ff:forever & always Part promo pg 2 (30/04/2018

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Hey guys so since dek forum has been closed I have shifted my ff to the fanfiction forum...I am actually annoyed ...that forum had so many memories and what do I find out? that it has been locked. Like seriously? But nothing can be done I guess. So those who r still interested in my ff then here u go... roshu baby promised u that I will update so here it is

Ps: link to all the previous part is below

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2994931/ff-forever-and-always-part-64-pg-123-19-06-2017

Uday: I am not done with u... I normally say to u don't do this don't do that but u still do those things and don't listen to me then y did u listen to all the things I said during that time. He said moving closer to her making Manyata nervous... she missed been this close to him but also was nervous

Manyata: haan toh u even have a problem when I don't listen to u and how when I do listen u still moan... she said trying to ignore how close he was... and even if I did not talk to u then u could have come to me like how u always come to me. But no yuvraj udayveer singh wanted to be left alone y because he was angry? She said glaring at him

Uday: even u could have come to me too but no u r too stubborn

Manyata: haw I'm stubborn and what about u. She was trying to move away when accidentally her lips brushed against Udays and both realised how close their face was... Manyata gulped when she saw Udays eyes close and then open and he was eyeing her lips


Manyata: now move everyone must be waiting downstairs. She said staying in the same position as she was nervous what if her lips touched his again.

Uday: fine I will move he said... Manyata was surprised when he said that as she didn't think he will move away that easily but she was shocked when she felt Udays lip on her and realised what he meant ... Uday pulled Manyata even more closer his hands tracing her back making Manyata shiver more while her hands were playing on the back of his hair... both kissed each other but had to break apart to get some air... Manyata eyes were closed and Uday looked at her face that went all red.

Uday: I missed been this close to u he said pecking her lips.

Manyata: same she said with a small smile.but don't ever stay without talking to me it feels odd

Uday: I promise but the same goes for u he said pecking her forehead

Manyata: lets go otherwise everyone will be coming up. Both came down Uday was walking ahead while Manyata was behind him. As soon as everyone saw them they understood that manveer r sorted. But they didn't let Uday know all this was their plan as they still had to try and make him confess... all headed out and sat in car to go to the restaurant

After reaching to the restaurant everyone actually enjoyed after all they saw manveer back to normal with each other and another reason was as their plan succeed in making them talk.

Vijay: god once we go back I will need to start gym and all

Manyata: y? who r u trying to impress she said looking at vijay who was sitting opposite unnati.

Vijay: my darling manyata bhai I am not trying to impress anyone... but eating all the junk food and all I don't want to put on weight... otherwise i think we will have to make our palace door even more big... Everyone laughed when vijay said that

Manyata suddenly felt something on her feet... she first ignored it but after felt it again and knew that someone was playing footsie ... and this time she looked up to see a smirking uday... manyata glared at him which made uday smirk even more as he saw how red her cheeks were... Manayat moved her feet a little backwards so that uday stops before anyone doubts anything... After finishing their dinner they all decided to leave

In the car uday kept glancing at the rear view mirror looking at manyata now and then which manyata saw and she kept and glaring at uday and gestured him to look ahead,,, rithvik who was sitting at the front saw how uday was glancing at manyata and smiled inwardly.

Around 8 all reached home and decided to end the day. Manyata went to j room

J: m jiji u need anything?.., manyata smiled at j and just hugged her.

Manyata: thank u so much j... despite been younger than me u r actually more mature.

J: come on jiji don't say that. Even u r mature... but in certain things u get really stubborn and act like a kid and so do I... she said joking.

Manyata: very funny... but honestly thank u... right now because of u and your plan me and uday r talking... the way all of u worked on this plan I am actually grateful

J: that's it end it here now. I know u very well when your thank u lecture starts then it goes on and on. Manyata slapped j playfully

J: but on a serious note jiji im happy that u r happy. And I hope u stay happy like this.

Manyata: aww my komal number 2 I love u.

