RishBala SS: Orenda (Completed - 01/08 - P:40)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Tinku16
😛thank u for the pm...loved this bold n beautiful madhu...n shy rk...madhu sultan are just adorable bro n sis👏...unique...waiting for the next...

Please don't mention it dear!

Glad you loved this Madhu and her boldness!

Will be updating on time!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Superb update
Rishbala r so happy madhu is giving rk happiness and love that he deserves

Thanks dear!

Hope their happiness stays!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Hello everyone!

Thanks a lot for all your love and support!
I'm really happy that for the 1st time in the history of my stories, lady love is liked more than the hotshot: LOL

No blah blah!
Link to previous part: Part 10

Happy reading!

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Part 11

Once lunch finished, Madhu went with her brother to their house and Rishab to his apartment.
When they entered their house, her brother asked:
"So?"
"What now?" sitting on the couch.
"What you both have decided?" sitting near her.
She put her head over her brother's shoulder and said: "I will finish my studies first then the life starts."
"I'm happy that you 2 are together." she smiled "He is the best man I have ever saw. I know he is 1 year younger than me but he is more responsible than me.
You will be happy with him." she grinned now "You will have to be his family and understand him. I'm going talk about you 2 to Mom and Dad when they come back."
She became serious "He said he will speak." seeing his face.
"I just want to be sure that they don't overreact when he comes." he smiled.
"I love you Bro!"she side hugged him.
"I love you to Choti! I'm happy that something good changed in this city and you will not be ranting about the shifting any more." he got a small punch on his stomach "Ouch! I thought I will get something else as a gift."
"Just wait 2 more years!" she got up and neared the stairs "You will get the Queen of hell as your wife." she said laughing and ran upstairs and closed her door as her brother followed her.
"I will wait for my revenge when I get my nephews. I will pamper them a lot that they will call you bad mother." he said to the closed door.
"I will kill you and send you to hell if you do that."
"Don't worry Choti! The Queen of Hell will rescue me." he screamed her words back to her before shutting his door.

She settled on her bed and took her phone out to message:
"Love!
Hope you miss me!
Because I'm missing you.
Can I come and stay in your house tonight and you drop me at home in the evening before my parents come?
Or let's just elope and marry. I will study as Mrs. MRK in the school where you join as teacher and then have a beautiful life.
Or You come here and stay with me.
Which one you choose?"

She got immediately a reply:
"Did you finish your homework?"

From there on they started to message.

"Can't you talk romantically?" she asked.
"Smiley! Studies first!"
"What are you doing?"
"I'm preparing for Monday's lessons."
"Oh! I'm disturbing you! Sorry!"

"No! You aren't."
"So you like to chat with me?"
"If I say No?"
"You will see the consequences in school!"
"Laugh! I thought you were an introvert on the first day I saw you."
"It was because I missed my home back there and friends."
"Now?"
"Nothing matters as my Love is here."
"You know how to change the topic."

And the chat continued for hours.

Sultan prepared noodles for dinner as his sister was angry on him over the fact that he mocked her cooking skills in front of Rishab.
They had dinner and retired to their rooms.
When she entered her room, the light of her phone went off, so when she got to see the message, her smile grew wider:
"Good night and sweet dreams!"

She replied the same with a 'HUG' and went to bed to enter the dream land.
Sunday wasn't the best day she expected to be until her parents got back home.
She didn't wanted to disturb him with her nagging so kept her messages limited.

Her parents show them few pics and discussed before calling curfew.

Next day she went to her school and everything went more than well.
Her maths class was the best as she could drool him knowing full well that is aware and that he is only his.
That evening they exchanged few SMS and put an end to the night.

Like that all days passed and week-end arrived.

