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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Omg!!!

All meet
Guards get shocked seeing all
Agent z & x came out
With other agents too
Now wat Wil happen.
Too much curious Krishu baby
Plz update soon
Thanks 4 pm
Sorry for keeping u wait

uske liye ittu SA aur wait karna hoga
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting for update
Curious for big show down of human agents with aliens
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Waiting for update

Curious for big show down of human agents with aliens

hmm dekhte hai kya hoga jab colonywala aliens Vs agents hoga
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi krish.
Well written as always 👏
I like this duo Manav lajo.
Shanav are cute 😛
Waiting for the next update 😃

Krish agar ho sake toh make smaller parts, it will be easier to read.

Don't change the script length thoda kam karo aur bahut saari parts banao 😃

Hua toh nahi toh 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ice-cold

Hi krish.

Well written as always 👏
I like this duo Manav lajo.
Shanav are cute 😛
Waiting for the next update 😃

Krish agar ho sake toh make smaller parts, it will be easier to read.

Don't change the script length thoda kam karo aur bahut saari parts banao 😃

Hua toh nahi toh 😆



Okay will try do it


Thanks for ur comment

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Posted: 7 years ago
Updating today in noon..second last part
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Part 34


On seeing agents everyone run in different directions...

Vava and 320 are running...


320- ruko ruko ..areee ek min ruko thoda rest karte hai phir bhaagte hai


Vasant- areee oh lagkadbhagaa kya rest karte hai..hame waha dusro ko bhi dhoohna hai aur wapas jaana hai... abhi rest karne ka waqt nahi hai warna hum sab khud insaani rest in peace hojaayenge akal ke dushman


Varsha - vasant!!!


Vasant - aree tum mujeh kyu bol rahi ..tum yeh apne Bina dimaag ke Bhai ko bolo na har 5 Min rukne ko bolta hai...Woh agents hamare piche hai..aur yeh yaha rest karne ko bolta hai


320- Haan toh iss mein aapki galti hai jijaji..aapne mujeh koi acha insaani roop ka photo nahi diya aur mujeh yeh insaani roop lena pada..abhi agar aapne dusra koi insaani roop ka photo diya hota toh mujeh yeh mota wala insaan Ka roop nahi Lena padta ..sab aapki galti hai...


Vasant and 320 starts to fight


Vasant - Haan Haan sab galti meri hai .mein ne toh yaha dukaan kholke Rakhi hai na...sab inssaani roop ki isko yeh dena hai a usko Woh dena..yeh Acha nahi hai Woh Acha nahi hai aur mere paas toh sharad ka super power hai na ki sab mujeh patah chal jaayega...


320- Haan toh accept kijiye galti aapki aur aapke Bhai ki hai..usne aapko power nahi diya..maa sahi kehti hai Didi ne galti ki hai aapse shaadi karke ..
Dono fatichar hai...


Vasant - oh hello...tum mere bhai ko bich mein mat laao..galti tumhaari hai tum bina bole aaye ho yaha woh typical insaani guest ke jaise bin bulaaya alien..agar tum nahi aate na toh yeh noubat nahi aati


Varsha - areee aap dono kya ladne baith Gaye..yaha woh agents picha ale rahe aur aap dono jhagda kar rahe hai..aur 320 mere sasural waalo ke baare mein galat mat bolo.. ..galti iss baar tumhari hai ..aur agar aapko ladna hi toh ladiye ..mein chali


Varsha leaves in anger ..vasant and 320 follows her silently giving each other hate glares.


Here shanav and bhadresh are hiding from guards...


Manav hints Sharad to use his telepathy power...


Manav - Sharad Tu aur bhadresh bhaiya jaldi se iss aur aajao ..Woh guards yaha abhi nahi dekh rahe ..yaha se dusra raasta hai mein ne aate waqt dekha tha...


Sharad -haan mein aajao ..par yeh bhadresh bhaiya so gaye hai..unka kya karoo ab ..mein kabse try kar raha hoon ..par uth hi nahi rahe ..Woh..


Manav - kya??? Seriously bhadresh bhaiya aise waqt pe so gaye...Acha thik hai mein waha. Aata hoon tab tak unhe uthane ki koshish kar..


