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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another small os...jiska naamkaran nahi hua abhi tak..lol...hope y'all will like it..a different avatar of neil...




The hall was filled with silence...no one dared to utter a word...Neil stood close to the window...his back straight...he managed to maintain a plain face even though his eyes were red... giving a glimpse of his inner turmoil.He looked at stars and tried to calm himself. Can u guess who us the reason behind his anger?.. AVNI.

Avni stood there... Rooted to the spot ...too scared to move.She was on the Verge of crying. She never saw him this angry. Juhi kept looking at Neil and avni. She is jealous. The person who used to love her the most is in love with someone else. She smiles at her fate.
"KYU CHALIGAYI THI?"he asks finally breaking the silence turning back to avni. She flinched at his tone. Bebe tries to interrupt. But it's of no use. Neil is in totally different mood today. His ANGER. No one saw this side of him till today.
A single drop rolled down juhi's cheek. That's all. It's over. She lost him. Forever.
"Woh..juhi...tum.."avni stammers. "Juhi kya avni?..mai kya?..KYA?.."he shots back.
Five hours since he met her again. Met juhi agian. 4 hours since he got to know about what actually happened. 3since avni tried to leave him. And 1 since he found her.
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The thing was simple...a simple thing which complicated her life... Neil waited for avni's friend whom she wanted to help in his cabin. He waits 30mins more and then calls avni to inform the same before leaving from office.Avni tries to contact juhi several times to get no response. She gets worried about her. What if her husband ?..she rushes to the address juhi gave her. Soon as she reached that place she finds juhi tied to a chair. "Avni mujeh neil se milna hai" she says before fainting. Little did avni know why juhi asked about neil. She thinks it's about her marriage and husband..may be he is abusive?.. She takes her to Khanna house along with her.
She sprinkles some water on her face. Bebe and shweta who just came in rush towards them."Juhi!!"exclaims shweta clearly surprised. Juhi opnes her eyes."ma aap jaante ho isse?"avni says. Bebe stumbles back. Kareena holds her and makes her sit.All these actions made avni confused. "Bebe aap theek toh hai?"avni asks... handing her a glass of water. Kareena takes the glass from avni's hand. "Neil" juhi asks. Shweta sits beside juhi. "Juhi...tum theek ho na?"shweta asks. Now it's clear that they know about Juhi. "Mummy ji..aap jaante ho isse?" Avni asks again. Shweta thanks God. Finally she'll get rid of avni today. 'hey bagwaan... thank-you.. Aap ne juhi ko wapas humare paas bejha...kaise kam iss avni se chutkara toh milega' she thinks . "Woh ...avni..." Shweta starts super happily. "Shweta!!" Bebe roars. "Neil juhi se pyaar karta hai" Shweta blurts out quickly. Did she hear it properly?..No ..No.."kya "she manages to ask. "Neil juhi se pyaar karta hai..." Shweta repeats agian..this time slowly. Bebe's heart breaks seeing avni. Shweta starts telling her the entire thing.
Soon as shweta finishes they hear Neil's voice "Avni" they look at the door. Avni felt a strange gush of emotions. "NEIL!!!" Juhi said before running towards him and hugging him. He took a step back due to the intensity. It took him timeto realize that it's juhi . "Juhi?" he says completely shocked.
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Avni stays there leaning her back against the wall and holding the head of the arm chair tightly..not to fall weak. everyone still in the same place as before...Neil still near the door...juhi just finishes telling him the entire thing ...how she got to know about a drug dealer and human trafficking gang leader ..a lady...Raghu pandit..how the accident happened...which was not actually an accident. It was all part of pandit's plan. How they ticked people swapping a dead body with her ...with a face mask...so that everyone thought juhi is no more while she actually wasn't. Then she says how she couldn't remember anything for a long time...and how she used to be controlled by pandit and a man who portrayed as her husband. She then reveals how she got to remember everything...and then says that is why they tied me up...to a chair.."aur woh aaj mujeh maar ne hi wale the ..tabhi avni ne aake mujeh bachaya..waha se..aur yaha leke aayi.." she finishes and looks toward avni. "Arey avni kaha hai?.." yehi toh thi na? Neil looked around. He ran upstairs towards their room..."Avniii...argh" he screams.. and rushes out .
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"KYU CHALIGAYI THI?"he screams. Juhi stares the the couple infront of her...she knows what's going to come. Bebe ,neela and shweta looks at them. "Avni ... batao..Kal hi to tumne apne pyaar confess kiya na..phir kyu?..kyu chaligayi? Huh?..." he asks gripping her wrist. He pulls her down by her wrist ...makes her sit on the sofa..and kneels before her. "Mujeh aise chodogi avni?...har baar aise chodkar chalijaogi?..." He asks holding hands in his both hands...she cries again and nods side to side..."apne pyaar ko inte aasani se jaane dogi?" He asks again. "Nahi..." She says through the tears in almost inaudible tone.."ek baat apne iss dimaag mein store karlo avni"he says hitting the side of her forehead twice "yaha" he repeats again and continues" mai tumse pyaar karta hu...mai tumhe kahi nahi jaane dunga... I'll never let u go...ab toh hargiz nahi jab mai jaanta hu ki tum mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho!...toh mujhse door jaane ka Joh bhi thoughts tumhare dimaag mein hai na...woh nikal do.." he says firmly. Soon as he finishes..she wraps her arms around his neck and pulls him closer and tries to stop crying. But all she did was crying a bit more. He hugged her tightly and patted her back..."shhh..." The hall agian fell silent. This time... everyone got their answers. All answers.




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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm very much influenced by Arjun Reddy...tabhi toh neil ke aise shade dimaag me aa raha hai..🤣

Sorry guys...agar bura laga toh...I just tried to add my own logic behind juhi's come back😛
Edited by ...san... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bahut accha laga
It's superb 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is so nice... I wish tv main bhi same hota
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one sanju.thoda aur elaborate karti aur mazaa aata
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was really good .
Ap log itni tarah tarah ki ideas likh chuki ho ki expectations bada Di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was superb
wish something like this happens in the show too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yipee! TUBELIGHT AVNI CONFESSED HER LOVE...ONLY TO LEAVE...arggh! But our neil brought her back...
I HOPE SHWETA too got her Answers well...

M HAPPY THAT JUHI WASN'T NEGATIVE HERE

CONT WRITING AND PM ME
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey sanju thanks for making my wish true. I dieily wanted to read some os on avneil. Thank u so much. Sweet os. And also i wnat u to join wattpad soon. Good luck. Me having exams for a whole month. Feeling very angry. But u made my day
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey sanju thanks for making my wish true. I dieily wanted to read some os on avneil. Thank u so much. Sweet os. And also i wnat u to join wattpad soon. Good luck. Me having exams for a whole month. Feeling very angry. But u made my day. Also thanks for making our tubelight avni confess. Can u write another part that how she confessed

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