"Sweety!"
"Yes Mom!" she screamed from upstairs and getting in front of her parents in the hall with her brother.
"I can see that our girl has grown up!" her father said.
She looked with question over her parents' serious face before turning to see a grinning brother and then she understood what they might want to know.
She bent her head hiding her crimson cheeks.
"Come here Sweety!" said her mom patting the place next to her.
Madhu took baby steps and sat there while her mother put her hand around her daughter's shoulder.
"So my little girl is really grown up that she is hiding important things from me." her father.
"No dad!" her voice sounded like a cat "I... I..."
"You what Sweety?" her mother.
"Mom and Dad! Please don't stress her." her brother.

Their parents smiled seeing their children.
Fidgeting with her fingers "I like him Ma!" saying this, she hid herself in her mother's embrace.
"Just like?" her father voiced.
"I love him a lot." as tears started to form in her eyes and fall over her mother's shoulder.
"Oh Sweety! There is no need to cry!" distancing herself from her daughter and pushed her tears away before planting an affectionate kiss over her forehead "You are a strong girl and we know that you will not take any wrong decision."
"If I may add, he will be the best for our Choti."
"So when can we meet him not as your brother's friend?"
"Tomorrow Dad!" her brother answered even before she could face her father.
"So ask the young man to be here for dinner!" he said connecting his eyes with his daughter.
She nodded.

"Do you want to come with us for grocery shopping Sweety!"
"Mom! Instead of you if it was him, Choti would have jumped on the offer!"
She glared her brother while their parents laughed and left from there.

"I'm going to my room! You can have the whole house to scream, jump and talk." he said climbing the stairs.
She threw the cushion on his back and took her phone out.
"Tell me when you finish talking, I need to talk to him." he added throwing the cushion back on her and running to his room.

"Hello!"
"How are you?"
"Great and you?"
"Good!"
"Am I disturbing you?"
"You don't need to ask this question each time you want to talk to me or chat over SMS."
"Ok!"
"What is it that you want to ask?"
"How in the world you know I want to ask something?"
"You aren't as talkative as always."
"You mean to say I'm a chatterbox?"
"I will not say that but today there is something disturbing you."
"Hmmm well! Can you come tomorrow for dinner?"
"What?"
"Mom and Dad wants to meet you."
"How did"
"Your friend told them"

"And"
"They aren't against me liking you."
"I wanted to take few days before coming in front of your parents."
"I know but it's not like you will say ok if my parents ask you to tie the not tomorrow itself."
"Always around that topic."
"That's what I think about it most of the time."
"No Madhu! You have to concentrate on studies."
"Hmmm" with a heavy breath.
"I don't want to come between your studies."
"You aren't."
"I feel it's not the case."
"How it would be if I call you Rishab during your class."
"Don't change the topic."
"We are still talking about school." few seconds later, she added "So can I say to my parents that My Teacher will be on time for dinner."
"Madhu"
"Hmmm"
"What can I do for you to concentrate only on your studies?"
"Spend a lot of time with me."

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Thanks a lot buddies!
May be some of you might think it was short, but this part needs to end here!
How was it?
Hope you all liked it!
If you liked and wanted to say something, hit the LIKE button and COMMENT!
Next part: Part 12

See you!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Awesome update Maithu. Loved it.

Thanks for reminding me of my childhood, the bond that I share with my brother.

Sultan is a sweetheart, he loves his Choti a lot.

Their parents got to know about Rishbala and want to meet Rishab.

Hope everything goes on well, don't want any problems for them.

Thanks for the PM dear

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Nice update dear.Madhu's parent's are so cool and i am sure they will accept rk for their daughter.When rk will say i love u to madhu?😊.Sultan supports his sister and friend's love and he is so nice.

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#236

Superb update

So madhu's parents are not against rk

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Awesome update,
Sultan is a loving bro loved their bonding he loves his sis so much,
thru Sultan their parents got to know about Rishbala they are happy and wants to meet Rk hope everything goes well,
thanks for the update

Edited by harini_ - 8 years ago

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Awesome part. So sullu told their parents about rk n madhu. Madhus message n end reply to it are so damn funny lol. Madhus parents are happy with this. They asked him to meet them for dinner. Thanks a lot for the pm. Do update soon