Sharad disconnect his powers..


Sharad -(whispering) bhaiya uthiye ... bhadresh bhaiya uthiye...


Bhadresh - -(whispering )(in sleepy tone) kya kar raha hai logical Ghotala thoda sone de waise bhi woh jeep mein kisi ne sone diya ache se...


Sharad- bhadresh bhaiya aap baad mein aaram se sona ..abhi uthiye hame yaha se bhaagne hai utthiye ..


Manav comes too.


Manav - (Whispering) bhadresh bhaiya uthiye ..uthiye jaldi uthiye hame bhaagne hai..uthiye ...


Bhadresh -(in sleepy tone) tch tch aeee ghotala ka vakil thodi der sone De tum dono tab tak yaha se bahaar jaane ka raasta dhoodho aur sab plan hojaaye toh uthana... Ka baa?


They here naa baba


Manav-(whispering) dekha ab bhavna aunty bhi na bol rahe hai..


Bhadresh doesn't listen as he was asleep already.


Sharad- yeh toh so gaye manav..ab hame kuch karna hoga


Manav -(whispering) Sharad hame sabse pehle sabki location patah karni hai..to ek kaam kar sab ko apne super power se conference pe lagaa hum plan banate hai... Aur karthik se kehna ki jaise hi sab apne location kahe woh apne super power se sab ke location detect kare aur hame kahe


Sharad- haan haan mein karta hoon...


Sharad contacts everyone and joins everyone on conference.


Vasant - Sharad..kaha hai Tu.. Tu thik hai na sab thik hona ...


Sharad - haan bhaiya hum sab thik hai..bhaiya aur baaki sab aap apni location bataye aap Aur kon kis ke saath yeh kaho


Manav - aur karthik Tu sabki location detect kar aur uske hisab se map create kar aur uski image hame bhej...


Agent q- aur mein bata hoon ki Kaha kya hai ...thik hai..


Bhavna aunty - Sharad ..beta mein yaha yeh sweety Singh aur shishir ke saath hoon..yaha aajubaju bahut saari tunnels hai..beta...


Sharad - Haan ..bhavna aunty thik hai...


Varsha - Hemant beta kaha hai...aur Tere saath kon hai...?


Hemant - heeein mummy aap fikar mat kijiye mein yaha ppp hoon kitchen mein ohja uncle ke saath...


Vasant - hemant tu beta kitchen mein kya kar raha ...?


Hemant- papa mein yaha ohja uncle ke saath chupa hoon aur unki help kar raha hoon kitchen mein khaana dhoondhne mein aur samet ne mein


Lajo - ohjaji yaha woh agents hame dhoodh rahe hai aur aap khaana khane mein busy ho...

Ohja uncle was about to speak but ... Bhavna aunty cuts in...


Bhavna aunty- Rajasthan express aapki gaadi hamesha kitchen mein jaake kyu hamesha rukti hai..abhi aise Khana khaane mat baithna ..Hemant ka khayal rakhna...

Ohja uncle - offo chup hojaao sab maareh ko maarih baat bolne do pehle mein yaha khaane khane nahi aaya hoon ...Areee mein toh yaha khaana pack kar raha. Hoon... Ghotalo ke liye... Aur hum sab ke liye


All are silent .


Hemant - Haan ..aur mein ohja uncle ki eeeh wali madad kar raha hoon ..mummy abhi mein vada pav pack kar raha hoon hum sab ke liye...

Manav - lekin papa aap yeh sab pack kyu kar rahe ho...?


Ohja uncle - hi hi hi. Aree jhallar ...manav .. Tu bhi inke saath reh ke ghotala hogaya hai..mein Khana issliye pack kare hoon taaki inhe Safar ke kaam..aaye..abhi Taareh ko aur maareh ko nahi patah ki kitna door hai inka grah toh mein ne socha ki unke liye thoda khaane ka saaman baandh loon...

Aur issliye abhi yaha sab khaane saaman pack kare hoon ..


Vasant - (emotional) ohja uncle aap toh sach mein ppp Rajasthani veer pratapi shurveer prathibhashali purush hai...

