-The life in my Stomach-|- Last Part & Epilogue Pg. 29 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
that dev deserve to die
geet did right
she didn't have any choice or else he would have killed her
now she n her new baby is fine ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
dev was really disgusting man his own deeds get him
in this mess up life
he blamed geet fr everything happened bad in his life
but maan on time and saved his wife and baby
prem will see on dev matter and told maan to go
hospital his family need him now specially geet
after wat she faced
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great update
Dev kidnapped Geet
& he tried to kill Geet also her unborn baby
But Geet save herself and also her baby
Maan was on time
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 8

Wow lovely emotional amazing update..te way my maaneet ki marriage life was blissed and now geet is pregnant was lovely..te way geet went to coma and my maan ki pain as his life died te moment he see his geet was lovely painful.. like hearing his pain god have send his geet and baby back to him was lovely emotional..te way dev was out and my maan ki worry and geet ki fear..omg now wat again destinty have planned..i love te update yar with thud thud heart

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 9

Wow lovely omg thud tud update..omg dev kidnapped geet and torturing his each word was like acid on geet, chi after getting punishment after abanded by his parents too he didt change ,b***..te way geet praying to god not for her but for her baby,yes mother will never let any harm to her baby and she stabbed him,tat is her motherhood which gave her power to save her baby..te way my maan delivered their baby they love was lovely emotional..now prem took te matter and asked my maan to be with his geet was lovely..wat ever fate try to hurt my maaneet but they love wont let anything happen to them..i want to say some thing why always culprits escaping and taking revenge tats why in real girls are scared real to give complaints against te accused, one police will help them or they will escape and tortured them,tats why girls and their family thinking just to ignored and don't want they life to mess again..if any man abused girl, they have to give punisment right on te spot death, if we keep them for few days they will get so many ways to get out..i love te update so much

Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice story. Read all parts in one go.
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 a lovely story! amazing emotional update and terrific epilogue! wonderfully written! awesome end! Geet has a baby girl and goes into a coma! Maan shattered! he takes care of his Shona! Geet finally awaken! superb Maaneet moments!
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Posted: 7 years ago
geet in coma maan consoling him self by talking to baby about hr mom
he can't see geet like tbis he tried best to make hr come out of coma
after 1and1/2 year she out of hr sleep but maan was angry woth hr fr 6 month actually he was scared wat if again leave him
he can't bear it again
his daughter is life of them
geet make maan come out of his fear
than he talk to hr lovingly too
and daadi helped geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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