AR FF Essence of Love

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Posted: 8 years ago
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HEY PEOPLE
I know i know my one story is still going on m not feeling like writing it r ab mene ye story shuru ki but i think it would help me write more good because this concept was in my mind from long and i was controling my urge to write it r ab shahyd me sahi se start le skun.
So guys m posting it bht simple sa concept 1 hafte ki story pasnd na ayi aap sb ko tou i would stop writing but i had to try hope u guys like.
So here it is .










"Hey Armaan tum kahan the me kab se phone try krhi hun"she said as she called her fiance.
"Oh hy anjali i was in a meeting my phone was with my P.A.U have some work??" He said as he came out of a reputed hotel with his staff following him.
"Oh Armaan ur meetings anyway u have to come along me to pick up my younger sister from airport"She said as she felt another call coming on her phone.
"Younger sister u never told anjali who is she when i had to come?" He said as he passed some papers to his PA.
"Armaan i will tell u about her later she is not so important be ready at 6:00 in evening today now bye m having another call" Before Armaan could say anything more line went dead.he laid his back down wondering about Anjali's sister as he never heard once from any of their family about her.He was confused this relationship has no charm.Though he lived a life in LA where every other girl go ga ga over him.But his priorties was different he always wanted a girl his parents easily like and moreover anjali was the girl his mother met at a kitty party and instantly proposed idea.Anjali was a nice girl totally his moms choice she was modern but infront of parents and elders she always wore salwar kameez and at times on frequent parties he saw her wearing knee length and too exposing clothes when no among elders were there he always felt it awkward he dont think his parents would object her wearing those dresses so y to pretend things??
Any how he had to marry this girl who was his mom's choice.It was perfect he never fell in love so he thought to just agree with his mom.Anjali was a nice girl he at times felt awkward by her but he cant let those things as an option to end the relationship.His thoughts came to an end when the car halted the driver opened the door for him as he stood up to leave.
He went to office and kept working whole day until his phone buzzed "Hello"
It was anjali at other end."Hello Armaan kahan pe ho tum m waiting for you Jaldi ayo hume airport bhi ponchna ha"
"Oh sorry Anjali It slipped my mind i will be there in 5 mins."
Moving out he left the building as he asked the driver to get aside he would drive.
He reached their to see anjali ready waiting for him outside she sat in car as be drove to airport.
Reaching airport after a couple of minutes armaan eyes were glued to a figure he felt everything has faded around.A girl was coming wearing jeans of black colour with same colour casual shirt and a leather jacket above waist of red colour her hair were open she was holding her phone in one hand as other hand was pushing the luggage trolley.She was chewing bubble gum.The only girl who had affected armaan.His trace broke when she came to them.
Anjali smiled at her and said"Hi ridhima ye mere fiance hain r Armaan she is my sister"
Armaan was shocked with such cold behaviour of siblings.Like he cant imagine meeting his brother so formaly.Anyway he shook hands with her and exchanging the hellos they were driving back home she sat at back calmly she loaded her luggage herself that action gave armaan so much thoughts of her she was a sister of anjali who dont do anything as such wearing a pwrfect mask of ideal girl.Armaan dismissed the thought telling his heart to accept anjali.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow new story.story name,concept just awesome.Awesome part.riddhima armaan ko pehle mulakat se affected kardiya wow.thanks a lot for new story.pls post the next part asap.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good start Abbia!!!!

Armaan toh adarsh beta bana hua hai...but Ridz has arrived so...I am hoping thing will change soon...

Both seemed to be reserved. ...let's see how it goes...

All the best for this story 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natalya_bedi

Good start Abbia!!!!

Armaan toh adarsh beta bana hua hai...but Ridz has arrived so...I am hoping thing will change soon...

Both seemed to be reserved. ...let's see how it goes...

All the best for this story 😊

Armaan tou aby aur bhi adarsh bnega just wait and read :p
Rids ki personality reserved hi ha.
Thank you

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Posted: 8 years ago
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its amazing starting..loved it ,arman only likes anjali not loves,and anjali's 2 faces behaviour made awkward feeling for arman.now the entry of riddhima in jeans tea shirt..awesome..but give a long part in next ud and a request..if possible,please keep writings size 4 as i have problem to read small words...

thanks for such a great ud..pm me when ud abi..

punam
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice starting dear
Seems like Armaan fall in love with Ridz in first meeting...
eagerly waiting to know what happen in further story
Continue soon
Take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa

its amazing starting..loved it ,arman only likes anjali not loves,and anjali's 2 faces behaviour made awkward feeling for arman.now the entry of riddhima in jeans tea shirt..awesome..but give a long part in next ud and a request..if possible,please keep writings size 4 as i have problem to read small words...

thanks for such a great ud..pm me when ud abi..

punam

Okay i would trt to do that and thanks for comment

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept and I hope This 1 Is Atleast Going to Complete..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mpakeez

Nice concept and I hope This 1 Is Atleast Going to Complete..

I didnt get what u said about completion???
Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abbia_radeel


I didnt get what u said about completion???
Thank you



I meant Sab Writing start karte tou hai Fir Kuch time Baad gayab Ho jate hai..
I Don't Know Why.. But Max. DMG FF's Ke Saath yahi Hota hai..
Aur Tab ziyada Burra lagta hai Jab Story Achchi Hoti hai..

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