Varsha - Haan ohja uncle toh ek dum world best ppp Rajasthani hai...


Bhavna aunty- Haan Rajasthan expresses aapne toh ek dum world best baat ki hai...

Pritesh- Haan ohja uncle aap best hai...


Ronnie - Haan ohja uncle man..tum Woh ba woh ba..


All-tch tch..tch


Liza - Ronnie Khabardaar Jo abhi meaning pucha. Hai tumne toh...hum baad mein solve karenge...abhi ..main point pe aao

Ohja uncle- hi hi hi Haan ab yeh sab baat chodo ...air batao aage kya karna hai..
Hum kitchen mein hai..


Soon every one tells their location ...

Karthik- . ab mein sabko ek map ka image bhej raha hoon usse hame. Patah chal jaayega hum sab abhi kaha hai aur bahaar kaise jaa sakte hai...


Agent q-..hum yaha se bahaar jaldi nikal sakte hai piche waale raaste se...Woh nazdik wala raasta hai..aur piche wale raaste se jaayenge toh jungle ki aur jaane ka shortcut raasta hai...


Karthik - Haan .. Aur yaha abhi guards bhi nahi hai...HCji ka msg aaya ki woh ek ghante ke ander mein spaceship bhejenge...


Shishir- bhaiya par hume usse pehle agents ko face karna hoga..agar hum yaha se chale jaayenge toh musibat colony par aayegi..kyuki unhe yaad rahega ki Hamari madad colony walo ne ki thi...

Pritesh- shishir ki baat sahi hai kyuki kal ko uth ke unhone bata diya to h Woh Punjabi family bhi musibat mein aayegi...


Jacky- hum Sharad ke superpower se sabki memory erase kar sakte hai...

Sharad-- lekin bahut saare log hai..jacky..sabki ek ke baad ek memory erase karne jaayenge toh bahut time lagega...


Bhairavi- baa kyu na hum sabko ek jagah bulaaye aur phir sharad insab ki memory erase kar dega...

Bhadresh-(sleepy tone) waah waah meri qutub minar kya idea..diya hai..logical Ghotala ..bahut hi Acha idea..hai.. aap jab sab jaao yaha se utha dena tab tak jhapki maarlu aur yeh Mera conference call bhi hataa dena..logical Ghotala


Bhavna aunty- haaye haaye dekho toh sahi chakudi Baba ghode bech ke so raha hai..aeee Baba abhi ke abhi
Utha warna bahut maarungi...uth Baba

Bhadresh- sone dena baa..


Ronnie - aeee bhadresh abhi ke abhi utho warna mein waha aayega...aisa time pe tum aaram se sota hai man...

Vasant- rehne do ronnie lagta hai bhadresh so gaye mujeh toh kharate ki awaaz bhi aa rahi hai...


Agent q - bhairavi Didi ki baat sahi hai..hum aisa hi karenge...aur Woh piche waale darwaaze ki taraf jaayenge toh usse pehle ek bada hall aayega ..hum waha milte hai...

Jacky- haan aur hum waha jaayenge toh obviously guards aur agents hamare piche aayenge toh waha hall mein Sharad ek saath sab Ka memory erase kar sakte hai..

Manav - okay toh ab hum piche waale darwaaze pe milte hai...


Sharad disconnects the power...

Here bhavna aunty , sweety Singh and mitesh are going towards exit...


Bhavna aunty- haal haal sweety Singh jaldi pair chala ...dhire dhire mat chal...

Sweety singh- our Mataji mein thik se hi chal raha hoon..aur aap jaraa Shanti rakhiye yaha aaju baaju gurads aur agents ho sakate hai..


Bhavna aunty- Haan mujeh patah ...sweety Singhji aur Haan unko waha piche waale darwaaze tak mein le jaaungi..kyuki aap se toh ek kaam dhang se Nahi hota...

Sweety singh- oye ek min..rukh jaao Mataji..mein kaam thik tarah se kar slats hoon..kisne kaha ki mein kaam thik tarah se Nahi kar sakta aur... Bhairavi mujeh bata rahi thi ki ..aap mere baare mein kya sochte hai...our Mataji aapko meri kaam pe shak hai?


