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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys. So i have been thinking this for a while about writing an ff on my current fav couple Uma and Kanak. Its called INTERWINED FATES. 😃😳

The characters in this are going to be pretty much the same, and the plot too will be mostly same as well. There will be a few changes though.

Characters:

Kanak Rathi: pretty much the same. Fun loving and lively.

Uma shankar toshniwal: the same as in the show.

Suman: same as show

Shiv: same as show.

Santosh Rathi (bhabho): not negative. Loves kanak alot, considers kanakas suraj and sandhya's akhri nishani.

Arun Rathi: same as show.

Meena Rathi: knows about pawan being mishris kid. No division in the house, so rathi house isn't divided and everyone lives happily there. Like mom to sandhya's kids.

Vikram Rathi: like a father to suraj kids.

Golu: same as show.

Rani: same as show.

Ved Rathi: Same as show.

Vansh Rathi: same as show.

Everyone else are the same as the show. And aditya lives with toshniwals and haven't actually left in the ff. Aditiya and Payal are happily married. Everyone too in Rathi family live together happily.

So basically there are no negative people or negativity in the ff. Kanak is bhabho's fav grandchild here. All her family loves kanak. Kanak grew up in pushkar itself and never left pushkar to go study somewhere else.

So what do you guys.? Should i continue with this, with all these characters.😊

Story index :-

Chapter 1: Page 1.

Chapter 2: Page 2. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&TPN=2

Chapter 3: Page 2. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&TPN=2

Chapter 4: Page 3. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&TPN=3

Chapter 5: Page 4. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&TPN=4

Chapter 6: Page 5. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143169613&#p143169613

Chapter 7: Page 6. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143184083&#p143184083

Chapter 8: page 7. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143187786&#p143187786

Chapter 9: Page 9. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143204751&#p143204751

Chapter 10: Page 10. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143217800&#p143217800

Chapter 11: Page 11. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143224208&#p143224208

Chapter 12: Page 13. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143234097&#p143234097

Chapter 13: Page 15. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143249595&#p143249595

Chapter 14: Page 16. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&TPN=16&#p143263806

Chapter 15: Page 17. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143278290&#p143278290

Chapter 16: Page 19. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143317552&#p143317552

Chapter 17: Page 22. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143354883&#p143354883

Chapter 18: Page 24. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&TPN=24&#p143377231

Epilogue: Page 25. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4876325&PID=143389435&#p143389435

Thanks alot to everyone who read INTERWINED FATES. 😳 This ff is now completed. 😃

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Please continue 👏 Super excited

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Originally posted by: Jumeirah
Please continue 👏 Super excited

thank you. 😊

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Please continue... so excited to read it

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Posted: 9 years ago

INTERTWINED FATES:

Chapter 1

"Kanak.. kanak.!!" A voice called, but kanak was too lost in her sweet sleep to notice.

"Kanak! This is the last time i am calling you. Don't test my patience or i will come and drag you down myself." The voice called again. This time a lot more angrier.

Even after the clear warning, kanak didnt care. Not even a few minutes later, kanak heard her door being opened followed by the lights and curtains.Kanak groaned with irritation with so much light invading her senses all of a sudden.

"What the hell, i was sleeping couldn't you freaking see... " kanak demanded. But as soon as she saw about who actually was the culprit, the words suddenly died and her throat went dry.

"Bh.. bha.. bb. Bhabho." Kanak was finally able to croak out the name. Her Bhabho. Glaring kanak down angrily. The sweetest person on earth when you are on her good side, but if you are not then... better to not finish that sentence.

"Bhabho, wh.." kanak cleared her throat and mustered up the courage to speak again. "Bhabho, what are you doing here and this early in the morning.?" Kanak asked.

"It is so early in the morning, isn't it.? beta ji." Her bahbho replied dryly. Sarcasm lacing her voice.

Kanak very discreetly looked at the clock at her bedside. Quarter past ten.! Sh!t! She cursed. She remembered how bhabho clearly reminded her to be ready by 8 am as they had to take care of some work in their shop kanak mishtan bhandar.. Her parents shop, kanak thought fondly.

For a second kanak had forgotten about bhabho being there, but quickly got out of her day dream when she heard bahbho clearing her throat. Still glaring.

"Bhabho, i am so so sorry, i know we have to finish a big order today and still i overslept. Sorry" kanak apologised, her hands on her ears and innocent expression on her face.

Bhabho's eyes softened immediately, seeing her chori apologising so sincerely.

"Hmm... ok, but only this once. Next time, see what I'll do.!" Bhabho said, anger now replaced with love for her grandkid. Leaving kanak to get ready and muttering about how todays kids are so careless and stubborn.

As soon as bhabho left, kanak chuckled to herself. "This is what happens all the time, i get up late and bhabho gets angry. But just one apology is what it takes to melt her anger away." Kanak thought to herself, looking fondly at her bhabho's retreating back.

With that thought and a smile on her face, kanak quickly left to get ready for the day ahead.

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So there it is guys. chapter 1. Please comment and give your suggestion and views. Thankyou for reading. 😳😊

Edited by zaisha1 - 9 years ago

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