J: oh god mentioning about mom I just realised I have to call her

Manyata: ok u talk to her I am going

J: u wont speak to her

Manyata: not now otherwise her questioning will start so I will speak to her later.

Manyata went into her room and decided to have a shower and then sleep...

after 30 mins manyata came out of the washroom in towel while her hair was all wet but her eyes widened when she saw uday sitting on the couch she quickly ran to the washroom and was about to close the door when uday put his feet between to stop the washroom door from closing

manyata: beshram yuvraj don't u have any shame that you walk into a girls room without knocking she said trying to put all her strength in trying to close the door.

Uday: what can I do princess when a hot girl like u would wonder around in her room like this without keeping the door closed? He said standing near the door comfortably while his foot was still in the same place stopping the door from closing

Manyata: uday just go for now

Uday: nope he said finally pushing the door open and manyata moved back due to the sudden push.

Uday started to move forward with a playful smile while manyata moved backwards nervously. This continued until manyata reached near the washbasin and held the tap tightly.. while uday moved towards her.

Manyata suddenly realised her hand on the tap and got an idea without letting uday know she kept that nervous look on her face and turned on the tap slowly... and when uday was near her she splashed some water on him which made him turn his face and she made a quick exit to go to the bedroom. Uday opened his eyes and walked out the washroom to see manyata near the bed quickly putting on a bathrobe with the towel still wrapped around her..

Manyata: look uday I am in no mood for any joke and I actually want to sleep. She said pointing her fingers at uday who was slowly walking towards her... manyata gulped

Manyata: uday look...but she couldn't complete as uday placed his finger on her lips

Uday: shh how much do u talk at least let the other person talk. But no u never give anyone a chance. He said moving towards manyata and tucked few hair stands behind her ear,

Manyata: what do u want uday she whispered trying to talk normally... uday smirked and pulled manyata closer. Manyata closed her eyes and she waited for uday to capture her lips. But few secs later she felt something moving around her stomach... she opened her eyes in confusion and saw uday looking down at her robe and tying the belt around her stomach.

Uday: there u go all done he said moving away from her... manyata felt embarrassed that she looked at uday who again sat down on the couch... when he pulled her near him she thought he will probably kiss her on the lips but no he was busy typing her bathrobe

Uday: what y r u giving me that type of look he said pretending not to understand anything

Manyata: u? u pulled me closer to just tie my robe?

Uday: of course... but y r u reacting like that?

Manyata turned her face in annoyance

Manyata: im not reacting in anyway... I just asked normally she said not trying to show the annoyance on her face uday smirked

Uday: really? But it seems like u didn't expect me to do that? Manyata looked at uday

Manyata: u r so annoying do u know that? I mean what is your problem? And who would pull someone just like that to tie a robe? Manyata asked uday whatever question came in her mind... she turned around but after few second she felt uday standing right behind her and this time very closely

Uday: y did u think I was going to do something else he spoke huskily near her ears. Sliding his hands around her waist and pulled her closer making her back hit his chest

Manyata gulped in nervousness although she loved been close to uday but at the same time she felt like running away from him due to the things he makes her feel.

Manyata: of course not she said somehow getting away from his grip... but all of a sudden she found herself in his arms and this time facing towards him.

Uday: I actually like it when u get annoyed due to me... I was only teasing u princess. Uday said tracing her lips and could also feel how manyata was shivering under his touch.

Manyata: ud... but she couldn't continue as uday was about to capture her lips...

Manyata held uday t-shirt tightly as she felt his lips on hers... but soon they moved away when vijay scream... uday closed his eyes in annoyance .

Manyata: y did vijay bhai scream

Uday: always a wrong timing... manyata slapped him lightly on his shoulder

Manyata: u go and check what happened to him till then I will quickly change. Uday nodded and left manyata room while cursing vijay and manyata quickly changed into her pj and hurried to vijay room.

Meanwhile rithvik and jagat reached to vijay room first

Rithvik: vijay banna what happened to u? he said asking vijay who was jumping on his bed

Vijay: omg that thing is going to kill me please move it away

Rithvik: what is going to kill u he asked confusingly

Jagat: vijay I think u saw a bad dream?