Bhavna aunty-haan sahi kaha chakudi ne Aaj tak tune bhairavi aur hemant ko dhoodh nikala hai kya ..jabhi Woh ghum hue ? Yeh bata sabse pehle agar tum dhoodh nikalta hai unhe toh hi mein kahu na ki Tu kaam karta hai..

Sweety singh - sabse pehli baat Mataji galti iss mein meri nahi aap sabki hai.. jabhi bhi koi chiz ghum hojaati hai..toh aap sab usse apne ghar mein dhoondhne ki jagah mere paas aate ho..aur jab mein puchta hoon ki aapne apne ghar mein check kiya ki Nahi toh aap sab bolte ho kiya hai..aur phir nikalta kiske ghar se hai?


Bhavna aunty- Haan toh iss mein hamari kya Galatihai..Woh Bhairavi aur hemant hamare ghar mein chupte hai toh hamari kya galti...?

Sweety singh - full aapki galti hai Mataji aap bhairavi ko kuch kehti hai aur phir Woh kuch aur samjhati hai aur apne ghar mein chup jaati hai toh galti aapki hai


Bhavna aunty- ek Min ek min...jab mein Sahi kuch kehti hoon tab chakudi galat samjhati hai aur jab mein kuch kehti nahi tab Woh sahi mein maan leti hai toh iss mein meri galti kaha ..usse samjh nahi aata

Suddenly some guards towards them ..and asks them to hands up


Sweety Singh - mein police hoon aur tum mujeh hands up karne ke liye nahi bol sakte...

Bhavna aunty - areee Bhai...thodi der shaanti rakh abhi yaha bahut important baat chal rahi hai..abhi waha chip chaap khade raho hame hamara matter solve karne do phir apna matter bolna aur agar bich mein bola hai na toh sidha yeh tumhara gun tumhe aisa sidha chutta maarungi..


Guards gets scared of Bhavna aunty's angry glare

Guards- sorry sorry..aap continue l hour hum khade hai..


Sweety singh - Haan toh Mataji aapko clarify ...

Mitesh - dadi... Sweety singh uncle aap khaade hoke mat ladiye ...yeh guards khade hai bhaagiye jaldi bhaagiye


Bhavna aunty- Haan Haan mitieshiya... Chal ave.

Sweety singh - Haan Haan ..mein bhaagte bhaagte ginvaata hoon kab aapki galti hai..chalo..


Bhavna aunty - abhi pehle bhaago phir mein bhi ginvaati hoon mein kuch bhi ho sab mere pe dosh dete hai ki mein galat galat bolti hoon...chalo ab bhaago

...

Here shanav are trying to wake up bhadresh...

Manav- bhadresh bhaiya uthiye ..uthiye..dekhiye Bhavna aa rahi hai ..


Sharad-(whispering) manav mein Bhavna aunty ka roop leta hoon tab bhadresh bhaiya uthiye jaayenge jab Bhavna aunty ko dekhenge..

Sharad takes roop of Bhavna aunty..


Sharad-(in Bhavna aunty's roop) bhadresh... bhadresh bhaiya...

Manav -kya kar raha hai sharad..Bhavna aunty banne ho tum bhaiya mat bulaao .Baba bulaao


Sharad- haan haan sorry sorry woh aadat hogayi hai...(towards bhadresh) uth Baba ..Baba .uth jaa warna acha nahi hoga...agar tu nahi utha toh mein...toh mein... Toh mein tera jhulla jala doongi...

Bhadresh- koi baat nahi baa abhi 3-4 jhulle pade hai toh woh kaam aajayenge ...


Sharad- manav bhadresh pe toh iss baat ka asar nahi hua..ab kya kare...

Manav- patah nahi bhavna aunty kaise handle karte hai bhadresh bhaiya ko...kitna uthane ki koshish ki par uthte hi nahi...


Sharad comes in his original roop..

Sharad -manav kyu na hum bhadresh bhaiya ko chuti kaate ...zor se ..toh woh uth jaayenge...


Manav- idea bura nahi hai sharad.. hopefully bhadresh bhaiya uthiye jaaye...

Shanav both pinches on bhadresh's hand ..but it doesn't work.


