Collab Drabbles : These Ties That Bind Us. [vii. updated] - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Lovely idea and thank you for the PM...I'm in...and you are so right about writers having scraps here and there on our laptops that are basically little orphaned stories with no connection to our bigger works...😆


Super excited for your writing, already! Tell me about it - I'm resorted to having a scrap folder for random writing :/
Edited by Innika. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: idolovestories

Thanks for the invite! Would love to join


Done! Excited for what you bring to the mix 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Drabble I . Making history

Couple/Family: Family

Genre: Humour/Family

Summary: The Oberoi men all have bones to pick (literally). [Set a year into the future RuVya have just gotten married]

Writer: Innika.

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Rudra gulped, as he waited at the breakfast table, alongside his whole family. It had only been two days since he had gotten married, and apparently, he was already about to be subjected to torture. It was the day of Bhavya's rasoi rasam, and as far as he had been told, in all of Oberoi history, that hadn't worked out in favour of any Oberoi man.

In fact, the men of the household had spent the whole morning describing it torturously, to him.

"Annika made paneer butter masala for me, twice. The first time she did, my stomach cried itself to sleep. The second time, I couldn't get out of the bathroom for six hours. Shivaay smirked, clapping his brother on the back. Beside him, his wife rolled her eyes, before jabbing him in the ribs with her elbow.

"Don't you worry, Rudra! Bhavya will ace this. And plus, unlike my dearest husband, you'll appreciate her, nonetheless! Annika reached over to squeeze her brother-in-law's brawny shoulders, giving her husband her a simpering smile as she did.

"Hey, I ate the whole bloody bowl for you "Shivaay started, but Tej cut in to the conversation, to prevent a war breaking out.

It's okay, Shivaay! Jhanvi didn't even cook for me she went straight to the bar, and mixed up a pina colada for me! He claimed gleefully, intelligently avoiding his wife's glare, and joining in with his brother's appreciative chuckle.

"Bhai Saab, at least you got something to eat! Pinky sent me some prasad from the jagrataah that she was on, as her pehli rasoi! It was couriered a week after the fact! Shakti added, but quietened down when his wife narrowed her eyes at him, mutinously.

"That's just it, Shakti Ji! You don't appreciates me! You never have! Pinky snapped at him, before high-fiving Annika behind Shivaay's back. Both women stifled their giggles as they watched the Shakti Singh Oberoi shake his head, furiously.

"Of course not, Pinky! The prasad w-was good, you know! Shakti tried to revise, but the image of the mouldy barfis kept floating around in his head.

"Well Rudra, Bhavya cannot be worse than Gauri was! She crushed glucose biscuits into everything she cooked, including the daal. I ended up taking some of Dadi's diabetes medicine to make sure I wasn't hospitalized! Omkara grinned wildly, as he recalled the fiasco that had been Gauri's rasoi rasam.

"Omkara Ji! His wife shrieked in annoyance, pouting even as Om laughed at her. Daadi reached over to pat her hand, as she announced her own story.

"On my rasoi rasam, your Dada Ji cooked for me! And I must say, he was a lovely cook! She chuckled, as she watched the table practically shake with awe.

"No way. Tej and Shakti chorused, and the younger generation of Oberoi's nodded alongside them. The eldest matriarch of the Oberoi household merely grinned toothily.

"Let's just say Rudra, brace yourself! Tej bellowed, and soon, the family was laughing at Rudra's expense. So caught up in the hilarity of the situation, they didn't realise what had happened until Bhavya walked into the main room and let out a shriek.

Because, as it appeared, Rudra Singh Oberoi had run away.

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Posted a random one that I had floating around! To all the writers in the index, feel free to post some of yours when you have the chance as well. Just drop me a PM so I can add the story to the main index :)

Edited by Innika. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Nice idea Innika!
Count me in and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
That was amazing Innika!
I loved the whole humour and family bonding like normal people 😆

I'll try comignnup with something after exams (tat's just four days later! *Does a happy dance of sorts*)
But back yo the Drabble, I enjoyed reading it a lot :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
nice one.light-hearted family works feel refreshing to read.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Hillarious innika
Wow loved oberois family bonding

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Love to read anything on Rudy boy
He is super funny, unknowingly and the balance of the family, an awsome character
Loved how the men have sided one another and are letting their first rasoi rasm secrets
The ending was super super funny and surprising
Unique concept and beautifully written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Hello Innika!
Well this is really a good Idea, and I would love to be a part of it so do count me in for this.
Now coming to the drabble it was amazing, I really love reading about the whole family, it just give me good vibes. So really thank you for this cute story.

-Anya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG it was too hilarious...
They made Rudra runaway...poor rudy baby scared of the food prepared by his wife

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