Vijay: bad dream? Jagat banna I didn't even sleep that I will get a bad dream... Oh god mom help me he said hugging the pillow

Uday: whats happening here? He said walking in to see the scene in front of him. Vijay was about to answer when he saw someone behind uday

Vijay: ahhh ghost ! ghost! Mummy please save me. Oh god y r u doing this to me... everyone turned around to see unnati but beside unnati was j who had a facemask on

J: did u just call me a ghost... vijay stopped shouting and looked at j

Vijay: y does this ghost voice sound like j bhai

J: because it is me vijay bhai. And how dare u call me ghost

Vijay: u look like a ghost so I will call u that...

J: im going u can deal with him she said looking at the others... j was about to leave the room when she bumped into manyata

Manyata: where r u going?

J: back to my room jiji... vijay bhai is just acting stupid she said going away from there. Manyata stood next to unnati

Manyata: whats happening vijay bhai y did u scream.

Rithvik: we asked him this but he was saying.. that thing will kill me?

Manyata: what? Vijay bhai what r u talking about

Vijay: manyata bhai u r my life saviour please get that lizard away which is behind the curtain... everyone shook their head as they thought vijay screamed as something serious might have happened but here he was scared of the lizard.

Uday looked annoyed as vijay disturbed his moment with manyata for such a small issue.

Manyata: don't worry I will tell one of the worker to remove it.

Vijay: thanks m bhai... all laughed and left the room while manyata told one of the maid to remove the lizard...

After few mins manyata was walking back to her room and she was about to close the door when she saw uday appearing out of no where

Manyata: what? She said still holding on the door.

Uday: so shall we continue what we left incomplete... he said about to walk in but manyata stopped him by putting her hands on his chest

Manyata: uday is rithvik trying to call u she said looking over udays shoulder

Uday looked at manyata and turned around to see no sign of rithvik... after few sec he heard the door close and realised manyata was only joking with him

Uday: princess open the door

Manyata: nope she said leaning against the door

Uday: princess I said open the door

Manyata: I said no uday besides this is what u get for teasing me

Uday: princess... but he couldn't continue

Manyata: I know u only call me princess now u can go to your room good night she said moving away from the door

Precrap: last day at the farmhouse? Will everyone succeed in making uday confess?

So guys here is part 65 sorry I know its been so long but here I am. Hope u all like this part

Would be waiting for all the lovely comments

Also thank u for the lovely comments for the previous parts and also thanks to those who liked it

Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank u so much sonu for updating 🤗
now forum has been closed don't know how other going to continue?
I was abt to send u massage but u continue love u dear 🤗
brilliant stating
finally manveer short out their problem & got into their favorite work 😉
uday always get naughty with manyata but why he is not confessing his feeling to her? 😕
does he love manyata?
manyata love being close to uday & she missed it when they weren't talking
everyone understood manveer short their problem but still didn't say anything 😊
all of them had really good time together 😃
loll Vijay is so drama king scared of lizard & called j ghost 🤣
uday got really irritated with Vijay as he disturb his romantic moment with manyata 😉 😆
awe manyata fooled uday 🤣
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

thank u so much sonu for updating 🤗
now forum has been closed don't know how other going to continue?
I was abt to send u massage but u continue love u dear 🤗
brilliant stating
finally manveer short out their problem & got into their favorite work 😉
uday always get naughty with manyata but why he is not confessing his feeling to her? 😕
does he love manyata?
manyata love being close to uday & she missed it when they weren't talking
everyone understood manveer short their problem but still didn't say anything 😊
all of them had really good time together 😃
loll Vijay is so drama king scared of lizard & called j ghost 🤣
uday got really irritated with Vijay as he disturb his romantic moment with manyata 😉 😆
awe manyata fooled uday 🤣
continue plz