Sharad-ek aur baar try karte hai aur iss baar aur zor se chutti kaatenge ..

This time once again shanav pinches on bhadresh's hand .. and it works bhadresh wakes up immediately and is about to shout at top of his voice...

Suddenly some guards and agents come near their hideout
Shanav immediately puts a hand on bhadresh mouth.

Bhadresh hints them to leave him as he was not as to breathe...

Manav - (whispering) bhadresh bhaiya mein haath hata raha hoon par awaaz mat karna ...


Shanav takes their hand back...

Sharad- bhadresh bhaiya awaaz mat karna guards yaha aa rahe hai...


Some guards reach the place ..their backs are facing towards shanav and bhadresh...

Sharad uses his telepathy power...


Bhadresh- aeee logical Ghotala aur ohja and sons jaldi kuch socho warna hum yahi mar jaayenge

Manav - hum soch rahe hai... bhadresh bhaiya aur aap bhi socho ... kuch...


Bhadresh - Haan ..Haan..sochta hoon.. areee ek kaam ho sakta hai logical Ghotala Tu apna power use karna ..Tu mind control kar sakta hai..na...

Sharad - kar sakta hoon bhadresh bhaiya lekin uske liye mujeh guards ki aankho mein dekhna hoga Jo logically abhi ke situation mein impossible hai...Haan ek idea hai mere paas illusions wala power hai HC. Ka ...mein usse kar sakta hai...


Bhadresh- Haan toh jaldi kar ne wallah!

Sharad-kar raha hoon...bas mujeh concentrate karne do...


Sharad uses illusion power..

Guards turn back and find no one ...


Bhadresh- areee yeh hamari taraf dekh raha hai..

Manav - kuch nahi hoga bhadresh bhaiya .. illusion power kaam kar raha hai ..


Guards turn their backs and finds no one..due to illusion power

G8- kon hai ?? Kon hai ?? Yaha bahaar aao


Agent z- G8 tum waha kya kar rahe ho..jaao dhoodho sabko timepass mat karo...

G8- sir ..Woh ..Woh mujeh lagaa yaha koi hai...sorry sir mein abhi jaata hoon...


Sharad- manav hame unhe piche ke raaste tak laana hoga ...iska matalb logically hame jaanbhujkar unhe hamare piche laana hoga..

Bhadresh- Haan lekin woh karenge kaise ...logical Ghotala woh toh yaha se jaa hai..


Manav- bhadresh Woh sab mujh pe chodo ...lekin sabse pehle jitna ho sake hame utne guards aur agents ko hamare piche laana hoga...


Sharad-manav ...mere paas kuch kanche hai Hemant ne diya tha mujeh ..hum kanche use karte hai..

Here in kitchen...


Ohja uncle and hemant are hiding from agents and guards...

Agent x- dhoodho ..saari jagah dhoodho...

G1- lekin madam Yaha kaha chupe honge woh aliens


Agent x- dimaag chalao apna Woh log kahi bhi chupe ho sakte hai..dhoodho chappa chappa dhoodho...

Hemant is about come out of his hiding place but Ojha uncle stops him...


Ohja uncle-(whispering) re ... ghotala putra ke kare hai yahi re warna woh hame pakd lenge

Hemant-(whispering) kyu??? Hum unki help karenge na ohja uncle toh kaha se Woh log hame pakdenge nahi ohja uncle...


Ohja uncle- ke bole hai ghotala putra? Woh log help kyu karenge ? Balki jaise hi hame dekhenge Woh log hame pakde lenge ...

Hemant- hawww kyu ohja uncle men unhe yeh Chappa (showing knife) doonga hame dhoodh ne ke liye .. abhi toh woh agent x boli jaise Bhavna aunty bolti hai na ki ' Baba uth warna aa chutto chau thi Maris( Baba wake up otherwise I will hit u with this knife) toh uncle hua na chappa Kabhi Kabhi Bhavna aunty chapu ko chappa bolti hai na


Ohja uncle-(taking knife from hemant hand's) reee jhallar unke kehne ka matalb hai hai ki Kona. Kona dekho...

Hemant- nai nai ohja uncle Woh khona khona hai woh alag hai ..


