Aadha ishq,Aadha hai,aadha ho jaayega updt pt 7 on pg 124 on 15/1

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 8

It's so emotional and so real!!
Pooja you are tackling a very sensitive issue here - wow!!!
And we are seeing this from both sides!!
We rarely get to see this situation from a male POV!!
You have expressed Raman's POV so well!!
He wants to share this with someone and have a hug as well but he has no one!!
I think Ishita should also look at this from Raman's POV!!
She should be sensitive to his distress as well!!!
It is obvious that he is not like other men but that he cares about her and he see everything from her POV and now so should she!!!
Pooja you have done an excellent job so far!!
Please continue!!

Pooja please make her see this!!!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 6

Again that was fabulously done!!!
You continued with their thoughts and emotions!!
Absolutely mind blowing!!
Raman is just so amazing!!
His care for her and I think he may be falling for her a little!!
She asks him what he thinks and he tells her that it should be her decision as she has to carry the child!!!
That was so sweet of him!
She appreciates it as well!!

She finally makes a decision!!
They for to the doctor for the abortion but just as she i about to step in the doorway she says she cannot go through with it!!

Looking forward to the next update soon please and also thank you so much for the pm!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 7

Aaawww such a brilliant update!!
Ishita does not want to have an abortion!!
She thinks it's not the baby's fault!!!
She asks him why did he not stop her as it's his baby too!!
He says if circumstances were normal he would have!!
In this situation he has to think about her!!
Raman is just so sweet!!!

Loved both their POV as to how they liked each other""!!!
She stopped because he was too rich and not in her league!!

Looking forward to the next update soon please and thank you so much for the pm!!