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aishwarya

@angeliash

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

interesting prologue dear...
waiting for the 1st part...
and congratulations for ur first story...

Edited by angeliash - 8 years ago

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

nice prologue
congratulations for the story

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Ishradiv

@Ishradiv

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

hii friends update part 1 mr iyer talking with someone on phone mrs iyer sitting beside him after sometime he disconnected call mrs iyer asked who call mr iyer said i have fixed ishita marriage with nri listening this she got angry but not showed infront of him nd same time ishita bring coffee for them mr iyer informed about her marriage nd they coming to see u tommorow mrs iyer said hope this time marriage should fix every time they come nd see her but dont replied back listeing her mother words ishita felt bad at sametime shugun came out from her room said mrs iyer that she was going out for shopping mrs iyer said she will also come. shugun said ok mr iyer said ishu u also go with them listening this they made face ishita said no appa i dont want go anywhere mr iyer said as ur wish mrs iyer said raman to take car out that they r going out he said ok in car shugun u dont worrie mom this time also ishita marriage wont fix we their ra to broke her marriage saying both mother nd doughter r loughing raman who was listening their conversation felt bad for ishita that all now friends hope u all like it

Edited by manuishra - 8 years ago

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Rithika

@srithika

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Nice update di
But chotu one
Mrs iyer and Shagun are so bad
Felt bad for Ishu
Raman listened to everything and felt bad for ishu
Update soon di
Thnx for the pm

Edited by srithika - 8 years ago

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Nice start

Shagun and Mrs. Iyer r break ishu marriage very cruel

Pls try to give little long update

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Ishradiv

@Ishradiv

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

[QUOTE=srithika]Nice update di
But chotu one
Mrs iyer and Shagun are so bad
Felt bad for Ishu
Raman listened to everything and felt bad for ishu
Update soon di
Thnx for the pm[/QUOTE ] thank u dear

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Priyanka7080

@Priyanka7080

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Nice start
mrs iyer and shagun are so bad
poor ishu
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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divz9769

@divz9769

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

congratulations for ur first story

nice CS

part 1 was nice

shagun is sihtias step sister and mrs.iyer is ishitas step mother they treat ishtia badly raman is iyers driver poor ishita felt bad for her raman also felt bad for her

pls update soon

Edited by divz9769 - 8 years ago

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Kadianvi

@Kadianvi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Nice starting di but short.

Mrs Iyer and shagun r bad while Ishita is good. Raman felt bad for Ishita. Raman istheir driver. Update soon di

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Hey manasa first of all a hearty congratulations on your first shot ever. Plot is interesting. You're portraying it well and I am sure you can do better in coming updates. Just check with alignment before posting , it's bit clumsy. Other than this all well. Will be waiting for next update. This time little lengthier one ha 😃 . To be honest I am so happy to see new writers coming forward every now and then. Keep entertaining manu.

Edited by FreedomOfSpeech - 8 years ago