Ohja uncle tries to explain hemant meaning of words ..but in vain

Ohja uncle - (giving up) thik hai thik hai..chappa chappa. Lekin yeh chappa nahi dena hai unko hame unhe piche waale darwaaze pe lejaana hai na...toh kuch karna ..hoga... Bahut saare agents hai yaha sabko piche ke darwaaze pe laana hoga ...


Hemant - heeein ohja uncle mere paas ek idea ppp rajsthani idea hai yeh dekhiye( taking out two multiplier tablet)


Ohja uncle- areee yeh ke hai lambe ghotala ..isse toh mein ne pehle bhi dekha hai...

Hemant- Haan ohja uncle apne dekha hai..isse pehle yaad hai..aapko ek bag mila tha aur phir Woh bag gayab hogaya tha


Ohja uncle- Haan Haan yaad aaya..uss mein aise hi tablets the..yeh ke hai... hemant aur isse hame kya madad hogi?

Hemant- batata hoon ohja uncle ..yeh multiplier tablet hai..isse mein ek se do hojaaunga...yeh dekhiye ...(eats tablet) heeein


Soon 2 hemant appears in front of ohja uncle ...

H1- heeein

H2- - heeein

Ohja uncle-(whispering) ke ke ke ke ke hai yeh jhallar do do Hemant...yeh sach mein hai ya phir koi mrugtrishna hai ... Ya phir chabi hai

Hemant- nai nai ohja uncle yeh toh mein hoon yeh hai H1 and H2 ...aap Chu ke dekhiye ppp real hai ..


H1- - Haan ohja uncle hum koi chabi nahi hai. Hum asli hemant ke duplicate hai ...hum 1 hour baad gayab hojaayenge issliye aap time waste mat kijiye Jaldi se yeh multiplier tablet or lijiye...

Ohja uncle - hi hi hi hi ab samjhaya Hemant kya kehna chahta hai ...ab saare agents aur guards ko hum isske madad se dhyan khichenge...


Ohja uncle takes the tablet ..soon 2 ohja uncle appears...

O1- hi hi hi

O2 - ke ke ke ke hai yeh sab ...


Ohja uncle- areee waah maareh ko toh vishwas hi na hove hai...

Both ohja uncle- maareh ko bhi hi hi hi hi...


Ohja uncle-(clapping hands) ab Suno ke karna hai... Hame sab ko ek Saath laana hai toh kaise mein aur hemant nikle

All- hooon...


Ohja uncle - chal hemant beta...

Ohja uncle and hemant comes out from their hide out and run..towards the door


Agent x- woh rahe dono pakdo dono ko jaldi...

Ohja uncle - bhaag hemant ...bhaag chal jaldi ...beta...


Ohja uncle while going out pushes the near by racks..

G2- damn !! Pakdo .. bhaag na paaye...

O1- chali ab meri baari hai...


O2- (clapping hands) ruko ruko o1 Tu nahhi mein jaaunga ...pehle kyu mein zyada Rajasthani shurveer hoon..toh pehle ...mein jaaunga

O1- - nai pehle mein jaaunga mein Taareh se zyada shurveer hoon

O2 - nahi kaha na mein jaaunga pehle mujeh Taareh se jyada experience hai maareh paas

O1- nai maareh paas jyada experience hai...

H1- H2 do do ohja uncle toh ladne lage...

H1- Haan woh bhi (imitating as ohja uncle)ke ke ke karke lad rahe hai..

H2-H1 Hume jhadga bandh karana hoga...hoon?

H1- hooon(clapping hands) O1 uncle aur O2 uncle aap jhagda mat kijiye jhagda karna Puri bhaat hai ...

H2-haan papa kehte hai ki jhagda karna Puri bhaat hai aur abhi aap dono jhagda mat kijiye hame yaha se nikalna hai


O1- ke bole hai jhallar Puri bhaat hai matalb?

O2- aree Puri bhaat ke hai kuch samjh nahi aaya hemant?

H1- Puri bhaat O2 uncle Puri bhaat aapko Puri bhaat nahi patah

H2- areee Puri bhaat ohja uncle jhut bolna Puri bhaat hai ?

