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Aapka Dil Humare Pass Hai/Pt17/pg79/15 feb - Page 45

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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Nice update
Arnav n Dev wanting to meet geet
Maan giving geet confidence to talk to the boy she liked
But who is he trying to make jealous of prove too is it one of the three girls the boys liked at start if so hope maan is there for her if she gets hurt
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


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HURTTOH HONA PAKKA HAI
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: pixelflower620

nice part buddy

Lol Maan is being teased by his frnds 
chalo do ki love story set ho gyi 
Poor Geet she has fallen fr d wrong guy I think 
Maan gave her courage to go up and speak to him
cont soon
thnx fr d pm


HA DO SET HAI
MAAN KA HI BAND BJANA HAI 
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Part 10

 

He held her by shoulder and pinned her near wall...

What you said few minutes ago

No girl looks towards me

Mujhe ladki ko impress krna aata hi nhi hai

Mujhe unse baat krni ki tamiz nhi hai

Yhi sb kaha tha na tumne

.

Nhi hai tumhe tamiz

Bs tumhe haq jatana aata hai

Isliye maine tumhe choda hai

Aur dekhna wo bhi chod dengi

 

Is baar tum dekhna

Geet handa ko mein tumhare saamne propose karunga

And she not going left me

Suna tumne

You never love me

.

My only mistake is I fall in love with wrong person

But this time I choose someone better

Mr. Murat Khan

 

Hayat Ali you can't win from me

 

You already lose me

Ab jeete bhi toh wo haar hai tumhari

Kyun ki tum usse nhi

Mujhse pyaar krte ho

 

Bhool jaayunga mein tumhe

Par tum mujhe nhi bhool paayungi

Dekh lena

 

Bhul na bhi kaun chahta hai

You are my mistake murat

And this time I choose someone better than you

.

Now get out

 

She pushed him and left inside in party hall.

             ***********

    



Maan take geet to dance floor, and both dancing on loud music... 

he encircled hand around her waist and pull closer, she shocked see his little advancement...

Geet : maan what you doing

Maan : common geet

We are friend

.

Waise bhi you are not of my type

 

Geet encircled hand around his neck and said waise tumhari type hai kya


Maan : jisse dekhte mere hosh ud jaaye

Jisse har baar mood ke dekhne ko mann kre

Jisse mein apni nazro se ek pal ke liye dur na hone du

Jisse ek din na milu toh asa laga

Kyi saal bit gye ho jaise

.

.

Aur tumhe dekhte mere kaha hosh ude

Phla point pe fail

.

Geet : mujhe koi shok nhi hai

 Teri un chipkaliyo jaisa banana ka

.

Maan : don't forget you try same

Yaad dilayu

.

Geet : ek baar shi kya ho gya aaj

Hawa mein ud rhe hai janab

.

Excuse me

 

Maan and geet take step back and see murat standing in front of both.

 

Murat : I don't know anyone here

Only you come and talk with me

Can I dance with you?

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If your friend

Maan : why not

Go geet

.

He gives her hand in murat hand, she feel shiver in his hold, maan take step back and murat take step ahead with geet...

.

In his arms geet, but his eyes searching hayat in hall, she sitting in one corner of hall... and just remembering how he ask from her for dance...

.

 

Murat pull closer geet, she hold his shirt tightly, both lips so close to each other...



.

She already take 3-4 shots of vodka...how can he hold her like that when we love each other... hayat this relation break by you, but how can he move forward so soon...

.

Geet : murat please

.

Murat : I don't want to scare you geet

Relax

.

Geet encircled hand around murat and both dancing closer...

 



.

.

Maan : hello Miss

I think you already taken many shots

Aapko ab aur nhi pena chaiye

.

Hey am hayat

Hayat ali

 

Maan : Maan Singh Khurana

.

She stands from chair and come closer to him and asked aap us ladki ke sath the na

Maan : ha

She is my friend

 

Hayat : mujhe laga girl friend hai

Maan : no

 

You are new here

Hayat : yes

Just transfer here

Maan : hmm

 

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After some time murat and geet come near maan, murat wrapped hand around geet waist and said thanks both of you

Geet : for what

Murat : for friendship

Maan : not at all

.

Geet : who is she

Hayat : am Hayat Ali

Geet : toh aap maan ki dost hai

Hayat : abhi toh nhi

He not offer friendship to me

Maan : if you want friendship

You also can ask

Hayat : so it's mean you don't want

Maan : hmm

I want to propose you

 

Hayat : what

Maan : actually when you enter here

Am not able to move my eyes from you

You are so beautiful

And I really want to propose you for my girlfriend

Par fir socha

NO

.

Hayat : why you stopped

 

You can try

Kya pata mein HA kh deti

.

She looks towards Murat and said Maan my answer is YES

Maan : what

Hayat : common

Why you shocked

Am girl

Your friend too

Toh huya na girl friend

.

At end all laughs, only murat try to put smile own face...

 

Maan and hayat hugged each other, at with this story take turn for new beginning...

          ***********

 

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
22 july

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23 july

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24 july

Sauda -PART 12 on page 116 & part 13 on page 118

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update 
Waiting for next update 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Murat maybe trying to make Hayat jealous and now she too does the same by telling Maan
she'll be with him I'm sure Murat will also start dating Geet while Hayat will date Maan but this will just be so that they can get together again  
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update
Geet dancing with Murat
Hayat and Maan friendship
Hayat and Murat are trying to make each other jealous
Murat in his anger with Hayat will make Geet hurt
Waiting for next:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
i think murad and hayat making jealous each other by using maan and geet 
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Posted: 6 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! terrific update! well written! Maaneet dance! Geet dances with Murat! Hayat n Maan nw friends! Seems like Hayat n Murat using Maan n Geet 2 make each other jealous! update soon