i knew u would be the first one to comment... thank u for commenting
yes i am so angry on that.. i know two pepole who r going to update there story on on fan fiction now one is twinkle_alisha and the other is roshini she is finally back and would be updating her story soon...haha u were about to send me a message and see what happens i already updated...love u too...
yep finally they sorted it out their problem.. haha there fav work always happens
haha yes he is very naughty haha uday is not confessing because writer sonu has something planned for his confession.
does he love manyata? u will know soon
yes manyayta missed been close to uday...
hehe yep no wonder they have such understanding friends
haha i had to add vijay drama scene. but glad u liked that that
haha yes he did that guy was just about to kiss manyata and what happens vijay screams disturbing his moment
hehe yes she finally fooled him because he teased her.. will update after i have updated ff only mine
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally got time to read every update. First thing first. Lets talk about the recent update. I think you already know I LOVED IT 😃 It was amazing. I truly enjoyed reading each and every bit of the update. Starting from the room scene to the lizard and j being a ghost scene to the last scene where manyata doesnt let uday in her room. Everything was just perfect and brilliantly written. I loved the first part where Uday was like you dont listen to what i say all the other times then why did you listen to the things i said in anger. Its soo true. She took his words at heart when all the other times she never listens 😆. Loved how both missed being close to eachother. Haye magical scene. Uday playing footsie and glancing at her from the rear mirror was so cute.
Love manyata and vijay as well. Such a sweet bond. So is jay and manyata's.
Coming to the other manveer scene. Uff i need an AC. So hot girl. I was actually getting an image of each and everything. Literally the best part. I love manveer romance. Its epic. Vijay bhai scene was hilarious as well. Im sure Uday will take sweet revenge from manyata as she didnt let him in the room.
Btw i love uday but i hate him too. Hes being an irritating yuvraj. Egoistic 😃 he should just confess already otherwise i'll send some other guy in your story who'll take manyata away and marry her 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshni101

Finally got time to read every update. First thing first. Lets talk about the recent update. I think you already know I LOVED IT 😃 It was amazing. I truly enjoyed reading each and every bit of the update. Starting from the room scene to the lizard and j being a ghost scene to the last scene where manyata doesnt let uday in her room. Everything was just perfect and brilliantly written. I loved the first part where Uday was like you dont listen to what i say all the other times then why did you listen to the things i said in anger. Its soo true. She took his words at heart when all the other times she never listens 😆. Loved how both missed being close to eachother. Haye magical scene. Uday playing footsie and glancing at her from the rear mirror was so cute.
Love manyata and vijay as well. Such a sweet bond. So is jay and manyata's.
Coming to the other manveer scene. Uff i need an AC. So hot girl. I was actually getting an image of each and everything. Literally the best part. I love manveer romance. Its epic. Vijay bhai scene was hilarious as well. Im sure Uday will take sweet revenge from manyata as she didnt let him in the room.
Btw i love uday but i hate him too. Hes being an irritating yuvraj. Egoistic 😃 he should just confess already otherwise i'll send some other guy in your story who'll take manyata away and marry her 😉



yay my baby finally commented after a long time...haha yes i know u loved it...awww glad u loved reading each and every bit of the update...awww like how u mentioned every point that happened in that part...hehe uday had to say that after all manyata does everything opposite to what he says but this time she didnt...hehe yh...glad u loved the sibling bond...hehe glad u loved manveer romance i was not sure if that part came out well but seen your commment and the way u loved it im sure i did justice to it...haha he surely will...hehe poor uday is been like that since the writer is not allowing him to confess😆😆😆haha what other guy tell tell even i want to know,
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I think i need to start torturing you again whenever i vanish you start to get lazy. I've reappeared and watch me haunt you sonu.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshni101

I think i need to start torturing you again whenever i vanish you start to get lazy. I've reappeared and watch me haunt you sonu.



i would love that roshu baby whenever u go away i actually do get lazy. haha im waiting for u to haunt me but that doesnt me u dont update im still waiting for my update so u better update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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here baby will be updating soon as i lost track of the story hopfully by next week
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: preya_radev



here baby will be updating soon as i lost track of the story hopfully by next week

r u gonna continue ur other stories also?😊
Plz continue dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

r u gonna continue ur other stories also?😊

Plz continue dear



yes baby

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