O1- ke bole hai hemant kuch samjh nahi aa raha..yeh sab chodo hum yaha se chalte hai...

Here...


Liza is pointing gun towards Ronnie and agents...

Liza- shut up Ronnie ...Aaj toh tumhara full and final yahi karega .. aur agents agar tum bich mein aaya toh tumhara bhi full and final hojaayega hum yaha bhaag raha hai aur tum apna Hindi mein atakne ka leke baith Gaya Aur tum yeh agents ke paas se help maangta hai


Bhairavi- Liza bhabhi aap Ronnie bhaiya ka full and final mat karo ..dard hoga

Ronnie-haan dekha Liza bhairavi bhi keh raha hai... Darad hoga aur tum mujeh maarogi aisa sabka saamne toh acha nahi hoga

Liza- nai mein kuch Nahi sunnenge chahe kitna darad ho chalega aur Jo tum itna bhayaanak bhayaanak Hindi bolta hai ..man.uska kya haan...itna sar dard hogaya hai..aisa time pe jab hum ghotala ko bachane ke waaste aaya hai... Aaj tum ko maarega phir Yaha se jaayenge bhairavi ke saath ...


Bhairavi- Liza bhabhi Ronnie bhaiya mein yeh keh rahi thi ki dande Kam darad hoga aap yeh lijiye ..(showing small bag) iss mein mein bahut bade bade pather rakhkhe hai..isse bahut dard hoga..yeh guard bhaisaab ko patah hai mein ne unhe I se hi maara tha...

Ronnie -(scared) Liza I promise mein hindi nahi bolega..par please abhi chalo man..mujeh apni alien behen ko bacchna hai...


Liza - thik hai...par ek bhi aur word bola toh tumhara Aaj yahi full and final hogaa...

Agent P stands up

Agent P- bhaisaab aap dono ka hogaya jhgada karna


Liza- haan hogaya

Bhairavi - Liza bhabhi aap yeh agent p ko jawab mat dijiye bhaagiye chaliye jaldi...karte hai

Ronnie- haan syahahi bola bhairavi tum mereko aaram se daantna...


Here karthik Jacky and 212 are waiting for colonywala...

They see vava and 320 coming towards their hide out ..


Karthik(whispering)- mummy...mummy papa...papa yaha aaye ...yaha ...


Vava and 320 comes their...

Vasant- (whispering) karthik...baaki sab kaha hai... Aur HC ka koi msg aaya


Karthik- Haan mein thik aur abhi tak HC ka msg nahi aaya...papa time bahut kam hai..abhi tak sabko aajana chahiye

Jacky -ek kaam karte hum Na chupke se jhaankte hai bahaar aur agar koi colonywala aayega toh hum unhe ishaara se yaha bulaa lenge ...


Vasant-haan yeh sahi hai...aur agar koi agent ya guard aaya toh mein signal bhej doonga...hoon

All- hooon


Varsha - 320 jaao tum apne jijaji ke saath..

Vasant-kyu...? Mein 320ke saath nahi jaaunga..mein Akela jaaunga ...iska koi bharosa nahi mujeh


320-haan toh mujeh bhi koi Shauk nahi hai aapke saath jaane mein aur aap mat jaaye mein Akela kaafi hoon mein

Vasant & 320 are about to argue further but they receive angry glare from varsha...


320-thik hai thik hai Didi mein jaaunga ...

Vasant- Haan...thik hai mein jaaunga...


Varsha- thik hai...aur aagar ek bhi jhagda karne know awaaz aayi hai toh aap dono dekh Lena kya haal hoga ..aap dono ka...

320- nai naai hum jhagda nahi karenge ...

Vasant and 320 leaves...




Edited by Krish58 - 7 years ago
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Chapter 1!
Oh my Ghotalas I almost felt like crying when I read this I feel so nostalgic about the show. THe sab tc people they ended it😡😡
Hemant and sharad they are just amazing.
Your storyline is very impressive.
I could picture every bit of the first chapter.
You keep going.

