One Night Stand--One Shot (Completed November 23rd)

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Supriya

@maaneet_4ever95

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Wow.. Just wow. I don't have words to express what an amazing writer you are. This one night stand vrsion is so much better than the show's. Now I am really dying to read Shivay and Anika's version of this. Can we get it please ? Even if you don't want to continue this, this was a treat to read. You're phenomenal.!!

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Super...

Loved it...

Kaash serial mean bhi kuch Aisa hi hua hota

Too good a story

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Oh my goddd!!!

What a beautiful os...fabulous writing Navin.There could be part 2 pls?thanks for writing this one.

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Oh My Gosh!!!! 😲

There every was having panick attack for the loss of lovers and here two were busy moaning and groaning... ☺️

I tell you, that was seriously unpredictable...

But I loved it... ❤️

And enjoyed the final segment as well... 😉

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Wow! This was awesome! 👏 ☺️

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S.love1

@S.love1

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

You are superb

What a wonderful piece, solved all of the problems in the best and passionate way

Thnx a lot

Much love!

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

the original story dates back to nov 23, i had joined forum in feb and trust me this was the first FF i had read in this forum

from that minute god knows how many times i have read and reread this story.👏👏hats off to you for this brilliant work

fics may come and fics may go, but for me this is a legendary masterpiece👏

everysingle time i read, i wish how good it would have been, had this happened in the show. sometimes, i feel the fic is much better than any sequence ive seen in the show😊

i cannot thank you enough for writing this story di. ive bookmarked it in three different devices 😊

am really not so good with long comments, but all i wanna say is, you and your fic both are awesome.😊