Superb os.
Beautifuly written, loved it.
wow😛😛 i mean wow
wht an amazing description of advay's thoughts👏u really put emotions in ur words...yeh sb to mujhe serial dekh kr bhi smj nhi aayaseriously loved it...
Wow, another beautiful shot
Originally posted by: shibaniana
This is one of the most beautiful story I have ever read. I loved this.
Advay's pain, his kashmakash. Mashaallah.
This described beautifully what happens when you hate the woman you love, who is your soulmate. I mean, it doesn't even make sense, right?
There is such a thin line between love and hate.
Hats off to you for understanding and writing Advay's conundrum.
Please Please write more and please PM me when you do. Kudos..
In love with the narration .. very very well written. 👏
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