Chapter 2
This one is just killing me with the suspense!
Oh our usual three idiots in one place Ronnie-Bhadresh_Ojha!!
Then the subah ka subaa i threw my laptop across the bed oh god that was s o funny.
So, 2015 ek shop mein kaam karta hain interesting.
Og God! Please mila do na ghotala family ko!
Pritesh oh lord Pritesh
Waiting for Bhairu and the tobarobar😛
Keep writing

Chapter 3
This is going nicely!
The suspense is a cherry on the top of the cake
Sharad just for one second you were able to contact 2015 that was so sad
overall amazing awesome chapter full of surprises
The Bhairavigiri was off the hook.
It was so funny and our Bhairu tobarobar😛
Keep Writing

Chapter 4
Bhukkad high command ekdum sach bola. High command toh high command hi reahega. In the show also I laughed to death when they showed high command.
Ae Ghotala bhairavi ke adoption papers yeh rahe ye aa rahi hai Ghotala nagri🤣
Ronie ka toh chalu hi rahega wo wo wo,
Bulao high command ko same majaa aayega
Keep Writing

Chapter 5
Ahh! Cliffhanger why??
Ghotalagiri. Love Hemant he is just too funny to handle.\
Bhairavi Ghotala totally get that name you have showcased the Bhairavigiri so nicely.
Hemant mata is going to always remain hemant mata
those little emotional moments in the middle ahh heaven!
Loving it!
We just need anna's dialogue now Mr. Ghotala I don't believe this😆
Keep writing

You just nailed everything! Love it!
Edited by shreyj7 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I know I know am late sorry dear I have been trying to take time out, but this time never listens to me.
Chapter 6
The position Sharad is in right now really makes me cry! I want to cry!
Bhairavi is a bit gone case, but sometimes she talk stuff that we cannot even imagine of!
Who did Anna see??
Hemant ab kya karke aaya??
Just amazing! Absolutely Superb

Chapter 7
Amazing update!
Hemant will always be Hemant!
Loved the hafu hafu, main nahi bolunga😆
Sharad oh god poor him 78sq. cam back out of death's mouthso goof!
Ahh all in all a heart-touching update

Chapter 8

Bhairavigiri kya mast showcase kiya!
Bhairu toh Bhairu hi rahegi!
Liza mujhe bhi kabh kabhi nahi samajh aata hain yeh saas bahu ka man..😆
Wohhh aa raha hain bas sangeet shuru😆
Hey, my name is Shreya to haha nice coincidence!
HC ne toh bacha hi liya!
Awesome!!
Keep Writing
All in all beautifully written

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Originally posted by: shreyj7

I know I know am late sorry dear I have been trying to take time out, but this time never listens to me.

Chapter 6
The position Sharad is in right now really makes me cry! I want to cry!
Bhairavi is a bit gone case, but sometimes she talk stuff that we cannot even imagine of!
Who did Anna see??
Hemant ab kya karke aaya??
Just amazing! Absolutely Superb

Hmm socho socho Anna ne kisko ko dekha...hmm I understand sharad state...aadhe serial ke bich se Jo character ka murder hua hai na ..ki pucho mat and after tunnel matter trust me I wanted a new girl to be introduced for both manav and sharad..and so thought to write this story... Where I really wanted to bring Sharad life partner...from grah..which was never mentioned properly in show...

Chapter 7
Amazing update!
Hemant will always be Hemant!
Loved the hafu hafu, main nahi bolunga😆
Sharad oh god poor him 78sq. cam back out of death's mouthso goof!
Ahh all in all a heart-touching update

Hahah me too I enjoyed it while writing...

Hope you liked it

Chapter 8

Bhairavigiri kya mast showcase kiya!
Bhairu toh Bhairu hi rahegi!
Liza mujhe bhi kabh kabhi nahi samajh aata hain yeh saas bahu ka man..😆
Wohhh aa raha hain bas sangeet shuru😆
Hey, my name is Shreya to haha nice coincidence!
HC ne toh bacha hi liya!
Awesome!!
Keep Writing
All in all beautifully written


Hahaha me too can't understand bhairu and Bhavna aunty ka relation ..Bhavna aunty loves bhairu more then bhadresh trust me...she is always worried about bhairavi

it's okay dear..I understand even I don't get time now a days
Bdw I m also writing shanav SS do read that too

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