she'll happily accept her..
From nxt day Ishita start her diet, exercise and yoga..
Mihir notice that ishita reduce her weight but Raman didn't notice it.
Mihir take her somewhere may be to change her style or something so that Raman notice difference.
Continue ssonn
Thanks for pm.
Edited by Ishmandeewani - 8 years ago

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