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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

lovely update! omkara the businessman is always synonymous with the death of omkara the artist.. thank god gauri left him! she deserves better than a man who never stand up for her.

needless to say that the last line was bang on!😳👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: perfictionist
lovely update! omkara the businessman is always synonymous with the death of omkara the artist..thank god gauri left him! she deserves better than a man who never stand up for her.
needless to say that the last line was bang on!😳👏

Thanks 4 reading 😊
I think they both need to find themselves after everything that's happened, and we're not getting that on the show.

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Kashish 🤗

Girl you are too good ... The piece of writing is so emotional ... Aakhein bhar aayi meri 😭 ... Artist Kara 😭 ... Yeah I wanted her to leave, I wanted him to repent ... I wanted him to get into business ... I wanted the Obros have many other emotions to feels just than happiness and jokes ... This is real stuff ... Heartbroken Kara is 💔 😭 ... He deserves it, the time frame of your story is perfect ... Three years and the brothers drifted apart... Three years and Omkara is no longer with his art ... Three years that she has gone away 😒 ... This is having an effect on me Kashish ... What you have done is called magic ... I am sad, I am happy, I am smiling but I also want to cry ... With RiKara and their kind of equation it is difficult to imagine them separate ... But it is a right thing to do ... Thank you for doing this story 🤗

*Going to read part two now* *Excited*

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Kashish 🤗
Girl you are too good ... The piece of writing is so emotional ... Aakhein bhar aayi meri 😭 ... Artist Kara 😭 ... Yeah I wanted her to leave, I wanted him to repent ... I wanted him to get into business ... I wanted the Obros have many other emotions to feels just than happiness and jokes ... This is real stuff ... Heartbroken Kara is 💔 😭 ... He deserves it, the time frame of your story is perfect ... Three years and the brothers drifted apart... Three years and Omkara is no longer with his art ... Three years that she has gone away 😒 ... This is having an effect on me Kashish ... What you have done is called magic ... I am sad, I am happy, I am smiling but I also want to cry ... With RiKara and their kind of equation it is difficult to imagine them separate ... But it is a right thing to do ... Thank you for doing this story 🤗
*Going to read part two now* *Excited*

Wow! Woke up to this and it just made my day . Even when I was completely silent on this forum I have always loved your work and to have my work be called magic by you who are actually a magician when it comes to Rikara 😳😃. Thank you so much for reading.

I think Omkara needs a kick to get himself into action, and I've always wondered what would have happened if the Omkara Singh Oberoi I thought we were gonna see when DBO started (Businessman instead of artist) had stuck around. What would his character be like then? When I wrote this it was initially to vent but I really got into it and how Om could redeem himself (in my eyes atleast), and I think I have a greater understanding about why anyone could justify his detachment in DBO. When he breaks he shatters. Oooh now I really want to write a post about him.😉